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[Vex]

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Sleepy Fist
Type: SleepJutsu
Background:

Killua Zoldyck one time fought someone while he was very tired. He then fell asleep in the middle of the fight, being very tired. Killua then recognized the values of this style and used it to win many battles while developing the mechanics of this style.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

When someone is asleep, their muscles are very loose. They are also in a "glazed over" state, and as such will use the very least amount of motions possible. All his attacks seem somehow "lazy", and are very accurate. Similar to when Rock Lee fought Kimmimaro. In this state the user's eyes are still open and he can still see. His mind however has been almost shut down, all his reactions are sped up. Movements are looser and more accurate. It can be used with a sword as well, allowing much more loose slashes and accurate. The user whilst using this particular style, possesses both incredible reflexes and speed, which when used in conjunction with the momentum and weight of her staggering body, can defeat the majority of opponents with only a few fluid movements.

Example Techniques:

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|Sleepy Fist|Knock Out!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A (+10 to all Sleepy fist jutsu)
Description:The user makes himself fall asleep and his movements become looser and more accurate. Making almost no wasted movements, the user is like a machine. This jutsu must be activated to use all sleepy fist jutsu.

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|Sleepy Fist|Lazy Punch*
Type:Offense*
Rank:C*
Range:Short*
Chakra:15*
Damage:30*
Description: After the user falls asleep, he gets in close range to the opponent. He then delivers a strong and very loose punch to the opponent's face, and while the opponent is dealing with that he delivers a fast punch with his free hand to the opponents midsection.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

-Must be Sannin to learn-
-Cannot use any form of nin or gen jutsu while using this style-
-Reaction speed is increased when compared to the average strong fist user-
-Base speed is also much faster than the average strong fist user-

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±± Declined ±± You need to make the explanation much better. If you are put asleep how can you fight? Lee fought because his muscles have been trained so much that they would reply autonomously to any attack. And agains kimimaro he used Drunken Fist. He was pretty much awake. I can understand what you want but once you shot down your mind, fine senses such as eyesight and hearing become disconnected from your conscious so you can't control them. Sleep walking is a different thing though and perhaps you should try to explain what you need to explain taking some hints from that. But beware, if you are put into a sleep state, Genjutsu and some more specific attacks and techniques, such as Yamanaka techniques become a one hit knockout as your mind isn't there to produce resistance.

 

[Ciberr]

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Sunflower Seed Style.
Type: Ninjustu.
Background: The Sunflower seed style is a special style of combat developed by some members of kumogakure. The style itself originated when the popular sunflower seeds became a trend in the poor areas in kumogakure. The seeds became very popular, and fittingly enough they became a formidable weapon when used in the right hands.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style resides on the basis of infusing different breeds of elemental chakra into the consumed seeds. The seeds themselves have 2 main components. The shell. And the seed itself. The shell of the seed is where all the power lies, its coated in any type of elemental chakra thus giving it different abilities. Covering the seed in katon for example gives it the attributes of a regular katon projectile. Strong against wind, weak against fire. And so on and so forth. The seeds can be consumed in a large number at once, up to 100 seeds can be filled into the users mouth at once. Of course, unless the seed is special single numbers of seeds will not have much effect on other projectiles. Like fireballs, and lightning balls, etc. etc.
Example Techniques:

(Himawari tane fuukaku: Chakra infusing no justu) Sunflower seed Style: Chakra infusing technique.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-A
Range: Self.
Chakra: 20-50
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user infuses chakra of any element(or multiple elements) into the sunflower seeds into his mouth. This justu allows the usage of sunflower seed style justus. Depending on the amount of seeds in the users mouth, the amount of chakra needed for this justu varies.The infused seeds can rest in the users mouth for 5 turns. This justu can only be used 3 times per battle. (Maxiumum of 100 | Max of two elements into a group of seeds)

Additional effects and Restrictions:
Users of the Sunflower seed style must have at Least B ranked Doton and Suiton. And Mastery of Futon, katon, and raiton.
User must be at least a Sannin rank.
Seeds must be listed in the users bio.
While seeds are in users mouth no projectiles aside from seeds can be fired out the users mouth.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Not a CFS in the slightest.

 

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Maijutsu Gigei | Black Magic Arts
Type: Ninjutsu/Maijutsu

Background:
While in an altered state of consciousness Nathan. performed a powerful Majutsu technique without knowing it. It is because of this technique that his skin had become a pale grey for several days. After he regains control of himself he eventually finds a book containing information regarding the use of Majutsu. This book was thought to be lost from the world forever.

Majutsu isn't performed with hand seals, since it was developed before the Sage of Six Paths created ninjutsu, and require incantations, called Fuju (符呪), to activate. So in hind sight Maijutsu is much older then the Sage of Six Paths.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Majutsu refers to a line of techniques that predates the creation and classification of ninjutsu and incorporates the use and affinity for darkness and internal power covering a wide variety of abilities. Many forbidden ninjutsu techniques are derivations and rediscoveries of techniques that once were called black magic. It should be noted that while this techniques utilize what may be misunderstood as a dark release it is not a form of nature manipulation. Instead techniques placed under this category utilize mostly raw chakra and internal energy for different effects. An inability to fully control the most powerful of these techniques can result in a user taking on demonic traits such as grey or black skin and occasionally physiological mutations. It is because of this recoil, called Sakanagi (逆凪, Backlash), that Majutsu was considered evil. In reality the effects are the result of channeling incredible amounts of energy throughout the body and that leaks from the chakra network into the bloodstream, bones, and flesh. While many Majutsu techniques can be linked to advanced bloodlines it is not limited to them. Thus it is possible for nearly anyone to use these techniques. Unfortunately, Majutsu isn't performed with hand seals, since it was developed before the Sage of Six Paths created ninjutsu, and require incantations, called Fuju (符呪), to activate. Similarly to ninjutsu and hand seals, a skilled user of Black Magic can skip or shorten an incantation. It should be noted that while these techniques may appear dark in nature they are not malevolent or evil, simply one half of the ancient set of skills that chakra users employed.

Example Techniques:

Learning Majutsu:
While Majutsu has been nearly lost to the world with the extreme popularity of Ninjutsu dominating chakra manipulation, the traditional method of learning these techniques seems to be known by a few select people. While strange perhaps for shinobi who already utilize ninjutsu, the method is broken into two stages Conjuring and Manipulation.

Stage 1: Conjuring
Similar to modern Ninjutsu, the art of Majutsu requires that one draws chakra out of their bodies by allowing it to pass through their chakra network and out of their tenketsu. As such focus is key to manipulating chakra in this way require precise chakra control via the incantations which naturally regulate the user's mental state while performing the technique. In order to aid practitioners in mastering the conjuring faze of Majutsu the following technique was created.

Maijutsu Gigei: Ankyuutai | Black Magic Arts: Shade Orb
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The basic Majutsu training technique used as the first technique in manipulating chakra through the incantation methods of Majutsu. The user will speak the Incantation; Abhizapati (अभिशपति) "Conjure", thus beginning the technique. As such this technique begins to teach the user how to draw out and concentrate one's chakra. While this technique creates a concentrated shadowy orb of chakra floating in one's hand, the technique is absolutely harmless and is useless in a combat situation. When this technique is used without restraint its size is directly proportional to the maximum amount of chakra the practitioner can draw out for any particular Majutsu technique. Someone new to Majutsu will usually produce an orb that would easily fit into the palm of the user's hand. As the Majutsu style is centered around using one's own inner power this technique teaches the user how to forcefully draw chakra from their body and form it into stable shape. As an added note this technique produces chakra that feels cold to the touch.
Notes:
- Must use this before you use any Maijutsu technique.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Stage 2: Manipulation
In previous stage the technique Ankyuutai is used to teach one how to draw chakra from themselves in the Majutsu manner the second stage technique teaches one how to manipulate it. This stage can be considered similar to shape manipulation in Ninjutsu.

