Be honest with yourself. (Kishimoto Manga)

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If you had a really talented person to do manga illustrations for you....

....could you write a better action packed story than Kishimoto could, or a story just as good?
 

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Hell yeah, I'd make a bad ass Manga
 

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Just as good, but it wouldn't sell as much. Kishimoto knows how to please his fans and keep them interested apparently. That's what separates successful series from non successful series.
 

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yeah I have story for a manga I just can't draw :(
 

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If you had a really talented person to do manga illustrations for you....
....could you write a better action packed story than Kishimoto could, or a story just as good?
Its not like that. When u have a picture in ur mind only u can put it on paper. However answer is yes.

Off topic. When i hear "Be honest with yourself" I always think of sasuke n naruto in VeTE from english dub XD
 

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I'd pull ideas out of my ass as well to keep my fans happy. :cool:
 

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Possibly, I can't foresee fourteen years into the future.
 

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I have already a story in the works with a brilliant illustrator. ^^

It may not be as good as Naruto though. You'll just have to wait and see.
 

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Actually, I think I could make a story just as good, if not better.
 

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of course ill make it a million times better
 

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All by myself? Probably not. If I had a person to talk to plot wise and all, most likely. It wouldn't be as deep as Kishi's though. His has deep roots in Japanese mythos. If I were to write it. . I'd be more about the ongoing plot without little easter eggs that give the story depth.

So. . Yeah, if I had a friend to help me with the plot and character dialogue, probably could. Not to discredit Kishi by saying some nobody could do a better job than him...

Just he's constantly changed the story and backstory to the point where I can't look at it too linear. I have to suspend my ability to disbelieve even more so.

Like Orochimaru was still with root and Konoha when he found Kabuto, but he was also done with Akatsuki at that point. . ? So he was in Akatsuki and a root agent at the same time. According to the Kabuto flashbacks, that is.

Ninjutsu and moves would probably not be sooo bad. . .And by bad, I mean OP.

It'd be more balanced and more drawn out.... Not sure if you're asking if I were to write Naruto, or a story all by myself...

But give me a professional illustrator, a buddy or two who know what I'm doing and can double check things with and I might be able to. . .
 

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I would not troll my characters for starters U_U
 

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maybe just as good not better but i do my own illustrations anyway
 

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One thing I would do that Kishi just didn't is I'd make it so the story has no retcons.


From the beginning, I'd establish that Hashirama and Madara are the top tier, the only ones who can challenge them at the time would be Obito and Nagato, but of course they'd be introduced later.


I'd also introduce Obito/Tobi earlier to establish his role as final villain rather early, and I'd make it so all characters don't have tragic backstories, lol.


I don't know if I could make a better story, but I know at least I won't make the same mistakes as Kishimoto did.
 

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It would be fully of twists and cliche action story plots, but i've been DMing for years now.
 

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I'd develop more characters and give way more ppl the spotlight, that alone would make naruto 10 times better than it is right now
 

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Yes I think I could, and I know that many people would like it, the MC would be badass, it would be gory, the plot would be dark etc. I though of many stories before that would make a very good manga but I can't draw :(
My drawing skills are terrible.

However in the end, its mostly about popularity, I have read many mangas that are 100 times better than Naruto is every way but Naruto still has more fans and sells more than those, I think its mostly about popularity, but I'm sure that I could write a great manga.
 
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Plausible but I'm not sure..
 
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