[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Necron]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning: Zapdos of Thunder (Shōkan: Kaminari no Zapdos)
Rank: S
Type: Summon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Description: Zapdos is a giant vulture, of the same size as Gamabunda. He is a Raiton master, and can use raiton up to forbidden rank. He can carry a full size Akimichi on his back (size of the Gedo Mazo). He is yellow in color, and his plumage is constantly disparaged. He can also perform hand seals with his claws, although the jutsu performed on the hand of the user, will be performed in the Vulture's beak instead. To summon him, the user will put his blood on the contract fan, perform the needed hand seals and swing the fan in the air above him. Zapdos will appear right above the user, already flying. He can speak in human tongue as well.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Must be Kage rank or higher to summon him, or one won't earn his respect, and he will fly away

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Summoning: Zapdos of Thunder (Shōkan: Kaminari no Zapdos)
Rank: S
Type: Summon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Description: Zapdos is a giant vulture, of half the size of Gamabunda. He is a Raiton master, and can use raiton up to S-rank but without any hand seals. He is yellow in color, and his plumage is constantly disarranged. To summon him, the user will put his blood on the contract fan, perform the needed hand seals and swing the fan in the air above him. Zapdos will appear right above the user, already flying. He can speak in human tongue as well.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Must be Kage rank or higher to summon him, or one won't earn his respect, and he will fly away
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-Declined- Needs a turn limit, and make him 1/4 the size of Gamabunta.

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(Tegatana no Katana) Hand-Sword Katana
Type: Offencive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage: 40
Description: The user contracts all the muscles of his lower arm, and then envelops his lower arm with 2 reverce chakra curents, that create an edge on the outer arm. This way, the hardened part becomes as hard as Iron. Then, a chakra katana blade will appear around the hand of the user, with it's edge being at the fingertips. The user can also replace the normal chakra used for this jutsu with chakra of any (basic) element he has mastered. If he does so however, he can maintain the blade active for only one turn.
-If master level or higher, one can activate this technique on both hands.
-Can stay activated for a maximum of 3 turns.

X-Declined-X I think it only works with 3 chakra natures. PM me if im wrong, otherwise resubmit with a more precise description.

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(Yoru no hagewashi no tsubasa) The Vulture's Wings of Night.
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage: 40
Description: A signer of the Vulture's contract, will grow black wings of a vulture on his back, that allow him to fly. With them, he can fly at the speed of the fastest summons. However, as his bones are far heavier than a vulture's, the wings need to be very big ( 8 meters from one wing to an other), making them easy to target. If the wings get even a small hit (similar to the shadow clone structure), they will disappear, leaving black feathers around the user. Can stay active till the end of the turn. The wings will not be destroyed by jutsu the user casts. They can also be used instead of a fan, when a jutsu requires one.
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[Sharingdork]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ninpou: Bakuhatsu Danmaku Tagu) Ninja Style: Explosive Tag Barrage
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will form three handseals, "snake > boar > monkey", and then clap their hands together, channeling their chakra through the air and into any Explosive Tag within range (the user must be aware of the tags' presence). Then, utilizing the basic properties of "Manipulate Advancing Blades", the user will then cause the tag to levitate, and their chakra will cause the tags to become stiff like a piece of metal (the paper comprising the tag can still be cut, but it cannot be bent or shattered). The user will then cause the Explosive Tags to fly in any desired direction, though every Explosive Tag caught in this technique will travel to the same location. This technique can be used to stop the kunai with explosive tags attached to them, or to redirect the user's own Explosive Tag-attached kunai back at the target, among other uses. When the user separates their clapped hands, the tags explode simultaneously.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
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-Declined- I was going to approve it when i saw this "Among other uses" thing, i'm not going to leave a custom be messed with, so write what you want to use it for in the description, and mention that you can only stop the kunais of your own, not the opponent's.

(Genjutsu: Shanburuzu) Illusionary Arts: Shambles
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will begin by forming four handseals, and then will hold out a closed fist towards the target, suddenly opening their hand with their palm facing the target to cast the illusion. As the user opens their hand, the illusion is cast and the target sees their body being separated into six main parts (the head and neck, right arm, left arm, right leg, left leg, and torso). Within the illusion, whenever the target attempts to move a part of their body, the intended movement will be augmented to be larger than intended. For example, if the target tries to move their right arm to the left, it will fly towards the left far beyond the distance the target intended. In a sense, the target has control over how a body part moves, and in which direction, but not over the strength of which it moves. While in the illusion, anything which happens to a part of the victim will be felt in the victim's mind, meaning if the detached arm becomes cut, the target will feel the illusionary cut despite it being however far away it appears to be. The user can also control how the target's body moves within the illusion with hand gestures, though the target's will can overpower the user's intentions (ie. if the target tries to move their arm left while the user tries to move their arm right, it will move left). When the user moves the target's detatched body parts, they are able to do so with precision, unlike the target themselves.
In the real world, this technique has taken away the target's fine motor skills, making any physical movement they make within the genjutsu translate to the real world as a large gesture, such as trying to reach up to scratch one's head turning into driving one's arm upwards as hard as they can and then moving back and forth in an exaggerated "scratching" motion. In addition to their hand-eye coordination being completely taken away from the victim (as they see their limbs being severed and separated, when in the real world they are very much still attached), the loss of fine motor skills makes it very difficult for the target to perform tasks such as reaching into a weapons pouch to grab a kunai, or clapping their hands together to form Kai in order to break the technique.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts for 3 turns or until broken
~Can only be used twice per battle
~Can be used on up to 3 targets (including Summoning Animals) at once
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-Declined- In a genjutsu you can't manipulate your opponent's body, that's a feat of Sharingan genjutsu not normal genjutsu, and rewrite the colored because i don't get it.

 

[Kung Fro]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal:Giant Tortoise
Scroll Owner: BasedNinja / Yoko Basedichi
Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
Summoning Boss if existing: Testudo the Giant Tortoise Lord
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/a
Description and Background: Testudo is a tortoise, which is a testudine that does well on the land. It is different from a turtle as a turtle fairs better in the water. Testudo hails from the coast of Turtle Island, where he has honed his combat skills due to the dangerous environment. Testudo is about twice the size of Gamakichi and can hold up to two humans on his shell. When he withdraws his head and limbs there is enough space in his shell for a human to fit into. Testudo can perform Water and Earth techniques up to B-rank.

Note: Lasts for 5 turns.

X-Declined-X Canon contract

 

[Better]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton:Ganzan) - Earth Release:Rock Mountain
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user claps their hands together. The user then manipulates the earth around them to create a rock mountain that can be used to block incoming attacks. This mountain is intricately designed, sculpted into what seems to be a giant warrior

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Exactly what kind of attacks? Rank? Also, give it an usage limit.

(Doton:Ganzan) - Earth Release:Rock Mountain
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user claps their hands together. The user then manipulates the earth around them to create a rock mountain that can be used to block incoming attacks. This mountain is intricately designed, sculpted into what seems to be a giant warrior. It's a sturdy defense, can take up to A rank lightning attacks, S rank Wind and Fire, and can protect from all water attacks. These are considering the element by itself, elemental combos will have to deal with the NB strengths and Weaknesses.

- Can only be used 3 times
- Can only be taught by Better

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-Declined- How would an A-rank Earth technique block an A-rank lightning technique? for all the stuff you said it needs to be an S-ranked, and needs a size definition, also mention where it's risen.

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(Kumo-Ryū -Kazebakuha) - Cloud Style: Wind Blast
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user puts his hand on the hilt of his sword focusing an enormous amount of fuuton chakra and then release it all at once as an omnipotent wind all around the user. The wind last as long as the user has his sword still unsheathed. Then the user pulls out his sword and the wind gathers and travels where ever the sword is swung. The wind travels as a wind blast toward their intended target. The blast can be controlled to be a narrow more sharp blast of wind or a wide spread blast.

- Can only be taught by Better
- Can Only be used 3 times
- This is a kenjutsu technique.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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♰ (Akumaitosen)- Devils Threading Wire ♰
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The Devils Threads is a weapon that was made by an old semstress and her husband a black smith, they both worked on the Devils Threads for many years only to have it stolen from them, by -Tauburn-. The Devils Threads are wrapped around the users wrists and fingers under the users gloves or around the gloves, the thread are very flexable and cant be broken from use of any other weapons. The Devils Threads is a shape tranformation weapon, given enough chakra will harden into a solid sheild like shape, or a weapon of any kind, even into indiviual stradess that will bind the opponent. The threads are only able to channel Fire and Lightning chakra thoughout the thread, if any other element is used the threads wont even respond to the users chakra. The threads themselves are made out of a thin chakra absorbing metal, that will give shape to the users will, The threads also have silk braided into the chakra absorbing metal threads, giving the thread a greenish tint from the silk.

C -Rank - 20 chakra/30 damage: Will create shapes out of the threads to make a strong defence/offence againist attacks, while giving the threads shape for a extended amount of time.

B -Rank - 25 chakra/40 damage: The user will channel chakra into the threads and munipulate them into a weapons shape Meaning the weapon will have the same weight of a weapon and the same sharpness of a weapon.