Maijutsu Gigei: Kokuen | Black Magic Arts: Black Smoke
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
After the Shade Orb has been successfully conjured and maintained in the user's palm, the user use the following incantation; Vahati (वहति) "Flow" to gain control of the orbs position and begin to relocate according to their will. Once the orb begins to move front the user's hand it will degrade into a black smoke, hence the name, formed from the user's chakra that the user will direct with hand motions. Like its parent technique the chakra of this technique is cold to the touch and doesn't have any affinity for damage. Once a user has mastered this technique they are ready to begin learning actual Majutsu techniques.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Unofficial Stage 3: Completion
While not part of the traditional training method, Nathan felt that the ancients who practiced Majutsu left out an important step in mastering these techniques. While the previous stages teach a user how to draw their chakra out and manipulate it, they both do it separately. As such the unofficial third stage combines what the user has already learned into a single step and with the addition of changing the nature (Take note: "Nature" as it is used here doesn't refer to Elemental Natures found in Ninjutsu, but rather the characteristic of the chakra once it is used) of the chakra before it is utilized as an actual technique. Like the previous stages, a technique is utilized for one to comprehend what is being taught. If a student is able to master this technique they are truly ready to learn Majutsu techniques.

Maijutsu Gigei: Kurokaze | Black Magic Arts: Black Wind
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After saying the incantation AvakRntati (अवकृन्तति) "Cut Down" an advancement of the second stage Majutsu training technique that condenses the "black smoke" into a arced blade shape and directs it toward an intended target at an incredible velocity. Unlike the previous techniques from which this Majutsu skills is derived from, Kurokaze is quite dangerous able to easily cut through the trunk of a large tree with ease, though it retains the same cold aura. Despite the name the technique is not wind natured and is instead merely a condensed blade of chakra and is named as such do to its similarity to Wind Release techniques.
Notes:
- Isn't wind release, it's a condensed blade of chakra.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Maijutsu Gigei: Karasuhebi | Black Magic Arts: Black Snake
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
This basic Majutsu technique allows the user to force a burst of black chakra in the shape of a large snake, from their palm, towards an intended target. Upon contact the snake explodes in a potent burst of chakra with enough force to possibly knock an opponent out. This technique uses the incantation Nirhanti (निर्हन्ति, "Strike out") to be performed at its most powerful extent, though most Majutsu practitioners won't have a problem with performing this simple technique without an incantation. The size of the snake in question is dependent upon the user's skill with the technique, and the amount of chakra used. With enough chakra control this technique can be used to wrap around a target an then detonated at will causing significantly increased damage. Due to the explosive power of this technique it is not recommended for use at close range or near allies.

Maijutsu Gigei: Yōkaishō| Black Magic Arts: Phantom Palm
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
A basic Maijutsu technique that allows a user to force a wave of chakra toward an intended target. The user will say the incantation Kitsui (पास "Close") just merely needs to direct his/her palm toward the intended target in conjunction with the aforementioned release of chakra. Experienced users can even perform the technique without the physical activation of pointing ones palm at an opponent.
Notes:
- Must have physical contact to have the best effect.


Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Since Maijutsu isn't executed with hand seals, but instead a verbal command. The user gains a small speed boost, when performing Maijutsu, jutsus.
- Must have mastered Ninjutsu.
- Must be an Unofficial Sage to learn this style.
- People who want to learn this style must complete three training sessions, before they can use it.
- Each training session is a month apart.
- A user who knows this style; their skin will turn grey/black from the use of Maijutsu.
- Can only be taught by Nathan. (Creator)

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‡ Declined ‡ CFS are meant to be based of martial combat (taijutsu or kenjutsu variations) this is neither.

 

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Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu (武神館 武道 体術)
Type:Taijutsu

Background:
The style was develop by shinobis that lacks physical strength. Having been bullied by bigger and muscular shinobis, they focused on conditioning their bodies to give them a boost on their speed, sacrificing muscle build up that slows down their movement. They concentrated on toning to give them more flexibility and fluidity in movement.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Bujinkan Taijitsu seeks to use body movement and positioning rather than strength to defeat the opponent. All techniques in Bujinkan taijutsu involve unbalancing the opponent by using strikes, throws, sweeps, or combination of these to disrupt the balance of the opponent while maintaining one's own balance. The style teaches one redirect the opponents to give the user positional advantage. This movement is utilized during the moment of the opponent’s attack. To complete the movement, one moves out of the opponent's line of attack to the opponent’s blind spot. When executed properly, one can strike an opponent with great force, combining his attacking momentum and opponent's forward movement.

Bujinkan Taijitsu strategy combines rhythm, timing, position, and distance to parry and counterattack in one continuous motion. The ability to turn defense into offense by using an opponent’s power and momentum against him lies at the heart of the Bujinkan method. The basic technique in Bujinkin Taijutsu is to parry the opponent’s attack in a way that redirects their attacking energy away from you. You then move to your opponent’s weak side or blind spot that has been opened-up by your parry and execute a strike, throw, sweep, or combination of these to put the opponent on the ground. The combination of movements involve circular or pendulum motions of the body in order to redirect the opponent’s attack without meeting it head-on (meeting force with force) and to counterattack with motions that generate energy and momentum. Many of the parries and sweeps are designed to put the opponent off-balance which makes it much easier to knock them to the ground as their own body and momentum assist in carrying them to the ground.

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Ranking and Technique Usage
Menkyo Kaiden - Creator of the Style. Able to use all Techniques.
Shidōshi - Highest attainable rank. Able to use up to S-rank Techniques.
Judan - Have mastered all the basic training in the style. Able to use up to A-rank Techniques.
Ikkyu - Started training the basics of the style. Able to use up to B-rank Techniques.
Mukyu - Someone who's been accepted to train in the style of Bujinkan Taijutsu.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Users of the style relies on toning the body and not strengthening it. Thus, give then a quicker reaction time.
- Users of the style have enhanced speed and agility than a normal strong fist user.
- The user, sacrificing strength and power, can attack quicker than normal strong fist user.
- Users of the style have generally good chakra control.
- Must be of Sannin Rank to get accepted.
- Must have started training in basic taijutsu.
- Only the Menkyo Kaiden can promote user in rank.

Sample Techniques

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Junan Taiso
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Junan Taiso is a technique of stretching and breathing by means of which the Bujinkan practitioner may develop and maintain good physical condition and well being. The technique promote relaxation, blood and chakra circulation, muscle toning and flexibility. It is a form of conditioning and preparation for the body as all major joints are rotated and stretched in a proper manner while healthy breathing and concentration is being done. This allow the user to react faster and gain more flexibility and agility. Thus, giving the ability for the user to defend against taijutsu based attack which is one rank higher.

Note: Can only be used by a Bujinkan user with the rank of Judan or higher.
Note: This is a pre-fight technique that must be stated at the beginning of the match, if not it will not be in effect.
Note: Defending can only be used against taijutsu based techniques up to A-rank.
Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey


Hiji Ayumi-Ashi Sutoraiki|Cross Step Elbow Strike
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user first step across with their leg and uses their adjacent hand to push away the incoming attack. the motion will eventually make the user spin in a 180 degree manner and will be able to deliver an elbow to the face of the opponent.

Note: If the opponent attacks with their right hand/leg, the user will use their right leg to step and right hand to push away the attack. then uses their left elbow to strike.
Note: Can defend up to A-rank taijutsu based attack if Junan Taiso is in effect.
Note: Can only be used by Bujinkan user with a rank of Ikkyu or higher.
Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

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~Declined~
Everything here can be done free-form or with normal taijutsu customs. Re-directing attacks and doesn't fall under a CFS.

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Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu (武神館 武道 体術)
Type:NinTaijutsu

Background:
Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu was developed by weaker shinobis who got bullied by bigger and more muscular ones. They eventually got tired of being overpowered by shinobis with more advance physics than them so they tried to create a new fighting style that will suite them against any foe. They concentrated on toning their muscles instead of bulking up to gain a slight advantage on speed and flexibility. But the more they trained the quicker they feel the strain on their muscles. Realizing that they need to find a way to remedy the strain on the muscle, they tried to use electricity to jolt the muscles. The strained muscles were eventually rejuvenated and apparently became better than normal. They tried putting this concept in the style they are developing and ended up having ration chakra continuously flow all over the body to aid in rejuvenating muscle tissues and relieving the strain. The constant flow of raiton chakra also gave them quicker reaction time and reflexes than most shinobis. It also allowed them to release little amounts of electricity to numb certain parts of the opponent upon contact thus giving birth to their new style, Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu mainly relies on countering and disrupting balance and momentum. Utilizing the continuous flow of raiton chakra inside the body, the user will release small amounts of raiton chakra upon contact with the opponent to numb the affected area for a few seconds. This will give the user a small window to react to the initial attack in various ways. Upon delivering the numbing strike, the user will now keep the opponent off balance by stepping into the opponent’s line of attack leaving the opponent little to no space to properly react to the users movements.

