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The Return and New Direction
?Naruto looks as Konan starts her journey towards Amegakure?
Flashback:
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?Naruto takes the flowers?
Naruto: ? My hope will never die as long as I live. This is my promise to you Konan.
Konan: ? Thank you Naruto. You may really be the light of hope we have all been dreaming of but couldn?t see.
?Naruto looks down and then up towards the sky?
Naruto: ? I have a lot to tend to?.I will return to the village now but I will contact you in Amegakure if all works out.
?Naruto just remembers something?
Naruto: ? Oh, and you should look out for a masked man in Akatsuki.
?Konan looks serious?
Konan: ? Why do you say that?
Naruto: ? Someone we can trust told me about it. He apparently is using Akatsuki for other means.
Konan: ???
Naruto: Do you know who this is?
Konan: Yes. His name is Madara Uchiha. I?m sure you?ve heard of him?
?Naruto looks a little shocked?
Naruto: ? Madara?Uchida? The man who fought the first.
Konan: ? That?s him.
Naruto: ? Uchida! That reminds me! Madara told us Sasuke defeated Itachi!
?Konan hesitates?
Konan: ? ..Yes..he did?.
Naruto: ? Do you know what happened to him then? Madara and that plant guy seemed to go after him?.
Konan: ? Actually he joined Akatsuki? Last I heard from him was that he wanted some kind of revenge on Konoha for doing something towards Itachi.
Flashback ends
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Naruto thinks to himself as he watches the disappearing figures of Konan and her friends: Sasuke?..What are you doing?
Switch scene to Sasuke:
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?Sasuke and the gang are getting ready to leave, Madara enters.?
Sasuke: ? What is it?
Madara: ? I just got the information that Pain lost to the nine tails.
?Close up on Sasuke?s wide opened eyes in disbelief?
Sasuke: -Impossible?Naruto could never have?
?Madara studies Sasuke?
Madara: ? That?s right, you don?t know this but Naruto took out other Akatsuki members as well.
?Sasuke looks at Madara with astonishment?
Sasuke thinks to himself: How strong have that cluts gotten?
Sasuke: ? I don?t know how it happened but it seems Naruto has become pretty strong huh?
Madara: ? It seems we underestimated the kid yes. For Pain to be defeated?It?s no small task.
Sasuke: ? This is interesting news? It won?t be easy then as I?m sure Naruto will protect Konoha at all costs?.
Madara: ? So that means to achieve your goals you will need to face him..will you be up for that?
?Sasuke looks indifferent at Madara?
Sasuke: ? I have defeated him before and there is no way he could defeat me.
Madara: ? Then you wouldn?t mind recovering the nine ? tails in place of Pain while your at it yes?
?Sasuke hesitates, then he smiles?
Sasuke thinks: I would like to see just how strong my new abilities are?.and Naruto is the perfect person that represents the will of fire?And It can?t be avoided if I?m to revenge Itachi.
Sasuke: ? I will have my revenge..and If Naruto tries to stop me I will take him down. I have no more ties to him, I cut them already in the valley of the end.
?Madara watches Sasuke with delight and even a little fear?
Madara thinks: How long has it been since I felt even the slightest hint of fear? He is ruthless even to the degree of Insanity. He will be very strong? My goals is finally getting closer.
Madara: ? Excellent. You know what to do, I?ll leave the rest to you.
Switch to Naruto:
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?As Konan disappears Naruto relaxes and feels the fatigue he didn?t before?
?Naruto gasps for air and kneels down?
Katsuyu: ? Naruto! Hold on?Neji and Rock Lee is coming to help you!
?Naruto looks at Katsuyu at his shoulder?
Naruto: ? They are? How?
Katsuyu: ? I?m leading them to you, Neji insisted.
Naruto: ? That?s fine?I?m alright but I?m kind of tired.
?Neji and Lee arrive at the ground where Naruto is kneeling?
Neji: ? Naruto!
Lee: ? Naruto, are you alright?
?They both come up to him and support him so he can stand. Lee looks around and Neji uses Byuukan to look around?
Naruto: ? I?m fine guys, just a little tired.
Lee: ? Is the enemy defeated?
Neji: ? No! I see one figure moving away from here not far away!
?Neji starts to move, Naruto puts his hand on Nejis Shoulder stopping him. Neji Looks surprised at him?
Neji: ? Naruto?