A -Rank - 30 chakra/ N/A damage: The user will release chakra into the threads, then control the threads to wrap around the opponents body restraining him. (Arms, legs, neck, wrists, figers, and ankles.)

S -Rank - 40 chakra/80 damage: The user will channel lighting or fire chakra through out the Devils Threads and use them to attack the enemy. Lightning will hit the opponent and give them a numb feeling for 30 secs, while if the user channels fire chakra throughout the thread the opponent will receive critical burns if hit by the thread.

>- The weapons techniques count towards the jutsu per turn
>- Can only be used by -Tauburn-.
>- Can only be used once per turn.
>- The threads can only be used 3 times for the techniques above A-Rank.
>- The threads are always connected to the user and will not be usable if said connection is severed.

Above ^^^^ in the spoiler is my old CW im dropping for this one below.

(Tenrai ryu setsudanki)- Divine Dragon Guillotine
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The Dragon Guillotine is a weapon made up of seventy two blades that are located on the users back made of an indestructible metal, the blades are reactant to the users chakra moving at the users will as independent limbs. The seventy two blades appear as wings coming from the users back, made up of more chakra absorbing metals. Each of the blades is attached to one another by a thin chakra absorbing metal wire which pull and push the blades while each of the blades is a separate blade they are all connected by the wire. The Dragon Guillotine is able to act separate and in unison with one another, able to be used while they are loose able to be used as a whip like weapon or a single blade, even able to release a small number of the blades from the tips of the wings and they return. The Dragon Guillotine while attached to the users back is able to allow the user to sense the opponents chakra, locating them on the field at all times with great accuracy. The wings can reach to the furthest part of mid range with ease. The wings are also able to release the users elemental affinity from the seventy two blades just by swinging the blades at the opponent.
= Only able to release four total blades from the tips of the wings, per move.
= Having the blades return once released takes 1 post.
= The sensing lasts for four turns once activated, then takes another two turns before it will allow the user to sense again.
= The elemental affinity use can only release a C – S rank jutsu, and is only able to be released via the wings once per turn.

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Pending
Not too sure about such a weapon, so leaving for another checker.

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±± Declined ±± Why is this weapon forbidden ranked? No. Also, to drop a weapon you need to link the post where the weapon was approved if you haven't the ability to quote it anymore. If you do, simply quote it.

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and i spoke with Cali he said i get the training auto for bakuton, since there is no sensei who teaches it. Link to Convo just in case,

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(Bakuton: Gahou): Blast Style: Tiger Claw
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses their Blast Release through their fingers, then slams their palm into the enemy with their fingers similar to a claw. Each finger causes a small controlled blast from the finger tips. The power of the technique is able to cause opponents to bound away from its strength and is also known for piercing through steel with its force. Due to the direction of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated.
- Can only be used 3 times per fight.

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Removed the part about the fact it lasts for a full move, that sounds a bit too much. Also, you wouldn't be able to form handseals, no?

(Bakuton: Onigoroshi) Blast Style: Ogre Killer
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by utilizing their Blast Release in the palm of their dominate hand, and then following the same process as the rasengan only difference would be the size of the Ogre Killer is slightly smaller. The Ogre Killer can be thrown out to long range from the user and once the ogre killer makes contact with anything it will explode into a fury of debris, the explosion covers short range of the ogre killers contact point.
= Can be used 4 times per battle.

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Sounds too similar to existing techniques. Leaving for someone else to double check.

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±± Declined ±± DNR

Dropping my CW, approved here...

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♰ (Akumaitosen)- Devils Threading Wire ♰
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The Devils Threads is a weapon that was made by an old semstress and her husband a black smith, they both worked on the Devils Threads for many years only to have it stolen from them, by -Tauburn-. The Devils Threads are wrapped around the users wrists and fingers under the users gloves or around the gloves, the thread are very flexable and cant be broken from use of any other weapons. The Devils Threads is a shape tranformation weapon, given enough chakra will harden into a solid sheild like shape, or a weapon of any kind, even into indiviual stradess that will bind the opponent. The threads are only able to channel Fire and Lightning chakra thoughout the thread, if any other element is used the threads wont even respond to the users chakra. The threads themselves are made out of a thin chakra absorbing metal, that will give shape to the users will, The threads also have silk braided into the chakra absorbing metal threads, giving the thread a greenish tint from the silk.

C -Rank - 20 chakra/30 damage: Will create shapes out of the threads to make a strong defence/offence againist attacks, while giving the threads shape for a extended amount of time.

B -Rank - 25 chakra/40 damage: The user will channel chakra into the threads and munipulate them into a weapons shape Meaning the weapon will have the same weight of a weapon and the same sharpness of a weapon.

A -Rank - 30 chakra/ N/A damage: The user will release chakra into the threads, then control the threads to wrap around the opponents body restraining him. (Arms, legs, neck, wrists, figers, and ankles.)

S -Rank - 40 chakra/80 damage: The user will channel lighting or fire chakra through out the Devils Threads and use them to attack the enemy. Lightning will hit the opponent and give them a numb feeling for 30 secs, while if the user channels fire chakra throughout the thread the opponent will receive critical burns if hit by the thread.

>- The weapons techniques count towards the jutsu per turn
>- Can only be used by -Tauburn-.
>- Can only be used once per turn.
>- The threads can only be used 3 times for the techniques above A-Rank.
>- The threads are always connected to the user and will not be usable if said connection is severed.

(Tenrai ryu setsudanki)- Divine Dragon Guillotine
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description: The Dragon Guillotine is a weapon made up of seventy two blades that are located on the users back made of an indestructible metal, the blades are reactant to the users chakra moving at the users will as independent limbs. The seventy two blades appear as wings coming from the users back, made up of more chakra absorbing metals. Each of the blades is attached to one another by a thin chakra absorbing metal wire which pull and push the blades while each of the blades is a separate blade they are all connected by the wire. The Dragon Guillotine is able to act separate and in unison with one another, able to be used while they are loose able to be used as a whip like weapon or a single blade, even able to release a small number of the blades from the tips of the wings and they return. The Dragon Guillotine while attached to the users back is able to allow the user to sense the opponents chakra, locating them on the field at all times with great accuracy. The wings can reach to the furthest part of mid range with ease. The wings are also able to release the users elemental affinity from the seventy two blades just by swinging the blades at the opponent.
= Only able to release four total blades from the tips of the wings, per move.
= Having the blades return once released takes 1 post.
= The sensing lasts for four turns once activated, then takes another two turns before it will allow the user to sense again.
= The elemental affinity use can only release a C – S rank jutsu, and is only able to be released via the wings once per turn.

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-Declined- No chakra sensing granted to you by your CW, don't resubmit.

 

[Tsuki]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Hedgehog
Scroll Owner: -Tsuki
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: A hedgehog is any of the spiny mammals of the subfamily Erinaceinae, which is in order Erinaceomorpha. Like many of the first mammals they have adapted to a nocturnal, insectivorous way of life. Hedgehogs' spiny protection resembles that of the unrelated rodent porcupines and monotreme echidnas.
Hedgehogs are easily recognized by their spines, which are hollow hairs made stiff with keratin. A defense that all species of hedgehogs possess is the ability to roll into a tight ball, causing all of the spines to point outwards. However, its effectiveness depends on the number of spines, and since some of the desert hedgehogs evolved to carry less weight, they are much more likely to try to run away and sometimes even attack the intruder, trying to ram into the intruder with its spines, and rolling as a last resort.
Hedgehogs occasionally perform a ritual called anointing. When the animal encounters a new scent, it will lick and bite the source, then form a scented froth in its mouth and paste it on its spines with its tongue. The specific purpose of this ritual is unknown, but some experts believe anointing camouflages the hedgehog with the new scent of the area and provides a possible poison or source of infection to predators poked by their spines.
Hedgehogs have some natural immunity against snake venom due to the protein erinacin in the animal's muscular system.

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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  Already exists.

 

[Korra.]

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My Korra bio has Snakes so here is the link to the bio xD

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Hebi No Tanjō - Birth Of Snakes
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (-15 to maintain)
Damage: 60
Description: The user does the Snake hand sign and then starts having 6 snakes (3 on each side) come out of his back and stay connected to them. Each snakes is 7 feet long. The snakes can be used to attack the opponent and and be used to grab ninja tools out of the air and help protect the user. The snakes can also grab onto near trees or pillars to help pull the user out of the way of incoming attacks like ninja tools. The snakes and the user have connected version and the snakes can alert the user on what they sense using their senses through temperature and smell but the user does not get the these sense and must have the snake use their senses and get alerted through the snakes.
Note: Usable 3 times a match
Note: Last 4 turns and must wait 1 turn before reusing.
Note: Must know Snake summoning
Note: Must be taught by Korra

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Collides with some things.


(Genjutsu : Shi No Hanten Sekai) Illusionary Arts: Death's Inverted World
Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Supplementary
Range : Short- Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user will trap the opponent in a genjutsu where the opponent will see them self in a world that is darken and everything is destroyed completely. The opponent will then see Death and his demons appear in front of them and reaching out to grab them. When they grab the opponent this will cause stress to their mind and cause them to be immobilized to the point where they barely can move their arms. In reality the opponent is standing still and then collapse while the user there watching or getting ready to attack.
Note: Must be taught by Korra
Note: Usable 4 times a match.

