Raiton with Nathan.

[Nathan]

Good.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

Gather your raiton chakra in your dominant hand, then manipulate the chakra to create lighting bolts around your forearm, then I want you to jump up into the air, then you will land on the ground slamming your palm on the ground causing an electrical energy to be discharged sending out lighting bolts into the ground and around you up to 5 meters.

 

[Fusion Reborn]

*As i hear my sempai's intructions, i quickly focus on my chakra as i form a handseal, releasing about 4 clones, 2 on my left and 2 on my right. They then walk around to from a square, a perfect opportunity to use the jutsu. I then quickly channel my chakra into my veins and into my arm as i gather more and more chakra. I then quickly jump up to about 7 meters, enough time for my to gather more chakra. As i do that, i quickly take the chakra and compress it, molding it to Lightning chakra, while focusing on the way i will be preforming thing jutsu. While doing so, i quickly loose my concentration as my arm starts to vibrate violently. I then hear thunder inside me roaring. As i feel if that i have converted enough chakra, and realized that if i didn't stop, my own arm would fall off, i quickly release, causing a blanket of lightning to cover my forearm. As i reach the ground, i quickly slam my palm into the ground first, causing lightning to travel across the ground, stunning the 4 clones until they...

Poof.

Pros:
This Jutsu is capable of attack 1 or more opponents in a time, avoiding to use another jutsus to attack a different opponent. This is also short to mid rang.

Cons:
This jutsu asks you to jump in the air, which is bad. Some one can easily throw in a fireball that pretty much kills you while you can't really even preform your jutsu.

 

[Superlative]

Good.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

Gather your raiton chakra in your dominant hand, then manipulate the chakra to create lighting bolts around your forearm, then I want you to jump up into the air, then you will land on the ground slamming your palm on the ground causing an electrical energy to be discharged sending out lighting bolts into the ground and around you up to 5 meters.

*As instructed I begin by molding chakra and channeling it through my dominant (right) arm, afterwards jumping into the air towards your clone and in such a way, that when I land, I'll pounce on your clone. While in midair, I convert the nature of my chakra into lightning by rapidly increasing its vibratory rates so that my entire hand and forearm are covered in lightning. I mold the chakra in such way that, instead of ripping through the earth, the lightning flows through the ground. When I land, I slam my hand on the ground, channeling the lightning through the earth in such a way that it diffuses through the area around me.*

Pro: You can use this on multiple people as long as they're within 5 meters of you when you slam your hand down.

Con: The weakness in this technique has to be its limited range, despite the fact that you pounce on your target prior.

 

[Nathan]

Good and come on FR only 200 or so posts to go.

Last of the C-ranks.

( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

Gather up your raiton chakra, then release it from your hands, in the form of a wall, the can be used for defense or to shock targets.

 

[Fusion Reborn]

50 more post Sempai

*As i hear my sempai's instructions, i quickly focus on my chakra as i make a single handseal, causing smoke to form on my left. As the smoke clears, a clone stands besides my as i punch him on the face, causing him to fly like a ragdoll and land face first to mid range. The clone, with fire in his eyes, runs to me with his fist ready to punch me in the face. I then quickly channel my chakra into my arm as i gather more and more. While doing so, i quickly put both of my arms towards me, pointing at the clone as he gets a bit closer to me. I then quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting it to lightning chakra. The clone then runs faster as he is 2 meters away to me. I then quickly release the chakra, using shape manipulation to form a lightning-like shield infront of me. The clone, too foolish and angry to avoid, punches the shield, causing him to electricuted by the shield, cuasing him to fall on the ground with all his physical capabilities to be taken away.

Poof

Pros:
This is a great shield against byakugan, and leg wieght type of fighting. It can also be released at the last moment, causing the opponent to hit the shield with no plans to avoid it. It can also make the opponent loose some of his physical capabilities.

