Raiton with a new Senpai

Yonkou Pandaman

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  • - The main advantage is, if someone reads the name, they would think i made an ultra-cool thunder sword of epicness, but after reading the Jutsu Description, they would get attacked by over-excitement -
Disadvantage

  • - There isn't a real lightning sabre, is there TAT... -
Description
I make use of my tools like last time, by throwing an explosive tag as a distraction, i gain more time to focuse my chakra thouroughly, i begin by channeling mt chakra into my Stomache, like how all justu are supposed to be started, and i begin thouroughly expanding the chakra in every limb of my body, as the clone gets in 3m range infront of me, i point my finger at its forehead, as my finger collides with the clones forehead, i release all the Raiton Chakra, blowing away the clone with a burst of lightning, and as it reaches mid-range away from me, the clone explodes with lightning.
 

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xD >_>

Lol for advantages you could have mentioned how the field explodes and contrasted it with the last jutsu that you have learned which only states that it covers the body. Also in addition to the above effect, it should be noted that this jutsu has the power to knock you back a little (probably not that huge of a distance, still within short range I would say), so it also can be creatively used to knock the opponent off balance atleast and to break his or her momentum of combos that may befall on you (within reason of course, like simple taijutsu attacks and not some S or F rank jutsu coming your way lol).

The main disadvantage to this jutsu is that the lack of power it has and it's range.



Any questions before we move on to the last D rank?
 

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No, the faster we go up the ranks the better ^^
Actually no, that is not true. You should rather say the more understanding I have of the jutsu the better baka >_>

Anyhow last D rank, here goes

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

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Concentrate on your chakra levels and then expel it the form of a wave of lightning bolts towards the clone.

*creates clone*

And serious adv and dis this time my friend.
 

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  • - As there are many bolts all at once, it would be hard to block with anything other than a Fuuton jutsu -
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  • - Pretty straightforward attack, it can be blocked with a weak D-rank wind ofcourse -
Description
As i focuse my chakra, i start imagining bolts of lightning, waves of them, and as i do so, begin channeling my chakra everywhere i wish the lightning bolts to be shot from, as i see the clone standing there casually, i begin releasing all the chakra from the desired spots, with the image of a bolt wave, i use shape manipulation to make a wave of lightning bolts.
 

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No, the faster we go up the ranks the better ^^
This statement bothers me................... this is why we have such debates about this and that. Simplest things and gets a simple moved checked by sensei's and mods.......... understanding of the correct usage is what you should aim for and not the speed of how fast your training is going. Just because you have more jutsu's to use doesn't mean you are going to do better. Patients is a virtue, give and take. Ask questions about the smallest things, this is where you should do it.

I expect this not to happen again.
 

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This statement bothers me................... this is why we have such debates about this and that. Simplest things and gets a simple moved checked by sensei's and mods.......... understanding of the correct usage is what you should aim for and not the speed of how fast your training is going. Just because you have more jutsu's to use doesn't mean you are going to do better. Patients is a virtue, give and take. Ask questions about the smallest things, this is where you should do it.

I expect this not to happen again.
I'm sorry, i realized my mistake after Sheikh corrected me already, it wont happen again :(
*still spams despite orange name*
Congratz on le orange name xD
 

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This statement bothers me................... this is why we have such debates about this and that. Simplest things and gets a simple moved checked by sensei's and mods.......... understanding of the correct usage is what you should aim for and not the speed of how fast your training is going. Just because you have more jutsu's to use doesn't mean you are going to do better. Patients is a virtue, give and take. Ask questions about the smallest things, this is where you should do it.

I expect this not to happen again.
Thanks for the extra reinforcement lol.
*still spams despite orange name*
Damn you >_> I'll get you back when you begin training lol.
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Anyhow, your first C rank jutsu.

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.



Concentrate your chakra specifically to your 2 hands until it reaches satisfactory levels. Then with the built up chakra in your hands I want you to release it into a lightning stream and target that rock in front of you.
 

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Sorry, the time zones are different, next time i'll try to get fo the training faster.



