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(Suiton: atomikku shin'en) Water Style: Atomic Abyss
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close –Mid (most effective up close)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates 5 quickly condensed orbs of water from a nearby source of water. The orbs then begin to quickly orbit the user like an atomic nucleus, carving the earth as it touches the ground. The water orbs are then shot at the enemy in rapid succession with speeds like bullets.
*entitled to any elemental variations of this jutsu*

(Water Style: Atomic Abyss: Poseidon's Aquatic Destruction) ♆ Suiton: Atomikku Shin'en: Poseidon's Suijou Metsubou
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (+40 to user if hit)
Description: The user starts by making several (up to 5 in short range, 10 mid range and 15 in long range, basically five in each range) condensed large balls of water with great pressure compressing them to the size of basketballs but the solidarity of ice (still water, just tightly compacted). The user then causes the orbs to sink into the water source he and his opponent are standing on, creating an mine-field in the ocean of sorts. If the user choices to, he can also create said orbs in the water itself, preventing the opponent a chance to detect them (doujutsu and chakra sensing abilities aside, of course). The orbs are then spread in a pentagonal shape, surrounding the user and opponent, with 3 pentagons in total: one surrounding the enemy in short range, one in mid range and the last in long range. The five orbs in each range are in relation to the target, i.e. one pentagon that reaches out to the borders of short range around the enemy, another reaching the boundaries of mid range from the enemy's start point, and the same with long range. If the opponent moves around underwater, he will cause a chain reaction, causing all of the water orbs to forcibly explode, causing great damage to anything caught underwater, with enough force to break bones on contact and cause severe internal damage to and rupture organs and even remove limbs. If both the user and enemy are standing on the water surface, and they move, it will cause the orbs near the surface to explode firstly, still causing a chain-reaction. The explosions, if above water, have the force and power to blow holes in metal.
*Can only be used once*
*after using, neither the user nor the opponent can move for 3 turns. After the three turns, the orbs loose the pressure within said orbs and the user and opponent will have no threats presented when moving*
*If the user is on the water when detonated, he will take the same damage the enemy would take*
*After using, the user cannot use water jutsus for three turns*
*The user is able to control the orbs released nearby him when he moves but doing so takes a great deal of chakra from him and thus, he can only use 1 jutsu per turn if he does this (must be stated). The user is only able to take control of up to 3 orbs with each one coming from a different range, i.e. one from short, one from mid and one from long range. Once the explosions start, however, he will no longer be able to control them*
*If hit by orbs, the user's bones will be broken and damaged and he will be unable to move*
*Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*



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(Suiton: atomikku shin'en) Water Style: Atomic Abyss
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close –Mid (most effective up close)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates 5 quickly condensed orbs of water from a nearby source of water. The orbs then begin to quickly orbit the user like an atomic nucleus, carving the earth as it touches the ground. The water orbs are then shot at the enemy in rapid succession with speeds like bullets.
*entitled to any elemental variations of this jutsu*

