[Taijutsu] Pain...

Beifong · May 29, 2013

-waits for Mathias sensei- :bouncy:

Mathias · May 29, 2013

OOC: You're quite welcome ^_^

Mathias' body suddenly emerges from the ground in front of Pain.
So you're interested in learning about hand to hand combat correct?..

What can you tell me about it? Why would you like to learn it? What are some known users from the manga that specialize in taijutsu? And what are some strengths and weaknesses? (Pros and/or Cons regarding taijutsu)

Beifong · May 29, 2013

yes and i'm willing to master it too!!

well, taijutsu is every physical attack that a ninja performs but unlike ninjutsu and genjutsu, taijutsu techniques dom't (mostly) require much chakra as they depend more on the body and the physical strength so the taijutsu user must keep his body fit to be able to perform taijutsu techniques well and quickly and he always have to keep training so he don't lose his experience in close combat fighting. also from the important things that enhances the taijutsu abilities are the speed that can be acquired through leg weights training that makes the ninja faster and stronger and the activation of the eight internal gates of the body which allows the body to exceed its limits.

i want to learn taijutsu because taijutsu seems very important to a shinobi in case of close-combat fighting or in case of fighting taijutsu specialist. because in close range fight i may get caught in my elemental jutsu's effects but if i used taijutsu i'll not be harmed by my own jutsu

Miato Gai and Rock Lee both specialized in using Taijutsu and also all the Hyuga since the jyuken is just a taijutsu fighting style that depends on more chakra than the taijutsu style that guy and lee uses

Strengths: 1) close combat

weaknesses: 1) clones specialist 2) long range fighter

Mathias · May 30, 2013

Pain... said:
yes and i'm willing to master it too!!

well, taijutsu is every physical attack that a ninja performs but unlike ninjutsu and genjutsu, taijutsu techniques dom't (mostly) require much chakra as they depend more on the body and the physical strength so the taijutsu user must keep his body fit to be able to perform taijutsu techniques well and quickly and he always have to keep training so he don't lose his experience in close combat fighting. also from the important things that enhances the taijutsu abilities are the speed that can be acquired through leg weights training that makes the ninja faster and stronger and the activation of the eight internal gates of the body which allows the body to exceed its limits.

i want to learn taijutsu because taijutsu seems very important to a shinobi in case of close-combat fighting or in case of fighting taijutsu specialist. because in close range fight i may get caught in my elemental jutsu's effects but if i used taijutsu i'll not be harmed by my own jutsu

Miato Gai and Rock Lee both specialized in using Taijutsu and also all the Hyuga since the jyuken is just a taijutsu fighting style that depends on more chakra than the taijutsu style that guy and lee uses

Strengths: 1) close combat

weaknesses: 1) clones specialist 2) long range fighter

Good, however I would like you to be a bit more informative on the strengths and weakness of taijutsu please. That on its own is quite vague and there is still room for other things to be stated.

Beifong · May 31, 2013

strengths:

it's the most useful in close combat
(mostly) doesn't require a lot of chakra since it depends more on physical strength
conflicts real damage that may last for long period of time
can be enhanced using many jutsus (chakra enhanced strength - rock fist jutsu)

weaknesses:

requires a lot of training and practice
if the user's body is damaged or hurt he can't perform taijutsu techniques well
if a technique is performed in a wrong way it may lead to losing the fight and taking a lot of physical damage (in other words: requires accuracy)

Mathias · Jun 1, 2013

Pain... said:
strengths:

it's the most useful in close combat

(mostly) doesn't require a lot of chakra since it depends more on physical strength

conflicts real damage that may last for long period of time

can be enhanced using many jutsus (chakra enhanced strength - rock fist jutsu)

weaknesses:

requires a lot of training and practice

if the user's body is damaged or hurt he can't perform taijutsu techniques well

if a technique is performed in a wrong way it may lead to losing the fight and taking a lot of physical damage (in other words: requires accuracy)

See.. that wasn't so bad, was it? ;p

Now!.... I want you to start a warm up. I want you to run 1,000 laps around the training grounds. You will then do 300 push-ups, 200 sit-ups, and 150 squats. I then want you to routine this routine by doing any stretching you see fit.

Beifong · Jun 1, 2013

yes sir!!

