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(Hebi Kuchiyose no Jutsu
Tsukisoi) – Snake Summoning Technique
Retinue
Type: Summoning
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Differing from many a summoning, this technique allows the user to summon a host of snakes beneath his epidermis. The host, altogether known as ‘Retinue’, consists of microscopic, skeleton-less snakes with sensitive bellies and smooth, venomous scales. The snakes are constantly moving about under the user’s skin; making for a hideous sight as parts of the host occasionally breaks through the user’s skin. To avoid ‘leaks’ from becoming a problem however, the host uses nerve endings and muscle contractions to receive and send simple commands and signals. Specially bred; the host has no chakra circulatory system, relying on their heat-vision and advanced sense of smell to track enemies and their neurotoxic venom to incapacitate them. While the user is susceptible to the venom, every snake of the host has its belly pointing downwards against the user’s dermis and secretes its venom through its scales and, by extension, through the user’s skin. To avoid the venom remaining on the user’s skin; the host absorbs liquids through their bellies and expels it through their scales, allowing the user to perspire through the snakes and effectively ‘sweat’ the venom away. Naturally, the snakes’ scales reject liquids, thereby making the issue of the user’s skin reabsorbing some of the venom moot. As long as Retinue is summoned; the user will sweat almost four times as much as usual as a response to the sensation and to get the venom off the skin.
-The poison can effectively mix with the user’s sweat and cause tetany (incontrollable muscle contractions) that lasts for an entire turn almost immediately upon contact.
-Retinue can be summoned up to three (3) times, but it can only remain on the field for a maximum of five (5) turns.
-Should a part of the host somehow find itself with its scales against the user’s dermis, it will notice the difference in texture and disappear from the field without taking the rest of the host with it.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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±± Declined ±± The idea is interesting and has a future but I need you to define what this host is. Is it another snake? And i can't have you being venomous to the touch just like that. The method seems a bit stretched and it somewhat collides with medical poison techniques.
(Hebi Kuchiyose no Jutsu


Type: Summoning
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Differing from many a summoning, this technique allows the user to summon a host of snakes beneath his epidermis. The host, altogether known as ‘Retinue’, consists of microscopic, skeleton-less snakes with sensitive bellies and smooth, venomous scales. The snakes are constantly moving about under the user’s skin; making for a hideous sight as parts of the host occasionally breaks through the user’s skin. To avoid ‘leaks’ from becoming a problem however, the host uses nerve endings and muscle contractions to receive and send simple commands and signals. Specially bred; the host has no chakra circulatory system, relying on their heat-vision and advanced sense of smell to track enemies and their neurotoxic venom to incapacitate them. While the user is susceptible to the venom, every snake of the host has its belly pointing downwards against the user’s dermis and secretes its venom through its scales and, by extension, through the user’s skin. To avoid the venom remaining on the user’s skin; the host absorbs liquids through their bellies and expels it through their scales, allowing the user to perspire through the snakes and effectively ‘sweat’ the venom away. Naturally, the snakes’ scales reject liquids, thereby making the issue of the user’s skin reabsorbing some of the venom moot. As long as Retinue is summoned; the user will sweat almost four times as much as usual as a response to the sensation and to get the venom off the skin.
-The poison can effectively mix with the user’s sweat and cause tetany (incontrollable muscle contractions) that lasts for an entire turn almost immediately upon contact.
-Retinue can be summoned up to three (3) times, but it can only remain on the field for a maximum of five (5) turns.
-Should a part of the host somehow find itself with its scales against the user’s dermis, it will notice the difference in texture and disappear from the field without taking the rest of the host with it.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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±± Declined ±± The idea is interesting and has a future but I need you to define what this host is. Is it another snake? And i can't have you being venomous to the touch just like that. The method seems a bit stretched and it somewhat collides with medical poison techniques.
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