Raiton with Nathan.

[Nathan]

Good job. ^_^

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Make a vortex out of wind around yourself then channel your raiton chakra into it, the vortex should form into a dragons head and cover the area in front of you, the lighting can jump out of the vortex and my nearby clone.

-Creates clone.-

 

[Superlative]

Good job. ^_^

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Make a vortex out of wind around yourself then channel your raiton chakra into it, the vortex should form into a dragons head and cover the area in front of you, the lighting can jump out of the vortex and my nearby clone.

-Creates clone.-

^_^


*After listening to the description of the technique, I ponder, discerning how I should go about performing this technique. After a few minutes of tossing ideas around, I put my thoughts into action; I begin by molding my wind affinity chakra, internally grinding my chakra to be razor sharp while maintaining a "loose" structure. I thereafter release all of my stored energy within the area surrounding me. Upon releasing my fuuton chakra and imbuing it into the air around me, I cause the air surrounding me to 'chase itself' in order to (eventually) generate a powerful vortex around my body. The wind spins so fast that the friction generated by the razor sharp wind shears grinding against each other generates minuscule electric sparks. I thereafter infuse my chakra into the electric sparks in order to generate lightning within the vortex, while avoiding simultaneously manipulating two elements. Using shape manipulation (by creating a layer of regular chakra around the twister) I change the shape of the technique to resemble a large dragon head. I let the wind rage for a while, feeding a steady supply of chakra into the jutsu to maintain it. After a short while, as a test, I send a sudden burst of chakra jolting through the air, creating a bolt of lightning that juts out of the vortex in order to attack your nearby clone. *poof*

Pro: Lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a target a distance away.

Con: Only covers the area in front.

 

[Nathan]

Good.

Do you have any questions about training or the element itself that isn't clear with you?

 

[Superlative]

Nope, none as of yet.

 

[Nathan]

Okay good.

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Go over to my clone, deliver many punches and kicks to the clone, then send him into the air, then make another chidori and use it to strike him in the back with it.

 

[Superlative]

Okay good.

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Go over to my clone, deliver many punches and kicks to the clone, then send him into the air, then make another chidori and use it to strike him in the back with it.

Sorry for the delay x-x

*As instructed, I rush towards your clone, my stance low, my upper body leaning forward for momentum. As I draw closer, I lead off by driving my left elbow - supported by my right arm - into his solar plexus. Afterwards, I follow by plowing my clenched right fist into his chin and throw in a kick or two somewhere o_o. The force of my attacks sends your clone flying into the air, and that's when I appear behind him. Just as I did earlier, I begin molding and channeling a large amount of chakra to my dominant, open right palm. Once I feel I've gathered a sufficient amount of energy, I increase the vibratory frequencies of my chakra, generating visible lightning in the palm of my hand. I condense the energy around my hand to give it greater piercing abilities. Once I've formed the chidori, I slam it into your clone's back, causing him to dissipate.*

Pro: This technique combines a volley of (assumingly) unpredictable attacks and ninjutsu, increasing the probability that the chidori will hit its mark (since the original chidori is easy to follow).

Con: Though useful, this technique is limited to short range. Additionally, if the initial volley of attacks is avoided, then the technique will fail to be effective/can't be completed.

 

[Nathan]

Great. No troubles.

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Grab out your sword, then go over to my clone and slash him with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then as they begin to land, you'll dive my clone into the ground, by making another chidori.

 

[Superlative]

Great. No troubles.

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Grab out your sword, then go over to my clone and slash him with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then as they begin to land, you'll dive my clone into the ground, by making another chidori.

*I begin by drawing my sword from my left hip - an ordinary katana - and with both hands gripping the hilt, rush towards your clone. Almost exactly as I did earlier, I take on a position slightly closer to the ground with the top of my body slumped forward for momentum. At just the right moment, I deliver a two handed diagonal slash, cutting him from his left hip to his right shoulder. While dealing a powerful initial blow, the slash also serves to send your clone flying into the air. After sending him flying, I mold and channel my chakra into my dominant (right) hand, and upon kneading enough chakra, I increase the vibrating frequencies in order to generate electricity at the palm of my hand. As your clone begins to descend, I condense the electricity to form a chidori; Immediately afterwards, I drive the Chidori through your clones back from behind.*

Pro: Like the previous technique, this one combines a volley of attacks and ninjutsu, increasing the probability that the chidori will hit its mark.

Con: Like the previous one, this technique is limited to short range. Additionally, if the initial attack is avoided, then the technique will fail to be effective/can't be completed.