?Naruto gives Neji a serious stare?
Naruto: ? Let her go Neji, she is not the enemy.
Neji: ? Did you let her go?
Naruto: ? Yes. Pain is dead, they are not our enemy anymore.
Neji: ? But they destroyed the village! They Killed!
Naruto: ? I know Neji, but as a final act Pain also revived the people that died?.
?Lee and Neji is shocked by this statement?
Lee: -Revived?
Neji: What are you talking about Naruto!?
?Naruto stands on his own, tall and determined. He looks them straight in the eyes. He puts his hands on their shoulders?
Naruto: Don?t worry you two. I?ve defeated Pain. Before he died he Revived the people who he hurt in Konoha. Even if that sounds weird it will all be explained in time. We won?. Konan left with their bodies to Amegakure. They will support us from now on. Trust in me.
The village needs us now. Let?s go home.
?Naruto smiles?
?Both Lee and Neji is taken in by Narutos determination and can say nothing. They both stand there in some kind of aw at Narutos presence. ?
Naruto: ? Come on guys, help me home.
Neji: ? Eh.. Of course Naruto!
?Leaning on his comrades Naruto begins the walk home.?
Switch to Sakura:
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?Sakura is helping people around the debris?
Sakura thinks: Impossible! I don?t know what happened but people came back from the dead?.This is a miracle.
?Someone Shouts something and Sakura looks up to see what the fuss is?
Ten-ten: ? Naruto! It?s Naruto!
?Sakura looks around and see that people are standing up all over the place to see Naruto return. Besides her is Hinata that is crying with Joy. Hinata stands up and shouts. Naruuutooo ? Kuuunn!
Sakura feels as all her worries is washed away and she feels light-hearted at all the peoples joy at Naruto?s return. She smiles and looks at the horizon.?
Sakura thinks: Naruto! Look what you have become to the village?.You saved us!
?Sakura looks to see the figure of Naruto leaning lightly on Neji slowly walking towards the crater area. The sun is starting to set so they have the sun in their back making them somewhat shadowy. Besides them Lee is walking to.?
?Naruto lets go of Neji and raises his hand in a wave towards the people of Konoha. The people stand in silence as Naruto passes them and walks up to Sakura, Hinata and gang.
He looks around and smiles and his new found determination can be seen by all?
Naruto: ? I?m glad your all safe! It was a close call there. The danger is over for now. Let?s rebuild!
?The people around all start to cheer and chant?
People: ? Naruto! Konoha?s saviour!
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?He always appear when he need him the most,? said Kakashi. (Flash back of Naruto using his tactic to save Kakashi from Zabuza?s water prison. Flash back of Naruto appearing from the smoke to help Sasuke fight Haku. Flash back of Naruto appearing with Team Seven to save Kakashi, Choji, and Ino from Kakuzu?s Katon jutsu.
Then automatically Kakashi pictures Minato on top of Gamabunta, preparing to face off against the Kyuubi.)
?He in a sense, has done even more than me. What do you think, Kakashi. To think he?d be able to change someone such as that. His power is amazing? said Tsuande.
(She is walked over with the help of Sakura.)
?Katsuyu, how?s Naruto?s condition,? asked Fukasku. ?He?s fine. Just a little tired froom using his up all his chakra,? said Katsuyu. naruto 450 raw
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?Heh, heh. You don?t mind lady Tsunade, that we take him off your hands for a while. He reminds us so much of Jiraiya. He told us his dream is to be the Hokage. Seeing how much work this village needs. We?ll have to kick him into shape,? said Fukasku.
?You?ll have to ask him yourself, here he is,? said Tsunade. (Naruto walks over to the crowd.)
Switch Scene to Akatuski Headquarters:
(Kisame joins the fray.)
?So, what did you discover down below,? asked Madara. ?Sasuke and his croonies have already set sail for Konoha. I have also taken care of our little pest problem,? said Kisame.
?So, the Eight Tails didn?t return home. THis makes things easier for me,? said Madara.
?How, this is more work for you,? said Light Zetsu.
?He must have something planned,? said Dark Zetsu.
?What about Pain, we haven?t recieved a report from him,? said Kisame. ?We have to assume the worst case scenario at this moment,? said Madara.