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±± Declined ±± Why does he collapse? It should require handseals.

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(Genjutsu : Shi No Hanten Sekai) Illusionary Arts: Death's Inverted World
Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Supplementary
Range : Short- Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user will do the Dragon then Snake hand signs and trap the opponent in a genjutsu where the opponent will see them self in a world that is darken and everything is destroyed completely. The opponent will then see Death and his demons appear in front of them and reaching out to grab them. When they grab the opponent this will cause stress to their mind and cause them to be immobilized to the point where they barely can move their arms. In reality the opponent is standing still and then collapse ,due to mind stress from the genjutsu, while the user there watching or getting ready to attack.
Note: Must be taught by Korra
Note: Usable 4 times a match.
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-Declined- Why would being touched by "Death" cause the opponent to collapse? it's not a sufficient enough trauma to do so, why would the opponent be immobilized in the first place? and btw if there's a mental damage involved in the genjutsu you should write damage points.

Dropping this CW

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Name: Tsuki to taiyō no kama The Moon and Sun Scythes
Rank: S
Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
Range: Short
Chakra Cost N/A (40 for adding Suiton and 40 for adding Katon)
Damage Cost: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu techniques When adding chakra)
Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin sycthes one is white and one is black. These sycthes were created by Johninto. When the user is holding the moon scythe he can add his suiton chakra into the scythe making covered in water and able to reach longer by 3 more feet. When the user is holding the Sun scythe he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the scythe in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased by 3 more feet. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
Note: Can only be used by ~Johninto~
Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both scythes.
Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns
Note: Infusing the swords counts as a move and can only be done once per turn
~Approved~

(Gurīnrantan No Ringu) Ring of the Green Lantern
Rank: S
Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
Range: Short
Chakra Cost N/A (40 for creating Tools/Weapons, -15 for keeping sensing activated)
Damage Cost: N/A
Description: This Green Ring is worn by the user and glows bright green when activated. By channeling their chakra into the ring it glows bright green and can be used to create weapons like hammers, swords, kunai, and shields made up of pure chakra that stay connected to the ring by a chakra chain. When creating a shield the shield can block up to B rank elemental jutsus (withing reasonable size) and ninja tools. If the shield goes against a A rank jutsu the shield will block it but be destroyed and will automatically loose to S rank jutsus. The ring can also glow green when it senses foreign chakra allowing the user to know if they are trapped in genjutsu or help locate the enemy. The downside to this that if the user acitavtes things like SM or CM the ring will glow since it is still foreign chakra confusing the user.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the ring by Korra
Note: When creating weapons and shields it counts as a move.
Note: If the ring comes off the user it deactivates and the user must wait 3 turns so it can charge.
How the ring looks like.

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-Declined- No foreign chakra sensing weapons, it's not allowed anymore.

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(Ameton : Ame Supaiku) Rain Release: Rain Spikes
Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short- Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The user will channel their chakra into the rain and start using their chakra to take over the rain. The user will then manipulate the rain and change them into the shape of spikes and have the rain impale the opponent. The user can also use this jutsu to have rain drops that are already on the opponent change into spikes to impale them faster.
Note: Have to know Rain Release
Note: Has to be raining
Note: Can only be taught by Korra
Note: Usable 4 times a battle.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Vasto Lordé]

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( Katon: Honō no chisei ) - Fire Release: Reign of Fire
Type: Off/Def/Supp
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A (90 upon physical contact )
Description: The user after sending a surge of Fire chakra through his body, channels it into his lungs where he utilizes the chakra and rapidly spews out three condensed fire spheres that contain the user's own chakra and have a 4 meters in diameter into the sky above him, on his command, he makes a single handseal and causes the three fire spheres to blow up into a Huge circular geyser of condensed flames that cover the whole battlefield up to Long range. Due to these flames being condensed and containing the user's chakra, they will cover the battlefield for three turns as long as the user keeps channeling his fire chakra into it. Also, during these three turns the user can use this cloud of flames to fire off different size fire balls, streams of fire, and flaming rain like drops of fire, and even cause tornadoes made of flames to rain down on the opponent or any targeted area the user chooses. During these three turns the user can only use Fire elemental chakra and his own raw chakra if he hopes to keep the fire cloud above the battlefield for the full three turns.

Notes and Restrictions:
- Small sized techniques are B-Ranked.
- Medium sized techniques are A-Ranked.
- Huge sized techniques are S-Ranked.
- To use this technique for it's three rightful turns the user can ONLY use fire elemental techniques and his raw chakra during the three turns.
- During these three turns, the user will spend a move of his three allowed moves in which he posts this technique again while mentioning that he channels his fire chakra to feed it, or something similar.
- If the user chooses to use a different elemental chakra than fire during these three turns, he loses control over the cloud of fire as it fades away clearing the sky.
- Can only be used once and lasts for a maximum of three turns.
- Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé
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-Declined- Ridiculous, don't resubmit.

 

[~Yubel~]

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Katon: Rokudō no Tsuji - Fire Style: Crossing of Six Paths
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(-20 to user)
Description: The user performs 5 handseals which causes 6 gigantic pillars of fire to erupt behind him. The fiery pillars then merge at their tip and come down between the users hands where they get greatly condensed and molded into a sphere that resembles a small sun. The user then shoots the sphere in a blast that tears the earth apart and covers a wide range both vertically and horizontally. This technique incinerates everything in its path and leaves a large crater in the earth up to Long range in front of the user.
-Can only be used once
-Cannot perform handseals for 3 turns
-Cannot use fire techniques above B rank next turn
-Cannot mold any technique above A-Rank the same and next turn
-The blast is wide enough to consume a summon the size of Gamabunta

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±± Approved ±±

Katon: Rokudō no Tsuji - Fire Style: Crossing of Six Paths
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(-20 to user)
Description: The user performs 5 handseals which causes 6 gigantic pillars of fire to erupt behind him. The fiery pillars then merge at their tip and come down between the users hands where they get greatly condensed and molded into a sphere that resembles a small sun. The user then shoots the sphere in a blast that tears the earth apart and covers a wide range both vertically and horizontally. This technique incinerates everything in its path and leaves a large crater in the earth up to long range in front of the user.
-Can only be used once
-Cannot perform handseals next turn
-Cannot use fire techniques above A rank next two turns
-Blast is wide enough to consume a summon the size of Gamabunta
-The user can only do two jutsus same and next turn due to exhaustion

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if i have a technique that has gotten approved but has too many restrictions to be of any use, can i resubmit it to change the restricitions?

If it is within reason, you can resubmit it requesting a revaluation. Explain your reasons, its too restricting because etc. But dont do it in a manner that would conflict with the blue rule (you can say i told you to explain). But please dont argue with a mod thinks its fine the way it is

I think the formely approved technique was too restricting because you can't use handseals for 3 turns afterwards and can't mold any technique above A rank same or next turn which to me has nothing to do with the technique itself. It takes alot of handseals and preparation to begin with meaning it can be interupted and even then could be stopped by a water encampment pillar for example so in my opinion it isn't deserving of the former restrictions because they cripple you too much and it is not a very powerful technique, it is merely a rank above S rank so i request a revaluation of the technique.
Thank you.

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-Declined- Honestly i find the technique fine the way it is, tell you what, if you add a speed restriction, basically decreasing the speed/reaction times of your bio, i might consider removing a restriction of those, a Forbidden technique is supposed to cripple you, that's why it's called Forbidden, Forbidden techniques are composed of 2 S-ranks, and believe me the technique you have there is powerful enough to have those restrictions, and you can perform other than Fire techniques, the restriction involves that you can't use Fire techniques B-rank and above, if you make it so that you can't use Fire techniques at all for 2 turns after the turn this technique is used in, and give it a speed restriction like i said previously instead of handseals restriction, then it's good to go.

 

[Enzup]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Triton) - Summoning Technique: Triton
Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short (summoned beneath the user)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User summons a giant Terrapin beneath him, who have same size as that of Gamabunta. He is a water specialist and can perform upto S-ranks water techniques without any hand-seals. He also carries a big sword roughly matching his size. The terrapin is quite furious all the time and loves to stay underwater.

Note: -Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Like all other Terrapins, he can use Turtle Ninjutsu.
-Can stay on field for at max 4 turns.
-Must've signed Terrapin contract.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

Removed immunity part.



(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Za Tsuiraku Terrapin) - Summoning Technique: The Falling Terrapin
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: User claps his hands and summons a giant Terrapin above his opponent, who carries giant sword in his right hand. The terrapin however is summoned upside down having it's face facing the ground with it's legs facing the sky, as the terrapin is summoned, he start rotating/spinning very fast while facing his sword in downward direction. This formation of the terrapin forms a giant drill with it's sword as the center of the drill and hence drilling into his opponent.

Note: -The Terrapin is summoned above the opponent's location by upto 20 meters.
-Like all other Terrapins, he can use Turtle Ninjutsu.
-Must have signed the Terrapin contract.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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PS. I don't have any original version approved for it, the link I gave you last time, belonging to Archive section of CJ submission, contain the CJ which was declined for some reason, so I was resubmitting it.

