[Other] I guess....

[NeverEnding]

Laying down drinking a concoction
What shall I pick
Shall I leave soon
Or will I just stare at the moon
I see my end coming soon
But I can't decide
It's like a maze of rooms
Filled with gloom
Or tragic horrors
Or shall I wait for my own doom
So many choices
So many opportunities
But my heart,soul,mind can't find unity
Because people are perusing me
These three shall be
And endless fight
Or Is it just my strife
**** my life
And as I grab a knife
I think to my self
i guess Suicide is an option....

 

[Yellow Spark]

That was quite awesome. Except the last line.

 

[NeverEnding]

That was quite awesome. Except the last line.

Why the last line?

 

[SonictheHedgehog]

Great work NE. You've got some really deep stuff.

 

[Promethius]

last line doesnt rhyme
(seriously epic poem though)

 

[NeverEnding]

Great work NE. You've got some really deep stuff.

I try dude...this is kinda diffrent...i do poems too lmao! XD

 

[NeverEnding]

last line doesnt rhyme
(seriously epic poem though)

Read first line and last line. Its called an interval poem i think....

 

[Cruciatus]

I like this a lot A little dark but extremely well written.

 

[NeverEnding]

I like this a lot A little dark but extremely well written.

Thank you...

 

[Hori]

if that's all true I dont blame you on suicide bro its better to die on these consequences

 

[NeverEnding]

if that's all true I dont blame you on suicide bro its better to die on these consequences

It's third person I'm not suicidal.....

 

[Alleiram]

Wow, that was really good! I like it

 

[NeverEnding]

Wow, that was really good! I like it

Thank you...

 

[Mangekyō1]

That was quite awesome. Except the last line.

What would the poem have been without that line? It was a good closer.

 

[NeverEnding]

What would the poem have been without that line? It was a good closer.

Thank you...