?And you are knowingly letting Sasuke go to Konoha, considering that Naruto may have defeated the man who was considered unbeatable. You must have some faith in the boy that screwed up so badly against the Eight Tails,? said Kisame. naruto chapter 450
?I was merely testing Sasuke?s abilities with the Mangekyou Sharingan. I wasn?t expecting him to be quite successful, but based on the condition of the substitution he brought in, he is capable of Amaterasu, which means he has awakned the other two abilities.
Now, he is ready to accomplish his task. And considering the damage Pain might have left Konoha in, Sasuke?s job should be that much more managable. What?s more, is that the Eight Tails is now rogue. I can capture him myself,? said Madara.
?Told you he had a plan,? said Dark Zetsu.
?I?ll track down the Eight Tails. Until then, Naruto is in Sasuke?s hands. Then, we can plan our final move,? said Madara. (Madara vanishes.)
(Switch Scene to the Land of Lightning)
?WHAT. ALL FOUR TEAMS HAVE BEEN KILLED BY ONE MAN,? yelled Raikage. ?Yes, apparently the descriptions mentions him to be a rather large man, carrying a huge sword wrapped in bandages. He has a shark like face and pale blue skin,? said Advisor.
?Him, could it be. Kisame of the sevenmist swordsmen. He is also a missin nin, but I?ve always been curious about Mizugakure. Konoha has a Jinchuuriki living in their village. I?d doubt they?d aid Sasuke. Now I?m suspecting Mizugakure of foul play, even if this Kisame is a missing nin. Killer Bee. It might already be too late. Akatuski will pay dearly for this. How long until the preparions for the summit are ready,? asked Raikage
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(Team Falcon stands outside the Akatuski Hideout. They are all suited and ready to go.)
?The three elders ought to be heavily guarded by Anbu Black ops, the secret attack squad of Konoha. Regardless, things aren?t going to be easy. Take out anyone in your way,? said Sasuke.
?But Sasuke, weren?t you originally from Konoha? You don?t feel any hostility towards attacking them without an explanation,? asked Karin.
?I have no more love for Konoha. And if things get too serious, leave everything to me,? said Sasuke. (Suigetsu smiles.)
?That?s what I like to hear,? said Suigetsu. ?Sasuke, something has been bugging me for a while now,? said Karin.
?What is it,? asked Sasuke. ?Isn?t there a jinchuurikii residing in Konoha,? asked Karin.
?Ehh, Sasuke? You were from Konoha, I?m sure you know this host right,? asked Suigetsu. ?Naruto, that?s his name. I?m sure you guys remember him from our pursuit of Itachi. He was the one who used the mass shadow clones to pinpoint my location,? said Sasuke.
?Is he a problem,? asked Suigetsu. ?He is the 9 tails jinchuurikii. He shouldn?t be underestimated,? said Sasuke.
?If the tails represents the amount of strength he holds, then he could be even more dangerous than the Eight Tails,? said Karin.
?Heh, the nightmares won?t go away for me either,? smiled Suigetsu. ?If my assumptions about him are correct, he may actually pose a small threat.
He is the kind of stubborn guy who won?t accept the fact that he has lost. If bringing me back is so important to him, he must have improved his powers well beyond our last meeting,? said Sasuke.
?Your rivalry with this guy reminds me of Kimmimaro and myself,? said Juugo. ?YOu guys sound like you have been through a lot,? said Karin.
?Hah, are you worried you can?t beat him,? asked Suigetsu. Don?t worry, my powers are enough to eclipse all light at his chances of winning,? said Sasuke.
(Team Falcon looks intently at Sasuke?s deamnor.)
?Let?s go, Konoha awaits,? said Sasuke. (They dash off.)
Switch Scene to inside Akatuski corridors:
(Countless Defeated Lightning Shinobi lay about. Among the corpses stands Kisame grasping victory.)
?It seems Sasuke brought a bit of trouble back with him,? said Kisame. (Tucked inside a crevice is a lone shinobi, he sends away a communication lizard.)
?That should do it. At least I was able to describe what kind of monster Akatuski has on their side. Now, I should try to escape,? said Lightning Shinobi.
(He immediately sneaks out but is quickly cornered by Kisame.)
?Oh, how cute. A little straggler. I must be off today, to let you evade my eyes for this long,? laughed Kisame.
?Who the hell are you,? asked Shinobi. ?Since you are about to die anyway, I guess I can tell you. I am Shark Devil Kisame, one of the remaining sevenmist swordsmen,? said Kisame.
