Bettenchi - Chapter 10

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Bettenchi

( 別天地 )​

Chapter 10 - The Truth


Scene starts with Hitsuga drinking tea and eating cookies

Hitsuga : Mmmm...mm ...Wow , thats good !!! ^^

Hisashi and Miyuki looking at him

Hisashi : ?.?

Miyuki : ?.?

Hitsuga notices them observing him with suspect faces

Hitsuga : ...WHAAAAAAAT !!!???

Hisashi : Ehhh...

Miyuki : We thought you wanted to tell us something...

Hitsuga : ...mmm...let me finish this mmmm...coo...hmmm...cie...mhmmmhhmm...

10 minutes later

All 3 of them walking in the street together

Hisashi : Well?

Hitsuga ( singing ) : NaNaNa ...oh yeah !!! Sorry ^^

Hitsuga : Ok, I will get serious now ^^

Miyuki ( thoughts ) : Finally...

Hitsuga ( serious ) : I'm happy you are not hurt . That demon you fought - was a big candy for you two.
You two need to learn a lot . Good thing your kigai is high enough to keep energy shield active . If not that, you would be hurt badly or even worse.

Hisashi : ki...ai ? What the hell is that ?

Hitsuga : Your soul energy is called - kigai .

Hitsuga : Lets start with the story, I will make it short . It happened 999 years ago .

We were living in peace that day . Thought we were aware , enemy could attack anytime . ...and it happened . Night came and shadows covered our land. Demons started to appear everywhere . Fight began and most of the villagers were killed in first minutes . Only strongest left to defend weak ones.
Demon appeared at night only , we had time to rest . Soon we all left the village...thought there was no village left . We moved to Katshu - another village not so far away from ours.
Sadly , those bastards followed us .We ordered villagers to escape .
We had no choice , we had to fight them. And we did great , our allie from Katshu joined us.

We were winning , but ...suddenly stronger demons appeared . I think we were 8 left by that time .

After few moments we berely breathed. Only Ashumi fought with all her strength.

Then bright light surrounded us ...


...I have no memories after that .

Hisashi : Wait ! o_O How can you have memories about that ?!

Hitsuga : I found a ring when I was a kid . Soon after I found it , I started to hear voices in my head time to time . Just a week ago , I heard a voice telling me to go right here and search for you two . I have been atacked by demons few times on my way here , I got injured near this village .Later few guys helped me.

Before I found you two fighting I had a dream . A guy in dream told me that its time for him to go . Right after that I woke up with no injuries and ring . But I had all this in my mind .

Hitsuga ( sad ) : Those memories were traped inside that ring for 999 years...

Hitsuga looks at Miyuki .

Hitsuga : Your necklase ...

Looks at Hisashi

Hitsuga : Your bracelet...keeps memories , knowledge , power and spirit one of those 8 warriors in the past , same as my ring did .

Miyuki : o_O !!!

Hisashi : o_O !!!

Hitsuga : When you fought those demons only small part were released. If you release it by force you may lose you own memories .

Hisashi : So this is because of my brace...and Miyukis necklace ... is that what those things want ??!!

Miyuki : ...necklace

Hitsuga : Not quite , most likely demons are getting ready to invade our world , but its weird that they didnt tryed it before .
I guess they are hunting us because we posses high kigai. They are aware that we may couse problems to their plans. I see no other reason for them to attack us .

Miyuki : But how demons appear in our world ?

Hitsuga : We used to call it Shadow Gate, its another dimension, in other words it another world .

Hisashi : ...this is so unbelievable

Miyuki : Yes...

Hitsuga : I understand , Heh ! I was expecting worse reaction from you =D

Hisashi : Hey ! You said there was 8 of you . Is there ...

Hitsuga interupts Hisashi

Hitsuga : We 8 in the past were called Shadow Reapers .
I believe my ....our top priority is to gather all the Reapers . If they exist.

Miyuki : Uh! ...5 more...

Hisashi : How we are going to find them ?

Hitsuga : Hmmm? I assume you two decided...right ?

Miyuki : We have no choice. If we wont do it ... end of the world will turn into reality.

Hisashi : ...right

Hitsuga ( with a smile ) : Then... its decided . We are new Shadow Reapers .

Hisashi : ( thoughts ) : I hope we are right about this...

Miyuki : Hitsuga ?

Hitsuga : Yes .

Miyuki : What about my necklace and Hisashi's bracelet ?

