[Update] Hei Uzumaki v2

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Basic Information



Name Hei
Nickname The Silent Serpent ♦ The Black Reaper
Gender Male
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Male
Age Unknown (+70)
Clan Uzumaki
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Appearance
Hei seems to be a young man, with black hair and dark blue eyes. When off duty, Hei can be seen in the casual attire. When operating in undercover missions, Hei wears a black trench coat with green trim. Under the coat is a standard Anbu Uniform, full of supplies. To complete his look, he wears a white mask to cover his face. The mask has a purple "bolt" that crosses his right eye and has a plain look to it. Under the coat is an array of weapons ranging from needles to combat knives and wires. Hei also has Kumo Uniform that is standard white in color.

Personality
Hei, is an unexpectedly softhearted, kindly individual who is quick to give compliments but loath to accept them. He appears to care very little for his own well-being, much less his dignity, and is therefore often put in situations that give him the impression of being goofy or eccentric. He is Slow to anger and apparently a bit of a pacifist, Hei would much rather talk out disputes than fight, frequently doing so even while he himself is under vicious attack. Chief among his personality traits appears to be his hopeless romanticism, given his propensity for spouting sappy lines about his love for an unknown women, his readiness to weep openly over her and his charming treatment of women in general. Hei lacks the ambition of others, clearly content to take his time dealing with things that do not demand urgency.



Village Info


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♦ Village of Birth ♦
♦ Village of Alliance ♦
♦ Group Affiliation ♦
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Uzushiogakure​
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Kumogakure​
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Unagirie​



Rank & Chakra Info



Ninja Rank
Unofficial Sage
Specialty
Katon | Suiton | Eels | Jeet Kun Do​
♦ Elements ♦
♦ Techniques ♦
♦ Specials ♦
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水 Suiton Mastered​
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印 Fuuijutsu Mastered​
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禁 Kinjutsu Mastered​
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雷 Raiton Mastered​
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幻 Genjutsu Mastered​
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音 Ototon Training​
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火 Katon Mastered​
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剣 Kenjutsu Mastered​
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タ Tar Release Mastered​
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風 Futon Mastered​
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忍 Ninjutsu Mastered​
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ヒ Jade Release Mastered​
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土 Doton Mastered​
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体 Taijutsu Mastered​
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山 Volcanic Ash Mastered​
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Background Info



The Legend of Hei Uzumaki
"Heroes May Die, But Legends Endure"

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Age of his Youth: The young man who would later go on to be known as The First Officer of Kumogakure grew up during "The Age of Shinobi Wars" where clans where in an endless fight for dominance. Hei lived in the capital of the whirlpool country, in the Village of Uzushiogakure home of the Uzumaki Clan. As a youth, Hei was a very skilled Shinobi, he was the twenty-third house shinobi of a renowned Ninja and the Leader of Uzushiogakure. Hei's code-name was known simply as "Black Reaper". Although Hei held a high position for his age. Most of his Clansmen looked down upon him. This was do to his Genetic Disorder that made his hair black instead of his clans trademark red hair.

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True Love and Despair: In his later years, Hei meet The love of His life, Trisha a Non-Shinobi who lived across from his home. Trisha is personally responsible for bringing about changes in Hei's worldview. Having discovered a person with whom he truly and deeply connected, Hei fell immediately in love with Trisha and began to desire a normal life so as not to be left existing without her. Hei quit being a Ninja in order to live his normal life. Trisha and Hei married and had there first son, Miki. A few years later there second son was born, Hazeo. This new lifestyle quickly fell around Hei fast. and despite loving his family and not caring about the wars that raged around the ninja world. Hei was asked to join the "Special Assassination and Tactical Squad" Being convinced that his skills are needed and would help keep his family out of harms way, Hei joined the Special Assassination and Tactical Squad, that take orders directly from the leader of the Clan, performing special high-level missions, such as assassinations and torture. The SATS usually work in teams formed to the requirements of the mission, ensuring maximum success. The shinobi in the STAS are hand-picked by the Clan leader and are chosen for their individual capabilities and special skills. Age, gender, background, or previous rank bear no weight in this decision. This proved as a High honor to Hei. One night after returning from a recon mission, Hei and his team found that the Village had been attacks. and partly destroyed. Hei and his SATS team quickly entered the village. Hei found his house in ruins and the bodies of his family. Completely devastated Hei quit the STAS and entered a state of depression.

