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Z! Hey
Hello and welcome to Z! Hey, a fanfiction that takes place in the Naruto World. We will watch as a young ninja makes his journey through this tough world and eventually builds his way up. This story will be told from the perspective from a ninja that was in close contact, and observed the events of the Naruto world (basically I will be retelling Naruto stories but with a new character). Don't ask what the title of the fanfiction stands for or means because I'm not even sure I know, ahahaha.
Chapter 1
The cold whisper on the wind broke the silence between two young men shinobi standing only an arm reach away. One stood tall and confident, and his eyes boasted rage and anger. The fiery shinobi's blue eyes matched his dark blue hair that fell just above his eyes and frailed out in all directions at the top. On his perfectly tanned skin rested a smug smile, with one extra sharp, long fang sticking out.
The ninja standing in front of him was almost completely different. He had bright orange hair that dropped over his eyes and covered half of his face. He wore absolutely no expression on his lips. His hair was spiky and ran down his back to his feet (like Jiraiya's). He was grasping a kunai in his sweaty hand and finally after the breeze had passed, he pulled back and with a wide swing, slashed it violently at his opponent.
The fiery shinobi easily dodged the kunai and kneed the ninja, caving in his stomach and making him cough up blood on to the skilled ninja's face. Disgusted and furious at the blood touching him, the ninja quickly followed the man's body through the air and slammed his foot deep into the man's face, sending him plummeting back down to the ground.
The man with the orange hair lie there on the ground, motionless, until the fiery ninja approached his body. A soft, white cloud of smoke enveloped the man's body and with a small pop, the man with orange hair was replaced by a log with a small note saying 'Check Behind You
'.
The fiery ninja spun around, but it was too late. A kunai lodged itself in his skull, and as his pupils shrunk and his heart began to stop, he sputtered the words "Ura Shishō Fūinjutsu (Reverse Four Symbol Sealing Technique)". Four black kanji symbols appeared around the orange hair ninja and he knew to get the hell out from where he was standing. Just as he formed the hand seal for tiger and disappeared in a cloud of smoke once more, a black mist like substance enveloped the area where he was before standing and took every molecule and substance out of the area it covered.
"You're back already from the store, hm?" A soft, girly voice came from behind me.
I turned around and saw my sister sitting, cross-legged at the dinner table. I smiled and joined her after I washed my hands in the fountain in our living room. She slurped her ramen bowl quickly and stuffed Miso Pork in her chubby cheeks. Soy Sauce dripped on her pink kimono and her chopsticks nearly broke underneath the pressure of all the food she was shoving on them.
"Yah, and dad is going to be home soon too. I can't wait! He's been gone for so long, I don't even..." My voice trailed off, remembering that was a boundary I don't cross with Megumi.
She closed her eyes, obviously trying to hold back tears. Why am I so damn stupid sometimes?
I was barely able to beat up myself mentally when the back door swung open and heavy foot steps stomped in. My face lit up and Megumi jumped to her feet. We both watched in anticipation for an orange-haired shinobi to walk around that corner and greet us with his big arms and wide chest, easily able to hold both of us and warm our hearts. The steps drew closer and closer until finally.... a deep frown covered my sister and I's face.
It wasn't an orange haired shinobi that walked around the corner. This man's hair was a dirty grey and green color. This man wasn't burly at all, in fact, this man was scrawny and his clothes looked too big on him. We both recognized the man. He was the Mizukage's messenger... and he normally brought bad news. His face wore a VERY fake sympathetic smile that said without words, "I really don't care". He held out his arm and dropped a small envelope, then, quickly made his way out of our humble abode.
Megumi grapped the red trimmed envelope before I could and ripped it open. I watched as a tear ran down her cheek and her mouth dropped open. Bad news? No, my sister wasn't quick to cry. I shuttered at the thought, horrible news. I took the note up from the ground after she had tossed it there and ran to her room.
I dropped the note, and as it hit the ground tears bursted from my eyes and danced down my cheeks. My whole world plunged into despair and I denied the reality of it all. We had received a note from my father on a kill of a leader of a main corps in the war just a few days ago... he was doing so well. I fell to my knees and buried my face in my hands.
Hello and welcome to Z! Hey, a fanfiction that takes place in the Naruto World. We will watch as a young ninja makes his journey through this tough world and eventually builds his way up. This story will be told from the perspective from a ninja that was in close contact, and observed the events of the Naruto world (basically I will be retelling Naruto stories but with a new character). Don't ask what the title of the fanfiction stands for or means because I'm not even sure I know, ahahaha.