*start running around the training area*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.., 20.., 30.., 40.., 50.., 60.., 70.., 80.., 90.., 100 /Set 1
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 2
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 3
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 4
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 5
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 6
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 7
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 8
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 9
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 10

-pant- lets.. -pant- start.. -pant- the.. -pant- push-ups..!!

*start doing the push-ups*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.., 20.., 30.., 40.., 50.., 60.., 70.., 80.., 90.., 100 /Set 1
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 2
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 3

-pant- Done!!

*starts doing the set-up*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 1
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 2
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 3
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 4
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 6
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 7
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 8
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 9
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 10

Done !!

*starts doing the squats*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 1
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 2
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 3
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 4
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 6
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 7
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 8
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 9
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 10

Done!!

Mathias · Jun 3, 2013

Pain... said:
yes sir!!

*start running around the training area*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.., 20.., 30.., 40.., 50.., 60.., 70.., 80.., 90.., 100 /Set 1
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 2
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 3
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 4
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 5
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 6
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 7
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 8
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 9
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 10

-pant- lets.. -pant- start.. -pant- the.. -pant- push-ups..!!

*start doing the push-ups*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.., 20.., 30.., 40.., 50.., 60.., 70.., 80.., 90.., 100 /Set 1
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 2
10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, 80, 90, 100 /Set 3

-pant- Done!!

*starts doing the set-up*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 1
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 2
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 3
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 4
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 6
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 7
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 8
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 9
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 /Set 10

Done !!

*starts doing the squats*

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 1
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 2
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 3
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 4
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 5
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 6
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 7
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 8
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 9
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 /Set 10

Done!!

Tired yet? Well I have to go over a few things with you, so feel free to take a breather while I talk.Mathias suddenly reaches into his pouch and grabs a hold of a big scroll. He then proceeds to unravel it across the floor in front of his student. From now on I would like you to start using this scroll (template) for every time you perform (reply) to a technique.

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Reborn said:
Yes sensei.

Strong points

This technique can be used to distance one's self from their opponent, by the gust of wind being strong enough to force them back. The strength of the wind could be used to not only force your opponent back away from you, but it could push them into objects like a rock or a tree, or get you out of range of a jutsu you may be in range of (primarily close or mid ranged)

The dust this jutsu could pick up from preforming this jutsu could also cloud the sight of your opponent, giving you the opprotunity to get out of sight and used ambush based attacks (if that's your game plan) or escape from a situation you feel is out of your immediant range of thinking. Also the diversion it could play for the moment, blinding your opponent could give you the immediant go ahead to follow through with another jutsu that they wouldn't expect.

Lastly, this jutsu comes in handy for deflecting and enhancing projectiles. When in terms of your opponent throwing projectiles towards you, you could use this jutsu, the gust of wind, being stronger then the natural strength of a shinobi's thrust in throwing projectiles like basic kunai or shuriken, would force them back towards one's opponent or simply render their attack towards you uselses by neutralizing the velocity at which it travels and they'll fall to the ground prematurely. In terms of you throwing your own projectiles, shooting your gust of wind in conjunction with the direction of your projectiles would increase the speed of the weapons and also how much force is behind them, meaning they head quicker to your opponent (harder to evade) and if they hit, the force behind it will cause more damage (via deeper wounds from penetration).

Weak points

For larger projectiles like fuma Shuriken or anything with a greater density, the wind may have a harder time deflecting them if thrown by your opponent.

Since this is a relitave lower level jutsu, any fire technique would be able to make it's way through the winds and that would be an easy counter for this jutsu as well.

Also considering the territory, if in a territory where there is a lot of dust. When this jutsu is preformed, just as you could use it as cover for another attack or an escape, your opponent could use it in the same way. The dust being between the two of you (if enough is gathered that is) could block your sight of your opponent, which is always a flaw that could be used against you.

Combinations-strategies Primarily I see this jutsu as being a great use with simple projectiles like shuriken or kunai. You could toss your weapons and the wind traveling in conjunctin could add speed and penatration power. You. Also a wind-fire combination, using a fire based jutsu (if you have the training that is) and then using this jutsu to enhance the potency and range of the flames. However if both jutsu exhale from the mouth, this jutsu may need to be used by another party such as a shadow clone or summon. I could also see this technique useful for getting off the ground, shooting the flow of wind dowards and that could set you up for an arial attack to use against your opponent.