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Having raiiton chakra continuously flowing inside ones body has its drawbacks as well. User cannot mold suiton chakra porperly when using this style as it tends to numb even then user.

Ranking and Technique Usage
Menkyo Kaiden - Creator of the Style. Able to use all Techniques.
Shidōshi - Highest attainable rank. Able to use up to S-rank Techniques.
Judan - Have mastered all the basic training in the style. Able to use up to A-rank Techniques.
Ikkyu - Started training the basics of the style. Able to use up to B-rank Techniques.
Mukyu - Someone who's been accepted to train in the style of Bujinkan Taijutsu.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Users of the style relies on toning the body and not strengthening it. Thus, give then a quicker reaction time.
- Users of the style have enhanced speed and agility than a normal strong fist user.
- The user, sacrificing strength and power, can attack quicker than normal strong fist user.
- Users of the style have generally good chakra control.
- Must be of Sannin Rank to get accepted.
- Must have completed raiton training.
- Must have completed basic taijutsu.
- All suiton techniques suffers 1 rank decrease.
- Only the Menkyo Kaiden can promote user in rank.

Sample Techniques

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Junan Taiso
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (5 every turn after)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Junan Taiso is the technique used by Bujinkan practitioner to let thier raiton chakra flow all over the body. This allow the user to react faster and gain more flexibility and agility. User can keep this technique active as long as they have the chakra to do so. Having learned this technique for two months, the user will be able to passively activate the technique without spending a move.

Note: Can only be used by a Bujinkan user with the rank of Judan or higher.
Note: Needs to spend one move to activate
Note: Needs to be posted as reference when passively activated
Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey


Hiji Ayumi-Ashi Sutoraiki|Cross Step Elbow Strike
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user first step across with their leg and uses their adjacent hand to push away the incoming attack. the motion will eventually make the user spin in a 180 degree manner and will be able to deliver an elbow to the face of the opponent.

Note: If the opponent attacks with their right hand/leg, the user will use their right leg to step and right hand to push away the attack. then uses their left elbow to strike.
Note: Can only be used by Bujinkan user with a rank of Ikkyu or higher.
Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

Heart Stopper
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will channel all the flowing raiton chakra from his body to his hand. The user will then use this hand to deliver an open palm strike towards the opponents chest. Upon contact, the user will release all the raiton chakra and direct it towards the enemy.

Note: Opponent wont be able to move for about 5 seconds (enough time to land another attack). Lower ranked opponents will pass out when hit.
Note: Junan Taiso will deactivate after usage and you have to wait one full turn to activate it again.
Note: Due to the strain on the hand used, the user cannot use it for 1 turn.

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±± Declined ±± DNR.

 

[ZK]

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(Hirameku) - Thunderflash
Type: Hachimon Taijutsu
Background: Through ice and fire. Every practitioner of Taijutsu has walked a thousand miles where the practitioner of Ninjutsu has walked only one. Hard work is the root of all Styles and Hirameku is based on the most advanced concept in hand-to-hand combat: the opening of the Eight Internal Gates.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The opening of a Gate has always been synonymous with an aggressive attack. Due to the toll it takes on the user’s body, even the most experienced user of the Gates has to be extremely cautious when letting his chakra loose. Hirameku was designed to allow for a wider spectrum of tactics to be used with the Gates.
The concept is simple: snatch stamina and damage from the jaws of defeat.
All Eight Internal Gates Masters are able to open several Gates at once. This ability, coupled with the already formidable Taijutsu-prowess of a Master with the Gates closed, makes for a very simple style that deals in single strikes delivered with pinpoint accuracy. By opening a single or several Gates for little more than a moment, practitioners of Hirameku are able to deliver empowered strikes without suffering nearly as many drawbacks as those whom open the Gates ‘fully’.
It may sound extremely taxing and intricate, but it is not so much opening the Gates that damages the body as it is using the body with the Gates open. By opening the Gates only for a moment, many drawbacks are avoided and the Gates can be readily opened again.
The Hirameku, though simple, is also full of possibilities. With the Gates being opened only in momentary 'surges', most of the power can be diverted to a single limb, or spent in a single movement. It is this distribution of power that makes Hirameku as open as it is. A technique can consist of the barest twitch or the most complex maneuver.

Example Techniques:

(Hirameku Ichitenkai) – Thunderflash One Point Release

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-No Forbidden-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must be an Eight Internal Gates Master.
-Techniques pertaining to the Hirameku Style do not count as actual openings of the Gates.
-Techniques pertaining to the Hirameku Style do not receive the ‘damage-boost’ other Taijutsu-techniques do when one or more of the Gates are opened.
-Techniques pertaining to the Hirameku Style can only be used to open up to and including the Fifth Gate.
-Practitioners of Hirameku gain the ability to perceive and follow movements that would escape even a Taijutsu Master.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. I can't approve this.

 

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(Kādokōdinēshon) Card Coordination

Type: Kadojutsu (Ninjutsu)

Background:
The 'LonelyAssassin' had a thing for playing cards and thought he could put it to good use to use them as a weapon. He perfected channeling chakra into them and making techniques using them for offense and defense.
Chakra focused into the cards made them stronger to use, as they are only normal playing cards.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

The Cards can be replaced with Kunai and Shuriken in techniques, so for example the technique :

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A simple technique that when the users hands are clapped together, wind is compressed and transformed into a powerful gale. This technique, when used as an isolated attack has the power to easily knock over a human. Though the true value comes from using it together with projectile weapons like shuriken or kunai. Their speed, power, and ability to wound or even kill are all increased several times.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.

They use kunai or shuriken in the technique, so instead of the shuriken and Kunai, cards can be used instead. Anyone who it taught to use this Fighting Style have cards in special holders so that the cards can easily be drawn from them on a belt or where ever they desire to put them.

Cards when used in Techniques are normally used in groups to make the technique more effective, normally the more cards used, the more powerful it is(more cuts or slashes and are deeper actually to be more accurate). The Cards can be used well with Wind Style Jutsu's to increase speed and power, but can backfire if used recklessly.

Example Techniques:

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(Sutorētofurasshu) Straight Flush
Rank : C
Type : Attack
Range : Short - Long
Chakra Cost : 15
Damage Points : 30
Description : The user grabs some cards and release them towards their target. The cards when thrown are not like kunais but cut still cut through human flesh with the right throw and power behind it.

(52 Kādo) 52 Card
Rank : B
Type : Attack
Range : Short - Mid
Chakra Cost : 20
Damage Points : 40
Description : The user releases a whole deck of cards. The user throws each card one by one or four cards per hand. The cards can slash through human skin but only two inches.

(Dangan no ēsu) Bullet Aces
Rank : A
Type : Attack
Range : Short - Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description :
The User takes two cards in each hand, he throws the two cards like shuriken in which they spin with great power, when the two cards hit the opponent it sends them flying back. You could use this with a wind release tech Great Vacuum Cannon to increase speed and power of the card.

Additional Effects and Restrictions:
- The Cards are normal Gear, Like Kunai and Shuriken without their cutting ability
-Cards can be used as Explosive Tags if they have the explosive tag symbol on them.
-The user gain with this style faster throwing speed and power then a normal taijutsu user or weapon user.
-The cards can cut as far as five inches of human skin and at less a inch in a tree.
-Cards can be infused with chakra but they are nothing but normal cards, though with the right chakra control can make it have an aura increasing its lethal attack power by two inches.

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[Bloo]

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Shéng Biāo Geijutsu - Rope Dart Arts
Type:Nin/Ken/Other
Background:
On his many journeys across the ninja world Bloo found a quite little village tucked away in a place long forgotten. As he was staying in the village he noticed that the kids were playing with what looked like a kunai on a string. He watched then as they twirled and whipped the thing around. He then started brainstorming that maybe he could turn this into a fighting style. So he sat out making the weapon combat ready. He replaced the kunai with a streamlined dart. He replaced the string with a braided rope. This became the basis of which all rope darts were created from.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Shéng Biāo Geijutsu is the usage of a rope dart to attack, defense, or to supplement. The rope dart can just be carried in a ninja pouch or it can be concealed under clothes by wrapping the rope around the arm, which also lets the user use the rope dart quicker as it is can be sent out with just a flick of the hand. The rope at most will only be able to reach up to mid range any farther and the dart won't have enough power.The basics of this style is using your chakra to increase the speed, accuracy, power and to control the rope itself. The advanced form of this style is channeling your elemental chakra into the rope and the dart head. The masters of this still can follow and react to the rope dart no matter how fast it moves.