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Birth of Konohagakure: In Hei's absents, The Senju and Uzumaki clans join together with the aid of other clans to form the Village hidden in the leafs. Both Clans being distant blood relatives whom they retained strong connections with. For this reason it was decided that Konoha-nin uniforms have the symbol of Uzushiogakure emblazoned on its back. Hashirama's whom is elected the leader of this new village will marry an Uzumaki, further strengthening their ties. During this time, Hei stays out of political matters and feeds into his depression of the loss of his family. Hei studying in with old scrolls plans on developing a Fuuinjutsu that will somehow bringing his family back from the dead. with the studies of Uzumaki Fuuinjutsu and working long and hard. Hei began his development of a new technique. Over the next few years Hei worked on his formula, with the knowledge of Fuuinjutsu and the secrets of the Uzumaki clans records. After the death of the First Hokage, Tobirama was elected to be the Second Hokage of the leaf village. it seems despite Hei's secrets and working in the shadows, the First Hokage was keeping tabs on him. This knowledge became known to Tobirama after his election to office. Tobirama took a liking to Hei's work and funded him with money and prisoners in order to design, complete and prefect this Jutsu. Upon the final steps Tobirama revised the jutsu and decided not to share it's completion with Hei as the risk of the jutsu is to much. Marking it a Kinjutsu.

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Lies and Deceit: Unknowing to Hei that the Jutsu has been complete, Tobirama hides information from Hei but allows him to continue working on the formula. over a series of months Hei begins to feel that maybe this Jutsu is a dream that can never be achieved. Tobirama informs Hei that he will not be able to continue aid in his research and will need to cut funds for other deeds. Surprise to see that Tobirama would so suddenly cut funds on a jutsu he has put so much time and effort into made he wonder if Tobirama might be hiding something from him. Believing that himself and Tobirama had become friends over the years of work together, Hei simply asks Tobirama if he is in fact holding out on him. Tobirama quickly reply on how foolish that would be and that there is no reason for him to before quickly leaving. Hei seen right though Tobirama and was shocked that Tobirama would hide information from him. Deep in the Night, Hei want back to the Lab outside of Konohagakure in order to find if any proof of Tobirama's deceit. Upon nearing the lab Hei found 2 anbu members entering the lab, thinking that his secret might be let out, Hei quickly entered behind them and quickly killed the first and captured the second. With his torturing skills learned from the SATS from his days in Uzushiogakure, Hei extracted the information about who sent them and how did they know the labs location. After finding out that Tobirama sent them to destroy the lab. Hei killed the remaining Anbu and headed back to the village.. Being confronted by Tobirama before he returned, Hei asked why Tobirama would withhold the information from him. Tobirama told Hei that it is foolish and selfish to bring back the dead and it should never be done because the risks are to great. Tobirama continued to order Hei to never continue the research of this Jutsu.

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The Unknown Battle: After hearing the Hokage's orders to never use the jutsu. Hei became enraged, not wanting to have to continue living without his family Hei refused the Hokage and decided to leave Konohagakure. Not wanting to make the same mistakes as his Brother, Tobirama attacked Hei in order to protect the village from danger. records of the fight where never taken down and Tobirama thought it best to keep it that way. what is known is that the fight was short and Tobirama believed Hei to be dead. Somehow Hei had pulled a fast one on Tobirama and escaped. Hei headed to the Land of Lightning to the village of Kumogakure. It was there that Hei worked in the shadows and swede the tides to the alliance between the 2nd Raikage and 2nd Hokage. Hei then causing a war to begin, caused the deaths of hundreds. Then by using the famed brothers Kinkaku and Ginkaku forced Tobirama to face them in combat. The death of Tobirama meant that Hei gained the revenge that he wanted and with the 3rd Hokage not knowing of Hei's existence aided in Hei obtaining the scrolls that help the formula of what is now known as the Second Hokages Kinjutsu, Edo Tensei.

To Be Continued...



