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One question about this jutsu...how is it mid-range if you have to "Place a paper bomb on your opponent's head".

This jutsu seems more offense-oriented. Again, the opponent is immobilized so you can use that against them. I would use this with swamp of the underworld so that it is harder to realize that it's a genjutsu. However, it is still quite obvious that it's a genjutsu because of the whole butterflies thing (they would fly away from battling ninja throwing jutsu around at eachother).
Yeah i agree with bush, using swamp of the underworld would make it more realistic. The key to a good genjustu is making it so its hard to tell its a genjustu. In this case swamp would do just that. That with a little false darkness could be a good 1-2 punch. Though this genjustu is still quite obvious it is such. I'd use this while im mid range and want to do something to see how my opponent would react. This isn't a justu that'll win the match.
It's best to use in short range that way you don't have run all the way from mid range to place the explosive. But, it can be done. I can't tell you how many times i've seen this technique win a battle. Nice reasoning for discovering it's a gen, Bush.

( Nehan Shōja no Jutsu ) - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing all the targets in the area under an illusion where feathers appear to fall from the sky. This slowly puts the opponents to sleep after one turn.

Feathers fall from the sky, putting the opponent to sleep after one turn. A useful technique in specific situations.
 

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Well it takes a turn to form, and I'm guessing you can't use other jutsu while charging this one up? This would best be used in a team battle with a partner, but it's a high-risk, high-reward type jutsu. You leave your partner basically up against two people for a turn, but if it hits you basically win the battle. Again, obvious it's a gen (because of the feathers).
 

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I don't think it matters if they think its a gen or not. It puts them to sleep, you can't use kai while sleep lol. I'd use this before i engage in a taijustu battle. Though they see the feathers they know feathers don't appear from the sky like that. Unless you have a bird summoning xD. Though the one turn thing is a killer. The justu also slowly puts them to sleep, so they'd be getting tired before that whole one turn passes. That could be exploited.
 

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Well it takes a turn to form, and I'm guessing you can't use other jutsu while charging this one up? This would best be used in a team battle with a partner, but it's a high-risk, high-reward type jutsu. You leave your partner basically up against two people for a turn, but if it hits you basically win the battle. Again, obvious it's a gen (because of the feathers).
I don't think it matters if they think its a gen or not. It puts them to sleep, you can't use kai while sleep lol. I'd use this before i engage in a taijustu battle. Though they see the feathers they know feathers don't appear from the sky like that. Unless you have a bird summoning xD. Though the one turn thing is a killer. The justu also slowly puts them to sleep, so they'd be getting tired before that whole one turn passes. That could be exploited.
You're fine to use other techniques after you use this one. So yes, best used before engaging in close combat. They can always release the genjutsu before the turn passes and be completely fine.

Last but not least, the most used canon genjutsu ever made. xD

( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

Use this to fade away your opponent's vision, so that they become blind. Perfect for use against clones, as it affects multiple people.
 

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Lawd its perfect <3 <3

I'd use this in battle to block my opponents vision so he can't see my attack :| Of course. I'd use this justu with stuff like dropping lid, or even flash pillar. The opponent could believe he's blinded which is why he couldn't see. Or in dropping lid it'd make him think its just that dark in the lid lol. Ultimately being mid range and having such a great effect it could be used in a variety of ways.
 

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Yeah like you say great against clones, and in team battles for affecting multiple people. However, some people have blind bios so it would be useless on them. This would be a great jutsu close range, because the user can't tell where the opponents hands and legs are. Can be used to distract the opponent, and with swamp of the underworld or water imprisonment.
 

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Yeah like you say great against clones, and in team battles for affecting multiple people. However, some people have blind bios so it would be useless on them. This would be a great jutsu close range, because the user can't tell where the opponents hands and legs are. Can be used to distract the opponent, and with swamp of the underworld or water imprisonment.
Lawd its perfect <3 <3

I'd use this in battle to block my opponents vision so he can't see my attack :| Of course. I'd use this justu with stuff like dropping lid, or even flash pillar. The opponent could believe he's blinded which is why he couldn't see. Or in dropping lid it'd make him think its just that dark in the lid lol. Ultimately being mid range and having such a great effect it could be used in a variety of ways.
So if you close your eyes, you don't know where your limbs are? XD
 

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If someone was blindfolded, and fighting you close quarters....they wouldn't be able to see whether a fist was coming towards their face or abdomen...right? o-o
 

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If someone was blindfolded, and fighting you close quarters....they wouldn't be able to see whether a fist was coming towards their face or abdomen...right? o-o
"because the user can't tell where the opponents hands and legs are"

I think you switched user and opponent on accident. xD

Anyway, Bush, 3 move combination using an A-rank genjutsu. Ciberr, release it through the quickest means possible. Whichever range you prefer.
 

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Let's assume close range.