?Wait, I thought you were disbanded,? said Shinobi. (Immediately Kisame slices through the man, the screen cuts to Kisame?s face.)
?That?s all he asked for, so that?s all he gets,? said Kisame.
Switch Scene to Konoha:
(Naruto heads back to Konoha and notices everyone is gathered around to celebrate his victory.)
?There he his,? said Katsuyu. ?Wow, guys. Kakashi, Sakura, Gramps. Everyone is here. He really did it,? smiled Naruto. (He tears up.)
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Early spoiler!!! ** = means my comments
Cover is of Neji wearing a Hyuuga robe with Hyuuga symbol on it.
Side Text: He wears his robe proudly along with the memories of failure. The prodigy of the Hyuuga.
(Naruto looks at Book and smiles) (sfx:gleem from sun)
Naruto: "The village!" "What, you!"
(off in the forest somewhere)
Neji: "So he finally pulled it off"
Naruto: "So you thought you could get away, byakuganman!"
(Naruto has a menacing shadow on his face.) (All you can see is two rotating sharingans and a big white grin)
(Neji attempts a rotation but he is stabbed in the chest by some kind of sword Kunai)
Neji: "The others, i will haev to use my new technique, mental palm transfer!"
(Neji closes his eys and makes lot of rapid hand signs. Instantly Tsunade gains knowledge of Neji's situation) (It seems Neji is able to communicate throught his Jutsu)
(With his last Breath and a grin)
Neji: "Failure..."
(Tsunade is still in old mode)
Tsunade realizes what has happened and runs off into teh forest in the direction of Neji - he can communicate direction with the jutsu as well - *****ing hax byakugan*)
(Tsunades arrives at the scene) (Naruto Drenched in Neji's blood holding his eyeballs with bright sharingan shining through the darkness - seem to be in some tree canapy)**
Tsunade: "YOU!"
Dark Naruto: "Finaly the Kyuubi is mine once again, but this time I wont be thwarted by the H - O - K - A - G - E, a mere child at that." "Amaterasu!"
(last page is just a picture of black flames with a single sharingan peering through)
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The Return and New Direction
?Naruto looks as Konan starts her journey towards Amegakure?
Flashback:
***************
?Naruto takes the flowers?
Naruto: ? My hope will never die as long as I live. This is my promise to you Konan.
Konan: ? Thank you Naruto. You may really be the light of hope we have all been dreaming of but couldn?t see.
?Naruto looks down and then up towards the sky?
Naruto: ? I have a lot to tend to?.I will return to the village now but I will contact you in Amegakure if all works out.
?Naruto just remembers something?
Naruto: ? Oh, and you should look out for a masked man in Akatsuki.
?Konan looks serious?
Konan: ? Why do you say that?
Naruto: ? Someone we can trust told me about it. He apparently is using Akatsuki for other means.
Konan: ???
Naruto: Do you know who this is?
Konan: Yes. His name is Madara Uchiha. I?m sure you?ve heard of him?
?Naruto looks a little shocked?
Naruto: ? Madara?Uchida? The man who fought the first.
Konan: ? That?s him.
Naruto: ? Uchida! That reminds me! Madara told us Sasuke defeated Itachi!
?Konan hesitates?
Konan: ? ..Yes..he did?.
Naruto: ? Do you know what happened to him then? Madara and that plant guy seemed to go after him?.
Konan: ? Actually he joined Akatsuki? Last I heard from him was that he wanted some kind of revenge on Konoha for doing something towards Itachi.
Flashback ends
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Naruto thinks to himself as he watches the disappearing figures of Konan and her friends: Sasuke?..What are you doing?
Switch scene to Sasuke:
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?Sasuke and the gang are getting ready to leave, Madara enters.?
Sasuke: ? What is it?
Madara: ? I just got the information that Pain lost to the nine tails.
?Close up on Sasuke?s wide opened eyes in disbelief?
Sasuke: -Impossible?Naruto could never have?
?Madara studies Sasuke?
Madara: ? That?s right, you don?t know this but Naruto took out other Akatsuki members as well.
?Sasuke looks at Madara with astonishment?
Sasuke thinks to himself: How strong have that cluts gotten?
Sasuke: ? I don?t know how it happened but it seems Naruto has become pretty strong huh?