Ways to counter this technique Using a fire jutsu to force through the flames, making it useless, or using a more powerful wind technique to render their winds useless and also to dispell the sand/dust. Also a jutsu of any kind that could provide a mass of movement in the opposite direction with strong enough force to combat the winds like a powerful/large flow of water or large amounts of earth (via earth jutsu) that would prove to be to dense for the winds to move, also if the earth is moving at it's own velocity towards their opponent, the winds could be useless. Also blocking the winds with some sort of barrier works just as good too.
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Tori!

*I make the bird seal and I begin to inhale through my nose. I breath in from my diaphram, feeling the wind chakra deep inside my body. I feel the flow channeling from my diaphram into my lungs and I exhale through my mouth. The air coming out of my mouth, fused with my chakra creates a gust of wind, gathering the minirals from the ground (the dust) and creating a large gust of dusty wind, which disperses from a steady stream into the air after s certian distance*

Sensei is this good? ^^

Blizzàrd said:
I hope Reborn doesn't mind me stealing his place. It was foreseen, I am an Iwarian.

Strong points

Well lets start with the most basic string point of this technique, the technique is a highly compressed orb of water, the key word here is compressed, meaning the space is tightly packed with water molecules thus giving it an amazing density and speed. The orb itself somewhat receives the property of a bullet, thus giving it a title of rain bullet.

A very, very interesting point in the jutsu that i managed to point out is that this technique says; "user will be knocked back", if you notice that part it is one of the most amazing use of this low ranked jutsu. What if something requires you to push yourself back, and channeling chakra into the ground is not possible to bring pillars or likes. This jutsu can be shot in one direction and due to its compressed space property it exerts equally opposite force at the user thus sending him backwards, can be used to dodge certain jutsus or avoid direct hits.

Last but not the least is the main purpose of this justu, the two actions that states the main offensive side of it; "If it hits the enemy the enemy will be sent away flying or unbalanced." It can have two effects, one is it may send the opponent flying away AS user flies back too, and given the range as short it can be a good way to increase distance between the two ninjas. Second is throwing the opponent off-balance and using it to develop a counter position and get hold of the battle.

Weak points

Well, like everyone else I noticed the rank as a weak point. Event with all those uses a weak technique is a weak technique. Its given rank is D, thus making it the lowest, so even a direct hit won't be enough to sieze the victory in the battle, however it may give more opportunities to attack, but that does not change the fact that it is the lowest possible rank. (excluding E)

The range, the second weakness is that its range is way too limited. Although I found that fact absurd because it seems to be a compressed ball like bullet, it should be at-least midrange to fully use it to your advantage, but since it isn't it can only be used in close range, and will fail if used at distance of mid/long. It can be used as a supplement way of throwing yourself back even if it doesn't reaches the opponent.

The third and last weak point is the advantage I stated earlier, it can also back fire; "the user will be knocked back", the technique has a condition of high pressure forces on either side, so what if you do not want to change your position, no matter what you try you have to make sure your stability stays unaffected when using this technique.

Combinations-strategies; A very amazing combination strategy is using it as a distraction or use as speed boost in a freeform battle. So, what if my character needs a sudden boost, I release the jutsu on the ground facing back, I then turn around slicing or performing a free form action move. But not only that, lets look at another way, it can be used as some jutsu that attacks the user from behind, so this justu can be used to lure the opponent or push them back to that certain location to attack from the back.

Ways to counter this technique; A very easy and fun counter against this technique is earth shields and earth pillar. To make a dramatic fight one can use a simple shield or cover the body part that is being attacked. There is another earth technique which not only adds an armor but also increases your Taijutsu skills, but since its heavy it decrease users speed, but since its heavy it may be able to counter the pressure of this rain technique.

Blizzard after completely describing the technique, he closes his eyes, and gathers the spirit that he had earned in the past long hours of meditation, using his mastery over wind and water he gathers both elements, water to form the orb and wind to compress it to such level that its compression forms a very high density water orb/ bullet, he then aims for the tree that stood infront of him, keeping a constant chakra supply in the orb and having ful control over the orb's shape using chakra manipulation he extends his arms and releases a sudden pressured chakra behind the orb to make it act and fire as a bullet, its strength so amazing that tears the ree back bending it and making it roots sprout out of the ground, while Blizzard had his feet dragged backwards scraping the soil which helped him balance his heel on the ground. "Phew that was fun."