-Ok, I quickly bite my thumb and rub it over my snake tattoo and summon a giant snake. The snake then rushes at Ciberr, and while he's distracted with it I put him in a genjutsu where several butterflies are flying towards him away from the area with my snake as if they are fleeing from it. You also feel as if you are sinking in the ground, as if I had used swamp of the underworld immobilizing you. In reality however, I have thrown several paperbombs towards you which detonate when they hit. I then cause my snake to disperse (If he's still alive) and fire off a large stream of fire towards you.-

(Insert Giant snake summoning)

(Insert Butterfly genjutsu)

(Insert B rank stream of fire)
 

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As i see you draw blood for your summoning, I begin to focus my doton chakra throughout my body. When suddenly i feel sinking as I notice multiple butterflies to appear out of nowhere. I look down and see nothing, yet i feel as if I'm sinking. That in addition to the sudden cluster of butterflies in this area in particular which cannot support the living standards of butterflies i conclude its a genjustu. I grow a spear inwards which breaks me out of the genjustu. The armor also protects me from the fire. And you never said the snake will attack or anything so i just stand there and watch it purr at me.

(Koka no Jutsu) - Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.
 

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Selen go home. You're drunk.

As i see the worst president in US history walk before me, I preform one handseal injecting my chakra into my opponent causing him to believe he is in a world of absolute darkness. While he is in the world of darkness I form 3 handseals creating a orb of fire next to me which i condense into an arrow. I pull the arrow back and launch it as if i was wielding a bow. The arrow soars at you and hits you in the heart. Killing you. Finally whenever somebody is killed by me I always form a thick layer of ground level clouds that surround the area causing your breathing to be effected should you be survive the mars sniper.

( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

(Katon:Kinsei Honoo Sogeki-hei) - Fire Release: Mars Flame Sniper
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs several hand seals and creates a medium sized flame orb. The user then concentrates and shapes and compacts the flame orb into a heated arrow with a red-orange glow facing the opponent. The user then stretches out their left hand near the arrow and pulls back their right hand as if they were pulling back a bow. Once the stance has been performed the sides of the arrowhead will begin to spew out flames. The user then fires the arrow towards the opponent. The spewing flames then encircles around the arrow as it travels towards the opponent. Upon impact the arrow will pierce through the opponent leaving the area it pierced burned.
Note:
-Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-Must have Katon Mastered
-Can only be used 2x
Learned Here.

(Ninpou: Kumogakure no Jutsu)- Ninja Art: Hidden Cloud Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Usable by most members of the Hidden Cloud village, this technique creates a very thick group of ground-level clouds that covers the battlefield. The clouds are many times thicker than mist from the Hidden Mist counterpart jutsu and thus makes it harder to see and even more difficult to breathe in the clouds. Cloud ninja have no trouble breathing as they reside at such high altitudes that they have grown used to the atmospheric pressure, but against regular shinobi unfamiliar with life in the Hidden Cloud Village, they could potentially suffocate if the clouds are not dispersed within 5 turns. Like the Hidden Mist counterpart, the clouds are made up of the users chakra, making it impossible for Sharingan users to effectively use their sharingan in the Hidden Clouds.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle
 

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I see Ciberr make a single handseal, immediately after I go blind. Knowing that I went blind directly after Ciberr's handseal, and that it caused nothing else, I am then able to conclude that it's a genjutsu. I then quickly stab myself in the arm releasing myself from the gen. I then see an arrow made of flame approaching. I quickly go underground avoiding the arrow. I am so comfortable that I take a nap. Hours later I emerge and find some of Sensei's alcahol. After years of use, I have become a raging alcoholic and basically drink constantly. I have no friends left, and my family disowned me. I then leave the ninja world and travel to a new land, and change my name to "Bush". I soon become ruler of the land...they call me President. Unfortunately, I am a complete imbecile and have ruined this country's economy. This is most likely due to the brain cells I lost while drinking. I am currently traveling to Mexico where I will change my name yet again, this time to Pablo. Don't drink folks.

Moral: Sensei Selendrile shouldn't drink u-u

Oh yeah, (Insert Hiding Like a Mole jutsu.)
 
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I see Ciberr make a single handseal, immediately after I go blind. I am then able to conclude that it's a genjutsu. I then quickly stab myself in the arm releasing myself from the gen. I then see an arrow made of flame approaching. I quickly go underground avoiding the arrow. I am so comfortable that I take a nap. Hours later I emerge and find some of Sensei's alcahol. After years of use, I have become a raging alcoholic and basically drink constantly. I have no friends left, and my family disowned me. I then leave the ninja world and travel to a new land, and change my name to "Bush". I soon become ruler of the land...they call me President. Unfortunately, I am a complete imbecile and have ruined this country's economy. This is most likely due to the brain cells I lost while drinking. I am currently traveling to Mexico where I will change my name yet again, this time to Pablo. Don't drink folks.

Moral: Sensei Selendrile shouldn't drink u-u

Oh yeah, (Insert Hiding Like a Mole jutsu.)
Your reasoning isn't adequate.
 
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