Cons:
This only reaches to short-range and someone can easily goto your side, causing you to be hit. This jutsu isn't so big and can be defeated with D-RANK Wind.

Edit: I'm S-Class noah "

 

[Superlative]

Good and come on FR only 200 or so posts to go.

Last of the C-ranks.

( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

Gather up your raiton chakra, then release it from your hands, in the form of a wall, the can be used for defense or to shock targets.

*I, after listening to your instructions, hold both of my hands out in front of me. I mould lightning chakra (externally) and channel it to each of my palms. As the lightning begins to spark at my fingertips, I project it forwards and into the area just in front of me, shaping it by forming a layer of regular chakra around the lightning, and having it take the form of a rectangular, protective barrier in front of me. When the barrier is erect, I focus on maintaining its form by giving it a constant feed if chakra.*

Pro: It could serve as an adequate defense in short range against against an opponent, or to eradicate smaller incoming (earthen) projectiles.

Con: It is short range, and doesn't serve many purposes other than as a defense.

 

[Nathan]

Great.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Send your raiton chakra into the clouds, then manipulate the chakra in the clouds to create lighting strikes, aim them at my clones.

-Creates clone x4.-

 

[Fusion Reborn]

*As i look at the skys above me, thundery and cloudy because of our previous lightning jutsus, i quickly gather my chakra on my dominent arm (right) as i point it the the sky, gathering more and more chakra into my arm. I then turn my focus onto the 4 clones 6 meters away from us, being divided by two groups. Two clones for me and my training buddy. I then quickly switch my focus, looking at the sky above me. I then quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting into lightning chakra as i repeat the following steps i have been doing since i've started RPing. While doing that, i quickly feel my arm vibrate, causing it to shake violently as it feels that i have major muscle spasms. As i converted the chakra, i quickly release, causing the lightning chakra, to fly up to the clouds. As i do that, i quickly focus on the place i want to hit the target. As i feel if that i have full control of the lightning, i quickly release, causing a bolt of lightning to come down from the cloud, hitting the clones with great power, making a minor crater from where the clones were standing.

Pros:
A great jutsu to use. You really don't need to put your hand up as you can use this a sneaky attack on the back of your opponents. This is also short-mid range, a great jutsu.

Cons:
Some pussies out their will just goto long range to avoid the jutsu.

 

[Superlative]

Great.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Send your raiton chakra into the clouds, then manipulate the chakra in the clouds to create lighting strikes, aim them at my clones.

-Creates clone x4.-

*I begin by kneading chakra and raising my hands to the sky to assist the process, at least initially. When I feel that I've molded enough chakra, I change its nature to that of lightning - Like an electric arc, the lightning flows up into the air and clouds. At this point, I take a moment to collect myself and take precise aim at each of your clones. While channeling my chakra into the air, I divide it evenly in half and give my chakra a more specific form, causing twin lightning bolts to strike the ground at the exact location of your clones. The lightning flows through their bodies and vaporizes them.*

Pro: It can be used to strike multiple places at once.

Con: It takes a while to gather electrical essence in the air (Not exactly sure on this one)

 

[Nathan]

Superlative, you are correct with your con.

Moving on;

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

Perform the seals, then gather a large amount or raiton chakra, enough to create Four Giant Pillars surrounding my clone, then you will shoot our bolts of lighting to bind my clone in place.

 

[Fusion Reborn]

*As i finished listening to my sempai's instructions, i quickly focus on my chakra as i know that i would need to use half of my chakra to perform the technique. While i do that, i quickly memorize the handseals as i keep channeling chakra into my legs as i gather more and more. I then quickly say the handseals out loud while doing the handseals (Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare). After that, i quickly focus my attention on my chakra as i see a clone 4 meters away from us. While doing that, i quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting it to lightning chakra. I then feel my legs vibrate by itself, violently shaking me and the ground underneath my fooot. As i feel if that i have converted most of my chakra, i quickly channel the chakra out of my leg and into the ground, surrounding the clone beneath him. As i do that, i quickly release the chakra, making 4 pillars to rise out of the ground with lightning chakra. While doing that, i quiclkly use the last lightning chakra to send out a blinding light of lightning, that blinds my clone, enough to make him poof away.

