*concentrates more in the water in my hand*It would appear that you got the concept of the whirlpool, but your water ord jutsu is lacking...
try manipulating more whips and use one to cut that tree in half.
*adds more chakra*
*starts to rotate it faster*
*starts to shape it better*
*a thin tube starts to form*
one more
*adds more chakra in the other hand*
*makes it rotate very fast*
*shapes it*
*tries to make another thin tube*