Chapter 1
The cold whisper on the wind broke the silence between two young men shinobi standing only an arm reach away. One stood tall and confident, and his eyes boasted rage and anger. The fiery shinobi's blue eyes matched his dark blue hair that fell just above his eyes and frailed out in all directions at the top. On his perfectly tanned skin rested a smug smile, with one extra sharp, long fang sticking out.
The ninja standing in front of him was almost completely different. He had bright orange hair that dropped over his eyes and covered half of his face. He wore absolutely no expression on his lips. His hair was spiky and ran down his back to his feet (like Jiraiya's). He was grasping a kunai in his sweaty hand and finally after the breeze had passed, he pulled back and with a wide swing, slashed it violently at his opponent.
The fiery shinobi easily dodged the kunai and kneed the ninja, caving in his stomach and making him cough up blood on to the skilled ninja's face. Disgusted and furious at the blood touching him, the ninja quickly followed the man's body through the air and slammed his foot deep into the man's face, sending him plummeting back down to the ground.
The man with the orange hair lie there on the ground, motionless, until the fiery ninja approached his body. A soft, white cloud of smoke enveloped the man's body and with a small pop, the man with orange hair was replaced by a log with a small note saying 'Check Behind You
'.The fiery ninja spun around, but it was too late. A kunai lodged itself in his skull, and as his pupils shrunk and his heart began to stop, he sputtered the words "Ura Shishō Fūinjutsu (Reverse Four Symbol Sealing Technique)". Four black kanji symbols appeared around the orange hair ninja and he knew to get the hell out from where he was standing. Just as he formed the hand seal for tiger and disappeared in a cloud of smoke once more, a black mist like substance enveloped the area where he was before standing and took every molecule and substance out of the area it covered.
T W O | M O N T H S | L A T E R
"You're back already from the store, hm?" A soft, girly voice came from behind me.
I turned around and saw my sister sitting, cross-legged at the dinner table. I smiled and joined her after I washed my hands in the fountain in our living room. She slurped her ramen bowl quickly and stuffed Miso Pork in her chubby cheeks. Soy Sauce dripped on her pink kimono and her chopsticks nearly broke underneath the pressure of all the food she was shoving on them.
"Yah, and dad is going to be home soon too. I can't wait! He's been gone for so long, I don't even..." My voice trailed off, remembering that was a boundary I don't cross with Megumi.
She closed her eyes, obviously trying to hold back tears. Why am I so damn stupid sometimes?
I was barely able to beat up myself mentally when the back door swung open and heavy foot steps stomped in. My face lit up and Megumi jumped to her feet. We both watched in anticipation for an orange-haired shinobi to walk around that corner and greet us with his big arms and wide chest, easily able to hold both of us and warm our hearts. The steps drew closer and closer until finally.... a deep frown covered my sister and I's face.
It wasn't an orange haired shinobi that walked around the corner. This man's hair was a dirty grey and green color. This man wasn't burly at all, in fact, this man was scrawny and his clothes looked too big on him. We both recognized the man. He was the Mizukage's messenger... and he normally brought bad news. His face wore a VERY fake sympathetic smile that said without words, "I really don't care". He held out his arm and dropped a small envelope, then, quickly made his way out of our humble abode.
Megumi grapped the red trimmed envelope before I could and ripped it open. I watched as a tear ran down her cheek and her mouth dropped open. Bad news? No, my sister wasn't quick to cry. I shuttered at the thought, horrible news. I took the note up from the ground after she had tossed it there and ran to her room.
DEAR SATO FAMILY, THE MIZUKAGE WOULD LIKE TO INFORM YOU THAT YOUR FATHER, AKIHIKO SATO, HAS BEEN KILLED IN THE WAR TWO DAYS AGO, AS OF JULY 12. WE WOULD LIKE TO GIVE YOU OUR DEEPEST APOLOGIES, AND INFORM YOU THAT YOU WILL BE MOVED OUT OF YOUR HOME BY APRIL 1. PLEASE PREPARE TO MOVE AND PAY TAXES.
I dropped the note, and as it hit the ground tears bursted from my eyes and danced down my cheeks. My whole world plunged into despair and I denied the reality of it all. We had received a note from my father on a kill of a leader of a main corps in the war just a few days ago... he was doing so well. I fell to my knees and buried my face in my hands.
What must I do now?
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