Hitsuga : I will try to explain you later , now get a sleep . We are leaving tommorow .

Miyuki : Ok, lets stay at my house together .

Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : No wonder , she must be afraid of demons ...or even her own abilitys after all this...

Hisashi : Right Miyuki , its safer to us all ,this way .

And Shadow Reapers got into the dreams and nightmares.

Next day

Miyuki : Good Morning !!! Breakfast is ready !!!

Hisashi : Owww... this night wasnt the best . Good morning Miyuki !

Hitsuga : Good Morning !

Hisashi : ..eeeeeeyyyy , why didnt you wake me up ? -.-

Hitsuga : Oh ...well I thought ...you were sleeping so deep , we didnt wanted to interupt your dreams ^^

Hisashi : ( thoughts ) : dreams ?!! That was a nightmare !!!! >.<

Hisashi : Thanks...

Miyuki : =D Hihi... get up Hishi , tea will get cold .

Miyuki leaves the room

Hisashi : I can drink cold tea too , uhhh !

Hisashi falls on the bed

Hitsuga is standing near doors and smiling

Hitsuga : I'm glad you accepted.

Hitsuga leaves the room

Hisashi is looking at Hitsuga leaving

Few moments later

Hitsuga, Hisashi and Miyuki are finishing breakfast

Hisashi : ( smiling ) : Ummm! That was great !

Hitsuga ( smiling ) : Indeed , thanks Miyuki

Miyuki : Hahaha !!! I thought I cook terrible !!! Hahaha !!! Thank you guys =P

Hisashi : Hahahahah =)

Hitsuga : Hehehe...

Suddenly, smile dissapears from his face

Hitsuga : Miyuki . You have asked about necklace and bracelet you two have . As you know one of Shadow Reapers spirits are sealed there. I could only guess which Shadow Reapers spirit it contains . Theres two ways to use these spirits. First is to release a part of that energy - like you did before .

And the second way is to release it fully - by force . But this way is deadly for your memories and personallity , if you do release it by force your memories of all your life will be replaced by memories of the Reaper from your bracelet or neclace . Never brake your necklace or brace , unless you are sure theres no other way .

Hisashi : Damn...this is not a game . Miyuki do you have any idea how to release your necklace spirit ? >.<

Miyuki : No. My necky spirit releases on its own . And I guess I'm unconscious when its released .

Hitsuga : Uh ! What the... hmh... what about you Hisashi ?

Hisashi : I remember everything...=\

Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : This is not good...

Few seconds silence

Hitsuga : Dont worry you two , I will teach you some tricks .

Hisashi and Miyuki smile

Hitsuga : Allright , lets get ready . We are leaving .

And Hisashi ...

Hisashi : Huh ?

Hitsuga : Dont forget to pack some cookies for our journey ^^

Hisashi : Oh geeeeeeeezzz -.-

Next time : Chapter 11 - Walk in the shadows

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lolz:p u Hisashi did ya got a nightmare just cuz u heard about the Demons xPchicken -_- jk ^^
and after all dat talkin Hitsuga still only cares about cookies :p
nice chapter ^^ it's gettin better & better every time :D
keep up :hug:^^
 
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again nice work, keep it up!
Thanks =)

lolz:p u Hisashi did ya got a nightmare just cuz u heard about the Demons xPchicken -_- jk ^^
and after all dat talkin Hitsuga still only cares about cookies :p
nice chapter ^^ it's gettin better & better every time :D
keep up :hug:^^
Lol =D He had a nightmare about Miyuki geting captured by demons.
Cookies add more fun to this chapter , I thought it would be filled with dark emotions , so cookies made it brighther ^^

Thank you Hatake :glomp:

Keep it up this is a good series it kinda reminds me of yugioh with the millenium items...
o_O omg , never thought about that.

Thanks :D

Hi5 bro =P Thanks.
 

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thx Ikasu 4 askin da ques instade of me :D
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Hmmmm...

Well I'm hoping to draw one of character for next chapter , I will start right now
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I have some ideas for next chapter , I will work on it when my drawing is done .
yay :overjoy:
 

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thx Ikasu 4 askin da ques instade of me :D


yay :overjoy:
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I made it !!!

I can see Miyuki on a paper...

But no one will get to see it till next chapter is complete
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I will start it tomorrow
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I made it !!!

I can see Miyuki on a paper...

But no one will get to see it till next chapter is complete
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I will start it tomorrow
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>.> that's quite not fair ...no one can get special treatment
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