Advantage

  • - Well, if you used it at full power (Powerful surge capable of ripping through rock and a Water jutsu) it won't really look like a C-Rank jutsu huh xD? -
Disadvantage

  • - It can shock you and comrades aswell if used inside a puddle of water -
Description
Well, since you didn't create a clone, you are now mah dummy oO
As with any other jutsu, i begin by channeling my Raiton chakra into my Stomache, as i get into a CQC pose, i begin channeling my Raiton chakra in my stomache into my Arms, and eventually Hands, as i see you standing by next to me, i release all my chakra from my hands, although only a small amount of Chakra that zaps you, but more powerful when it goes behind you, it shatters a boulder.
 

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Sorry, the time zones are different, next time i'll try to get fo the training faster.



Advantage

  • - Well, if you used it at full power (Powerful surge capable of ripping through rock and a Water jutsu) it won't really look like a C-Rank jutsu huh xD? -
Disadvantage

  • - It can shock you and comrades aswell if used inside a puddle of water -
Description
Well, since you didn't create a clone, you are now mah dummy oO
As with any other jutsu, i begin by channeling my Raiton chakra into my Stomache, as i get into a CQC pose, i begin channeling my Raiton chakra in my stomache into my Arms, and eventually Hands, as i see you standing by next to me, i release all my chakra from my hands, although only a small amount of Chakra that zaps you, but more powerful when it goes behind you, it shatters a boulder.
Well, if you use it with a water attack then obviously your combo would either be a stronger C rank combo or above, depends on what rank your water jutsu is. And please don't even think of using any lightning jutsu inside water lol.


I'm not standing anywhere near the boulder. Are you in a genjutsu lol.
Next jutsu

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.



Gather chakra into your hand and simply lunch into the direction of my clone who's standing in your direction mid range from you.
*creates clone*
 

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  • - Fast & Simple attacks always are the best -
Disadvantage

  • - None that i can think of, other than being a very simple Jutsu -
Description
As with all Raiton jutsu, i begin by channeling my Raiton chakra into my Stomache, focusing it, and afterwards slowly channel it into my arms, i take a CQC pose, then take another pose (Similiar to Goku shooting Ki Blast), and as i aim at your clone, i begin channeling the raiton chakra into hands, as they were previously in my arms, i focuse it, and semi-stabilize it, after aiming and preparations are done, i simply shoot out the lightning ball in a similar style to a Ki Blast, and as it expands into a see-through lightning bubble and engulfs the clone, it knocks him back while still engulfing him, and after it knocks him back 6m, it shocks him and explodes, the clone disperses.
 

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Advantage

  • - Fast & Simple attacks always are the best -
Disadvantage

  • - None that i can think of, other than being a very simple Jutsu -
Description
As with all Raiton jutsu, i begin by channeling my Raiton chakra into my Stomache, focusing it, and afterwards slowly channel it into my arms, i take a CQC pose, then take another pose (Similiar to Goku shooting Ki Blast), and as i aim at your clone, i begin channeling the raiton chakra into hands, as they were previously in my arms, i focuse it, and semi-stabilize it, after aiming and preparations are done, i simply shoot out the lightning ball in a similar style to a Ki Blast, and as it expands into a see-through lightning bubble and engulfs the clone, it knocks him back while still engulfing him, and after it knocks him back 6m, it shocks him and explodes, the clone disperses.
Well for a disadvantage you're right that it's a simple jutsu. It's rather easy to avoid with a quick wind counter and such, but do keep in mind that the most simple of jutsus can become the most deadly in the hands of a master.

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Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.



While my clone runs up towards you and attempts to engage you into a taijutsu fight, you will create a electric field that will shock my clone into nothingness.

*creates clone*
 

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  • - Not many weakpoints in this technique -
Disadvantage

  • - Due to being a rather advanced Jutsu, it takes time to make, and if not used correctly can electricute me (If i use it on water, inside a water jutsu, etc etc...) -
Description
As with all Raiton jutsu, i begin by channeling chakra into my Stomache, focusing it, and i go in a SSJ charge pose, as chakra is visible all around me, I scream and go SSJ2i begin channeling the chakra thouroughly into the following body parts Abdomen>Chest>Hands>Head>Legs respectively, and as i stabilize the Raiton chakra, i see the clone heading to my direction for some Taijutsu practice appareantly, i decline his training request by releasing all the chakra of my body into a lightning armor, as the clone spams my profile and approaches me by 3m apart, he gets banned by being fried completely because of my armor, that fades away afterwards.
 