Any questions before we continue?

OOC: Since this is taijutsu, the weakness and strengths of the template does not need to be completed fully as most techniques are rather simple and clear.

Beifong · Jun 3, 2013

a bit tired, sensei!!
*lays on the ground*

is it possible to have only 2 strong/weak points if i couldn't find more at all?

i have nothing to ask other than this question, so please proceed!!

Mathias · Jun 4, 2013

Pain... said:
a bit tired, sensei!!
*lays on the ground*

is it possible to have only 2 strong/weak points if i couldn't find more at all?

i have nothing to ask other than this question, so please proceed!!

OOC: Yeah that is fine, as I said above, sometimes due to taijutsu's simplistic techniques it is quite hard to fill all the lines.

Let's begin then!

(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death
Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and explosives separately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and force able punches it into the enemy's behind.

Alright this technique can be applied in three different ways. For the first method, you will either already be behind your opponent or make your way towards his flank. You will then get in a very low stance whilst waving the tiger hand seal, without the need of channeling chakra, however keeping the sign formed. You will proceed to thrust your tiger formed hands inside your opponent's rectum, with great force. Once you make contact, you will simply push forward with all your might and send the opponent flying.

Now the other two ways are fairly similar. Instead of performing the tiger hand seal, you will hold a tagged or regular kunai with both hands. You will then perform every other step I explained above.

Please describe to me all three methods and the outcome of each one. (ex. Tag exploding)

Beifong · Jun 6, 2013

*you make three clones that come attacking me one after one*

as your first clone come towards i quickly start running towards it, then i jump behind him and i perform the tiger handseal and i quickly stab his rectum with my tiger handseal forcefully making him scream painfully and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
then as your second clone come towards me i took out a normal kunai then as it came close enough i jumped behind it and stabbed my kunai into his rectum while holding it with my both hands and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
then as your third clone come towards me i took out a tagged kunai then as it came close enough i jumped behind it and stabbed my kunai into his rectum while holding it with my both hands and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
Strong points

long-lasting pain that it hurt Naruto for 3 years after kakashi used it on him during the first training with team 7
can send the opponent flying and a clone can deliver other hit while flying

Weak points

can't work on a hyuga or he'll use kaiten
any doton jutsu that will harden the body may cause breaking the bones of my fingers and won't let any kunai to pass through it
if i duck behind me and performed the tiger handseal then it will be very obvious to the opponent that i'm using this jutsu if he's a byakugan or shared vision of rinnegan

Combinations-strategies

i throw 5 tagged kunais at the opponent and in the same time i throw a smoke bomb between us. while the opponent is dealing with the kunais i'm making a clone that will start digging quickly till he reaches behind the opponent's back then quickly he performs the tiger handseal and stabs the opponent's rectum with his fingers making him fly 5 meters forward where i give him a kick in his face

Ways to counter this technique

by using any of these jutsus (those are the ones i've learned capable of countering this jutsu):

by making a small pillar of earth to rise and cover the endangered spot

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique

Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

all of them by hardening this spot (or the whole body)

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor

Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

Mathias · Jun 7, 2013

Pain... said:
*you make three clones that come attacking me one after one*

as your first clone come towards i quickly start running towards it, then i jump behind him and i perform the tiger handseal and i quickly stab his rectum with my tiger handseal forcefully making him scream painfully and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
then as your second clone come towards me i took out a normal kunai then as it came close enough i jumped behind it and stabbed my kunai into his rectum while holding it with my both hands and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
then as your third clone come towards me i took out a tagged kunai then as it came close enough i jumped behind it and stabbed my kunai into his rectum while holding it with my both hands and it sent him flying then as he landed he disappeared
Strong points

long-lasting pain that it hurt Naruto for 3 years after kakashi used it on him during the first training with team 7

can send the opponent flying and a clone can deliver other hit while flying

Weak points

can't work on a hyuga or he'll use kaiten

any doton jutsu that will harden the body may cause breaking the bones of my fingers and won't let any kunai to pass through it

if i duck behind me and performed the tiger handseal then it will be very obvious to the opponent that i'm using this jutsu if he's a byakugan or shared vision of rinnegan