Pros:
Can be a distraction to use another jutsu to finish off the opponent

Cons:
Needs 5 handseals, a bad jutsu to use because any one can easily throw in a jutsu before you can even do the jutsu

 

[Superlative]

Superlative, you are correct with your con.

Moving on;

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

Perform the seals, then gather a large amount or raiton chakra, enough to create Four Giant Pillars surrounding my clone, then you will shoot our bolts of lighting to bind my clone in place.

Thanks for the clarification ^^

* I begin by memorizing the string of handseals you showed us, running it over and over again in my mind while physically practicing. After getting it down, I begin by molding a sufficient amount of chakra before successfully executing the row of handseals; With precise chakra control, I alter the nature of my chakra to doton in order to summon four equally large and proportionally spaced earthen pillars. Once formed, I run my lightning element chakra through each of the earth pillars, causing bolts of lightning to shoot out at your clone in the middle. I make sure to focus a majority of my power on the center, keeping the flow of chakra consistent to deal as much damage as possible. The result of my endeavors is that the lightning visibly binds your clone just before it dissipates.*

Pro: The four pillars are large though on top of that, lightning come from each of them simultaneously; To defend against or overcome this technique, you'd have to take out each of the pillars, all before getting shocked by lightning. Additionally, this technique couples good with suiton jutsu.

Con: Hrm, I don't know what to say here, so I'll say the handseals are a "con." However, I respectfully disagree with Fusion Reborn's opinion that this is a bad technique; 5 handseals takes a few seconds, not a few minutes to perform.

 

[Nathan]

Well done.

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

Use a simple water justu, then gather your raiton chakra up and release a wave of electricity that will electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. This can be used without the water tech, but the power is moderate.

 

[Superlative]

Well done.

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

Use a simple water justu, then gather your raiton chakra up and release a wave of electricity that will electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. This can be used without the water tech, but the power is moderate.

*Because I have yet to begin Suiton training, I draw and unfurl a scroll, summoning a gushing torrent of water, flowing in the general direction of your clone. Using the knowledge and experience that I've built up with the Lightning element, I hold my hands out while moulding chakra, channel that energy towards my outstretched palms. With no hesitation, I alter the nature of my chakra, increasing the vibrating frequency in order to generate lightning, and release it from my hands. The lightning is aimed for the wave of water, and as it nears your clone, the lightning electrocutes the water to form a favorable collaboration jutsu.*

Pro: This can be used on a majority of Suiton jutsu as a means of augmenting offensive power and making Suiton more difficult to defend against. It's also very fast.

Con: The power generated is moderate - Depending on the power of the Suiton jutsu, one may only end up suffering from paralysis and first degree burns after being hit.

 

[Fusion Reborn]

*Kuroyuga poofs out of nowhere as he stands besides Pain and gets excited about Spring Break. After Pain shows his presentation, i quickly focus on my chakra as i channel it through my veins and eventually into my mouth as i gather more and more chakra. I then look at the group of dummies 6 meters away which has a bunch of trees behind it. While doing that, i quickly feel my mouth/jaw dropping because of the amount of chakra on my mouth. I then quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting it to Water/Suiton chakra. While doing so, i then feel water or liquid moving back and forth on my mouth like an ocean rocking a ship in a storm. As i feel if that i have collected enough chakra, i quickly release while using shape manipluation, gathering all of the chakra into one and makiing it swirl.