Example Techniques:

Rope Dart Arts: Gatling gun.

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short:
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
This is the most basic of all the Shéng Biāo Geijutsu techniques. The user will first channel there chakra into there rope dart and then extend and retract there rope up to four times. The chakra in the rope will speed up the rope dart leaving afterimages making it look like all four hits happen at the same time.

-Usable three times a battle

Rope Dart Arts: Around the World

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Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
One of the more advanced techniques of Shéng Biāo Geijutsu. The user while welding there rope dart will start to spin it, either in front of them or above them. As the user user is spinning their rope dart they will then channel their elemental chakra into it, creating a shield of whatever elemental chakra they infused into it. Can block attacks with in reason.

-Only one element at a time
-Useable two times a battle.

Rope Dart Arts: Get Over Here!

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Rank: C
Type: Defense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description:
The user while there rope dart is concealed under there clothes will channel their chakra to there rope dart and thrust their hand forward shooting out the rope dart with tremendous speed and accuracy. The rope dart will lodge into or wrap around the opponent. The user with then pull on the rope jerking the opponent towards the user.

-Usable as long as the user has a concealed rope dart.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must be sannin to learn.
-Must state you have a rope dart on your bio.
Can have up to three rope darts on the bio - Two concealed rope darts and one in there pouch.
-Masters of this style have greater perception due to them having to follow the dart.
-Masters of this style have a greater reaction speed due to the being able to the movements of the rope.

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[Venus]

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Kyu Doragon Jutsu | Nine Arts Dragon
Type: Nin-taijutsu
Background:
The origin of Nine Atrs Dragon Style was created from a small group of Uchiha members who were outcast from the clan and shunned for having such aggressive emotions that effected their taijutsu skills. There were nine members in total that all had a similar style, it was aggresive, explosive and precise. Instead of perfecting their katon skills like the rest of the followers of the Uchiha clan, these specific nine entities chose to go down the path of raiton. Because they prefered and took a natural obsession for this certain element, they began to use it as an extension of their taijutsu. Constantly manipulating and gathering small amounts of raiton chakra, channeling it to certain areas of the body and release it in an explosive manner to increase speed, strength and precision. They all taught their own individual style to a child that was later born (The child of the first outcast) who had a raw talent for taijutsu and grew up purely using raiton chakra. The child became a prodigy among the nine and had fused all their similar styles together to form a perfected style, he was given the title Nine Arts Dragon. Nine Arts Dragon style has been handed down through the bloodline of the original Nine Arts Dragon.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The idea of this style is to release raiton chakra in small explosive bursts to speed up movement, increase force. The precision would be increased due to the speed boost. The user would channel raiton into the elbow and release it as they punch the opponent. The explosive burst would propel the users arm from behind as they're punching, this would vastly increase the speed of the attack. The same principle would work in the leg by creating the burst from the heel instead of the elbow. Though the main idea is to use these small bursts so precisely that they can execute vital movements with enhanced speed and power. The style is not fully based on purely attacking, the small bursts can be used to evade quickly even if it's only a small distance or defensive arts even though it's a style based on aggression .

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A punch would look something similar to this. The burst or explosion look that is just above the boys head is what the burst of raiton chakra would look like. Though it looks like this person has missed the actual attack (sorry, irrelevant).

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Example Techniques:

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Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user proceeds to punch the opponent, but before he does, he releases a small burst of raiton chakra from his elbow that speeds up the attack.

• Can only be used 3 times per battle
• Has a 1 turn cool down time

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Before the opponent connects with an attack, the user will release a burst of raiton chakra from the point of connection. The burst is not a powerful blast and is not enough to throw the user off balance though if attacked directly after releasing the small burst could aid the opponent into throwing the users balance off if done correctly.

• D rank and lower are nullified without the user taking damage.
• B and C rank attacks from the opponent are lowered by 15
• A-Rank is lowered by 10
• Will not work against S-Rank
• Only works on physical assaults
• Can only be used 3 times per battle
• Has a 1 turn cool down time

Additional effects and Restrictions:

• All submitted attacks are required to have a cool down rate for either the attack or limb. These after effects will be added when the custom is created.
• You must be Uchiha to learn Nine Arts Dragon Style
• You must have Mastered Raiton
• Can only be taught if approved by the original creator, Link.

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[BusinessManTeno]

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Yakekoge Gigei | Fiery Arts
Type:
NinTaijutsu
Background:
Fiery Scorch Arts was created by a simple Scorch KG user from Suna who originated to Konoha. He traveled all across the world with a book on his Scorch Clan, The source of where their power came from, How it originates, and how to further use that power. He then started practicing the art of his scorch KG to master it. As he mastered it he realize that his KG can be used as more than just whats wrote down in the history books about his clan. He then went fourth to learn how to utilize scorch chakra all throughout his body, Transfer his scorch chakra into objects, and even in some cases further the power of Wind/Fire combos thus making Fiery Arts.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Fiery Arts is a style of mainly Taijutsu but is used secondary for other uses. The user will channel scorch chakra to their hands and/or feet. Thus giving them a bright yellowish glow around the body part they channeled scorch chakra to. Due to the user mastering their Scorch KG they can withstand the heat and keep it active for as long as they please. The User main objective is to land blows on the opponent draining the water out of their body and causing burns to their body. The special thing about this is that it dont only affects the water in the opponents body But their Water chakra, draining that also. It dosent affect it much but getting punched several times with scorch infused hands will eventually disable you from using Water jutsus up to a certain rank. Seeing as the Scorch KG is pretty much heatwaves in physically form. The user can punch the air as their hands are enveloped in scorch sending heatwaves towards the opponent, severely heating up the air around them. Anoter other way to use Fiery Arts is to channel their Scorch chakra into an object. (Kunai, Shurkien, Shied, Sword,. Etc. Anything solid). The user will of course channel their scorch chakra onto the object making it spread around the object. Giving it a Scorch like quality not affecting the object itself but more so giving it a layer of armor. If I coat a sword with Scorch chakra, I could land an attack on the opponent. If the attack is landed, the scorch coated on the sword would of course not only deal a cut but give the opponent a massive burn on the cut. A Kunai/shuriken coated in scorch would increase the speed and the destructive property (due to the Wind and Fire). And the most basic, Wind/Fire Combos. Seeing As Scorch is Wind and Fire. It can be used to strengthen wind and fire as a combination by adding scorch chakra to the combo increasing the damage by the combo

Jutsu Examples

Fiery Envelope

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short (Heatwaves are up to Mid range)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user will coat their arms/legs in Scorch chakra. This is not a jutsu but an activation. The user can then strike the opponent as many times as they want. With every strike to the opponents body the opponent water in their body and their water chakra will drain everytime .On top of giving them harsh burns. If the opponent gets hit more then 5 times the opponent will start to get drowsy also making them able to only use S rank water jutsus and below for two turns. If they get hit more then 7 times It will cause the opponent to suffer from slight Fatigue causing the opponent to only Use 2 Jutsus at a time for that one turn. More than 9 strikes They will only be able to use A Rank water and below... 11 strikes B rank and below. Etc. This is not a jutsu as i said before but an activation and can be activated at will and un activated at will. This can also be used if the user punches the air as their hands are coated, A heat wave will travel up to mid range heating the air up causing the oppenent to choke for a short period of time (about 3 seconds) due to sudden heat they breathe in (Its a fact people cant breathe well in heat) Only downfall about this technique is.. The user is not able to use any jutsus besides scorch jutsu while activated.

Fiery Coating

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Type: Sup/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra:25
Damage: N/a (Depending on the weapon)
Description: The user will infuse scorch onto an object. If the user coats a sword in scorch, The sword will get a more Hot and destructive edge to it. Causing massive burns upon impact. Coating a kunai/shuriken can be used to add more speed and power to it (Fire and Wind chakra). If i was to create a huge Shuriken (Like the one itachi made) and infuse it With Scorch it can be used to throw at Water jutsus (Up to A rank) and Evaporate the water jutsu and have the shuriken continue on its regular course

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-One Must Have Mastered Scorch KG
-One Must Have a scorch bio and held it for up to 3months
-One Must have Mastered Fire & Wind
-One Must have started in Taijutsu

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[Korra.]

