[Approved] Yukio Akizuki

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Sorry, I didn't know it was required. Hopefully that won't affect me from getting approved. If so then I will re format it to fit the template and I don't like to brag but I am a good rp'er. I've rp'ed for a few years now and I'm confident in my skills. However, I have a feeling its going to take me a while to rise through the ranks here. But soon enough "I Will become a Legend" At least I hope so. Once I get my bio approved I'm going to find some people to train so I can get my other elements and such. By then I hope to have a good enough post count to be a higher rank and a lot higher rep.​
I don't doubt that you are >_>

And don't make a new thread, simply Edit this current existing one.
 

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lol thanks for the heads up. Once I train and get more things as I rank up I'll make sure to come back here and update my rpc's bio.
Lol, No Problem. If you want to rank up the fastest way would be in the Forum Game section. Would you like a link, or do you already know where to find it?
 

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Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Alright, now add these under "Your Ninjutsu" since you get them by default after graduating the Academy (Becoming a Genin).

And also, get rid of his last name as a clan, because technically your stating that that is a clan just by putting it there, which it isn't, and in that case isn't allowed o.o
(Even though you stated that theres nothing special about it, you still have to remove that as his clan)
 
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o. o Alright everything is done. Now I just gotta get it approved then complete some sparring test or something before I can train?
Nope theres no test neccesary to get training, you simply ask a sensei if they can train you, and they’ll begin training you o.o You can also ask a sempai for Elemental Training (Which I recommend since they are usually free as opposed to sensei).

I also just noticed your specialty, Caliburn might tell you to remove that, since on first bios her doesn't allow specialties, since you haven't learned anything yet.
 

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I like your character. I wish I could have seen your bio before you conformed it to the template.

The KG I plan on getting is a custom one not seen in the naruto manga so I could easily say its an Akizuki clan blood line. If that fails I'll just have to make it a kekkei tota like dust release and have to go through training and such to unlock it that way.
.......Not to discourage you......But you have a LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG way to go before making a custom Clan. First you have to get to Sage Rank (In posts). Then you have to become an Official Sage (Sage Rank in Posts as well as Experience and whatever test is given by an Admin/Mod). Then you actually have to get your Clan Approved and I believe you have to have a years time in.

Making a Kekkei Tota on the other hand, though will still take you 10 months, and then you have to get it approved. Are there ways around this? of course there are. What they are? PM me and I'll tell you. :zonder:

Alright. Will I have to come back and get it approved once more after I gain new elements and other abilities?
Come Back? No. Once its approved and you gain new Elements, you have to update your bio. You are limited to Updating your bio once per month. I would say that you should only really update it if you have stuff to add to it. Say if you Mastered an element, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu and so forth. Everytime you Master something, but only once per month, I would update your bio. And by once per month, I mean if you submit your bio on the 8th of Jan, you have exactly 1 month (8 feb) before you can update it again.
 

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Oh sweet the god of mischief @w @ And I know I have a long way to go before I get to where I want to be, but I have the patience so it doesn't matter. I plan on going to the training thread and learn new elements and abilities before coming back and using my monthly edit. I'm pretty much locked down until my bio is approved, but once it is I have a lot I'm going to do today (( assuming its approved by today )) I'm going to the battle thread and kicking some ass while training to get more abilities for my rpc in the training thread. I don't think I know any senseis or senpais so I'll probably just post up a thread and hope they come to me. . .

Btw here is what my bio looked like before I changed it into the template.


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"Every warrior has their weakness. . ."
Character Name: Yukio Akizuki
Name Meaning: Yukio, "God will nourish" Akizuki, "Autmn Moon"
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Birthday: Jan 11th
Blood Type: O
Height: 5'11
Weight: 175 lbs
Martial Status: Single
Children: None
Relatives: N/A
Personality: Calm, kind and playful.
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Affiliation: Konohagakure
Place of Birth: Konohagakure
Clan or Family: Akizuki
Rank: Gennin until further training is gained and posts are made
Classification: Shinobi
Team(s): None
Former Team(s): None
Student(s): None
Former Student(s): None
Sensei or Mentor: N/A
Former Sensei or Mentor: N/A
Personal Goal: Become a legendary shinobi.
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Academy Enrollment Age: N/A
Genin Age: N/A
Chuunin Exam Age: N/A
Jounin Age: N/A
Kage, Daimyou or Village Head Age: N/A
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Ninja Tools Kunai, Shuriken, Katana, Paper Bombs, Smoke Bombs, Wire, ect.