Madara: ? It seems we underestimated the kid yes. For Pain to be defeated?It?s no small task.
Sasuke: ? This is interesting news? It won?t be easy then as I?m sure Naruto will protect Konoha at all costs?.
Madara: ? So that means to achieve your goals you will need to face him..will you be up for that?
?Sasuke looks indifferent at Madara?
Sasuke: ? I have defeated him before and there is no way he could defeat me.
Madara: ? Then you wouldn?t mind recovering the nine ? tails in place of Pain while your at it yes?
?Sasuke hesitates, then he smiles?
Sasuke thinks: I would like to see just how strong my new abilities are?.and Naruto is the perfect person that represents the will of fire?And It can?t be avoided if I?m to revenge Itachi.
Sasuke: ? I will have my revenge..and If Naruto tries to stop me I will take him down. I have no more ties to him, I cut them already in the valley of the end.
?Madara watches Sasuke with delight and even a little fear?
Madara thinks: How long has it been since I felt even the slightest hint of fear? He is ruthless even to the degree of Insanity. He will be very strong? My goals is finally getting closer.
Madara: ? Excellent. You know what to do, I?ll leave the rest to you.
Switch to Naruto:
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?As Konan disappears Naruto relaxes and feels the fatigue he didn?t before?
?Naruto gasps for air and kneels down?
Katsuyu: ? Naruto! Hold on?Neji and Rock Lee is coming to help you!
?Naruto looks at Katsuyu at his shoulder?
Naruto: ? They are? How?
Katsuyu: ? I?m leading them to you, Neji insisted.
Naruto: ? That?s fine?I?m alright but I?m kind of tired.
?Neji and Lee arrive at the ground where Naruto is kneeling?
Neji: ? Naruto!
Lee: ? Naruto, are you alright?
?They both come up to him and support him so he can stand. Lee looks around and Neji uses Byuukan to look around?
Naruto: ? I?m fine guys, just a little tired.
Lee: ? Is the enemy defeated?
Neji: ? No! I see one figure moving away from here not far away!
?Neji starts to move, Naruto puts his hand on Nejis Shoulder stopping him. Neji Looks surprised at him?
Neji: ? Naruto?
?Naruto gives Neji a serious stare?
Naruto: ? Let her go Neji, she is not the enemy.
Neji: ? Did you let her go?
Naruto: ? Yes. Pain is dead, they are not our enemy anymore.
Neji: ? But they destroyed the village! They Killed!
Naruto: ? I know Neji, but as a final act Pain also revived the people that died?.
?Lee and Neji is shocked by this statement?
Lee: -Revived?
Neji: What are you talking about Naruto!?
?Naruto stands on his own, tall and determined. He looks them straight in the eyes. He puts his hands on their shoulders?
Naruto: Don?t worry you two. I?ve defeated Pain. Before he died he Revived the people who he hurt in Konoha. Even if that sounds weird it will all be explained in time. We won?. Konan left with their bodies to Amegakure. They will support us from now on. Trust in me.
The village needs us now. Let?s go home.
?Naruto smiles?
?Both Lee and Neji is taken in by Narutos determination and can say nothing. They both stand there in some kind of aw at Narutos presence. ?
Naruto: ? Come on guys, help me home.
Neji: ? Eh.. Of course Naruto!
?Leaning on his comrades Naruto begins the walk home.?
Switch to Sakura:
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?Sakura is helping people around the debris?
Sakura thinks: Impossible! I don?t know what happened but people came back from the dead?.This is a miracle.
?Someone Shouts something and Sakura looks up to see what the fuss is?
Ten-ten: ? Naruto! It?s Naruto!
?Sakura looks around and see that people are standing up all over the place to see Naruto return. Besides her is Hinata that is crying with Joy. Hinata stands up and shouts. Naruuutooo ? Kuuunn!
Sakura feels as all her worries is washed away and she feels light-hearted at all the peoples joy at Naruto?s return. She smiles and looks at the horizon.?
Sakura thinks: Naruto! Look what you have become to the village?.You saved us!
?Sakura looks to see the figure of Naruto leaning lightly on Neji slowly walking towards the crater area. The sun is starting to set so they have the sun in their back making them somewhat shadowy. Besides them Lee is walking to.?
?Naruto lets go of Neji and raises his hand in a wave towards the people of Konoha. The people stand in silence as Naruto passes them and walks up to Sakura, Hinata and gang.