Made some minor changes. Replaced the word Turtle by Terrapin. Removed the concept of second sword completely.

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±± Both Declined ±± No turtle mentioning. Very close to declining your Terrapin contract... Won't warn again.

Resubmitting both.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Triton) - Summoning Technique: Triton
Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short (summoned beneath the user)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User summons a giant Terrapin beneath him, who have same size as that of Gamabunta. He is a water specialist and can perform upto S-ranks water techniques without any hand-seals. He also carries a big sword roughly matching his size. The terrapin is quite furious all the time and loves to stay underwater.
Note: -Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Like all other Terrapins, he can use Terrapin Ninjutsu.
-Can stay on field for at max 4 turns.
-Must've signed Terrapin contract.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.
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-Declined- Reduce the size of the summon, about 1/4 of Gamabunta's size is enough, and that Terrapin ninjutsu thing, if it involves using another elemental nature other than water then he can't use it, not to mention techniques that require a water source to be used, can't be used by him unless he uses a water source.

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Za Tsuiraku Terrapin) - Summoning Technique: The Falling Terrapin
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: User claps his hands and summons a giant Terrapin above his opponent, who carries giant sword in his right hand. The terrapin however is summoned upside down having it's face facing the ground with it's legs facing the sky, as the terrapin is summoned, he start rotating/spinning very fast while facing his sword in downward direction. This formation of the terrapin forms a giant drill with it's sword as the center of the drill and hence drilling into his opponent.
Note: -The Terrapin is summoned above the opponent's location by upto 20 meters.
-Like all other Terrapins, he can use Terrapin Ninjutsu.
-Must have signed the Terrapin contract.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.
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-Declined- A complete rip off from my "Crow Arts: The Falling Menace" Technique, don't resubmit.

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(Ninjutsu: Za Hando Arthur) - Ninja Arts: The Hand of Arthur
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (if hit upon)
Description: This technique is quite useful and reliable and makes use of pure raw chakra. In this technique user makes use of one of his hands and starts pouring out raw chakra from that hand in the form of froth and after a split second the chakra condenses and user shape manipulates it to form a basic tool or any precise shape out of the hand. The tool is partially connected to the hand, so its impossible to drop it, but if needed then user can disperse it into nothing. The basic tool can be any and can vary as per the need and situation. This technique is versatile as the shape of the tool can be changed anytime in the battle, if needed. For instance, user can create a shield and then shape manipulate it to form a sword. The size of the tools can vary but cannot exceed short range of the user.
Note: -Lasts 3 turns if opponent don't deal with it or if not cancelled by user.
-Can be used 2 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.
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-Declined- Rip off from Scorps's Tools of the creator CJ, if i ever see a rip off in your CJs again i'll ban you for an indefinite time from posting CJs.

 

[Akisha]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Illusionary technique: Tachophobia (Genjutsu: Osori no supi-do)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Middle
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: An illusionary technique mostly used by taijutsu users to slow down their opponents. The user will either look his opponent in his eyes or will perform a single hand seal and will insert his chakra in his opponent’s brain. Once the genjutsu is set, the user will feel as if he has Tachophobia or also called “The Fear of Speed.” The effects are instantaneous. The opponent, upon performing a speedy action like running or any other movement that is above the normal speed, will feel tremendous fear as if the speed will get him killed which will force the one under the illusion to slow down.
~This technique can only be used twice per battle and the user must wait 1 turn before re-using it again. It lasts for 2 turns and the user can not use any other illusionary technique while this is active, as well as any genjutsu above A rank after this technique has over. No techniques above S rank at the same time this technique is used.
~Can only be taught by Akisha.
||Declined|| Don't see why this needs to be S-rank. Overall, the idea is interesting, but instantaneous?

Melody Art Illusionary Technique: False Attack (Merodīāto Genjutsu: Heki Atakku)
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Middle
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A very advanced illusionary technique that affects the opponent’s sense of hearing and sight. The user will whistle a tune in order to cast this genjutsu. Once under it, the user can make his opponent see any kind of attack that is actually not real in order to confuse the opponent or force him to use a technique that the user wants but it’s main use is to distract his enemy or enemies while the user attacks.
~It can only be used once per battle and the user can not use any illusionary techniques for the same and following turn. No techniques above S rank at the same turn this technique is used.
~Can only be taught by Akisha.

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||Declined|| Do not Resubmit

Wind Release: Wind’s Blessing (Fuuton: Kaze no Megumi)
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Middle
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user releases wind chakra from his body, creating sphere of wind chakra around him and his opponent(s) all the way up to middle range with user at its’ epicenter, unseen by those without a Doujutsu or sensory abilities. Inside the sphere the user can do several things, one of them being able to decree the amount of oxygen inside, and even though it is still enough to breathe it will slow the opponents down as they are not used to the low level of oxygen, unlike the user. This will of course weaken fire techniques as they need oxygen (by 1 rank). The user can also control the wind currents inside the sphere and is able to disperse harmful gases.
~Can only be taught by Akisha and the technique last for 3 turns or until deactivated. While the technique is active the user can not use Wind techniques above S rank or any fire techniques. It can only be used twice per battle but the user must wait 1 turn before re-using. No Wind techniques for 1 turn after the technique has ended.
||Declined|| Similar Technique

 

[Khallil]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Bāsuto o suraisu) - Lightning release: Slicing burst
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user will run at the opponent and his/her feet will start glowing. They jump in the air, and do a front summersault, but while the user is rotating in the air, electricity is gathering around the user’s feet. The electricity is shaped as a slice of lightning, rotating along with the feet of the user. Meanwhile the user is rotating (performing the summersault), the slice of lightning grows bigger, and eventually when the user’s feet point toward the opponent, the user will release the burst of gathered lightning chakra out of his feet aimed at the opponent. The lightning burst is shaped as a big vertical lightning slice, of 4 meters tall, and 2 feet in the width. The large lightning slice has a large destructive power and can even paralyse a large summoning.

~note: can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
~note: can only be used once in a battle
~note: you can't use a S-rank raiton jutsu the following turn, and no raiton jutsu at all in the same turn.

Declined
Seems oddly like a Fire one I just read some time ago...>.>
Nonetheless, need a bit more details - how many spins do you need to do before you can release this? How long does it take to charge up?

(Raiton: Bāsuto o suraisu) - Lightning release: Slicing burst
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user performs the monkey hand seal and will run at the opponent and his/her feet will start glowing. They jump very high in the air, and do 3 front summersault while they are in the air. (3 times spinning). WHile the user is rotating in the air electricity is gathering around the user’s feet. The electricity is shaped as a slice of lightning, rotating along with the feet of the user, every moment of the rotating time of the user, the slice of lightning grows bigger, it takes about 1.5 seconds for the lightning to have charged and gathered around the feet, and eventually, after 3 times rotating very fast in the air, when the user’s feet point toward the opponent, the user will release the burst of gathered lightning chakra out of his feet aimed at the opponent. The lightning burst is shaped as a big vertical lightning slice, of 4 meters tall, and 2 feet in the width.

~note: can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
~note: can only be used once in a battle
~note: you can't use a S-rank raiton jutsu the following turn, and no raiton jutsu at all in the same turn.
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(Kchuysei: Ryōshu Hiro) Summoning: Lord Hiro
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user draw blood, performs a few handseals, and he’ll summon the goshawk boss Hiro. Hiro is a goshawk with the size of a big elephant. He is very loyal to it´s master, and speaks english, so we can understand what he say. He can fly very fast, and he has big claws, that are as sharp as knifes. Hiro can use all the wind jutsus (the user has learned ) without performing any handseals. It’s skin is very thick, he has dark-red eyes with a white eye stripe.
Note:
-this Summoning lasts 3 turns
-this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Goshawk Contract.
-this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
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-Declined- Please follow the proper template, there's a "Type" section messing from your template and "Rank" as well.

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[Alyx]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Hyouton: Aisu Meiku Ryu: Hiso)Ice Release: Ice Make Style: Grappling Hook
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B-Rank
Range:Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:
Description:The user after using the Ice Release Technique, will perform a sequence of two handseals,will channel there chakra into the snow and manipulating the shape will create grappling hooks out of the snow and create grappling hooks that will then follow the target and wrap around the target and will drag them towards the original source of where the user channeled there chakra.This technique can also be used by a Yuki member to create Ice from their own bodies without snow and can lift the user when it grips onto a solid piece of area.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Can only be taught by Aoi.
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-Declined- Please use more periods, i don't get what you want from the technique, also specify if those "grappling hooks" can do damage as they grab the opponent, that colored portion, you do realize that Yuki members are the only ones that can use Ice Release, and thus that statement is pointless.