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Shi No Gensō| Death's Illusions
Type: Genjutsu
Background: Korra after joining Taka and Amegakure started learning to be more of a villain instead of good. She then journey onto find her true dark self while fighting to survive. When she got back to her lab in Takigakure she discovered herself interested in Genjutsu and the Grim Reaper Death himself. She started creating illusions based on Death and fear. She tried this on her villages in Takigakure and saw how illusions were more intense and darker the normal genjutsu. This experiment created Korra's genjutsu Death Illusions.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user of this style creates illusions that are more darker and based on fear while involving the Grim Reaper. The user creates illusions that creates Death and minions of his to cause dramatic stress on the opponents mind causing either immobilization, the opponents loosing unconscious, mind stress to where they do not know if they really did see Death or not. The user creates the these illusions by using their dark emotions and killing intentions to take over their thoughts to enable them to create the dark illusions. For this to happen the user must use a jutsu to access their dark emotions and allow them to take over their mind.
Example Techniques:

(Shi No Gensō : Shi No U~Iru) Death's Illusion: Death's Will

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Rank : C
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 15
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user clears their mind and allows their dark emotions and killing intentions to take over their mind. Their eyes turn to pure black and the user gains access to use the style Death's Illusion.
Note: Remains active for 5 turns.
Note: Must be taught by Korra

(Shi No Gensō : Shi No Hanten Sekai) Death's Illusion: Death's Inverted World

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Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Supplementary
Range : Short- Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user will trap the opponent in a genjutsu where the opponent will see them self in a world that is darken and everything is destroyed completely. The opponent will then see Death and his demons appear in front of them and reaching out to grab them. When they grab the opponent this will cause stress to their mind and cause them to be immobilized to the point where they barely can move their arms. In reality the opponent is standing still and then collapse while the user there watching or getting ready to attack.
Note: Must be taught by Korra
Note: Usable 4 times a match.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Must have master Genjutsu
- Must be taught by Kōrra
- The User ,after learning this style, personality becomes more darker and their killing intentions are more increased and darker then they were before.
- If the User uses Death's Illusions they can't use normal genjutsu the same or next round.


Note: When I say Killing Intentions/Intent I mean the thoughts of killing not the jutsu xD

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‡ Declined ‡ This is not a cfs as it has no taijutsu or close combat orientated nature.

 

[Yashiro]

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Chaini-zu Butoku: Chinese Martial Arts

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Type: Taijutsu

Background: The genesis of Chinese martial arts has been attributed to the need for self-defense, hunting techniques and military training in ancient China. Hand-to-hand combat and weapons practice were important in training ancient Chinese soldiers.

Detailed knowledge about the state and development of Chinese martial arts becomes available from the Nanjing Decade (1928–1937), as the Central Guoshu Institute established by the Kuomintang regime made an effort to compile an encyclopedic survey of martial arts schools. Since the 1950s, the People's Republic of China has organized Chinese martial arts as an exhibition and full-contact sport under the heading of Wushu.

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Description on the abilities and inner workings of the style:The Basics (基本功) are a vital part of any martial training, as a student cannot progress to the more advanced stages without them; Basics are usually made up of rudimentary techniques, conditioning exercises, including stances. Basic training may involve simple movements that are performed repeatedly; other examples of basic training are stretching, meditation, striking, throwing, or jumping. Without strong and flexible muscles, management of Qi or breath, and proper body mechanics, it is impossible for a student to progress in the Chinese martial arts. A common saying concerning basic training in Chinese martial arts is as follows:

内外相合，外重手眼身法步，内修心神意氣力。

, which translates as:

Train both Internal and External.

External training includes the hands, the eyes, the body and stances.

Internal training includes the heart, the spirit, the mind, breathing and strength.

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Example Techniques:

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(Ikatsui Kerosu No Jutsu)- Grim Cross Technique

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user first attacks with two ordinary attacks to the sides of the opponent, then finishes with a heavy blow to the stomach.

(Kuroi Doragon Sumasshu)- Black Dragon Smash

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user first strikes with a direct palm strikke to the opponents chest, following by pulling the opponent forward by the arms and then stiking him/her with a open palm uppercut to the chin.

Additional effects and restrictions:
- Those who has mastered the Chinese martial arts generally become great chakra controllers for this fighting style itself requires good chakra control to master.
- This Fighting style is a special form of taijutsu.
- Using this fighting style gives the user the ability to fight under any circumstances as long as their mind is clear to their objectives.
- Using this fighting style excessively could also result in severe exhaustion and minor brain damage.

-This CFS can only be taught by -Yashiro- and those who have mastered it and gotten the permission from Yashiro to teach it.

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±± Declined ±± This is not a CFS.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

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Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
Type: KatonKenjutsu
Background:

A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, wielding two blades. However in one night, during a siege, Kratos blinded by his blood-thirst, murdered his wife and child.

Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withhold it's power. That someone, would wield the Godly strength of Kratos.


Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach, allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The Blades of Exile can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration). When the user does a technique like Plume of Prometheus, the user's final movement is a release of fire chakra from through the blade, causing an explosion with the blades being the epicenter (Short Range).

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Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
Type: Supplementry
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Close
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.

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Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.

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Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

Ideas for future usage (Just Pictures):

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Additional effects and Restrictions:

+ The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
+ User is more agile.
+User's Fire Manipulation is improved
-User must be Kage ranked to learn
-Must master Fire Release
- The User's handseals speed is decreased.
- Must have 3 training sessions to master it.


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±± Declined ±± Fire manipulation is improved how and what does that mean? Why is the user more agile? Why is he physically stronger than an average ninja? Also, do you have a CW of twin swords with chains that can be used for this? Because, such a degree of power and infusion of fire would mean that you need a weapon made specifically for this cfs with abilities to endure it. Still, this is a bit...hum...generic and too shallow. Your swinging 2 blades attached to chains and infusing them with fire...ok...but that needs a bit more development.

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Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
Type: KatonKenjutsu
Background:

A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, wielding two blades. However in one night, during a siege, Kratos blinded by his blood-thirst, murdered his wife and child.

Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withhold it's power. That someone, would wield the Godly strength of Kratos.


Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach, allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The Blades of Exile can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration). When the user does a technique like Plume of Prometheus, the user's final movement is a release of fire chakra from through the blade, causing an explosion with the blades being the epicenter (Short Range). The user's flexibility increases from training in the use of this style. Since this style in un-orthodox, the user had to go through vigorous training and the body had to adapt and tone the muscle in certain areas to be able to use this style fluently. The style is more of a windmill kind of motion using style with various mixing up of movements (Like crisscrossing arms) to allow the style to flow and continuity of the movements of combos to be precise. The user's physical strength will be greater than the average ninja because again, of the training the user had to undergo to use this style properly. The user can't just flail the swords around, which would be futile. But the user has to swing the swords with sufficient force to be able to do the desired effect. Medium force to decapitate an enemy cleanly. Hard force to slice an earth technique cleanly. With the adding of the fire chakra, damage down to the blades are kept to a minimum as the fire acts as a defense (Cushioning the blades) and an offense (Increasing impact damage and radius).

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Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
Type: Supplementry
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Close
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.

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Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.

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Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

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Additional effects and Restrictions:

+ The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
+ User is more agile.
-The user must state in their bio that they have twin blades with chains. These blades are not a CW and do not have any other effect/abilities outside this style.
-User must be Kage ranked to learn
-Must master Fire Release
- The User's handseals speed is decreased.
- Must have 3 training sessions to master it.


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‡ Declined ‡ As previously stated, standard weapons will not endure the nature of this style, you must either make a CW of these twin blades or remove the fiery and explosive nature of the attacks

 

[BusinessManTeno]

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(tsume gigei) Claw Arts
Type:
Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Background:
This art was founded by great men who wanted to extend their taijutsu abilitites. It was studied through the growing nails of the 2tails jin from kumo ninja. They realized that it was very hard to gain features similar to that jin, so they thought of multiple ways and several attempts, though each attempt failed they finally thought of something. One medical ninja suggested that iron claws can be implanted in the hand between the knuckles. After the suggestion was made the medical ninja preformed the surgery implanted the sharp iron claws into the patients hands between the knuckles.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This art is very unique, by using the claws it cause more damage to the opponent, and by several means the claws can be infused with several elements to cause more damage. Its done by inserting 3 12 inch sharp iron claws into the user hands via surgery (Must update bio and in the history must mention the surgery) The claws would emit from the user hands in 3 holes created by the surgeon. Once done, by using their chakra the user can push out their claws, or push back in their claws by a simple chakra movement.