(Water Style: Atomic Abyss: Poseidon's Aquatic Destruction) ♆ Suiton: Atomikku Shin'en: Poseidon's Suijou Metsubou
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (+40 to user if hit)
Description: The user starts by making several (up to 5 in short range, 10 mid range and 15 in long range, basically five in each range) condensed large balls of water with great pressure compressing them to the size of basketballs but the solidarity of ice (still water, just tightly compacted). The user then causes the orbs to sink into the water source he and his opponent are standing on, creating an mine-field in the ocean of sorts. If the user choices to, he can also create said orbs in the water itself, preventing the opponent a chance to detect them (doujutsu and chakra sensing abilities aside, of course). The orbs are then spread in a pentagonal shape, surrounding the user and opponent, with 3 pentagons in total: one surrounding the enemy in short range, one in mid range and the last in long range. The five orbs in each range are in relation to the target, i.e. one pentagon that reaches out to the borders of short range around the enemy, another reaching the boundaries of mid range from the enemy's start point, and the same with long range. If the opponent moves around underwater, he will cause a chain reaction, causing all of the water orbs to forcibly explode, causing great damage to anything caught underwater, with enough force to break bones on contact and cause severe internal damage to and rupture organs and even remove limbs. If both the user and enemy are standing on the water surface, and they move, it will cause the orbs near the surface to explode firstly, still causing a chain-reaction. The explosions, if above water, have the force and power to blow holes in metal.
*Can only be used once*
*after using, neither the user nor the opponent can move for 3 turns. After the three turns, the orbs loose the pressure within said orbs and the user and opponent will have no threats presented when moving*
*If the user is on the water when detonated, he will take the same damage the enemy would take*
*After using, the user cannot use water jutsus for three turns*
*The user is able to control the orbs released nearby him when he moves but doing so takes a great deal of chakra from him and thus, he can only use 1 jutsu per turn if he does this (must be stated). The user is only able to take control of up to 3 orbs with each one coming from a different range, i.e. one from short, one from mid and one from long range. Once the explosions start, however, he will no longer be able to control them*
*If hit by orbs, the user's bones will be broken and damaged and he will be unable to move*
*Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*



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The first jutsu is good. You make five orbs of water that rotate around you and can carve out the earth. You then shoot them towards the opponent at quick succession. I'm guessing they are basketball size, and pretty compact like Teppoudama. Neat.

The second one is basically a jutsu where you make a certain number of explosive orbs of water dependent on your range. Then, if anyone moves on the water, a chain reaction of explosions occur, basically killing anyone caught in the blast radius. I know a couple of ways to use this, and I feel bad for doing it, but lord. Great jutsu.
 

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Yes, they are roughly basketball sized and travel with incredible speed.

The second is very useful yet a double edged sword because if you aren't careful, you can end up killing yourself. It doesn't require any handseals to form, and if on a water source can be formed underwater. You can remotely control up to one orb from each range, and this allows you to basically move an orb under the opponent, triggering the explosion instantly. Because this is a Forbidden ranked water jutsu, it disallows the enemy a chance to use water jutsu because your chakra is still there, so it gives you the advantage unless they have an ability like Tobirama or Mei. It's also strong enough to blow through steel and some Earth jutsu, depending on how it's used lol.
 

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Wow, didn't know that about the last jutsu. Thanks for telling me that. I think I will have fun using these if I ever get a chance xD
 

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Suiton: Hogo Pengin no Tangan - Water Style: Plea of the Protective Penguin
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A fairly simple but effective suiton ninjutsu, Hogo Pengin no Tangan is a suiton ninjutsu that uses the properties crystalized water to coat the blade of a sword. The user would put as much or as little chakra into the blade to crystalize as they want, and then they would simply cut through an opposing jutsu, releasing a crescent of crystalized water towards the opponent. With paramount chakra control, the user would then control the crescent of crystalized suiton much like the jutsu Suiton: Nagareru no Yari, only except instead of hand movements, the user would control the crescent via waving their sword up, down, left, or right. The user could control the crescent up to mid range with ease, and due to the crescent's properties of crystalline water, it's cutting power would be unmatched, even compared to the famous Suiton: Suidanha.

Note: Can only be used three times per conflict
Note: Cannot use this jutsu consecutively
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin

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Oh, Okay and yeah, that would be a cool, concept lol
Suiton: Kaatsu sa Reta Pengin - Water Style: Pressurized Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+20)
Description: Unlike many forms of water which include sticky syrup water, chakra absorbing mists, crystalline waters, etc., Suiton: Kaatsu sa Reta Pengin - Water Style: Pressurized Penguin focuses on water's natural ability to become sharp and pressurized, having unmatched cutting ability compared to other suiton ninjutsu. The user would chain an additional hand seal onto a suiton ninjutsu they perform, having it be activated within the same time frame as the original technique yet still cost a move. After this is done, the suiton technique would change from a regular, flowing water that has blunt force damage into a water that has become pressurized and sharp with amazing cutting ability, like Suiton: Suidanha - Water Release: Severing Wave. Due to the pressurization of the water technique, it would gain considerable killing potential compared to regular suiton ninjutsu, however, due to the pressurization of the technique, it becomes significantly smaller with a much smaller area of affect. The larger the jutsu the longer it takes to compress down as it still forms as though unchanged at the start.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin
Note: This technique can only be applied to A-rank water and below