(Hyouton/Katon: Jūjika-jō de umarekawari)Ice/Fire Release: Reborn on the Cross
Type:Offensive, Supplementary
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:30(-20 for Fire Stream)
Damage:60
Description:The user will perform a sequence of 5 handseals, they will then channel there chakra into the ground under the target and create a cross trapping them on the cross. The targets hands will be lock on the sides of the cross like in a jail cell, preventing them from performing any headseals. The ice much like similar techniques in Ice has high resistance towards Fire Release Techniques making it only S Ranked and above Fire Techniques capable of melting the cross or cuffing. The user while manipulating the shape of the Ice made small holes in the ice, where they will then perform 2 handseals and create a thin stream of Fire to travel through the ice which is also hollow in the inside and will manipulate the stream to flow through the holes near the targets cuffed arms and cause the fire to coil around their arms like snakes and will behind to burn the targets arm, burning there whole arm making them on able to perform handseals due to the hands being burnt in the process.
-Can only be used once per battle
-User can sustain the cross for only 2 turns after which the cross will collapse and vanish freeing the target.
-Can only be used by Aoi
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-Declined- Weird technique honestly, how would the opponent be trapped in the cross exactly? Ice sticking to them? cuffs trap their hands to the cross? also that whole Fire stream thing, weird but plausible, remove that the opponent wouldn't be able to perform handseals because their arms will be burned, also use more periods and proper grammar, i can hardly understand the technique.

 

[BlacKing]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Magen Hiden Furirunekkutokage | Demonic Illusion: Hidden Jutsu Frill Necked Lizard
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0
Description: Obito surges a massive amount of chakra through his body forcing the bottom of his cloak to raise up above his head as he places his hands together and casts his opponent(s) into a genjutsu. To the opponent(s), it will appear as if nothing Obito is still charging a massive amount of chakra. All of the opponents' senses are still in tact including movement. In the illusion, Obito is positioned exactly where he was before, giving off the impression that the technique is ongoing. This jutsu works by manipulating the opponent's mind, casting a constant replay of all the opponents' senses, thus allowing Obito to move around freely without being seen or heard in reality.
Note: Only Obito Bios can use this technique.
Note: Can only be cast 3x per battle.
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-Declined- Rip off from Izanami, don't resubmit.

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[Superlative]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Biri-Biri) Lightning Release: Biri-Biri
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a versatile technique that can be used in two ways. One can take complete control of any liquid on the battle field, for example water (whether it exists in the form of vapor, mist, rain, etc) by saturating it with electricity and manipulating the electric intermolecular interactions in said liquid. Once in control, through the use of specific hand movements, the water can move and act at will, taking different shapes and forms, like waves, or spikes for example. However, this technique does not allow the user to change the properties of said liquid (e.g. altering the viscosity, cohesiveness, etc).The destructive potential would be directly proportional to the amount of water manipulated; The workings of this technique are similar to the way Sandaime Kazekage manipulated Iron Sand. The second ability of this technique is to administer a direct electric current through a given liquid, inducing electrolysis and separating a liquid into its naturally occurring sources by using the same method as with the first variation (intermolecular manipulation). For example, if this variation was used to perform electrolysis on a body of water, you could obtain enough hydrogen and oxygen to use as fuel for a large explosion, so on and so forth.

*Both variations of this technique can be used on liquids other than water, but only on liquids.
*This technique can only be used to manipulate already existing liquids. If there is no liquid or moisture of any kind present in the environment, this technique will fail to be effective.
*This technique can be used to affect an opponent’s techniques of A Rank or below.
*The lightning does not augment the liquids offensive ability because the vibrations are so minute (i.e. no electrocution). However, the liquid cannot be frozen because the molecules are constantly vibrating.
*Only one variation may be used per use of this technique.
*While this technique is in use, the user cannot use any other jutsu.
*This technique can only be used four times per battle.
*This technique can only be used once every other turn.
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-Declined- Been attempted before multiple times, not allowing free manipulation on liquids or anything of the sort, don't resubmit.

(Raiton: Kiseki no Chabudaigaeshi) Lightning Release: The Miraculous Coffee Table Flip
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A [+20 to the users lightning jutsu]
Description: This technique allows the user to forcibly augment the destructive capabilities of lightning release jutsu. The user will focus additional chakra into a given lightning jutsu immediately after using it – The additional chakra will be used to manipulate and alter the vibratory rates of the lightning to match a particular frequency. Upon coming into contact with any solid or semi-solid material, instead of barbarically breaking through and destroying obstacles (as lightning usually does), the lightning will transfer its energy and cause a collective excitation (increase the vibratory rates) of molecules in said object. The vibrating frequency of the lightning will be made to match the natural resonant frequency of a given material, completely destroying it on contact and causing it to shatter into extremely small fragments. This can be used in several ways to increase the efficiency of raiton; For example, if one was to use Kakashi’s signature Lightning Blade (S- Rank) and smash it into a B-Ranked earth wall (Earth Release: Mud Wall jutsu), despite the difference in ranks and the fact that Lightning > Earth, the Lightning Blade wouldn’t even scratch the surface of destroying such a large slab of earth. If the user was to augment the Lightning Blade with this technique beforehand, the lightning would match the resonant frequency of the wall, shattering the entire thing to pieces. This technique “fine tunes” lightning jutsu to “flip” or “overturn” a deficit, like the one in the previous example; It vastly increases the destructive potential of even the most subtle of lightning jutsu.

*This technique can only be used to augment one’s own lightning jutsu, and can only be used to augment a single technique per use.
*This technique can only be used four times per battle.
*This technique cannot be used two turns consecutively.
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-Declined- First of all, increasing/decreasing vibration falls under the Vibration Release CE, and not allowing elemental boosting CJ anymore, been done countless times for all of the basic 5 elemental natures.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Earth Release: Hidden earth trap (Doton: Hitoshirezu daichi wana)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal while channeling his earth chakra into the ground and creates a large empty cavity beneath the earth surface wherever the user desires, within the range by compressing the earth on all sides using his chakra to create an empty cavity without disturbing the surface of the ground. In doing so, the opponent just feels a mild tremor coursing through the ground if he is in contact with the ground. The size of the cavity can vary from a minimum of 3 feet in all dimension to a maximum of 15 feet in all dimensions whether be it in a spherical or cuboid shape or tubular shape or irregular shape and the cavity is created just 2-5 feet beneath the ground surface with intact surface strong enough to support the opponent or things at that time. Because of this thin surface over the underlying cavity whenever significant added weight (for example water, earth, extra weight due to clones/summoning animals or explosions) or when added force occurs over the area like jumping, falling occurs over that area, the thin surface gives away and breaks drawing them all into the pit. The surface also will break when certain lightning jutsus which travel through the ground like Chidori thunderstorm a they will destroy the superficial earth in their path as they proceed.
Note:

• Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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Fire Release: Ascending firefly (Katon: Joushou hotaru)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Ram -> Tiger hand seal and sends out his fire chakra above the opponent which creates light grey colored inflammable ash particles and they fall over the area like the snow fall. Using his fire chakra, the user can even accelerate the ash to fall faster and thicker towards the ground such that the surface of the terrain of about 0.5 feet will be covered in fine light grey ash particles in a matter of few minutes. Being inflammable, the ash particles can be ignited using method which produces fire or sparks such as fire sparks, lightning sparks, explosive tags, etc.
Note(s):

• Can only be used 4 times per battle.
• The ash is of normal temperature like that of the surroundings, non irritant, not enough to obscure the field of vision by its thickness during fall.
• Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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-Declined- That's not how Fire Release works, Fire or Ash can't be materialized out of the thin air using fire chakra alone, it needs a medium in order to do so, like Earth, your body, etc, but can't be used like water or wind.

Demonic Illusion: Violent death (Magen: Sobou zetsumei)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Due to mental & physical trauma)
Description: The user performs the Ram -> Rat hand seals and puts the opponent under a powerful illusion where the opponent wakes up drowsy and feels like that he has been beaten up badly and was asleep for a long time. Next thing he realizes is that his hands are behind his back, tightly bound by a rope and his legs were also bound together by a rope and he is suspended by a rope around his neck from a tree with his feet partially resting on a small unstable wooden stage surrounded by a shady group of shinobis and the user who cheer/approve for his death by hanging. As soon as he sees, hears and feels these in his illusion, suddenly the wooden stage gives away, hanging him in the air with his feet off the ground and he suffers from asphyxia(loss of oxygen or difficulty in breathing) due to the rope tightening around his neck and naturally suffers from seizures due to hypoxic injury(reduced oxygen) to brain before he is dead.
In reality the opponent becomes immobilized in his track first and then throws violent generalized convulsions/seizures due his brain believing the illusion that it suffers from hypoxic injury and naturally throws convulsions/seizures.
The damage in this illusion is due to severe psychological trauma from the agonizing pain of the feel of being hanged & asphyxiated as well as the physical damage done due to convulsions/seizures.
Note(s):

• Can be used 3 times per battle.
• No S-rank and above illusion in the same turn & No A-rank and above illusion the immediate turn of it being executed successfully.
• Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Lord of Kaos]