Example Techniques:
(Tsume gigei:Katon Tsume) Claw Arts: Fire Claw

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Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description: The user will emit their iron claws and channel fire chakra into them. The claws will then ignite into fire looking like fire claws. Once thats done the user will then deal several slashes with the fire claw causing several burns and cuts to the opponents body if the attack is succesfull.

(Tsume gigei:kousa tsume) Claw Arts: Cross Claws

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user will emit their claws from their hands and coat them in wind chakra. The user will then swing both of their hands back to back, emitting a huge sharp gust of wind in the shape of 2 claws towards the opponent.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
:Note: Must state in bio that you had surgery to get the claws. If not the CFS is voided to that person until done so
:Note: Must have started in taijutsu
:Note: The claws can only be broke by Very hard material (E.I, Diamond, S Rank Earth, and anything plausible)
:Note: Only taught by teno

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‡ Declined ‡ overall needs more explanation, and I am not inclined to approve CFS that require surgery without an explanation as to how you go about it, and also it would be nice of you to talk to me in private about going about this as it would require me to personally perform this surgery

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 PS  I concur with Vincent's original check. If you want something like this, you need to explain why the surgery is needed, what it would entail, how the claws would be implanted, how they would go in and out, how you can preserve motion in your hands, how you'd avoid ripping your hands out when these claws hit something, etc etc. And in the end, there are already 2 or 3 cw which are essentially this. I'll allow you a try to tweak this and get it resubmitted to be rechecked though. Perhaps you can make it something feasible and unique.

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[Erzo]

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Mirāju Geijutsu: Mirage Arts

Type:
NinTaijutsu

Background:
A fighting style developed from something Roy had experienced during a cold night within the Iwagakure tavern. After a couple of hours of drinking, Roy started seeing mirages of the same people, seeing them multiplied and all hazy.
After waking up, the next day, he realized he could use mirages as a form of attacking and defending during battle.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

Mirage Arts allows the user to make it look as if their movements were so fast, they left an after image/mirage, where there are white streaks which show the movement that the opponent made. However, the true secret in this art lies within those ‘mirages’ as they are the true means of attacking.

The user would release his chakra whilst performing movements with either a weapon or his hands and use them to create a mirage in the shape which his movements were made of, the user would then go on to add an elemental chakra into those mirages to give them abilities which are able to Cut/Pierce (Wind), Shock (Lightning), Burn (Fire), Cause physical pain, cuts and depending on how fast the opponent is moving when he/she runs into them, knock unconscious (Earth) and lastly create a crushing/cutting effect or attempt to drown an opponent (Water), since the mirages stay there for the turn, it allows the user to create an attack which remains until it has come into contact with something which neutralizes it or until the turn has ended.

Furthermore, the user is able to move the 'streaks' created after their formation in an attempt to bind things together or (when chakra is channeled into them) in order to make the streaks bind together, slicing or crushing anything that may be trapped within them. An example of this would be creating two vertical lines and two horizontal lines which intersect with each other, the user can then channel his chakra into the chakra mirages and cause them all to attach to each other, creating a square shape with no square gaps/holes. This is a passive ability and requires no jutsu.

(Mirāju geijutsu: Suji) - Mirage Arts: Streaks

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Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user would perform fast hand movements in the area in front of them, creating up to 5 vertical lines of chakra will can be made anyway the users choose (Vertically, horizontally, diagonally etc) which cover the area directly in front of them, from head to lower chest area before channeling a specific chakra nature into that streak. This jutsu is used to protect the user from fast taijutsu attacks or close range enemies who are running towards the user or are in close proximity. Should the opponent touch the streaks, the following things will take place depending on the chakra type channeled into them:
Fire: The body part of the opponent which touched the streak will suddenly be engulfed in flames which burn viciously.
Water: The Water will surround the body part and attempt to crush it due to it’s pressure.
Wind: An outburst of sharp, piercing wind will be released, piercing and cutting all in front of it.
Earth: Sharp spikes will be formed, cutting deeply into the opponent.
Lightning: The opponent will get shocked and the body part which touched the streak will be paralysed for 2 turns.

(Mirāju geijutsu: Kūchū Seigyo) - Mirage Arts: Aerial Control

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Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user allows a sudden surge of chakra travels from his body and outwards into mid range from his position, to create long chakra ‘ropes’ of chakra which have a length of 5 meters. These chakra ‘ropes’ are flexible and act like normal ropes, allowing the user to swing or slash with them or simply leave them in one place, in an attempt to strike or trap the opponent later in the battle. Without the addition of elemental chakra, the ropes remain the same rank and have the ability to restrain and attack the opponent as normal ropes which chakra channeled into them, however, when elemental chakra is channeled into them, the following effects take place:
Fire: The body part of the opponent which touched the streak will suddenly be engulfed in flames which burn viciously.
Water: The Water will surround the body part and attempt to crush it due to it’s pressure.
Wind: An outburst of sharp, piercing wind will be released, piercing and cutting all in front of it.
Earth: Sharp spikes will be formed, cutting deeply into the opponent.
Lightning: The opponent will get shocked and the body part which touched the streak will be paralysed for 2 turns.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

- Those with affinities to the elements they use to create these mirages can perform them faster than those who don’t.

- Chakra ‘Streaks’ created can remain until destroyed or until the user adds his chakra into them in which case they only last one turn (the turn the chakra type is channeled into them).

- Users taijutsu gets faster (only hand movements, not strength or movement of anything else), due to the excessive training which comes from Mirage arts, as hand movements are sometimes necessary to create the ‘streaks’ of chakra

- Must have started taijutsu training.

- Must have started Ninjutsu training.

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‡ Declined ‡ This needs more work to make it approvable as a fighting style, as at the moment this can be achieved via a custom technique, and does not warrant a full fighting style

 

[Flash]

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Snake Style (Sunēku· ātsu)

Type: GenKuchiyoseTaijutsu

Background: Often Orochimaru has been shown using snakes from his sleeves to effectively fight in a taijutsu/close range fights. Snakes, if used properly can prove to be the most dangerous weapon in the battle. Shinobis have been using snakes for a long time. When facing opponents who use strong and sharp weapons, ninjas who used this style of fighting felt a bit restricted. This made them research further on their snakes, and make them able to cast genjutsu by both normal means and also by their bite. This gave rise to a new style of fighting. Snake Style.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This type of fighting style focuses around emitting chakra through summons which, unknown to the opponent, enters their body and puts them under an illusion. The Snake Style can cause both physical as well as mental damage. Just like the bugs of Aburame, these snakes feed on the user's chakra to improve their efficiency in the usage of genjutsu. Once fed by the user's chakra, the snakes start emitting this chakra from their body which makes the opponents fall into an illusion. While close range, exposure to the snakes put them under minor illusions, the snakes on biting the opponents put them under illusions far more stronger and difficult to free from.
Note: The pain caused by the snake bite is always less that of what it takes to get out of the genjutsu.


Examples:
Jutsu 1

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Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user extends 4 large snakes from each hand from his sleeves that bite the opponent on his extended limb(s). If the opponent is successfully bitten by the snakes, he'd see himself sweating profusely, poison start circulating throughout his body as he'd feel week and in two turns, he'd be on the ground unable to handle the illusion as he'd think he's actually been poisoned. If the opponent closely misses the the snakes, he'd be put in an illusion where he'd feel tired as he'd start sweating mildly. Over a period of time, he'll get tired. Every 2 turns, he'll lose the speed by one rank.

Jutsu 2

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Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user extends 4 large snakes from each hand from his sleeves that jump at the opponent and bite them. If the opponent is successfully bitten by the snakes, he'd see his hands slowly melting, making him wince in pain. Slowly the disease would spread across all over his body and ultimately he'd die. When in reality the opponent stays paralysed on stop, being open for any attack. If the opponent closely misses the the snakes, he'd be put in an illusion where he'd feel his hands burning. The heat would make it impossible for him to fight effectively as he'd start sweating mildly. Over a period of time, he'll see his flesh shown as he'd be moaning in pain.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Masters of this style have increased reaction, stronger genjutsus and increased stamina
-Must be atleast a Sanin to learn
-Should've mastered Genjutsu.
-Should have snake summoning.
-The general rule of 4 turns per summon is not applicable here.
-When using this style, the user cannot use summons from his other contract.
-Can only be taught by Masters of this style, after consulting Flash.

