Yugioh: The United 3

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Chapter 3


Hunter: ....I lost....

Raikou: You are no longer champion. Not because your a pathetic loser that youve accused of me of being. But because you were underestimating my abilites as a duelist. This may have been my first match. But you should never underestimate anyone. You lose.

Everyone in the crowd looked at each other while they cheered for Raikou. Hearing things like "wow i wouldve never guessed he was a rookie!" and "wow Hunter defeated by a rookie who wouldve thought!".

Hunter: A rookie?!!!????!!...... how could i have let this happend....

Raikou: Haha thank you everyone! (wow i actually did it, im finally gonna change my life, I'm no longer gonna be that fighter that my teachers or family think i am, but something bigger)

Sarutobi: I knew that kid was something special. He's got some potential. What'd i tell you Sarah?? :)

Sarah: Wow Sarutobi that was amazing! i wouldve never thought Raikou was a rookie! He's so... amazing!!

Hunter rushed off away from everyone, only to cope with his defeat. How am i gonna explain it to him.

Hunter:How am I gonna tell him, that im no longer a champion... But a loser..... one who lost to a rookie....

Hunter broke down in tears and dissapointment. Putting his head down in shame and kicking the wall of a nearby store in an alleyway.

The next day at school Hunter wasnt seen. But things were going great for the new champion Raikou. People kept asking him how awsome was it to be a new player and a champion of the school. Other asked who he'll be dueling next and girls were... well whispering about whatever girls whispered about.
Raikou left for the bus with Sarutobi.

Sarutobi: How's it feel champ?! told ya you could do it! You have some major potential! Heck maybe you could turn pro!!

Raikou: Hah yeah right. Thats like winning the lottery. But you know Sarutobi, your a great friend. Moving to this school i thought i wasnt ever gonna have the time of day, but you made this oppertunity happen for me. Thank you.

Sarutobi: Nah dont sweat it man im always here for you. Me and you are Buds now no question about it! Hey me and you should hit up the carnival tonight! Not only are you famous in school now! But your the new topic around town! Everyone is dying to meet the new champion and everyone will be there at the carnival. It'll be fun! And i know some girls thatll love to meet you!

Raikou: Haha yeah man carnival sounds fun! Strangely I've been seeing magicians and carnivals in my dreams lately.

Sarutobi: Hmm thats wierd.. But this is my stop man ill meet you around 5. And remember every duelist carries his deck with him! you didnt bring yours today! remember to bring yours tonight and everywhere else you go!

Raikou: AHH! oh no i forgot!


Later that night....

Raikou: Hmm swordhunter equipped with this.... means he counter against this... and if i activate this trap card i'll be able too...

Sarutobi: Raikou!!

Raikou: AAHHH!

Sarutobi: you okay?!

Raikou: aww man dont sneak up on me while my window is open. Okay lemme just grab this and this.... and lets jet out of here!

Arriving at the Carnival Raikou got in the entrance and saw big ferris wheels and people rushed up to go meet him.

Sarutobi: woah!! settle down!! He just got here! .... uh oh....

A massive crowd of girls came rushing towards Raikou.

Sarutobi: Raikou..

Raikou: Yeah Sarutobi whats up??

Sarutobi: You see that massive crowd??

Raikou: you mean this group of people??

Sarutobi: *point* no... that one.... RUN!!!!!!!

Raikou ran off as fast as he could.. hiding behind a old ratted out tent. He heard someone calling out "HELP!!" on the top of there lungs but no on else seemed worried. He went inside the tent and pulled a light. The voice got louder. Raikou stared at his feet and picked up the card lying on the floor.

Raikou: Was this card speaking to me?

Chapter 3 end.

Raikou champion of the school finds a card calling out to him. Find out what happens next and what card it is in Chapter 4!!
 

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Its okay if he didnt like it, I accept peoples opinion and critisicm. But if he's gonna be like that then go ahead, he reflects his own person and if he's gonna make a rude sarcastic comment like that then let him. People like that are pathetic in my opinion.
 
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