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Satsui no Hado CFS Approved

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1. Tsuin Gou Hadoken|Twin Great Surge Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Cost: 90
Description: The Tsuin Gou Hadoken is a type of Hadoken more powerful and advanced in comparison to the normal Hadoken, an already dangerous attack in itself. The user focuses large amounts of Satsui no Hado chakra to each arm, drawing them back as if in the horse stance, condensing the dark chakra into a slightly larger shape than the regular basketball sized Hadoken, creating one in each hand. As the user compresses the dark chakra, he adds elemental chakra to the Hadokens, giving them properties of any elemental affinities the user charges through them. The user, upon creating the Hadokens, can choose to only thrust one outwards, releasing just that one while continuously holding the other in his hand. However, as he does this, he will be unable to use any other ninjutsu until he releases the second. The second Hadoken still has to released by the end of the turn. The user can also chooses to fire both at the same time, with individual strength equal to a strong S-rank jutsu and a combined force of a forbidden ranked jutsu. Using them takes a great toll on the user however, and he's left unable to mold high ranking jutsus of the elemental affinities he used this jutsu with. When the user charges elemental affinities into the Hadokens, several effects appear depending on which element is focused. In order to fully taunt his enemies, Akuma devised an additional name for each "verision" made from the various elements:

± Zanku Hadoken|Air Slashing Surge Fist - When charging Futon chakra, the Hadoken's becomes slightly faster and causes great damage upon impact of the elemental version, causing enough damage to break bones and limit movement by the enemy while pushing him backwards with great force.
± Shakunetsu Hadoken|Scorching Heat Surge Fist - When charging Katon chakra, the chakra heats the Hadoken to the point that upon contact, second degree burns will occur, with third degree and fourth degree burns from prolonged contact.
± Gourai Hadouken|Roaring Thunder Surge Fist - When channeling Raiton chakra, lightning begins to form around the Hadoken and increases it's speed and causes it to have the effect of causing extreme paralysis of the nervous system upon direct contact, surging through the foes body and is capable of bursting through earthen defenses of up to Forbidden Rank
± Seiryū Hadoken|Azure Dragon Surge Fist - When channeling Suiton chakra, the Hadoken begins to contain extremely compressed water in it, being able to cause massive damage upon contact but can also be used to burst through fire jutsus and leave behind a great source of water upon striking its target with great force
± Messatsu Gou Hadou|Annihilating Great Surge- When channeling Doton chakra, the Hadoken begins to increase in mass, making it heavier and more solid and as such, hits the target with great force, breaking bones on contact as the Hadoken grinds against a target, dealing great damage before forcing them away.
Note: Can only be used once a fight.

Note: Both Hadoken's must be released within the same turn and no other jutsu may be used by the user until it is fully released.
Note: After using, the user is left with great strain, and unable to use whichever ( elemental affinities he used ) jutsus ranked S-rank and higher the two turns.
Note: The user cannot use any Satsui no Hado jutsu for the rest of the fight.
Note: Each different version of the Hadoken still follows basic strengths and weaknesses of each element ( i.e Fire is strong to wind but weak to water, etc ).
Note: Can only be used by Masters and Grandmasters of the Satsui no Hado CFS.
Note: The user is also able to release this jutsu with just focused chakra, however it would be significantly weaker (as strong as an A-rank ninjutsu) and still limit all elemental affinities to A-ranks and below the next turn.
Note: The user can only use one other jutsu the same turn this was used.

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I am alright, with Fire, Wind and Lightning Variations, they have actual effects. But Water and Earth are not very complimentary with this technique. The way i see it: They are just a mass of element infused with your chakra of murderous intent, in actual battle there will be trouble identifying the actual abilities of those variations. Earth and Water a both largely defensive elements that dont fit well with an offensive technique here, that is what i think but you could resubmit by providing something with more ground since compressed Earth and Water projectiles have been tried over and over (Like If you say, the Earth variation would make the opponent heavier or lighter, it will still be energy based, earth release and better then shooting a chunk of earth).
Apart from that, the part where you say "Any of the users elemental affinities", does it mean advanced natures and sound too?


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2. Kuchiyose: Theseus| Summoning: Theseus
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: N/A
Description: The user wipes his hands over his summoning tattoo, or makes several handseals and summons, Theseus. Theseus, when on all fours, is roughly the size of Gamabunta, and his height is double that when he stands bipedally. Dressed in traditional Ancient Greek armor with the skull of the slew Minotaur from his deadly show-down on his skull as a type of helmet, he wields an unbreakable gold katana that shrinks to the size of a normal katana (blade length 30inches). A trait characteristic of ligers, Theseus can contact the summoner via telekinetic communication as well as verbally. Theseus, having Wind Affinity, can use up to A-rank wind jutsus that the user knows by means of channeling his chakra through the helmet and releasing it from his mouth (certain wind jutsus obviously will not be able to performed from his mouth) and is also capable of releasing a S-rank unidirectional blast via the horns of the helmet. The S-rank blast will have half of it's power come from each side of the horns, with a blast coming from each side that meet in front of Theseus and mix, creating the S-rank blast.
*Wind blast and/or useage of wind jutsus by Theseus counts as jutsu per turn*
*Minotaur skull around his head somewhat limits his vision and makes it difficult to turn his head more than 90 degrees.*
*Can only be summoned once a battle.*
*Last three turns.*

X-Declined-X Limit the abilities, there are too many: its the size of bunta (yes well it is an ability considering the number of techniques you could evade and/or are ineffective) telekinetic communication, sword weilding (im guessing kenjutsu will be available to him), elemental affinity and blasts.

2. Kuchiyose: Theseus| Summoning: Theseus
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: N/A
Description: The user wipes his hands over his summoning tattoo, or makes several handseals and summons, Theseus. Theseus, when on all fours, is the size of a grown man standing and when Theseus is standing on his hind legs, he is close to a meter talling than a bear on it's hind legs and proportionately sized also. Dressed in traditional Ancient Greek armor with the skull of the slew Minotaur from his deadly show-down on his skull as a type of helmet, with the horns extending from each side, pointing forward at a downwards angle, as if aimed at a foe's chest. He wields an unbreakable gold pair of nunchakus and two axes shaped in the style of an upside-down Greek Omega (Ω) upon his back as well, though he isn't able to use kenjutsu with either. A trait characteristic of ligers, Theseus can contact the summoner via telekinetic communication as well as verbally. Theseus, having Wind Affinity, is capable of using any wind jutsu up to S-rank that the summoner is capable of using, releasing them through either the axes or alternatively from the horns of his mask. Theseus is very reserved, speaking only when the solution calls for it and being reknown as a fierce warrior amongst the Liger race.
*If Theseus uses any wind jutsu, the jutsu used count towards the user's three jutsu per turn.
*Minotaur skull around his head somewhat limits his vision and makes it difficult to turn his more than 90 degrees*
*Can only be summoned once a battle.*
*Last three turns.*
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-Declined- Well the telekinetic communication i'm not going to allow, also you can't have a summon with unbreakable weapon, unbreakable weapons are a feat that's only allowed to custom weapons, other than those, everything seems fine, mention if he can use Taijutsu.

3. Kuchiyose: Perseus| Summoning: Perseus
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood across his summoning Tattoo and summons Perseus, a liger that is relatively calmer than most liger, on a scale worthy of Odysseus. When Perseus is summoned, he stands on his hind legs, a meter taller than the average man. On his left arm, he holds a shield that trigger's a genjutsu called 'The Gorgon's Inheritence' upon eye sight of it. The front of the shield contains a mosaic of Perseus slaying Medusa. Seeing it causes the foe to become ensnared in a genjutsu that makes the mosaic appear to be moving, drawing the foe's attention, watching the battle between Perseus and Medusa unfold. As the target watches, an image of Medusa suddenly flashes across the shield, causing an affect similar to a Killing Intent from a Kage upon someone 2 ranks lower and equal to an A ranked visual genjutsu. Perseus is also able to be summoned directly as the shield itself, still capable of using the genjutsu, though this time the user must channel chakra to it to trigger it. Perseus can use any genjutsu the summoner knows up to S-rank. Perseus wields a katana, however his kenjutsu skills are not the best, and he can only use basic kenjutsu skills (free form).
The Summoning can only be summoned once in summoning form, twice in shield form.
The Special Genjutsu can only be used twice a battle and any genjutsu used by Perseus counts as one of the user's three jutsu per turn, including the Special Genjutsu.
If summoned directly into shield form, the user can use the shield for up to 3 turns before it poofs away and must wait two turns before resummoning it in shield form. If it has been summoned in animal form at all, once it disperses, the user cannot summon him again.
Last 3 Turns at the most
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-Declined- A lot of abilities stacked here, first of all no to being summoned in shield form, the extent that i'm going to allow a summoning to use is A-rank genjutsu and that's it, remove the comparison to Killing Intent, genjutsu can't be compared to it because it's an emotion affecting technique, you could say it resembles a restricting/paralyzing genjutsu, and mention why would he be paralyzed, simply looking at a flashing image isn't enough for someone to be paralyzed from.