Animal Summoning: No contracts yet.

Nature Releases

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Lightning

Further elements to be gained in the future.

Kekkei Genkai

To be revealed and approved of in the future.

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Not much is known about Yukio but he has sworn he will one day become a legend, a shinobi known and feared through out the world. The only records of his family are of his mother and father who both died while on an A rank mission when he was merely 8 years old. Surprisingly, Yukio has been able to live a happy life even after the last of his family perished. He is very friendly and kind. However, Yukio seems to rarely ever show mercy to his opponents. Unless he is merely sparring, his intent is almost always to go for the kill. As of now he is a mere gennin with only one element, but those that have seen him fight can tell he has great potential. With not really much about his path worth telling, he continues on living day by day as he hopes to get the chance to show the world what he is made of. It may not be today, it my not be tomorrow. But, one day he will ascend to great heights and until then he won't let anyone or anything stand in his way.

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(( I know the bio's short but I promise that a lot will be added to it once I have rp'ed more on here and have earned the right to more things. The rpc's back ground will also be a lot longer in the future. ))
 

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Again Children's Loki save's the day
:hint:
:zonder: lol

Oh sweet the god of mischief @w @ And I know I have a long way to go before I get to where I want to be, but I have the patience so it doesn't matter. I plan on going to the training thread and learn new elements and abilities before coming back and using my monthly edit. I'm pretty much locked down until my bio is approved, but once it is I have a lot I'm going to do today (( assuming its approved by today )) I'm going to the battle thread and kicking some ass while training to get more abilities for my rpc in the training thread. I don't think I know any senseis or senpais so I'll probably just post up a thread and hope they come to me. . .

Btw here is what my bio looked like before I changed it into the template.

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"Every warrior has their weakness. . ."
Character Name: Yukio Akizuki
Name Meaning: Yukio, "God will nourish" Akizuki, "Autmn Moon"
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Birthday: Jan 11th
Blood Type: O
Height: 5'11
Weight: 175 lbs
Martial Status: Single
Children: None
Relatives: N/A
Personality: Calm, kind and playful.
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Affiliation: Konohagakure
Place of Birth: Konohagakure
Clan or Family: Akizuki
Rank: Gennin until further training is gained and posts are made
Classification: Shinobi
Team(s): None
Former Team(s): None
Student(s): None
Former Student(s): None
Sensei or Mentor: N/A
Former Sensei or Mentor: N/A
Personal Goal: Become a legendary shinobi.
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Academy Enrollment Age: N/A
Genin Age: N/A
Chuunin Exam Age: N/A
Jounin Age: N/A
Kage, Daimyou or Village Head Age: N/A
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Ninja Tools Kunai, Shuriken, Katana, Paper Bombs, Smoke Bombs, Wire, ect.

Animal Summoning: No contracts yet.

Nature Releases

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Lightning

Further elements to be gained in the future.

Kekkei Genkai

To be revealed and approved of in the future.

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Not much is known about Yukio but he has sworn he will one day become a legend, a shinobi known and feared through out the world. The only records of his family are of his mother and father who both died while on an A rank mission when he was merely 8 years old. Surprisingly, Yukio has been able to live a happy life even after the last of his family perished. He is very friendly and kind. However, Yukio seems to rarely ever show mercy to his opponents. Unless he is merely sparring, his intent is almost always to go for the kill. As of now he is a mere gennin with only one element, but those that have seen him fight can tell he has great potential. With not really much about his path worth telling, he continues on living day by day as he hopes to get the chance to show the world what he is made of. It may not be today, it my not be tomorrow. But, one day he will ascend to great heights and until then he won't let anyone or anything stand in his way.

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(( I know the bio's short but I promise that a lot will be added to it once I have rp'ed more on here and have earned the right to more things. The rpc's back ground will also be a lot longer in the future. ))
;bows; Indeed I am.

Ok cool.
 
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