Combinations-strategies

i throw 5 tagged kunais at the opponent and in the same time i throw a smoke bomb between us. while the opponent is dealing with the kunais i'm making a clone that will start digging quickly till he reaches behind the opponent's back then quickly he performs the tiger handseal and stabs the opponent's rectum with his fingers making him fly 5 meters forward where i give him a kick in his face

Ways to counter this technique

by using any of these jutsus (those are the ones i've learned capable of countering this jutsu):

by making a small pillar of earth to rise and cover the endangered spot

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique

Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

all of them by hardening this spot (or the whole body)

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor

Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

It almost seems as though you copy pasted all your three different methods with the same outcomes, the opponent being sent flying. You are forgetting that using a kunai with this technique would have other effects other than sending the target flying. The same could be said about a tagged kunai. What are the different outcomes? Also, could you please re-do your descriptions? From which way are you getting behind my clone? From the left? from the right? Are you jumping directly above him? Please try to incorporate a bit more physical movement description.

Beifong · Jun 7, 2013

*you make other 3 clones they start running towards me one by one*

As the first clone became close enough i jumped over him and as i landed behind him i performed the tiger handseal and stabbed his rectum with my finger that sent him flying while screaming and as he landed he disappeared.
As the second one came i took out a normal kunai then as he came close enough i again jumped over him and as i landed behind him i ducked. While holding that kunai with my both hands i stabbed his rectum forcefully that resulted in sending him flying while a screaming and his butt was bleeding. A real person won't be able to walk again for a month after getting hit like this.
I took out a kunai with an explosive tag tagged to it. as the third clone came close to me i jumped over him and as i landed behind him i ducked and stabbed his rectum with the kunai while holding it with my both hand. As he went flying while screaming and his butt was bleeding i threw the agged kunai at him that resulted in destroying it's body while disappearing inside the explosion.

Mathias · Jun 13, 2013

Pain... said:
*you make other 3 clones they start running towards me one by one*

As the first clone became close enough i jumped over him and as i landed behind him i performed the tiger handseal and stabbed his rectum with my finger that sent him flying while screaming and as he landed he disappeared.
As the second one came i took out a normal kunai then as he came close enough i again jumped over him and as i landed behind him i ducked. While holding that kunai with my both hands i stabbed his rectum forcefully that resulted in sending him flying while a screaming and his butt was bleeding. A real person won't be able to walk again for a month after getting hit like this.
I took out a kunai with an explosive tag tagged to it. as the third clone came close to me i jumped over him and as i landed behind him i ducked and stabbed his rectum with the kunai while holding it with my both hand. As he went flying while screaming and his butt was bleeding i threw the agged kunai at him that resulted in destroying it's body while disappearing inside the explosion.

What other means would you use to get behind him aside from jumping above him? Also, the explosion wouldn't destroy his body entirely but it would injury it severely.

Beifong · Jun 13, 2013

I can get behind him by sliding between his legs (but i don't think it will be possible in some certain terrains) or by using hiding like a mole jutsu or underground fish projection jutsu to emerge from the ground behind the opponent

Mathias · Jun 19, 2013

Pain... said:
I can get behind him by sliding between his legs (but i don't think it will be possible in some certain terrains) or by using hiding like a mole jutsu or underground fish projection jutsu to emerge from the ground behind the opponent

Okay.

(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest

I swiftly wave a single hand seal as I then spew water out of my mouth and create a water clone in front of me.

This next one is actually more simple than the one you've just learned. I want you to run towards my clone and deliver a powerful punch, directed at his chest. Please be sure to explain as much body movement as possible, allowing me to illustrate what you do in my head.

Beifong · Jun 25, 2013

after seeing your water clone I started running towards him. and once I was 1 meter in front of him i took my fist a bit backwards then i forcefully move my fist forward aiming at his chest.

Strong points

a simple and easy move
the opponent will not be able to breathe for a short period of time

Weak points

direct and obvious attack and can be easily countered

Combinations-strategies

I make a shadow clone and make him stand mid-range in front of the opponent while i sneak behind him. then while I was short-range behind him i perform tiger handseal and stab his rectum forcefully, and as he is sent flying due to the 1000 years of death technique, my clone jumps towards the opponent and gives him a direct punch to the chest.