 

[Seblax]

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Summoning Technique: Enchousura, The Dome - Kuchyose No Jutsu: Enchousura, Sono Tengai

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 6-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the Vulture-Shield of every Vulture summoner. Through her lifetime, she tried to master all sort of ninja methods; elements, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu.. even kinjutsu, but all attempts failed. However, through all of the training she proceed through, her resistance to pain and muscle mass were impressively increased, so she decided to become the vulture-shield for others, a way she found herself useful for others and summoners when needed. She earned herself many titles; The dome, the iron boulder and the barrier, all of them were inspired by her specialty; taking hits and completely block the enemy's attacks. She corner the user with her body and armor as it knee inward at him, covering his body from the incoming attacks from most direction, hold against the pain then buff away when the attack is done. She is usually summoned behind the user at short range so that when it bend, she would still be able to see the enemy.
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Cannot summon other vultures for three turns.
- Can block up to S rank techniques.

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Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Double Chop - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Nibai Kire

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: While using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user get at close range of the enemy then dash from over the skater toward the enemy leaving it to spin with the hurricane beneath it toward the enemy after infusing its sides with wind chakra making them razor sharp. After dashing, the user will simultaneously attack the enemy with the skater, each targeting the enemy from the different side(Right/left or Front/behind) depending on the direction the user came from, the user will channel wind chakra through his straightened fist, making it as strong as a wind nature enhanced kunai only longer and chop the enemy from the opposing side of the skater which also is to chop the enemy with its sides, cutting the enemy and separate the pieces with the hurricane which contains the skater caused by Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater which was formed before hand.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Hurricane Clone - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Bunshin

Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: While using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user balance the hurricane below the skater at the enemy's direction sending strong gusts of wind that could push back thrown weapons and create dust from the ground covering his sight as the user form the shadow clone handseal, creating a clone which is identical to the user using the Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater over a skater that looks the same as the user's. The clone is to advance toward the enemy through the dust to attack him. The enemy is to believe, if he wasn't a sensor or a doujutsu user, that he's being attacked by the user at close range unable to figure out that its just a clone. The clone can mainly use the hurricane skater martial art techniques, however, he could also jump off the skater and act as a regular shadow clone.
-This technique count as a shadow clone technique usage and is treated accordingly to the rules.
- Only one clone can be created through this technique.
- Can only be used thrice per battle.
- This technique can also be used to take the hit and block up to A rank techniques.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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Summoning Technique: Enchousura, The Dome - Kuchyose No Jutsu: Enchousura, Sono Tengai

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 6-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the Vulture-Shield of every Vulture summoner. Through her lifetime, she tried to master all sort of ninja methods; elements, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu.. even kinjutsu, but all attempts failed. However, through all of the training she proceed through, her resistance to pain and muscle mass were impressively increased, so she decided to become the vulture-shield for others, a way she found herself useful for others and summoners when needed. She earned herself many titles; The dome, the iron boulder and the barrier, all of them were inspired by her specialty; taking hits and completely block the enemy's attacks. She corner the user with her body and armor as it knee inward at him, covering his body from the incoming attacks from most direction, hold against the pain then buff away when the attack is done. She is usually summoned behind the user at short range so that when it bend, she would still be able to see the enemy.
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Cannot summon other vultures for three turns.
- Can block up to S rank techniques.
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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Bunshin) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Hurricane Clone

Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: While using "Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater", the user will balance the hurricane below the board and direct it towards the enemy. They then send a series of strong wind gusts that are able to push back thrown weapons and is used to create dust from the contact with the ground. This dust will cover the opponents sight, whilst the user forms the shadow clone handseal, creating a single, identical clone that uses the Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater over a skater that is identical to the user's. The clone then proceeds to advance toward the enemy through the dust to attack him. Unless the opponent is a sensory ninja or a Doujutsu user, they will believe that the clone is the original that is attacking at close range. The clone can mainly use the hurricane skater martial art techniques, however, he could also jump off the skater and act as a regular shadow clone.
-This technique count as a shadow clone technique usage and is treated accordingly to the rules.
- Only one clone can be created through this technique.
- Can only be used three per battle.
- This technique can also be used to take the hit and block up to A rank techniques.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

X-Declined-X Defend against A rank techniques of What? It is basically Clone+Distraction+Defense , i wont disregard that. But its alright if you seek to save your moves and play strategically. Just dont go overboard, otherwise you'll be resubmiting it.

(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Nibai Kire) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Double Chop

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Whilst using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user will get as close to the enemy as possible before dashing from the board. The user first will infuse wind chakra into the edges of the board so that the sides and edges are sharper, by dashing from the board, the user causes it to start spinning with the hurricane underneath it, into a collision course with the opponent. After dashing, the user will simultaneously attack the enemy at the same time as the board, each targeting the enemy from a different side (Right/left or Front/behind), depending on the direction the user came from. The user will channel wind chakra through his straightened fist, making it as strong as a wind nature enhanced kunai only longer and chop the enemy from the opposing direction of the board. (Which will chop the enemy with its sides) The attacks from both sides will cut the enemy into pieces and then the hurricane will separate them from each other, which contains the board caused by Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater which was formed before hand.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

X-Declined-X So you chop the opponent, but wont the skateboard chop you too? ._. it is coming form the opposite direction, and with enough force.

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[Lord of Kaos.]

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Summoning Technique: Tlayohua Jaguar Assassin in the Dark(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tlayohua)
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: Tlayohua is the younger cousin of the Jaguar king Tezcatlipoca and one of the strongest jaguars there is. He has black skin with small, barely noticeable dots. His eyes and stomach are a dark shade of grey. This makes him very hard to spot in the dark (at evening or nighttime only a blur of his movements can be seen in long range, he is normally visible in mid- and short range) Using his natural camouflage in the dark, Tlayohua has become an excellent hunter. Furthermore much like the Jaguar king, he is capable of standing upright and his paws are more finger like compared to other jaguar. This allows him to wield swords and use Kenjutsu up to A-rank as well as Weapon based Ninjutsu up to S-rank. (such as those used by ten-ten) He uses the 4 Sword style, wielding 1 sword in each front hand, 1 in his mouth and 1 sword with his tail. He also has many summoning seals in his mouth, allowing him to spew out weapons for weapon based ninjutsu with rapid speed. This ideal hunter is named after the Aztec god of Shadows, Tlay. His length is about 5 meters and he has a height of 3 meters. He is very close friend with RoH and the two can communicate with chirps(to imitate birds) or knocks, in a manner similar to Morse code.
*Can only be summoned once per battle
*Lasts 4 turns
*Can take up to 70 damage.
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Summoning Technique: Tlayohua Jaguar Assassin in the Dark(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tlayohua)
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: Tlayohua is the younger cousin of the Jaguar king Tezcatlipoca and one of the strongest jaguars there is. He has black skin with small, barely noticeable dots. His eyes and stomach are a dark shade of grey. This makes him very hard to spot in the dark (at evening or nighttime only a blur of his movements can be seen in long range, he is normally visible in mid- and short range) Using his natural camouflage in the dark, Tlayohua has become an excellent hunter. Furthermore much like the Jaguar king, he is capable of standing upright and his paws are more finger like compared to other jaguar. This allows him to wield swords and use Kenjutsu up to A-rank as well as Weapon based Ninjutsu up to S-rank. (such as those used by ten-ten) He uses the 4 Sword style, wielding 1 sword in each front hand, 1 in his mouth and 1 sword with his tail. He also has many summoning seals in his mouth, allowing him to spew out weapons for weapon based ninjutsu with rapid speed. This ideal hunter is named after the Aztec god of Shadows, Tlay. His length is about 5 meters and he has a height of 3 meters. He is very close friend with RoH and the two can communicate with chirps(to imitate birds) or knocks, in a manner similar to Morse code.
*Can only be summoned once per battle
*Lasts 4 turns
*Can take up to 70 damage.
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-Declined- No weapon based ninjutsu techniques, that requires fuuinjutsu, or mainly using scrolls, which i'm not allowing a summoning, also seals inside his mouth? that's also fuuinjutsu, no taking 70 damage thing, completely remove that.

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CW: Core Drill (Koa`doriru)
Type: Supplementary/offense/defence/weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra: Depends (listed below, on a case by case bases)
Damage: N/a
Description: The core drill is a small, compact weapon. It's yellow with a green glow from within and a grey base. It's about 7 cm tall. By itself it's a pretty weak weapon. However, drills power comes from it's incredible ability to spin at very high speeds. The drill is controlled by chakra. The user places the drill into a fluid substance such as water, oil, mud etc.(doesn't have to be liquid only, sand and dense gases such as mist, could also be used) and then rotates the drill using his chakra. The centripetal force, created by the rotation of the drill, causes the fluid substance to draw inwards to the drill. This creates a larger, drill shaped construct from that fluid. Once it's created the the drill shaped construct keeps it shaped do to the rotation of the drill and the cohesive forces of the fluid. This construct's size and power depend on the amount of chakra used to create the drill, but it always has a high piercing power. The chakra needed and the corresponding drill power are:
A-rank drill: 30 Chakra/60 Damage , -10 per turn, up to 3 turns, 1m diameter, height can range from 1m to 4m,
B-rank drill: 20 Chakra/40 Damage, -7 per turn, up to 3 turns, 50cm diameter, height can range from 0.5m to 2m,
C-rank drill: 15 Chakra/30 Damage, -5 per turn, up to 4 turns, 25cm diameter, height can range from 20cm to 1m,
D-rank drill: 10 Chakra/20 Damage, -3 per turn, up to 5 turns, 10cm diameter, height can range from 10cm to 50cm, (about the size of a pocket knife at this point)
*Creating a drill takes up a move(so only 2 other moves can be used that turn)
*The ability of the weapon can be used 3 times
*The fluid source has to be at least twice as big as the size of the drill that the user wants to create(still only the needed amount will be used)
*Other jutsu cannot be used to create a drill until they become a part of the terrain (ex. water jutsu that have been used and blocked by earth, with no remaining effect can be used as a source)
*Is tied to the user's arm with a thin, long rope
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-Declined- A Drill is an advanced weapon, advanced weapons = Technology, something like that i'm not allowing and it's farfetched,

