a "meh" sig, I guess

TheLastSamurai

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It wasn't the outcome I had in mind for it

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what could have been done better, and yea I know, the right part is empty (again) and text sucks as always ...

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Sick picture though. I can't even make sigs so you're already 1,000 times better than me at it lol.
 

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This is awesome in my opinion^^.
 

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This is an awesome sig! Wish I had skills to even make my own... >.<
 

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awesome!! where is the render from?
 

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I'll give some CnC because why not.

The first problem I find in this signature is your depth, this signature seems very flat. There seems to be very little to no blurring done, and that gives the effect of a render pasted onto a bg and altered a bit, which we know isn't the case. The second problem I see is your flow. The flow of your background goes against the flow of your render, and even some flow of your background contradict one another. The potential third problem I see is your light sources (although it might just be my eyes) it seems to me like the light on his chest is showing a light source coming off from the right side of him, meanwhile you just darkened it out. Although I like the fact that you took lighting into consideration when making the sig.

The good parts are definitely the colours, extremely easing to the eye and are pretty unique and vibrant. The colours of the render match the colours of the background well so it all falls into place there. I like the touch of adding a light source over your renders hand, definitely a good idea. The smudge (I think?) around the render was also a nice touch and came out well (even though they don't have a definite flow to them). The text is nice in my opinion, of course text is different based off of everyones likings.

That's about it o_o hope I helped/didn't sound too mean.
 

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- the big ball in his hand takes away from the focal ( start using the blur and sharpen funtions)

- the opacity in his right shoulder well his right your left is see thorugh which looks weird cuz no one has a see throug shoulder lol

- it needs more blending the render sticks out alot

- the bg color doesnt quite match the render itself

- the text is to small and should me in a different spot

look up tutorials on depth and flow and the rule of thirds and contrasting colors etc and folow them and you will get better in no time
 
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That is one heck of a try, though. Looks good. I can only manage to do the colors, and some of the blending. I am struggling with he renders though.
 

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I'll give some CnC because why not.

The first problem I find in this signature is your depth, this signature seems very flat. There seems to be very little to no blurring done, and that gives the effect of a render pasted onto a bg and altered a bit, which we know isn't the case. The second problem I see is your flow. The flow of your background goes against the flow of your render, and even some flow of your background contradict one another. The potential third problem I see is your light sources (although it might just be my eyes) it seems to me like the light on his chest is showing a light source coming off from the right side of him, meanwhile you just darkened it out. Although I like the fact that you took lighting into consideration when making the sig.

The good parts are definitely the colours, extremely easing to the eye and are pretty unique and vibrant. The colours of the render match the colours of the background well so it all falls into place there. I like the touch of adding a light source over your renders hand, definitely a good idea. The smudge (I think?) around the render was also a nice touch and came out well (even though they don't have a definite flow to them). The text is nice in my opinion, of course text is different based off of everyones likings.

That's about it o_o hope I helped/didn't sound too mean.

- the big ball in his hand takes away from the focal ( start using the blur and sharpen funtions)

- the opacity in his right shoulder well his right your left is see thorugh which looks weird cuz no one has a see throug shoulder lol

- it needs more blending the render sticks out alot

- the bg color doesnt quite match the render itself

- the text is to small and should me in a different spot

look up tutorials on depth and flow and the rule of thirds and contrasting colors etc and folow them and you will get better in no time

Thank you both, everything you said will be taken in consideration and I'll work on it :)
 

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It looks nice. Good job.
 
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