Zero Karoshi
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Hey there, welcome to the RP, but unfortunately, this bio isn't approvable.
In order to understand the RP and submit a quality bio, read the following
— Official RP Guide Thread [
— Battle Ranks Thread [
— Bio Template Thread [
— Role-Play Contents Guide Thread [
After reading those, you'll see that at your rank, you are a Genin. You can only one 1 element in training as well as Ninjutsu. You may not have a specialty until you complete an art, but since Genin can only learn up to D-Rank, that won't be accessible until you are at least S-Class.
Custom Clans are not allowed unless they are submitted an approved. To submit a custom clan, one must become an Official Sage which requires you to finish Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Basic 5 Elements, have at least 10,000 posts and take an Official Sage Mission.
You may not combine KG with other clans like how you did. That means, even if you could use that Custom Clan, you would not have access to Sharingan. Sharingan is only accessible to Uchihas, Kakashi, and Danzo bios. You must train to activate and mature your Sharingan.
Finally, you need to follow the Basic Bio Template Format. You have omitted the History, and overall skipped the actual format.
Any other questions, be sure to first read through the rules to find out.
In order to understand the RP and submit a quality bio, read the following
— Official RP Guide Thread [
You must be registered for see links
]— Battle Ranks Thread [
You must be registered for see links
]— Bio Template Thread [
You must be registered for see links
]— Role-Play Contents Guide Thread [
You must be registered for see links
]After reading those, you'll see that at your rank, you are a Genin. You can only one 1 element in training as well as Ninjutsu. You may not have a specialty until you complete an art, but since Genin can only learn up to D-Rank, that won't be accessible until you are at least S-Class.
Custom Clans are not allowed unless they are submitted an approved. To submit a custom clan, one must become an Official Sage which requires you to finish Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Basic 5 Elements, have at least 10,000 posts and take an Official Sage Mission.
You may not combine KG with other clans like how you did. That means, even if you could use that Custom Clan, you would not have access to Sharingan. Sharingan is only accessible to Uchihas, Kakashi, and Danzo bios. You must train to activate and mature your Sharingan.
Finally, you need to follow the Basic Bio Template Format. You have omitted the History, and overall skipped the actual format.
Any other questions, be sure to first read through the rules to find out.