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Abilities

[Fire Release] Affinity
Being naturally gifted in the Arts of Fire Element, Hei has mastered it's craft and can now use it with only a single handseal
[Water Release] Specialty
Hei after training with the Eels for many years have managed to use Water Element faster then normal
[Fuuinjutsu] Curse Seal of Heaven
The first state of Hei's curse mark is rather simple, Random lines of "Jagged" shaped marking will spread out around his body. The Second state of his Curse Seal is not very unique. When activated, the cursed seal grants him enhanced speed, strength, durability and chakra, it also corrupts both his body and his mind, giving Hei a darker personality and making him vulnerable to evil influence. After training with Nexus, Hei enhanced his Cursed Seal to The second level. This cursed state turned Hei's skin dark grey, his eyes yellow, and makes no changes his hair, Dark-blue venom lipstick appears on his lips and a darkened "void" around his eyes giving his yellow eyes an more intense glow. Upon these changes the only major change seems to happen to his back. 2 cannon like growths will form giving him special ability to release high amounts of chakra from them. this grants him the ability to fly
(Ten to Chi Juin: Bubun Henkan) - Heaven and Earth's Cursed Seal: Partial Transformation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 to sustain)
Damage Point: N/A
Description: Aside from the first and second levels of the seal, skilled users of the seal are able to perform partial transformations enabling the user to transform a part or parts of their body into the form it bares while under the full transformation of Cursed Mark Level 2. This is accomplished by partially mastering the spreading of the Senjutsu Chakra released from the cursed mark and enabling it to effectively only affect one area of the body. While in this state, half of the user's face becomes grayed according to the side of the body that the user transforms their body. While within this state, the user is not granted the power boosts of either of the cursed levels. This technique is only used to grant the user extra appendages for a duration of time.
Note: Must possess Cursed Seal Level 2.
Note: Lasts for 2 turns.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: User is limited to transform one leg or one arm or his torso or his head and the transformation always spreads from the seal towards the users desired body part.
Note: Usable 3 times per match.

(Ten no Juin: Ichi) - Heaven's Cursed Seal: Level 1
Rank : A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (-10 to user per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wills the opening of the cursed seal partially, giving him more chakra and more strength, as the Senjutsu Chakra contained within the seal is unleashed upon the users body in a reduced amount. Patterned red lines that extend from the Cursed Seal on the body of the user course through the user's body, covering it in a repetitive pattern as their body surges with chakra. When the state it done, the lines will become a solid black. While active, the seal actively consumes the users chakra in order to produce and fuel Senjutsu Chakra into his body. While in this stage the user gains +10 damage to his elemental Ninjutsu and +5 to his Taijutsu. His physical strength is slightly improved as is his speed.
Note: Lasts for 5 turns.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: Usable once.

(Ten no Juin: Ni) - Heaven's Cursed Seal: Level 2
Rank : S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-15 to user per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: After opening the first level of the seal, the user forcefully opens the seal completely, unleashing the full extent of Senjutsu Chakra contained in it which floods his body. Because this Senjutsu Chakra is raw and is fueled by the enzymes extracted from Jugo's DNA, the user will experience a physical transformation unique to him. As the seal opens, the previous black markings glow almost like fire and grow covering the user completely. As the transformation ends, his skin gains a grayish tone, his sclera becomes black and his eyes change in shape. The transformation is unique from user to user but always has some animalistic feature to it. While active, the seal actively consumes the users chakra in order to produce and fuel Senjutsu Chakra into his body.While in this stage the user gains +20 damage to his elemental Ninjutsu and +10 to his Taijutsu. His physical strength is improved as is his speed. Once it deactivates (regardless of being willed or timing out) it leaves the user drained of stamina for 3 turns as well as unable to mold chakra above S-Rank or use Taijutsu above C-Rank for 3 turns.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
Note: Must be in stage 1 to use.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: Can only be used once.
[Kinjutsu] Edo Tensei
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After a long and fierce battle with the Raikage of Kumogakure. Hei managed to kill the leader Kirabi. After the fight Hei collected DNA of the Jinchuuriki. later in another Battle Hei captured a living host in which he had used the Impure World Resurrection formula to bind Kirabi's soul to the sacrifice.

DNA Abstraction Thread: (Approved by Dante and Scorps)
Resurrection Thread: (Approved by Scorps and Dante)
Edo Tensei Bio Thread:

Theme Song and Background Music




Battles & Extras


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♦ Wins ♦
♦ Losses ♦
♦ Draw ♦
D/C
D/C
D/C



Updating:
-History (Improved)
-Looks
-Sound Release (Started Training)
-Curse Seal of Heaven (Updated Jutsu's Added)
-Edo Tensei Summon
-Water Specialty
-Theme Song'
 
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The age is a bit weird, it says 70+ yet all his pictures make him look considerably younger. xD
I'd say he's somewhere between 35 - 45.

But overall, it's a really nice, I quite like the first picture.
 

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Very nice bio ^o^
Thank You ^^

Great update. ^^
Not a fan of how the text and format is alligned though.
Thank You, I wanted it to match my Nagato bio Update. ^^

The age is a bit weird, it says 70+ yet all his pictures make him look considerably younger. xD
I'd say he's somewhere between 35 - 45.