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That is not a proper advantage that you should state my friend. One perfect advantage that you should know and could have stated is the advantage that this jutsu has over taijutsu fighters and fights. One slight of key touch by your opponent and they could be open for a world of hurt. And yea, if I was you I wouldn't have water anywhere near me when im using this and the lightning armor is active.


Next!!!
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.



*Shows you the proper handseals of snakes and upside down Tiger*
Now I want you to perform the proper handseals that I just showed you then immediately run up that cliff with your hands clapped together. I then want you to release a great wave of lightning while my clone is below you, causing the rocks from the cliff to rain down on my clone.
*creates clone*
 

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  • - I'm honestly probably never using this Jutsu... -
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  • - Well, its always possible that the opponent made a Kage Bunshin beforehand to distract me, and at a cliff there aren't many ways i can block a blazing fireball... -
Description
I focuse my chakra into my legs, speeding into the cliff, and i perform Snake, and afterwards i perform Upsidedown Tiger, and immediatly clap my hands together, still running towards the cliff, i focuse my chakra, as sparks appear everywhere mid-range from me, the rocks start to crumble, and they fall on the clone, hitting it head-on.
 

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Well, it's highly advantages if you're fighting near a mountain or a cliff. But yea, jutsus like these are highly terrain based, which is also a great weakness to it as well. So if one day you do decide to use this then think back to this training, chiefly me and then link me so that I can be proud T_T xD

Good, next.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.



Now I want you to extend your hand up in front of you like you are holding a sword and in the same arm concentrate and build up your ration chakra. I then want you to release a bolts of lighting in the shape of a horn and release onto my 3 clones.

*creates 3 clones*
 

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To sleep i go now :flowers:

Advantage

  • - Fast attack, can attack multiple opponents at once -
Disadvantage

  • - None that i can think of -
Description
I begin by focusing my Raiton chakra into my right arm, then into my hand, i raise it infront of me like a sword, and i stabilize the Raiton chakra, horns of lightning burst out at the three clones, they get shocked when they get penetrated by the horns, and the clones go *poof*
 

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To sleep i go now :flowers:

Advantage

  • - Fast attack, can attack multiple opponents at once -
Disadvantage

  • - None that i can think of -
Description
I begin by focusing my Raiton chakra into my right arm, then into my hand, i raise it infront of me like a sword, and i stabilize the Raiton chakra, horns of lightning burst out at the three clones, they get shocked when they get penetrated by the horns, and the clones go *poof*
I suppose one disadvantage that can be spotted right away is that the glow prior to the attack can warn you that an attack is coming which if you were smart you'd take the opportunity to make ready your counter. Now other then that would have to be the generic weakness to wind counters/attacks/defense, which is blah lol.

Next jutsu.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.



Grab your sword that's hanging on your waste and begin to channel lightning chakra on to the blade. After gathering a sufficient amount I want you to levitate in front of you. Then mold your chakra once again and expel it to create two identical lightning enhanced swords. You then put the technique to good use and cut my clone into nothingness.

*Creates clones*
 

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  • - Excellent distraction -
Disadvantage

  • - If the blade was broken by the enemy, it may never be used again ._.... -
Description
I begin by grabbing my Kusanagi, then i begin channeling my Raiton chakra into the blade, i gather more and more chakra enough for it to fly and glow, as i see it is levitating, i let go and it now has Raiton chakra engulfing it, i begin molding my Chakra once again,, i expel it infront of me, and an identical copy of my sword is now levitating, it is already encased by lightning, i make the swords rush to the Clone, as they pierce straight through it with ease, the clone disperses aswell as the blade clone, and my sword gets back to me as i re-sheathe it.
 
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