[Approved] Zenyatta "Iburi" Zeal

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ZENYATTA ZEAL
ZENYATTA ZEAL
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"True Self Is Without Form"

Basic Information

Name: Zenyatta "Iburi" Zeal
Nickname: Smoking Metal, Iron Monk, Meditating Robe
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Clan:

Looks:
He is a 6'0 tall very thin and tone man with long arms reaching well below waist. He has no hair whatsoever and usually wears no shirt. The only thing on his upper abdomen is a necklace composed of 9 large beads composed of gold and steel. He wears traditional sandals with the exception of the bottom stilts being much shorter than the traditional sandals and that the bottoms are composed of metal as well as the strap. His lower half is covered in a pair of dark yellow airy pants reaching halfway down his leg. These pants are secured around his thin waist with crimson red garb covering the middle of the pants with a belt over that fastened to the garb by a metal clamp. Below this is a slightly white and dark gray patterned sash. Above all of this is a simple yellow thick rope ,similar to Orochimaru's, that is wrapped around the items below and tied in a knot that can be seen if behind him. His skin is dark gray and is covered in yellow markings at the joint areas.

Personality:
He is a calm person who's main focus is to reach inner peace even if that means killing those in his way. Despite his facial expression he is usually never sad nor angry unless provoked.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Amegakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty:
Elements:
Smoke - Needs Training
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Lightning - Needs Training
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Wind - Needs Training

Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:
The Beginning
He was born in the Konoha, like most of his clansmen, in a small cave to two full blooded iburi parents. He spent most of his younger years like most his age playing with ninja and occasionally getting in trouble. Until he turned 6 years old and some of the older leaders of the clan decided to better understand their ability and master it by going with a mysterious ninja who promised to help.
Being cautious his parents decided to not trust the man who found their home with no information being leaked and decided before anything could happen to move to another village taking Zenyatta with them, naturally, to the Amegakure. Only being accepted into the village after agreeing to become ninjas due to their KG as well as to build up trust with both the village heads and the villagers. They lived on the outskirts of the village not having that much money at first. After some time everything went back to normal and they lived happy until Zenyatta turned 10 and his parents found out what the mysterious man did to some of their clan and went to try to rescue their friends and kin. They were never found nor the mysterious man.
The following months Zenyatta he blamed himself for not trying to stop them. In a fit of rage he accidentally triggered some of his parents left over tools that they left behind being a explosive tag that blew up a part of the floor. He luckily noticed the sizzling noise in time and jumped out of the way in time and only ended up with a small cut across his face along with a few scrapes. As he went to investigate the cause of the explosion but only finding a small blown open safe with a scroll explaining what his abilities were as well as their apologies if they didn't return. Causing him to realize the errors of his ways and that he should always control himself which led him on a path of finding inner peace and divinity.

Becoming A Ninja
A year later at the age of 11 he entered the academy to become a ninja, which would allow him freedom to explore to world some when not on missions as well as hone his skills. After graduating at the age of 13 he went to train while not on missions. After completing a total of 50 missions with ease and 2 years of brutal training to hone his skills he entered the chunin exam. Passing on the first try along with his teammates at the time at the age of 15. After some time he began to feel as if he was getting rusty so as to solve this issue he began to train again for 5 years.
He has since returned to his duties as a proud ninja of the Amegakure until he can find the mysterious man who killed his parents and some of his clansmen..
To Be Continued

Other
Weapons:
On the back of his rope "belt" he has 3 pouches carrying the following:
  • Shuriken
  • Throwing Knives 6" long 1" wide
  • Explosive Tags
  • Scrolls (Summons Large Shuriken)
  • Ninja Wire
  • Smoke Bombs
He has a dagger that is between on of the pouches positioned in a way that it slants to the right side allowing it to be drawn with ease.
It's 2 1/2 feet long and 2 inches wide
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He also carries a large sword that is 5 feet long and 8 inches wide on a strap that goes over his abdomen and chest.
Note he can wield it with one hand due to his training.
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Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;DAavsjAoqmQ]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DAavsjAoqmQ[/video]

Battles

Won: :scorps:
Lost: :horus:

~Approved~
 
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There's a Custom clan that uses tech, so you can add in smoke too. Overall, I don't see any issues, I don't know if he is wearing mech or rather is one. If its the latter, I don't think that's allowed.
 
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There's a Custom clan that uses tech, so you can add in smoke too. Overall, I don't see any issues, I don't know if he is wearing mech or rather is one. If its the latter, I don't think that's allowed.
For the purpose of getting approved it isn't the latter.

Would make a good Mandalore. You should talk to Excalibur.
I'll look into it if I can't get anyone to teach me smoke techs.
 
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when you finish smoke training you can put it there and you get benefits :3
I know. My main thing is how long before bio gets approved already found teacher for basic elements and ninjutsu....:wesobi:

Overwatch literally just dropped..
I know can't wait to get it and spam Genji and Zenyatta every match.

Travis Scott. Hypee.
:score:Brothers in arms.

I was legit gonna make him for Mandalore.
When it gets approved I give le permission to make him. Granted I got to ask Penguin for Mandalore but I think I'll get another character for it. I prefer smoke.
 
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