Yoso Noko

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Name: Yoso Noko (Meaning User of the Elements in Japanese)
Age: 13
DOB: Friday, April 13, 1997
Home Village: Village Hidden In the Waterfall
Current Village: Village Hidden in the Mist
Rank\Status: Fuedel Lord, Partial Jinchuriki (Has chakara from the tailed beasts (all))
Personality and Persona:
Considered to be somewhat "Emo", due to always wearing black and being somewhat reserved. Most don't know much about him, and fear him. He hates his home village for killing his father, even though it was not their fault. He killed all of the men and women involved in the mission and left. His MP (Multiple Personality) is a bloodthirsty demon and kills all in its path. Compared to his precise nature, there are multiple flaws in the MP’s tactics; the MP is brought on by great anger.
Appearance:
Medical:
Suffers from MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder)
Eye Color: N/A (See Jutsu) however, usually raven black.
Hair: Raven Black, Usually Crew Cut. Changes in Sage Art: Bird (See Jutsu)
Skin: Light Tan
Scars on chest, back, and eye.
Weight: 120 Lb
Height: 6"0
Suffers from Tinnitus (Constant ringing of the Ears) as well as other physical handicaps.
Physical:
Strong physically built. Often seen wearing either slacks, a shirt, and glasses, or a loose black T-shirt with black jeans (often Torn) On missions, wears armor (black) fish net on hands and elbows, Gloves, and a black chunin vest, with black pants (style varies)

Weapons or Techniques:
Senbon
Concealed Mouth Ember: When going into battle, a ninja may store a small combustible ember in their mouth. The ember must be bitten to be activated. The ninja can then spit the ember at a combustible substance to help ignite it.
Hero Water: This special water from Hidden Waterfall allows a ninja to have a ten-fold increase in chakra for a short period of time. By drinking drops of the water, the ninja of the village could increase their fighting ability to compensate for their villages lack of a strong Kage leader. Unfortunately in exchange for the power, the water also eats away at your life.
Exploding Smoke Grenade: When the pin is pulled on this grenade, the result is a large explosion and the release of smoke. This allows the ninja to carry out their maneuvers in secret.
Makibishi: This weapon is primarily used during escape, numerous makibishi are thrown on the ground and enemy soldiers will have a difficult time pursuing because the spiked metal can penetrate the sole of the shoe wear.
Umbrella: This weapon is used by Rain ninja. Worn on the back, the ninja can quickly open the umbrella and hurl it into the air. While spinning in the air, the umbrella can unleash a rain of needles upon the target.
Windmill Suriken: In its folded state, all four arms of the shuriken are folded together. When full unfolded the large shuriken can be thrown through the air causing great damage.
Small Summoning Scroll: Contains all weaponry.
Other weapons.
Uses by-the-book tactics and never strays unless nessasary.
Jutsu:
TaiJutsu: (Rank: 97/100)
Uses 8 gates, can open the 8th gate without death in Sage Art: Bird.
NinJutsu:
Sage Art: Bird: Transforms into a human/bird hybrid. His feathers can be used as projectiles. They are 456 Septilion times the strength of diamond, and are lined with Stygian Iron.
Sage Art: Animal Transformation: Transforms into a human animal hybrid.
Seals: Can perform numerous seals on summons, mostly bird related.
GenJutsu:
Dojutsu: Similar to Tobi, he can create an alternate world, and can change his body to his advantage. He can use DNA to create a replica of any Dojutsu, however, it is 49.13% weaker than a gineticly created one.
 

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I highly recommend that you visit .
It leads you to the Character Biography Rules. And do read them thoroughly and think again.

This will never get approved for countless of reasons.
The main reason is that you need to be a Genin to create one. And you need to learn how to read the rules.

Edit: In order to reach Genin rank, you need 50 posts.
Here is the list of the posts and ranks. You will need this information in order to make certain characters.
Genin - 50 posts - 300 chakra - 350 health - E + D Rank - 1 element -No other

Chunin - 200 Posts - 500 Chakra - 600 Health - D + C Rank - 2 elements -Taijutsu

Special Jounin - 550 Posts - 700 Chakra - 750 Health - C + B Rank - 3 elements -Genjutsu & KG training

Jounin - 1,050 Posts - 800 Chakra - 850 Health - B + A Rank - 4 elements -Battle Training

S-Class Ninja - 2,400 Posts - 1,000 Chakra - 1,000 Health - A + S Rank - 5 elements -Advanced: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Fuuinjitsu, KG

Sannin - 4,300 Posts - 1,200 Chakra - 1,250 Health -S + Forbidden Rank -General competence of everything known so far

Kage - 8,000 Posts - 1,400 Chakra - 1,450 Health - Everything (if learned) - Custom elements -Expert battle training

Sage - 10,000 Posts - 1,800 Chakra - 1,850 Health - Everything (if learned) - Custom Clan -Strategy Tactics

Hellsbadass - 30,000 Posts - 2,000 Chakra - 2,000 Health - Everything (if learned) - Custom Clan -Man of Love-
 
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I highly recommend that you visit .
It leads you to the Character Biography Rules. And do read them thoroughly and think again.

This will never get approved for countless of reasons.
The main reason is that you need to be a Genin to create one. And you need to learn how to read the rules.​
yup..i thougt so...
 

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DarkPheonix, you told me to move this here. don't try and make it seem like your the inocent one here. (Just like shino in so many ways...)
 

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*pulls a secret mod lever that are hidden all around NB, making the bio fall into a botomless void aka Nexus' paradise*

There are a hell of a lot things wrong with this bio, so I'm going to stick to the most fundamental basics of bio making this time:

- you need 50 posts for a bio

- follow the template

- remove all medical, jinchuriki, 8 gates, doujutsu, fuuinjutsu, custom abilities crap

Read the rules, then try again. This one was beyond saving.
 
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