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(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will make one handseal and expel her chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of thin and sharp but strong wires, this chakra wires, which will have an Elemental Nature in order to be effective, will immediately wrap around the opponent. Wind will make the wires much sharper. Lightning would numb the opponent, and make the wires sharper. Fire would burn the opponent and make add to the sharpness of the wires melting properties, Earth will make the wires thinner but stronger. Water is useless to the effect desired.
Upon trapping the opponent, the user will quickly constrict the wires, severing the thinner limbs and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used twice per battle*
Note: The wires created aren't enough no envelop the whole body, so only a limb/body part can me affected.
 

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(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will make one handseal and expel her chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of thin and sharp but strong wires, this chakra wires, which will have an Elemental Nature in order to be effective, will immediately wrap around the opponent. Wind will make the wires much sharper. Lightning would numb the opponent, and make the wires sharper. Fire would burn the opponent and make add to the sharpness of the wires melting properties, Earth will make the wires thinner but stronger. Water is useless to the effect desired.
Upon trapping the opponent, the user will quickly constrict the wires, severing the thinner limbs and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used twice per battle*
Note: The wires created aren't enough no envelop the whole body, so only a limb/body part can me affected.
Okay, this was based on the countless wire tortures all around the web, where very tiny yet resistant wires are wrapped around something and exert such pressure that they cut through it, without much force wastage, producing quick and clean slices. You need to add an element though, in order to achieve the desired effects.

In addition to that, you have the choice of using water, which won't be able to slice through, but can still wold an opponent tight.
 

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Okay, this was based on the countless wire tortures all around the web, where very tiny yet resistant wires are wrapped around something and exert such pressure that they cut through it, without much force wastage, producing quick and clean slices. You need to add an element though, in order to achieve the desired effects.

In addition to that, you have the choice of using water, which won't be able to slice through, but can still wold an opponent tight.
Based on torture and the wires can be substituted for water-wires.
Sounds cool.
 

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Based on torture and the wires can be substituted for water-wires.
Sounds cool.
The wires can and must be substituted for an element, each with different characteristics, as explained in the description. Though water doesn't allow one to slice the opponent, so it is described as not fitting the purpose of the technique. I just wanted to let you know that you can use water nonetheless ;)

questions?
 

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The wires can and must be substituted for an element, each with different characteristics, as explained in the description. Though water doesn't allow one to slice the opponent, so it is described as not fitting the purpose of the technique. I just wanted to let you know that you can use water nonetheless ;)

questions?
None. It's a pretty straightforward technique.
Wait, hold that thought. How strong are the wires? Are they strong enough to lift my weight?
 

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I believe it's this one:

(Fūinjutsu: Tōtemu Bakuyaku) – Sealing Technique: Explosive Totem
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses chakra through his body, marking an object he's in physical contact with as a 'totem', causing the Kanji for 'explosion' to appear on the object. When the user activates it, the totem will use the chakra stored inside it to destabilize itself violently, causing an huge explosion of chakra.
-Can only be used two times per battle.
-Activating the totem does not count as a move if it's done immediately after the seal is applied. Otherwise, it counts as a move.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
 

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Indeed.

1st. The jutsu mentions that the explosion happens due to the destabilization of the chakra stored inside the totem. When you place the seal, do you also place chakra (Being so that that is the chakra the description is referring to)? So you can turn any object into a totem, even if it doesn't have inherit chakra (Like a kunai, or a rock you pick from the ground, or a piece of clothing)

2nd. If it the chakra it refers to is about the chakra inside the object, and thus object would be a being that possesses a chakra system, and what the seal does is destabilize the chakra system and make it burst. So you could place the seal on an animal or even on the opponent, and turn them into a totem, and the following explosion would be basically the chakra system destroying itself (Which is what I had in mind). It would also allow the user to place the seal on a jutsu, and use the chakra that created the jutsu to distabilize it and make it explode, thus making out jutsus more damaging, or finishing an enemy technique (though it could backfire, since we need to touch the technique to place the seal (but can be bypassed).

3rd. I guess the real question is, what sort of "objects" can be turned into a totem?

4th. Regarding bypassing the technique, can it be preformed by Shadow Clones?

5th. Once you place the seal, how visible is it? Is it like a kanji that glows and then disappears? Is it more subtle? And what is the nature of the "seal" is it paper? Is it chakra that is carved into the surface of the object? (Fuuinjutsu noob here).

6th. Can the seal or even the activation order be overpowered by some sort of technique with an higher rank than it? (Say, S rank body chakra burst?)

7th. What's the size of the explosion, more or less? And is it proportional to size of the object (Tying with the chakra being hypothesis) or is it a standard size (Tying with the fixed injection of chakra when you place the seal hypothesis).

8th. When it say "used immediately" does it encompasses anywhere within the same turn, or like, right away with your body touching your opponent (Which would make it quite suicidal in order to not spend two moves).


I think that's it for now...
 
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