 

[Nathan]

*I begin by drawing my sword from my left hip - an ordinary katana - and with both hands gripping the hilt, rush towards your clone. Almost exactly as I did earlier, I take on a position slightly closer to the ground with the top of my body slumped forward for momentum. At just the right moment, I deliver a two handed diagonal slash, cutting him from his left hip to his right shoulder. While dealing a powerful initial blow, the slash also serves to send your clone flying into the air. After sending him flying, I mold and channel my chakra into my dominant (right) hand, and upon kneading enough chakra, I increase the vibrating frequencies in order to generate electricity at the palm of my hand. As your clone begins to descend, I condense the electricity to form a chidori; Immediately afterwards, I drive the Chidori through your clones back from behind.*

Pro: Like the previous technique, this one combines a volley of attacks and ninjutsu, increasing the probability that the chidori will hit its mark.

Con: Like the previous one, this technique is limited to short range. Additionally, if the initial attack is avoided, then the technique will fail to be effective/can't be completed.

Good,

(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Knock my clone into the air using your sword, then jump at them quickly after, then kick and punch my clone, while still in mid-air. From there duck to floor just underneath my clone, make a chidori and strike in the back with it.

-Creates clone.-

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[Superlative]

Good,

(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Knock my clone into the air using your sword, then jump at them quickly after, then kick and punch my clone, while still in mid-air. From there duck to floor just underneath my clone, make a chidori and strike in the back with it.

-Creates clone.-

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*Utilizing the Shikotsumyaku, I begin by removing a long bone from my shoulder in the form of a make-shift sword, followed by running towards your clone. Simultaneous to my running, I knead large amounts of chakra, running it through my hands along with channeling a portion into the sword, increasing its density as much as possible. Once in range, I perform a two-handed slash, cutting upwards with the blade in such a way that, along with slashing his body, sends your clone flying upwards into the air - Not for a moment do I stop molding chakra. Once in the air, I release my right hands grip on the sword and jump up behind him, increasing the vibrating frequencies of the chakra in the very same hand; When electricity begins to crackle around my hand in the form of the Chidori, I plunge it through your clones back and chest from behind.*

Pro:As with a few of the previous techniques, this jutsu involves an initial volley of attacks, increasing the efficiency of the following use of ninjutsu as well as increasing the likeliness of the opponent falling victim to the chidori.

Con: If the initial volley of attacks fails/is interrupted, that would also mean that this technique as a whole will be ineffective as well as possibly leaving the user open to attack themselves.

 

[Nathan]

Awesome, and good.

( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Okay, send your raiton chakra up into the clouds doing this you'll create above the area, then release from the cloud a series of lighting bolts and aim them for my clone.

-Creates clone.-

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[Superlative]

Awesome, and good.

( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Okay, send your raiton chakra up into the clouds doing this you'll create above the area, then release from the cloud a series of lighting bolts and aim them for my clone.

-Creates clone.-

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*I begi by molding large amount of chakra, releasing that energy from my body and channeling it high up into the air above your clone. Though it takes some time initially, once I gather enough chakra in the air, it materializes in the form of a large thundercloud above your clone. Due to the friction in the air - because of the electric currents heating it up - my chakra manifests in the form of several individual bolts of lightning that all strike down one after another in rapid succession, directly down on your clone. The lightning not only kills your clone but obliterates the area he stood on along with the rest of the terrain within his general vicinity.*

Pro: This attack comes from above the opponent, and rains down on them, making it possible for the user to launch a barrage of attacks from every which direction - In front, from behind, and with this technique: from above.

Con: I can't think of too many negative points about this technique, other than the fact that the user should be careful to make sure he or she is out of range when the lightning bolts strike down. The name of the technique itself also implies that there's a thunderclap when the lightning strikes down, making this technique the opposite of stealth.

 

[Nathan]

Cool beans.

( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Gather your ration chakra then release it as several large electrical balls, and spread them out around you, then cause electrical currents that spread out over a vast area, shocking my clone.

-Creates clone.-

 

[Superlative]

Cool beans.

( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Gather your ration chakra then release it as several large electrical balls, and spread them out around you, then cause electrical currents that spread out over a vast area, shocking my clone.

-Creates clone.-

*I begin by kneading large amounts of chakra and channeling it into the area round me. I make sure to divide up my chakra into several, equal groups of energy; Afterwards, exciting the chakra and causing lightning to spark in the form of several balls of electricity floating around me. To make sure each ball keeps its shape, I focus a layer of regular chakra around each one in order to effectively employ shape transformation. On to the next step, I manipulate each ball of electricity to move a certain distance away from me, before connecting the orbs and generating a powerful electric shock, catching your clone in the process. The lightning runs through your clones body and causes him to dissipate.*

Pro: It has the capability to hit multiple people at once who might be surrounding the user; For example, this would be a useful technique to protect against an ambush.

Con: The orbs have to connect before shocking an opponent, giving a little forewarning to attack before the attack actually hits.

 

[Nathan]

Good.

( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

Hit my clone with a series of slashes with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then when the clone is coming back down, make a chidori and use that to drill them back into the ground.

 

[Superlative]

Good.

( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

Hit my clone with a series of slashes with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then when the clone is coming back down, make a chidori and use that to drill them back into the ground.

* I begin by dislocating my shoulder and yanking out a bone sword made of my shoulder bone. The density at its maximum, I wield the sword and charge towards your clone - With the bone in my right hand, I thrust it forward, stabbing at your clones frontal for a while before eventually performing a chain of elaborate one-handed slashes, eventually sending your clone flying into the air. Once your clone is in the air, I jump up and appear behind him, simultaneous to kneading large amounts of chakra. While in the air, I channel all of my gathered energy to my (free) left hand, thereafter increasing the vibrating frequencies of the chakra, causing it to manifest lightning in the palm of my hand. After performing it so many times, I execute it near effortlessly - At just the right moment, I compress and concentrate the lightning to give it more piercing power. Then, I take the final step, and drill the chidori into his back, sending him tumbling back down into the ground.*

Pro:This is a collaboration technique, so the initial volley of slashes helps to increase the chances of the chidori being effectively applied in battle.

Con: If the initial volley of attacks is defended against or avoided, the chidori would also obviously fail to land.

 

[Nathan]

Okay good.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Perform the snake seal, send a lot of raiton chakra towards your hand, then from there emit a spear of lighting from your hands, the power of this spear is so great it can tear though rock. Aim the spear at my clone.

-Create clone-

There is an A-rank jutsu we will be coming back too.

 

[Superlative]

Okay good.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Perform the snake seal, send a lot of raiton chakra towards your hand, then from there emit a spear of lighting from your hands, the power of this spear is so great it can tear though rock. Aim the spear at my clone.

-Create clone-

There is an A-rank jutsu we will be coming back too.

*I begin with visualization - Engaging in a light meditation, imagining how the jutsu should work, how I want to use it, and how I plan to go about executing it; All the meanwhile, I simultaneously knead chakra, allowing my imagination to guide the flow and concentration of chakra to the necessary places. After sometime passes and I knead enough chakra, I exit my previous state of meditation, going on to perform the snake handseal, exciting my chakra and increasing its vibrating frequencies to the point that I generate visible, physical, concentrated lightning in the palms of both of my hands. Holding both palms outstretched and in front of me, I release the built up chakra in the form of two equally powerful bolts of lightning. The lightning flies with frightening speed, closing in on its target - One bolt aimed to pierce your clones chest, the other aimed to cut through a tree that caught my fancy in the far off distance; And they don't disappoint. The two bolts not only successfully hit their mark, but effortlessly tear through both your clone and the tree. Crack shot.*

Pro: This technique is not only powerful, but can split apart to attack multiple enemies at once.

Con: If split apart into multiple attacks, each bolt of lightning grows weaker in direct proportion to the amount of bolts created; The more created, the weaker each individual bolt.

 

[Nathan]

Great.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Okay, send a B-rank long ranged fire tech into the sky to make thunder clouds, then make a chidori and then use it to control the lighting from the sky then make the lighting strike my clone, the strike will be in a blink of an eye.

 

[Superlative]

Great.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Okay, send a B-rank long ranged fire tech into the sky to make thunder clouds, then make a chidori and then use it to control the lighting from the sky then make the lighting strike my clone, the strike will be in a blink of an eye.

*Because I have yet to learn Fire Release up to B-Rank, I begin by drawing a scroll; Simultaneously, I knead chakra. Afterwards, I toss the scroll into the air above me in such a way that it un-furls in mid-air, revealing a drawn on seal that faces the sky. Because of my simultaneously molding chakra and channeling it into the seal, once in the air, the seal releases a B-Rank-level fire blast straight into the air. As the fire travels into the atmosphere and the heat does its job, I proceed by pre-preparing a Chidori, by kneading large amounts of chakra, channeling it to my dominant hand, performing the necessary handseal, and materializing the concentrated mass of lightning in my palm. When the weather has reached peak conditions, I raise my dominant hand to the sky and extend the chidori in my hand (similar to the way I did with the running beast technique) into the clouds, giving me access to and control over the natural lightnign in the sky. With that massive amount of energy under my control, I send it flying in the form of a dragon-shaped mass of lightning aimed several kilometers away to avoid killing anyone nearby, including myself .-.*

Pro: The technique is not only incredible powerful (It's displayed one of the most impressive feats of power yet) but near impossible to avoid (due to the fact that this technique utilizes natural lightning, it travels at the same speed as a real lightning bolt).

Con: The technique have a "Warm-up" period, where you have to wait for the weather conditions to change before you use the technique. Additionally, if you wait too long to use the technique, who's stopping your opponent from using Kirin against you, using the conditions that you (the user) set up for yourself.