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[Cursed Prince]

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Kijo Hantingu (Witch Hunting)
Type: Nin-Kenjutsu/Other
Background: CFS "Witch Hunting" Was created by a skilled kunoichi known as Maka. She was a skilled user with a scythe, but sought to create a more powerful style involving scythes. She developed a technique where she first created a clone, then changed it into a scythe. From there, she would insert chakra to the scythe and it would then amplify it, using it's own chakra, increasing the size and power of the scythe. Upon having the clone active for a while, it developed it's own personality. It changed it's appearance and even gave itself a name, Soul. "It" became a "he" and he soon became very different from Maka, their personalities becoming totally opposite. It even learned some ninjutsu [Something Simlair is shown in Naruto Shippuden Episode 203, "Revenge of the Shadow Clones"] They started using this technique to hunt down witches and execute them.sd
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

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Users of this style have a "clone" that resides in the users body, but only if the user chooses to. The user and the "clone" go through many years of training to achieve mastery of this. As stated in the Background, the clone starts developing it's own personality and look, even comes up with it's own name. The basis of this style is that by the user and the "clone", using shape manipulation and an improved version of the transformation technique, the clone turns itself into a scythe. It can change into a scythe at will, even able to turn just one part of his body into a scythe. The "clone" in Scythe mode is just as hard as any regular metal scythe. The true power of this technique though, is when the power of the scythe is infused with the user's own chakra, and the clone amplifies the chakra and strengthening it with it's own chakra. The clone then uses the chakra to increase the size and sharpness of the blade, and making it glow a bright white. The blade is reminiscent of a crescent moon. The blade is then used to make extremely powerful attacks on the opponent. These attacks can be strengthened by elemental techniques.
Example Techniques:

Kijo Hantingu: Gai mo-do (Witch Hunting: Scythe Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A [Standard attacks from the scythe is 10]
Description: The base technique for Kijo Hantingu, this allows the clone to turn itself into a scythe with a long handle and a sharp blade, using a much improved version of the transformation technique, in which the clone user his chakra to harden his body so that he can be used just as a regular scythe. Most techniques require the "clone" to be in this mode

Kijo Hantingu:Reikon (Witch Hunting: Soul)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 [None for Masters/Specialist in this CFS]
Damage: N/A
Description:
Another neccesity to perform Kijo Hantingu techniques, the user must perform 3 handseals to bring out their "clone" These clones usually look different from their user and have their own personality.
-Masters/Specialist of this technique have this passively active and can suck in/ bring out the "clone" without any handseals
-"Clone" Can use up to B-rank elemental ninjutsu

Kijo Hantingu: Wangetsu Tsuki (Witch Hunting: Crescent Moon)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 [+10 per Turn] [None + Per Turn For Specialists in this technique]
Damage: N/A
Description:
The last and final necessity to use Kijo Hantingu, the user inserts chakra into the "clone" in scythe mode, and the "clone" amplify's it and strengthens it with it's own chakra, and uses this chakra to increase the size of the blade. It makes the blade look reminescent of a crescent moon and has a bright, whitish glow, and make it much more powerful with the use of chakra
-This technique lasts for 5 turns at a time

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How it looks

Kijo Hantingu: Kakushu Tsuki (Witch Hunting: Beheading Moon)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user take his scythe takes his scythe while in Wangetsu Tsuki Mode, then wielding it with one hand, does a devastating powerful and quick 360 degree swing with such force that is cause a blast of wind to emit from it, that can easily cut an opponent in half, and in extreme situations, can be used to protect the user from an ninjutsu attack
-Can only be used if the scythe in Broken Moon or Crescent Moon Mode

Kijo Hantingu:Togiretogire Tsuki (Witch Hunting: Broken Moon)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 [+20 Per Turn Kept Active]
Damage: N/A [+20 to all Kijo Hantingu CFS techniques]
Description:
An even more powered up version of Kijo Hantingu:Togiretogire Tsubaki (Witch Hunting: Broken Moon) the user adds even more chakra to the blade, and the blade amplify's it, making the blade even bigger and making it look like an angry moon. This greatly increases the sharpness and power of the scythe. The blade glows even brighter and casts a strong light up to short range
-Lasts for 3 turns
-Can only be used by bio's that specialize in Kijo Hantingu

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How It looks^^

Kijo Hantingu: Gai Ryouga Tosu (Witch Hunting: Scythe Superior Toss)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user, while having his scythe in Crescent Moon Mode, spins their Scythe until the point that it becomes a blur, then throw it at the opponent either sideways (like a Shuriken) Or straight up (Like a Kunai) Due to the immense speed and the power the spinning gives to the scythe, this jutsu is extremely powerful, but the spin loses it's power after going 15 meters and it's power decreases to A-rank
- Can only be used if scythe is in Crescent Moon or Broken Moon Mode

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Can only be taught/used by Cursed Prince
-User must have mastered Kenjutsu
-Specialists in this CFS get a boost in strength, to be able to easily handle the scythe. They also get a boost in speed, because all the years they've been training with the scythe allows them to move faster when the scythe isn't out

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[Vincent]

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[Akuma]

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[Denbuki] - Lightning Regalia Arts

Type: Nin-taijutsu

Background: After allying himself with Kumogakure, the village hidden within the clouds; Loki developed a unique fighting style using sharp-wire within an armor he created to improved and use more freely said steel wires. He named it, the Lightning Regalia. It is said that Loki defeated and also trained several years to improve the fighting style he had developed, making it stronger and more accessible to use, without much effort put into it, as he required on his first days of using it. Loki has also learned to move freely while wearing the amor where the regalia works from. Wearing it every day in every fight, so much that his speed is no longer decreased by it nor is his overall agility and movements.

Skill levels of the style:

Creator (created the style)
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Master (Knows Denbuki)
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User (Knows basic techniques)
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Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)​

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Lightning Regalia is unique and a full body Regalia (armor). Apart from his neck and head, the user's whole body is encased in the regalia (armor). The user specializes in manipulating electricity, allowing him to create powerful electric attacks with his wire system built into the Thunder Regalia, even if he doesn't need his Regalia "armor" to create powerful electric attacks. The user's Regalia is also very heavy, enough to create a small crater in the ground when he jumps down. However, after 2 weeks of wearing it (on the bio) the user get's used to the extra-weight and his body goes back to it's basic speed. The user also showcases an armorless version of the Regalia. He retains the gauntlets (wich have long claws of steel) and lower portion of the armor, but the top is replaced with a three-pronged wire mechanism on his back. This form appears to be significantly lighter than the armor form, and the user has no difficulty in keeping up with taijutsu specialist(s) during battle. The armor is sufficient enough to block regular weapons without recieving even a scratch and can block C ranked and below techniques within reason with ease aswell as B rank and lower tai. The wire not only serve for long range assaults, but also for melee and close combat techniques, making it perfect for close combat aswell.

The main style that is enabled for the users is to be able to freely release razor sharp steel wires that aren't too thick from the regaila (armor) from the multiple spinning disks that work liike corkscrews and are activated and made to slide out of the armor. These wires can reach long distances and are control by meerly chakra control and thoughts alone. The wires are hard to spot by the naked eye, but due to them being infused all the time (when in use) with the user's chakra, they are able to be seen/spoted/sensed by Dojutsu or sensor users, or any other ability/KG that grants the user chakra dection of sorts. The lightning element can be channeled through the wires, not only making them even more sharp (even though their regular state can slive human skin with ease) and also introduce shocks onto the opponent. The said 'disks' the restrain and release the wires are a totall of 23. 4 are located on each arm or the armor; 1 above the palm, 1 to the side of the arm, 1 a bit above the wrist, and the 4th one on the shoulder(on each leg respectively). 5 for each leg, 1 on the shin, 1 on the foot, 1 on the leg, and the 5th one a bit below the waist (on each leg respectively). That makes up 18 of the 23, 2 others are on each side of the chest. And the last 3 are location on the back, on a vertical pattern above the spine. All of these are hidden within the armor, and are 'activated' by the user's will, sliding out of the armor into their respective locations, each able to release a long amount of wire that runs across the entire armor. The edges of the wire are highly sharp, enough to pierce a few inches (3) the human body. Aside fom releasing wire respectively, the user can manipulate the disks to work in conjuction; by releasing wire from several of them and them attaching the edges with chakra alone to surround and/or grab hold of the opponent, of course, this can be done with single wire(s) but it's more efficient for combinations and such. The user can also release wire into the ground in order to surprise the opponent from below. By putting in 'reverse' the disks, the user is able to make the disks retreat the wire back into them aswell, of course, this can help to drag opponents towards the user aswell, however, it takes atleast 2 wires (disks) to pull or move around 1 standard human.

