Naruto: Jounin Adventures Chapter 5

[Sir Aaron]

I just did. Most of your characters, are out of character.

I meant other than the general story. Bad storyline is different than bad writing. Out of character?

 

[Booker]

I meant other than the general story. Bad storyline is different than bad writing. Out of character?

Yes, most of your characters are "out of character".

For instance, Naruto would NEVER being Neji up as a joke.

 

[Sir Aaron]

Yes, most of your characters are "out of character".

For instance, Naruto would NEVER being Neji up as a joke.

When did I say that?

 

[Booker]

When did I say that?

Hinata: He’s pretty good. (Poking fun) Better than you were…

Naruto (laughing): Hey, come on, I defeated Neji.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 

[hyuuga teddy]

hmmm,right

 

[Sir Aaron]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I remembered why, during the chuunin exams in part one he defeated neji.

 

[Penguin]

I thought it was good.

 

[Sir Aaron]

I thought it was good.

Thank you. I appreciate the support.

 

[Hori]

impressive work as always