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*As i release the large swirling ball of chakra heads for dummy 6 meters ahead of us, i quickly get rid of my remaining suiton chakra and get new ones, channeling it to my veins and eventually into my dominent hand (which is my right arm.) While doing so, i quickly convert the chakra, molding and compressing it while gathering more and more chakra. I then feel my hand vibrating, causing my hand to violently shake while storing enough energy to create lightning. As i feel if that i have converted the chakra, i quickly release, causing a creasent wave of chakra to travel and hit the ball, causing the ball to be fused with uncontrolable lightning, stunning and making the place covered with electrified water.

 

[Nathan]

FR remember the pros and cons next time.

Good.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Gather your raiton chakra and bring your hands together, doing this electrical energy will begin to crackle around you, then you'll slam your hands on the ground to send an electric current though the earth, to attack my clone.

-Creates clone.-

 

[Fusion Reborn]

*As i look at the clones 6 meters infront of me, i quickly focus on my chakra as i bring my hands together while channeling chakra into my palms, channeling chakra into my left aand right hand. As i feel if that i have collected enough chakra into my hands, i quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting it to lightning chakra, feeling my hands vibrate violently. I then put an openeing into my hands like Chibaku Tensai but lightning is on both of my palms. It then crackles as i slam my palm into the ground, releasing lightning to travel across the land and stun the clone.

Pros:
Short-Long Rang / Can be used to attack multiple enemies

Cons:
Someone can easily jump up to avoid this jutsu

 

[Superlative]

FR remember the pros and cons next time.

Good.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Gather your raiton chakra and bring your hands together, doing this electrical energy will begin to crackle around you, then you'll slam your hands on the ground to send an electric current though the earth, to attack my clone.

-Creates clone.-

*As instructed, I begin molding my chakra and channeling it to both of my hands; Simultaneous to me clapping my hands together, I aggravate the vibratory rates of my chakra, changing its nature and effectively generating lightning, made evident by the cracking electricity at my palms. Moving on to the next step, using precise chakra control, I alter the qualities of the lightning not to react violently with the earth, but instead, flow through it. When I finally slam my hands down and channel the electricity through the ground, because the element is fleeting, I make sure to maintain a constant, steady feed of chakra into the jutsu; This way, I make sure that the lightning doesn't fade away before reaching its target. Once it reaches your clone, the lightning crawls up, into, and through his body . .*


Pro:You can attack multiple enemies at once; On a side note, seeing several bolts of lightning rushing towards you is also kinda intimidating.

Con: There is one easy way to avoid this technique, which would be to ascend off the ground using some specific jutsu; However, from what I've seen, people prefer not to use that method (Using Hurricane Fist to escape) for one reason or another (I imagine it's because that would be predictable).

 

[Nathan]

Great.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.

Raise your hands in the air (like you just don't care. xD) and gather your lighting and the skies lighting chakra into yourn hands, then fire a lighting bolt at my clone.

-Creates clone.-

 

[Fusion Reborn]

Ur Sig scares me >_>

*As i hear my sempai's instructions, i quickly look at the sky above me, thunder storms accuring and lightning destroying everything in it's path. I then raise my dominent hand up while focusing on my chakra, channeling it through my veins and all the way up to my palms. I then take a glimpse at the clone standing 3 meters from us. I then step closer to the clone so i can get a clear shot on the clone accurately. While doing that, i quickly compress and mold the chakra, converting it to lightning chakra as i still keep my arm up. As i do that, i quickly feel a sudden burst of vibrations that knock around my right arm, causing it to violently shake. As my arm shake my whole body, i quickly release the chakra, making it spread around a cloud uptop of us. While doing that, i hear the cloud that i have put my chakra in explode, releasing lighting to come to my hand. As i have the lightning on my hands, i quickly throw it at the clone, causing the clone to be shocked as an explosion occurs.

Pros:
You might be able to throw lightning bolts at the opponent continueasly and attack multiple opponents.

Cons:
This is a bad technique to use. This is only short-range and it takes a lot of time to send chakra into the clone and back into you hand while you can just throw it at an opponent.