Example Techniques:

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(Denbuki: Atmosue) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Atmosphere Max
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Once his desired target is completely entangled by his wires, the user generates a large surge of electricity from his Regalia (equivalent to B rank lightning) and sends it through the wires, essentially cooking the afflicted enemy. The speed in wich lightning travels should be around 2 seconds to reach it's destination, making it extremely hard to avoid once the target is entangled.

(Denbuki: Kitou) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Fangs
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and has them release the wires, releasing a suited amount of wire and them gathering and compressing the wires into a single medium sized blade on each arm with great sharps, wich can be infused with lightning to improve their overall prowess. Each blade called 'Fang' has the length of 2 feet and wich of 3 inches.

(Denbuki: Kirune) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Tornado
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and the 5 wire disks on each leg respectively. Then, after jumping towards or above the opponent, the user manipulates the wire released from all 9 disks to spin around him in form of a sharp tornado, with the sharp tip pointing towards the target. Then the user will impale and rip through the opponent's body. The user is able to coat this 'tornado' in lightning to improve its strength.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- May only be taught by Loki
- The user must have Lightning complete and be atleast Sannin rank to learn Lightning Regalia arts.
- After two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed can be compared to Lee without weights, but not faster; without the Lightning Regalia on them or with the armorless version of the Regalia (no top armor).
- The first two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed is slightly decreased, by -2.
- Users become more vunerable to Lightning based techniques when wearing the Lightning Regalia.
- With the Lightning Regalia on, the user's Taijutsu techniques gain more strength behind them (+5), however this is after the first two weeks with the Regalia. Due to the improved speed and the extra strength grated by the Regalia.
- The user can only use/manipulate the wire disks on their arms in the first 2 weeks of practicing the Lightning Regalia arts. After that, they are able to use and manipulate all of them with ease.

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‡ Declined ‡ Tone down the armour massively and explain how it is realistic in the narutoverse

 

[Venus]

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Kyu Doragon Jutsu | Nine Arts Dragon
Type: Nin-taijutsu
Background:
The origin of Nine Atrs Dragon Style was created from a small group of Uchiha members who were outcast from the clan and shunned for having such aggressive emotions that effected their taijutsu skills. There were nine members in total that all had a similar style, it was aggresive, explosive and precise. Instead of perfecting their katon skills like the rest of the followers of the Uchiha clan, these specific nine entities chose to go down the path of raiton. Because they prefered and took a natural obsession for this certain element, they began to use it as an extension of their taijutsu. Constantly manipulating and gathering small amounts of raiton chakra, channeling it to certain areas of the body and release it in an explosive manner to increase speed, strength and precision. They all taught their own individual style to a child that was later born (The child of the first outcast) who had a raw talent for taijutsu and grew up purely using raiton chakra. The child became a prodigy among the nine and had fused all their similar styles together to form a perfected style, he was given the title Nine Arts Dragon. Nine Arts Dragon style has been handed down through the bloodline of the original Nine Arts Dragon.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The idea of this style is to release raiton chakra in small explosive bursts to speed up movement, increase force. The precision would be increased due to the speed boost. The user would channel raiton into the elbow and release it as they punch the opponent. The explosive burst would propel the users arm from behind as they're punching, this would vastly increase the speed of the attack. The same principle would work in the leg by creating the burst from the heel instead of the elbow. Though the main idea is to use these small bursts so precisely that they can execute vital movements with enhanced speed and power. The style is not fully based on purely attacking, the small bursts can be used to evade quickly even if it's only a small distance or defensive arts even though it's a style based on aggression .

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A punch would look something similar to this. The burst or explosion look that is just above the boys head is what the burst of raiton chakra would look like. Though it looks like this person has missed the actual attack (sorry, irrelevant).

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Example Techniques:

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Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user proceeds to punch the opponent, but before he does, he releases a small burst of raiton chakra from his elbow that speeds up the attack.

• Can only be used 3 times per battle
• Has a 1 turn cool down time

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Before the opponent connects with an attack, the user will release a burst of raiton chakra from the point of connection. The burst is not a powerful blast and is not enough to throw the user off balance though if attacked directly after releasing the small burst could aid the opponent into throwing the users balance off if done correctly.

• D rank and lower are nullified without the user taking damage.
• B and C rank attacks from the opponent are lowered by 15
• A-Rank is lowered by 10
• Will not work against S-Rank
• Only works on physical assaults
• Can only be used 3 times per battle
• Has a 1 turn cool down time

Additional effects and Restrictions:

• All submitted attacks are required to have a cool down rate for either the attack or limb. These after effects will be added when the custom is created.
• You must be Uchiha to learn Nine Arts Dragon Style
• You must have Mastered Raiton
• Can only be taught if approved by the original creator, Link.

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Uzu-genkotsu|Swirling-fist.
Type:Nin-Taijutsu
Background: This art was developed by a shinobi named Gray, He was a skilled and proficient user of air element from the very beginning, as he grew as a shinobi he came across many death-defying situation and strong people, one of these people was the third raikage and while fighting him he saw him in action with his famous lightning armour, though he was defeated by the raikage he still managed to save his life from his wrath and decided to develop a close combat battle style using his element of mastery and that being fuuton and then fight the raikage again and take his revenge.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style basically function in the same manner as lightning armour as it was the very reason it was created, In this style the user start's by releasing a decent amount of chakra into air around them and take control of the air upto short range from them and use this air for multiple effect like attack/Defense/Supplementary.

*Attack- The user coordinates the wind flow with his punching, kicking and other action, let's say the user is delivering a punch so he will simultaneously will take charge of the small amount of wind around his fist and will make the wind to swirl at great pace while delivering the punch, this has manly two effects.

1. More power- Thanks to wind enhancement the user punch and kicks not get the cutting power and cause mild cuts and bruises every time the strike is connected, which cause minor pain although if the strike is much concentrated and charged with extra wind around the certain part then the cut may be deep as well and may cause great pain.

2.Slight increase of range- As the wind coats users body parts the range of the strike is increased by .25 meter, though this coating of wind is not visible to the opponent by naked eyes as the user basically manipulates the air around him to very small degree in basic attacks but still the opponent can hear the swirling sound of the wind though if user concentrates great wind chakra around his body to deal damage than the wind becomes visible[this version is capable of causes deep cut's]

*Defense- The user can use the wind around him to coat him like a armour to protect himself from free-form or lower rank version of taijutsu and at the same time the opponent may also get minor cut's on his attacking limb thanks to swirling nature of the wind, the user can also coat a certain body part also.

*Supplementary- The user can also produce small streams of wind and create a gale which can send the opponent flying in the opposite direction of the wind though this way is quite effective in avoiding quick and attacks which are almost impossible to block by regular means but this also cause small injury to the user because of the hit he takes from the wind, there are certain ways in which wind does not effect the user like when it is produced below his feet to propel himself for a small amount of time.

Example Techniques:
Uzu-genkotsu yoroi | Swirling fist armor
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: (small cut's)
Description:The user coats himself with a thin layer of wind, This armour of wind is able to safe user from free-form and C rank and lower taijutsu, It can also save user from A rank raiton techniques thanks to the elemental advantage and it causes small cut's to opponent when he touches the armour.

Uzu-genkotsu-Swirling Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:The user coats his attacking limb with a thin layer of wind and goes onto perform the attack, thanks to the wind around the user attacking limbs the opponent suffers minor cut if the attack is successful.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
~The user can only manipulate wind short range of him to produce the desired results.
~The user need's to have begin training in taijuts and fuuton to begin there training in this CFs and must have mastered them to master the CFS.
~The masters of this art become expert in manipulating wind and thus they can manipulate wind around them rather instantaneously after mastering Uzu-genkotsu
~The user more faster and agile than a normal taijutsu master.

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‡ Declined ‡ an ability almost identical to this has already been approved