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Name: Zuko
Nickname: Zuzu
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: -
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Looks:
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Personality:
During his teen years, Zuko was a bitter, impatient, and complex young man,Zuko believed one becomes strong by struggling and fighting for what they want. However, he expressed contradicting mindsets; he did not want good luck because he felt he could control his fate, but also believed he was marked unlucky and that the world was against him.His reaction to the perception of the world always set against him is an iron-willed defiance and inflexible determination. He was clever, yet hot-headed, often letting his temper get the best of him. He seemed averse to the thought of harming others without any motive or benefit, after his teen years Zuko showed a complete change in personality. After a flashback of his family, he was regretful about his former disrespect and ruthlessness. For the first time, he showed a comical side to his personality, and now fights for the greater good.
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Village Info

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:N/A [Missing Nin]
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Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Fire Release - Needs Training
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

( Katon: Komakai Kaki ) - Fire Release: Small Fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


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Background Info

History:
Konoha - The Start of a Difficult Childhood.
Zuko was born in 1995, in a familiy that lived wealthy, but the family was corrupt, Zuko had a Sister that was a total show off, because Zuko was the first born in the family, people expected big things from him, but Zuko wasnt very talented in Katon at the beginning, he was an usually the kid who wanted to play and not to train. But his father Ozai disagreed , he made Zuko train hard every day, but Zuko didnt complete anything, but on the other hand, his sister was very talented, she learned every E rank fire release jutsu in her Academy years. While Zuko didnt learn most of them. When Zuko turned 16, he left Konoha, and started his life as a Missing Nin.
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Dual Dao Swords.
While Zuko was traveling along the boarderline of the Land Of Rivers, he saw a man who was in his seventies threatened by a broadsword man. Zuko swiftly went to help the old man, he used his basic ninjutsu and Katon techniques to help the old man. Cause the swords man had no proper training with the sword Zuko easily beat him.
Zuko took his Dual Dao Swords, and left the criminal a letter saying : One does not simply get away with a crime, there will be always justice, i took your swords, that no one will get threatened by you again.
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Land of Iron
Zuko traveled South - West, until he saw snow, there was three mountains, the mountains were called Three Wolves, Zuko set camp there, by using basic and elemental Fire Release, Zuko started a fire and stayed the night under the mountain, the cold breeze at the midde of the night woke Zuko up. Zuko saw human activity in distance, there were 3 men, they all wielded a blade. They were Samurai, Zuko packed his stuff and left the Land of Iron.
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Eternal Flame
Since Zuko left Konoha, he has not learned any Jutsus exept Fire Release: Small Fire, this technique he learned when he just left Konoha. Because Zuko is more talented with the blade then Fire Release, he doesnt use the technique in battle, but only in basic survival, to cook food, light torches, get warm.
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Mask of The Blue Spirit
After Zuko's visit to Land Of Iron, Zuko had no money to buy food. Zuko had no choice, Zuko visited the mask shop in Konoha, there was a mask that Zuko never knew that existed, the Mask of The Blue Spirit. So with the last 100 ryō Zuko bought the Mask. But Zuko didnt rob people, he just pickpocketed people who deserved it, Ex-Criminals, and rich gamblers.
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Klad

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Idk if someone has this , I think im wrong but I've seen someone with zuko .

anyway awesome template

edit : no the owner is banned , so you have the right to.
 

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Why zuko he ugly? Use azula :|

Nice bio :bouncy:
 

Goetia

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Nice bio. Remove the kenjutsu specialty.
 

Goetia

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- Using a sword.

I looked for it in the rules didnt see anything against it. Nor any limits who can use it and who cant.

By all means, use a sword. But you cannot have it as a speciality YET, because you haven't completed training for it.
 

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Fire benders shall rule the world!
 

Chihaya

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Im surpirsed no one has this bio already, haha
well you do now :p

cool bio~ i looooooove zuko <3
 

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nice bio you made there :)
 

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Nice bio. Maybe it's because I haven't seen many do this, but the only critique I have are the pictures being in such close proximity to each other. Try expanding your history a bit more next time, there's a lot you can work with when it comes to Zuko as he's a great character and has a lot to offer. Then, space the pictures out more throughout the history.

To the Kenjutsu thing, I've seen people, and even myself, list a specialty for a style they haven't completely mastered yet, so I i think you're good.

Edit: Ah, it appears you haven't actually started Kenjutsu, or any training for that matter. So yeah, you have to remove the speciality.
 

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By all means, use a sword. But you cannot have it as a speciality YET, because you haven't completed training for it.

thats right, You can have a sword but not kenjutsu since that is something you need to be taught in
 
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Nice bio. Maybe it's because I haven't seen many do this, but the only critique I have are the pictures being in such close proximity to each other. Try expanding your history a bit more next time, there's a lot you can work with when it comes to Zuko as he's a great character and has a lot to offer. Then, space the pictures out more throughout the history.

To the Kenjutsu thing, I've seen people, and even myself, list a specialty for a style they haven't completely mastered yet, so I i think you're good.

Edit: Ah, it appears you haven't actually started Kenjutsu, or any training for that matter. So yeah, you have to remove the speciality.

Im not quite finished with the history yet. Have a little something in my notepad that im working on


Removed it.
 

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Nice bio.
inb4 you fight a Water Release RPC.
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nice bio , but "eternal Flame ".. idk but as I understand u haven't learn anything yet , so I think you should remove that part ----- I may be wrong ,, but ask someone who is good in bios for that !!!

the others look good :D
 

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Overuse of pictures or naw
 

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Awesome bio. Nice pictures.
 

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Looks good.

Good luck defeating the avatar. :p
 
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