He looks around and smiles and his new found determination can be seen by all?
Naruto: ? I?m glad your all safe! It was a close call there. The danger is over for now. Let?s rebuild!
?The people around all start to cheer and chant?
People: ? Naruto! Konoha?s saviour!
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?He always appear when he need him the most,? said Kakashi. (Flash back of Naruto using his tactic to save Kakashi from Zabuza?s water prison. Flash back of Naruto appearing from the smoke to help Sasuke fight Haku. Flash back of Naruto appearing with Team Seven to save Kakashi, Choji, and Ino from Kakuzu?s Katon jutsu.
Then automatically Kakashi pictures Minato on top of Gamabunta, preparing to face off against the Kyuubi.)
?He in a sense, has done even more than me. What do you think, Kakashi. To think he?d be able to change someone such as that. His power is amazing? said Tsuande.
(She is walked over with the help of Sakura.)
?Katsuyu, how?s Naruto?s condition,? asked Fukasku. ?He?s fine. Just a little tired froom using his up all his chakra,? said Katsuyu. naruto 450 raw
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?Heh, heh. You don?t mind lady Tsunade, that we take him off your hands for a while. He reminds us so much of Jiraiya. He told us his dream is to be the Hokage. Seeing how much work this village needs. We?ll have to kick him into shape,? said Fukasku.
?You?ll have to ask him yourself, here he is,? said Tsunade. (Naruto walks over to the crowd.)
Switch Scene to Akatuski Headquarters:
(Kisame joins the fray.)
?So, what did you discover down below,? asked Madara. ?Sasuke and his croonies have already set sail for Konoha. I have also taken care of our little pest problem,? said Kisame.
?So, the Eight Tails didn?t return home. THis makes things easier for me,? said Madara.
?How, this is more work for you,? said Light Zetsu.
?He must have something planned,? said Dark Zetsu.
?What about Pain, we haven?t recieved a report from him,? said Kisame. ?We have to assume the worst case scenario at this moment,? said Madara.
?And you are knowingly letting Sasuke go to Konoha, considering that Naruto may have defeated the man who was considered unbeatable. You must have some faith in the boy that screwed up so badly against the Eight Tails,? said Kisame. naruto chapter 450
?I was merely testing Sasuke?s abilities with the Mangekyou Sharingan. I wasn?t expecting him to be quite successful, but based on the condition of the substitution he brought in, he is capable of Amaterasu, which means he has awakned the other two abilities.
Now, he is ready to accomplish his task. And considering the damage Pain might have left Konoha in, Sasuke?s job should be that much more managable. What?s more, is that the Eight Tails is now rogue. I can capture him myself,? said Madara.
?Told you he had a plan,? said Dark Zetsu.
?I?ll track down the Eight Tails. Until then, Naruto is in Sasuke?s hands. Then, we can plan our final move,? said Madara. (Madara vanishes.)
(Switch Scene to the Land of Lightning)
?WHAT. ALL FOUR TEAMS HAVE BEEN KILLED BY ONE MAN,? yelled Raikage. ?Yes, apparently the descriptions mentions him to be a rather large man, carrying a huge sword wrapped in bandages. He has a shark like face and pale blue skin,? said Advisor.
?Him, could it be. Kisame of the sevenmist swordsmen. He is also a missin nin, but I?ve always been curious about Mizugakure. Konoha has a Jinchuuriki living in their village. I?d doubt they?d aid Sasuke. Now I?m suspecting Mizugakure of foul play, even if this Kisame is a missing nin. Killer Bee. It might already be too late. Akatuski will pay dearly for this. How long until the preparions for the summit are ready,? asked Raikage
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(Team Falcon stands outside the Akatuski Hideout. They are all suited and ready to go.)
?The three elders ought to be heavily guarded by Anbu Black ops, the secret attack squad of Konoha. Regardless, things aren?t going to be easy. Take out anyone in your way,? said Sasuke.
?But Sasuke, weren?t you originally from Konoha? You don?t feel any hostility towards attacking them without an explanation,? asked Karin.
?I have no more love for Konoha. And if things get too serious, leave everything to me,? said Sasuke. (Suigetsu smiles.)
?That?s what I like to hear,? said Suigetsu. ?Sasuke, something has been bugging me for a while now,? said Karin.