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The first one is pretty simple; by adding an additional handseal to a chain of seals (or just one if you are a Water specialist ), you can augment your Water jutsu by adding force and power to it, giving it a +20 boost. It also reduces their size due to being so compressed and pressurized.

The second one I can't learn lol
 

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The first one is pretty simple; by adding an additional handseal to a chain of seals (or just one if you are a Water specialist ), you can augment your Water jutsu by adding force and power to it, giving it a +20 boost. It also reduces their size due to being so compressed and pressurized.

The second one I can't learn lol
Damn I forgot about that. My bad ;-;
 

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Genjutsu: Jankīpengin - Illusionary Arts: The Junkie Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms a single hand seal and inserts their chakra into their opponent's brain, disrupting their chakra flow, inflicting upon them a dormant yet powerful genjutsu. When an opposing ninja uses one of the basic five elements, this genjutsu would activate. During the process of channeling that specific elemental chakra, the opponent would begin to feel more energetic than usual, hyper, and upbeat. Their breathing would begin to become faster, their heart pounding from the excitement of using that element. It would mimic a high, satisfying the victim beyond their wildest dreams. Wanting to continue to feel the excitement of the high, the victim would find themselves using element they just used more and more throughout the match to get the rush from the genjutsu, otherwise they would begin to come down from their high, crashing relatively hard. If the victim goes without two turns of using that element, their base speed would be halved, as well as being unable to use S-ranks and above for two turns from the lack of energy and crashing.

Note: Lasts for five turns
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin
Note: Can only be used twice per conflict
Note: No Genjutsu in the turn before
Note: No Genjutsu in the same turn above A-rank
 

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Kuchiyose: Ōkui ▽ Summoning Technique: Gluttony
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30 (-100 per turn) (+100 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Among several shark summons, Gluttony is very rare in the fact that he is one of the only sharks with no offensive capabilities; only supplementary and defensive. Gluttony is the size of an average shark, and can be summoned on land or inside a source of water. However, if summoned on land, he can only stay on the battlefield for three turns, compared to the regular five he could last inside a source of water. Being Ashitaka Emishi's personal shark summon, Gluttony has a respect for him like no other, however, it takes months of training to effectively use Gluttony by other shark practitioners, as he commands the utmost respect for his aid in combat. Gluttony has two main main abilities, two of those abilities being able to absorb chakra from people and transfer that chakra to the person who summoned him or his allies. If Gluttony is making direct contact with a person, or if they are within short range of him in a source of water, Gluttony can begin to steal their chakra, eating it like a glutton, never filling (costs a moveslot to initiate). Being a master of chakra control, Gluttony can use the chakra transfer jutsu perfectly. However, he must be in direct contact with the user or ally to give him the chakra, or within short range in a water souce (costs a move slot). Gluttony is very sarcastic, and at times, is considered a jackass within the shark community; though other sharks still respect him for his usefulness in combat.

▽ Can only be taught by Penguin
▽ No sharks can be on the field while Gluttony is summoned
▽ Lasts five turns, unless summoned on earth, then is reduced to three turns
▽ Can only be summoned two times per conflict

Only can be summoned twice per conflict. Five turns each, unless on earth, then three turns each. Can steal 100 chakra per turn if in water within short range. If not, requires contact. Can use the "chakra transfer" jutsu, so you can add +40 to your techniques, or steal 100 chakra per turn with direct contact or within short range in a water source.

Good luck!
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