ok so this is the first fanfic i ever made... it's mainly a backstory... so i'd like to know you're thoughts on it ^^
(the night howled with the wind's voice piercing through the blackness with an eerie whistling. the landscape was dry and dead. boulders littering the ground like leaves upon the floor of a forest in autumn.
the moon was the only spectre to haunt the sky. it glowed blood red on this fateful night, giving just enough light to see the outlines of the many rocks and the few dead trees scattered around.
in the middle of this landscape you could see an occasional glint and hear a clashing sound which broke through the winds shriek... almost as if it had been tamed by it, or was afraid.)
(two warriors were pitched in battle clashing swords together, the glinting was the brief moments where the moon's red glow flashed off the swords.
the two figures charged at one another pressing their swords together as if trying to force the swords straight through the other's.)
(one man had long, black, smooth hair. his blue eyes burning with passion but at the same time also with fear hurt and rage. he wore one silver gauntlet which was special and segmented so it covered his entire right arm but didn't restrict movement. the other arm was fairly plain except for his hand being bandaged up.
the other man had a long black cloak that trailed behind him in the wind. his hair was black and of medium length but his was spiked up in a rather disorganised manner. his face was battlescarred and his eyes seemed un-natural. they had a vicious red glow to them. a glow that could strike fear into the hearts of even the purest soul. he wore dark clothes and had a belt with a huge iron buckle in the shape of a skull.)
man with spikey hair - give up Isa!
Isa - you of all people should know i could never do that Grell! you have murdered countless of my people and will continue to do so... and i shall not rest until you suffer at my hands... my wife must be avenged for her death!
Grell - it was pitiful... i watched her cry... i watched her beg... i watched her scream as i slowly put the knife into her stomach and slit up her beautiful body slowly, painfully... i have never felt a greater pleasure Isa *he grins menacingly*
*upon hearing those words Isa got a gain in strength from the rage which surfaced. he pushed back Grell with his sword and then stabbed him in the stomach with both hands clasping the sword handle... the sword pierced straight through Grell and the hilt rested upon his skin*
Isa - go to hell! i want the devil to give you an eternity of torment!
*Grell stood there... he at first seemed lifeless but then began to smile and started laughing*
Grell - HAHAHAHAHA!
fool... you have failed. pain and anger cannot kill me... i am pain. i am anger. i am betrayal. i am darkness. i am all the things both man and monster share in common!
*he smiles menacingly... in that very instant thorny vines spiral from the wound where the sword is. they wrap around the sword and quickly rwap around Isa's arms then his entire body... when the vines get to his neck they stop for a while*
Grell - you may have hurt me... you may have taken one of my lives... i may be crippled now for quite sometime... but i shall live... you could never have killed me... you shall die here.
*2 seperate vines stem from the ones from his neck... they suddenly come away from his body before slamming them through each of his eyes and through the back of his skull.*
*Grell pulls out the sword. the vines come out and new ones grow to seal the wound. as he drops the sword Isa too falls to the ground... dead...*
(to this day it is not known what happened to Grell... some say he died because the injuries were too severe. some say he is waiting for his powers to return. some say he is waiting for... something........)