?What is it,? asked Sasuke. ?Isn?t there a jinchuurikii residing in Konoha,? asked Karin.
?Ehh, Sasuke? You were from Konoha, I?m sure you know this host right,? asked Suigetsu. ?Naruto, that?s his name. I?m sure you guys remember him from our pursuit of Itachi. He was the one who used the mass shadow clones to pinpoint my location,? said Sasuke.
?Is he a problem,? asked Suigetsu. ?He is the 9 tails jinchuurikii. He shouldn?t be underestimated,? said Sasuke.
?If the tails represents the amount of strength he holds, then he could be even more dangerous than the Eight Tails,? said Karin.
?Heh, the nightmares won?t go away for me either,? smiled Suigetsu. ?If my assumptions about him are correct, he may actually pose a small threat.
He is the kind of stubborn guy who won?t accept the fact that he has lost. If bringing me back is so important to him, he must have improved his powers well beyond our last meeting,? said Sasuke.
?Your rivalry with this guy reminds me of Kimmimaro and myself,? said Juugo. ?YOu guys sound like you have been through a lot,? said Karin.
?Hah, are you worried you can?t beat him,? asked Suigetsu. Don?t worry, my powers are enough to eclipse all light at his chances of winning,? said Sasuke.
(Team Falcon looks intently at Sasuke?s deamnor.)
?Let?s go, Konoha awaits,? said Sasuke. (They dash off.)
Switch Scene to inside Akatuski corridors:
(Countless Defeated Lightning Shinobi lay about. Among the corpses stands Kisame grasping victory.)
?It seems Sasuke brought a bit of trouble back with him,? said Kisame. (Tucked inside a crevice is a lone shinobi, he sends away a communication lizard.)
?That should do it. At least I was able to describe what kind of monster Akatuski has on their side. Now, I should try to escape,? said Lightning Shinobi.
(He immediately sneaks out but is quickly cornered by Kisame.)
?Oh, how cute. A little straggler. I must be off today, to let you evade my eyes for this long,? laughed Kisame.
?Who the hell are you,? asked Shinobi. ?Since you are about to die anyway, I guess I can tell you. I am Shark Devil Kisame, one of the remaining sevenmist swordsmen,? said Kisame.
?Wait, I thought you were disbanded,? said Shinobi. (Immediately Kisame slices through the man, the screen cuts to Kisame?s face.)
?That?s all he asked for, so that?s all he gets,? said Kisame.
Switch Scene to Konoha:
(Naruto heads back to Konoha and notices everyone is gathered around to celebrate his victory.)
?There he his,? said Katsuyu. ?Wow, guys. Kakashi, Sakura, Gramps. Everyone is here. He really did it,? smiled Naruto. (He tears up.)
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Default 06-02-2009, 04:37 AM
Early spoiler!!! ** = means my comments
Cover is of Neji wearing a Hyuuga robe with Hyuuga symbol on it.
Side Text: He wears his robe proudly along with the memories of failure. The prodigy of the Hyuuga.
(Naruto looks at Book and smiles) (sfx:gleem from sun)
Naruto: "The village!" "What, you!"
(off in the forest somewhere)
Neji: "So he finally pulled it off"
Naruto: "So you thought you could get away, byakuganman!"
(Naruto has a menacing shadow on his face.) (All you can see is two rotating sharingans and a big white grin)
(Neji attempts a rotation but he is stabbed in the chest by some kind of sword Kunai)
Neji: "The others, i will haev to use my new technique, mental palm transfer!"
(Neji closes his eys and makes lot of rapid hand signs. Instantly Tsunade gains knowledge of Neji's situation) (It seems Neji is able to communicate throught his Jutsu)
(With his last Breath and a grin)
Neji: "Failure..."
(Tsunade is still in old mode)
Tsunade realizes what has happened and runs off into teh forest in the direction of Neji - he can communicate direction with the jutsu as well - *****ing hax byakugan*)
(Tsunades arrives at the scene) (Naruto Drenched in Neji's blood holding his eyeballs with bright sharingan shining through the darkness - seem to be in some tree canapy)**
Tsunade: "YOU!"
Dark Naruto: "Finaly the Kyuubi is mine once again, but this time I wont be thwarted by the H - O - K - A - G - E, a mere child at that." "Amaterasu!"
(last page is just a picture of black flames with a single sharingan peering through)
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