Ways to counter this technique
all of them by hardening this spot (or the whole body)

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor

Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

or a sharingan user can stop the opponent's fist before it by grabbing it before it hits him

Mathias · Jun 27, 2013

Pain... said:
after seeing your water clone I started running towards him. and once I was 1 meter in front of him i took my fist a bit backwards then i forcefully move my fist forward aiming at his chest.

Strong points

a simple and easy move

the opponent will not be able to breathe for a short period of time

Weak points

direct and obvious attack and can be easily countered

Combinations-strategies

I make a shadow clone and make him stand mid-range in front of the opponent while i sneak behind him. then while I was short-range behind him i perform tiger handseal and stab his rectum forcefully, and as he is sent flying due to the 1000 years of death technique, my clone jumps towards the opponent and gives him a direct punch to the chest.
Ways to counter this technique
all of them by hardening this spot (or the whole body)

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor

Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

or a sharingan user can stop the opponent's fist before it by grabbing it before it hits him

I liked that combo. However next time please include things like which fist you are using and how your body is positioned when delivering your strike. The more descriptive you are about your own body the less ways your opponent has of taking advantage of that.

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponents face.

Now I want you to charge towards my clone as you then jump and extend your preferred leg outwards, delivering a kick aimed for the clone's face.

Beifong · Jul 1, 2013

as your clone stands mid range from me I start running towards him and once there's just 3 meters between us, I jump high (about 3 meters high) while using inertia and my weight to make my body keep going towards him. once it's just one meter between us I lean my left leg forward towards his face while leaning my right arm backward to keep my body balanced. after kicking his face the clone was pushed back with my shoes making a permanent marking on his face.

Strong points

fast, easy and direct technique

Weak points

the user must be balanced during jumping and kicking or he will fall on will make an opening to be attacked
can be countered easily by just ducking

Combinations-strategies
I start running towards the opponent and once there's just 3 meters between us, I jump high (about 3 meters high) while using inertia and my weight to make my body keep going towards him. once it's just one meter between us I lean my left leg forward towards his face while leaning my right arm backward to keep my body balanced. after kicking his face the clone was pushed back towards a boulder. as I stop and stand on the ground I perform the bird handseal and make a stone spike emerge out of the rock and pierce through his body and killing him

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

Ways to counter this technique
simply by ducking so the opponent would miss my face

Mathias · Jul 22, 2013

Pain... said:
as your clone stands mid range from me I start running towards him and once there's just 3 meters between us, I jump high (about 3 meters high) while using inertia and my weight to make my body keep going towards him. once it's just one meter between us I lean my left leg forward towards his face while leaning my right arm backward to keep my body balanced. after kicking his face the clone was pushed back with my shoes making a permanent marking on his face.

Strong points

fast, easy and direct technique

Weak points

the user must be balanced during jumping and kicking or he will fall on will make an opening to be attacked

can be countered easily by just ducking

Combinations-strategies
I start running towards the opponent and once there's just 3 meters between us, I jump high (about 3 meters high) while using inertia and my weight to make my body keep going towards him. once it's just one meter between us I lean my left leg forward towards his face while leaning my right arm backward to keep my body balanced. after kicking his face the clone was pushed back towards a boulder. as I stop and stand on the ground I perform the bird handseal and make a stone spike emerge out of the rock and pierce through his body and killing him

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

Ways to counter this technique
simply by ducking so the opponent would miss my face

Instead of describing your arm as leaning you might wanna say something like "extending" as leaning means your body would be leaned towards that way. Also, its not usually used to describe a limb movement. As far as the countering goes, simply ducking would put you at a disadvantage because the user could utilize his other leg to deliver a lower strike, catching you by surprise.

As for your spikes combo, never state that you kill them. That would be implying you KNOW the outcome when he has yet to countered.

(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:10
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

*Creates shadow clone*

I want you to spin clockwise or counter-clockwise, which ever you feel more comfortable with. While spinning you will extend your left or right leg, again up to you. As you are in the process of spinning you will proceed to enter a lower stance as you deliver a powerful strike to the side my clone's lower half.

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