Water Release: Pressure Burst (Suiton: Atsuryoku bāsuto)
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Self (short)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a (+20 to Physical Hits)
Description: While using the Hydrification Technique, the user compresses any parts of the water around him. Then using his chakra, he releases the water in small, quick, yet powerful bursts capable of blowing enemies several meters back. Each of the pressurized water burst are blown from an area about the size of the user's palm. This pressurized bursts of water can be used to strengthen the users punches or kicks(where the user releases a burst as he hits the opponent, damaging them more). Also it can be used as a defense to block small projectiles. The strength of Taijutsu hits used with bursts are increased by + 20.
*4 times per battle
*Only 3 bursts
*Can only be used by Hozuki Clan members
*Must have the Hydrification Jutsu active
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-Declined- what do you mean by "4 times per battle" and 'only 3 bursts"? you mean that each usage contains 3 bursts, or that there are 3 bursts overall? also reduce Damage points to +15.

 

[Igneel]

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Apate's Will|Apate's Mune
Rank:S
Type:Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra:40(+10 per turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:Apate,the goddess of deception forged a necklace with the help of Dolos,her male counter part.The necklace resembled the shape of a star with a long red thread.Although it was not fancy in looks,it's power was far overwhelming,so overwhelming that Zeus cast away the necklace from mount Olympus,into the midst of humans.Assuming the necklace as a gift from the gods,the Dragneel family who resided at the base of the mountain,stored away the necklace for safe keeping.After many centuries,Igneel the next heir of the Dragneel family took in the necklace for safekeeping.The necklace's power has diminished over the centuries,only being a shell of what it once was.Unlike the predecessors of his clan ,Igneel didn't want to store away the necklace in a safe place,rather he chose to be the bearer of the necklace.After a few years,the Necklaces power started becoming compatible with Igneel's chakra granting him a few powers.It is said that,Apate's will still resides within the necklace and it speaks through Igneel's illusions..
Abilities:
One of the most prominent ability of the necklace is the ability to make aware of the user,if he is under a genjutsu.When any form of Foreign chakra starts to enter the user's body,the star-shaped locket starts to glow in bright red color,letting the user know of the enemy's chakra.Once per battle,the necklace has the ability to reflect a genjutsu cast on the user.This ability of the necklace,undo's the genjutsu's cast on the user and and it casts the same genjutsu on the original caster of the genjutsu,irrespective of the origin of the genjutsu.Hence the name,'Reflection'.By being the bearer of the necklace,Igneel has the ability to trigger illusions with a single handseal.If anybody other than Igneel wears the necklace,it constricts the bearer until he/she passes out/dies.
Restriction:
-Genjutsu reversal counts as 2 moves per turn.
-Genjutsu reversal can only be done for Genjutsu's upto S-rank.
-Sharingan Genjutsu's cannot be reversed.
-Genjutsu reversal can only be used once per battle and costs a chakra of 40.
-User can't use any other genjutsu in the same turn that Genjutsu Reversal is used.
-Must be Kage rank to use it.
-Can only be wielded by Igneel.

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±± Declined ±± I have no problem with the reflection ability but the reduced handseals is a no no. If you want one handseal for genjutsu, make it your bio's specialty. Also, the glowing ability, it has been done many times before in swords and other weapons that alert the user if he is under a genjutsu.

Fuuton/Katon:Houshinuindo|Wind Stlye/Fire Style:Blistering Wind
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:By performing the seal of confrontation,the user uses his fuuton chakra to send a small breeze towards the opponent.This breeze is hardly noticeable and won't show any characteristics of being an offensive jutsu,just a casual breeze.After sending the breeze,the user imbues katon chakra into the breeze,heating up the wind to a degree that upon impact with any organic material,it will result in second degree burns.As this wind blows past the opponent,he will start to feel a burning sensation,inflicting second degree burns.

-Can be used once per battle.
-Cannot use Wind/Fire in the next turn.
-Only taught by Igneel

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±± Declined ±± The hardly noticeable blazing breeze is a bit too much don't you think?

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Fuuton/Katon:Houshinuindo|Wind Stlye/Fire Style:Blistering Wind
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:By performing the seal of confrontation,the user uses his fuuton chakra to send a small breeze towards the opponent.After sending the breeze,the user imbues katon chakra into the breeze,heating up the wind to a degree that upon contact with any organic material,it will result in second degree burns.The breeze itself is hardly noticeable but the effects it has on the terrain can be perceived by a keen opponent.For example burn marks on solid ground/rocks,burned grass etc.As this wind blows past the opponent,he will start to feel a burning sensation through out his body.Immediately after the breeze passes by,blisters start to surface on the opponent's skin due to the second degree burns inflicted on his body.

-Can be used 2 times per battle.
-Cannot use Wind/Fire in the next turn.
-No jutsu's above S-rank in the same turn
-Only taught by Igneel
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-Declined- I'm not approving techniques that is nearly invisible or hardly noticeable, it's either noticeable or it's not, end of story, mention it's size and make it noticeable if you want this.

Apate's Will|Apate's Mune
Rank:S
Type:Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra:40(+10 per turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:Apate,the goddess of deception forged a necklace with the help of Dolos,her male counter part.The necklace resembled the shape of a star with a long red thread.Although it was not fancy in looks,it's power was far overwhelming,so overwhelming that Zeus cast away the necklace from mount Olympus,into the midst of humans.Assuming the necklace as a gift from the gods,the Dragneel family who resided at the base of the mountain,stored away the necklace for safe keeping.After many centuries,Igneel the next heir of the Dragneel family took in the necklace for safekeeping.The necklace's power has diminished over the centuries,only being a shell of what it once was.Unlike the predecessors of his clan ,Igneel didn't want to store away the necklace in a safe place,rather he chose to be the bearer of the necklace.After a few years,the Necklaces power started becoming compatible with Igneel's chakra granting him a few powers.It is said that,Apate's will still resides within the necklace and it speaks through Igneel's illusions..
Abilities:
One of the most prominent ability of the necklace is the ability to make aware of the user,if he is under a genjutsu.When any form of Foreign chakra starts to enter the user's body,the star-shaped locket heats up instantly,slightly burning the user's skin,thereby letting the user know of the enemy's chakra.The slight burn caused by the necklace won't do any kind of harm to Igneel.Once per battle,the necklace has the ability to reflect a genjutsu cast on the user.This ability of the necklace,undo's the genjutsu's cast on the user and and it casts the same genjutsu on the original caster of the genjutsu,irrespective of the origin of the genjutsu.Hence the name,'Reflection'.By being the bearer of the necklace,Igneel has the ability to trigger illusions faster than other ninja's.If anybody other than Igneel wears the necklace,it constricts the bearer until he/she passes out/dies.
Restriction:
-Genjutsu reversal counts as 2 moves per turn.
-Genjutsu reversal can only be done for Genjutsu's upto S-rank.
-Sharingan Genjutsu's cannot be reversed.
-Genjutsu reversal can only be used once per battle and costs a chakra of 40.
-User can't use any other genjutsu in the same turn that Genjutsu Reversal is used.
-Must be Kage rank to use it.
-Can only be wielded by Igneel.

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-Declined- No alerting you of genjutsu, The reflection ability is a bit too much, up to S-rank? no, make it up to A-rank, and when reversed it will be reduced one rank, meaning if you reversed an A-rank genjutsu, it will be considered a B-rank, and i'm not allowing any weapon to identify genjutsu anymore, so you have to give a valid explanation as to why you know you are under a genjutsu without the help of this CW when using the reflection ability, make it useable twice and counts as one move usage, but only up to A-rank genjutsus and that's it, also you can only reflect the genjutsu on one opponent.

Doton:Fukaina Nebaneba shita|Earth Release:Icky Gooey
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Type:Offensive
Chakra:30
Damage:60(if hardened)
Description:The user channels his doton chakra into an already existent mud source( for eg:Swamp of the underworld,Mud river etc..),making the mud extremely adhesive.The user can then shoot fast,retractable chords of mud from the existent mud source,that can easily latch on to anything it makes contact with.The mud chords can be a maximum of 10m in length.The user can choose whether or not he wants to pull back the chords & drown anything that got stuck to it.The user can also choose to harden the mud chords,effectively crushing anything that got trapped inside the mud chord.Once hardened,the mud looses all it's properties like adhesivity,retraction and becomes as hard as iron.

-Can be used 3 times per battle
-Can only harden the retractable chords and not the entire mud source
-No earth jutsu above S-rank in the next turn
-Only taught by Igneel
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.