But overall, it's a really nice, I quite like the first picture.
Yeah, I am going to add in the next update (after writing more history) how he maintains his young looks even in old age. (similar to Tsunade). And thanks, I made the picture myself.. I needed to make one of him in the Kumogakure Outfit instead of the Konohagakure Outfit. You can see the full render I made on my profile.

Amazing bio
Thanks ^^
Purty :3
Very Purty.
Indeed it is ^^
 

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I wish you'd explore this character more in the NW; he's very unique in terms of his personality. ^^

I gotta say though; I think you're taking the history-part a bit too far. You basically write a Shinobi World War and the Edo Tensei off as being your character's creations. You also describe your character as having had a very friendly relationship with Tobirama and being directly responsible for his death.
Don't you think you're putting your character a bit too close to the Manga? There's nothing wrong with having a, as you describe him, pseudo-legend as your character, but it might be a bit too 'on the spot', you know?
 

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I love it. It's unique and the pictures give it a sense of professionalism. Gotta help me with pictures like the render you did of him with a kumo gear.
 

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I laugh at Cali's comment on your Hei bio in your sig

~Approved~ edited stuff, according to your own history you are not an Uzumaki by blood, so no you do not have their life force, so you are not going to be looking young either. By now your ball sacks are hitting the floor and your face has more relief than a box full of legos.
 
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I laugh at Cali's comment on your Hei bio in your sig

~Approved~ edited stuff, according to your own history you are not an Uzumaki by blood, so no you do not have their life force, so you are not going to be looking young either. By now your ball sacks are hitting the floor and your face has more relief than a box full of legos.
omg I read that too bro. Still can't stop laughing. XD
 

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I wish you'd explore this character more in the NW; he's very unique in terms of his personality. ^^

I gotta say though; I think you're taking the history-part a bit too far. You basically write a Shinobi World War and the Edo Tensei off as being your character's creations. You also describe your character as having had a very friendly relationship with Tobirama and being directly responsible for his death.
Don't you think you're putting your character a bit too close to the Manga? There's nothing wrong with having a, as you describe him, pseudo-legend as your character, but it might be a bit too 'on the spot', you know?
I definitely will be playing his Personality in the RP. About the History, I felt the same way when I first wrote it, however I revised it and came up with this. I made it so he would not be seen within the Manga and will be an Unknown "Legend" thous making him feel like a Naruto Character without being one lol. It is rather 'On the Spot' but I feel it's okay.
This bio sucks so much ass. >_>
I love you too ^^
I thought you said your photoshop no work:(
I only say that so people don't as me to do requests..
I love it. It's unique and the pictures give it a sense of professionalism. Gotta help me with pictures like the render you did of him with a kumo gear.
My Photoshop is broken >_>
I laugh at Cali's comment on your Hei bio in your sig

~Approved~ edited stuff, according to your own history you are not an Uzumaki by blood, so no you do not have their life force, so you are not going to be looking young either. By now your ball sacks are hitting the floor and your face has more relief than a box full of legos.
omg I read that too bro. Still can't stop laughing. XD
Cali is to awesome sometimes xD
 

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I laugh at Cali's comment on your Hei bio in your sig

~Approved~ edited stuff, according to your own history you are not an Uzumaki by blood, so no you do not have their life force, so you are not going to be looking young either. By now your ball sacks are hitting the floor and your face has more relief than a box full of legos.
LOL yea, i laughed at that too.
Nice bio though serpent, but shouldn't you have updated it when you got the edo kirabi completed? (finish with the sacrifice, if you haven't receive one yet)
 

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LOL yea, i laughed at that too.
Nice bio though serpent, but shouldn't you have updated it when you got the edo kirabi completed? (finish with the sacrifice, if you haven't receive one yet)
Well, I have a fight happening now where I am in the process of reviving the bio, I have been waiting on my opponent to reply to the fight, it has been 9 days now. In VM's he keeps saying he can't come up with a counter and that I win, then then replys in VM's again saying he is going to give it another look.. it's rather annoying.. I figure by the time he finally replys this bio will not be approved yet, if so, then I will simply ask a Mod (If I am not able to) to edit and add it in.
awesome...
Thank you ^^
Hei as Uzumaki? meh... but other than that nice :D
Uhhh.... What was that? I'm sorry but I was starring at your chest :sweat:

The Uzumaki Clan is Epic and you know it! ^^
 

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I see, but i think to use edo tensi, you must have already got everything completed in your bio. So if this gets approve before you get your sacrifice, you won't be able to use it until you add it in here
 
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