Yondaime Raikage -UPDATE-

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Basic Information
Name: Ē
Nickname: The Lightning
Gender: Male
Age: over 35. (Kirabi is 35)
Clan: Yotsuki

Looks: A has a lot of similarities with his younger brother. He is a tall dark-skinned man with a large muscular build, slicked-back white hair with a yellow tint, a few wrinkles, and a small moustache and beard. Unlike other Kage, A seems to wear his Kage cloak and hat on a regular basis, without a shirt underneath which further displays his hulk physique. He has black shuriken tattooed on both shoulders. On each wrist he has gold bangle bracelets, which seems to have protrusions that can jut out when he attacks, and has a gold belt on his waist with a lion's face engraved in the center. All of these aspects combined give A the appearance of a professional wrestler.

Personality:
e is very caring and protective towards his younger brother, despite Killer Bee's status as a jinchūriki, and wept at the idea of his younger brother being captured by Akatsuki. However, when Killer Bee's ploy to use the affair to have a vacation was discovered, A was furious, and swore to punish his little brother for it.
He is also headstrong and easily excited, smashing a desk apart when news of his brother being captured arrived. He also burst through a palace wall (probably from inside his own office too) to attend the Kage Summit. His assistant implied that this wasn't the first time. This suggests that he is quite destructive while in this mental state.
He also has a very stern and decisive personality, seemingly unaffected by Naruto's pleas for Sasuke's life. In his eyes, respect and strength mean everything in the ninja world. He believes that the weak should and will be crushed. This correlates with his philosophy that a ninja should never compromise or bow down in front of another ninja. A has also been shown to be very suspicious of the other ninja villages, accusing all of them of working with Akatsuki and questioning their loyalties.
In battle, A is shown to be physically brutal, as he uses extreme physical force to devastate his opponents, and is willing to sacrifice a limb, rather than lose a chance to defeat his opponents.
When he learned his brother was alive, his attitude had mostly calmed down since his first appearance. He spoke calmly with the other members of the Alliance, as well as keeping his cool during Tsunade's outburst.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Kage
Specialty: Lightning/ Taijutsu
Elements: All Basic 5, Hellfire, Rain
Your ninjutsu:
Raiton: Raikage Raiton no Yoroi (Thunder Shadow's Lightning Release Armor)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 50 (+10 every turn active)
Damage: +60 to taijutsu and +40 to Lightning (-20 to user because of strain)
Description: By instantly wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Fourth Raikage can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. While using this technique, his reflexes and are comparable to that of Maito Gai in Fourth Gate Mode, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming lightning attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce his chest.
(Usable 1 Times)
(Last 4 Turns)
(User Can't Use Wind Techs, Earth techs, or Water Techs that are spit from the mouth)
(Contact with water will electrocute the User)

Raiton: Raiga Bomu (Lightning Style: Liger Bomb)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: the Raikage grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a powerbomb maneuver. This is devastating enough to shatter the ground itself on impact. Darui noted that nobody has ever survived it before, and had Sasuke Uchiha not used Susanoo, he might have been killed by it. The impact of this technique was strong enough to snap two of Susanoo's rib bones
(Usable 2times Per Battle)
(S-Rank Ninja and Higher can Survive this Jutsu Only Once, But Speed is slowed due to the effects on the Neck. Paralyzing them)

Raiton: Kono Za Han'i, Kaishoku Motte Raikage!!
Lightning Release: This is The Extent, Dont Mess With The Raikage!!!

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Chakra: 60 (+ 30 Every Turn)
Damage: 120 (+50 to Raiton) (+ 30 To User Every Turn)
Description: As The Raikage is known to have the chakra levels of a Bijuu, by combining more chakra with his Raikage Armor, he creates a huge outer layer of Lightning Chakra which then shapes into the shape of a feral dog as the electricity stands as if it were fur when a dog gets mad. This makes the Raikage appear as if he has his own Bijuu and this Chakra function much like his armor but on a far greater scale.
His Defense
Opponent's lightning and Earth does nothing to him regardless of the jutsu. He is however comparatively weaker to wind.
Control of Lightning
Makes Him Able to utilize any lightning jutsu without seals
Power
Able to cause metre wide craters where ever he steps. (opponent takes 20 damge if near Short)
Speed
Runs with Same Speed as The Raikage Assualt Armor with the speed of his Armor..
The main Drawback is the amount of Chakra used and the strain it puts on the nerves.
(User can't use any technique over C-rank after use)
(User Cant move 2 turns afterwards)
(Usable Once)
(User can't use Earth Or Wind while in use)
(Last 2 turns)
(Raikage Only Technique)

Girochin Doroppu ( Righteous Lightning Sinking Anger Lightning Axe )
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (-5 to user)
Description: After Covering Themselves With Raikage Assault Armor the User, jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent. The Power Of This attack is Strong Enough To Break Multiple Bones.
(Usable 4 times)

Rariatto (Lightning Plough Hot Sword)
Rank: S / Forbidden
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 / 60
Damage: 80 / 120
Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest. The attack is straightforward, though, and can be easily seen through with the Sharingan. Kirabi and The Raikage Can Combine Their Efforts Both Using This Technique at the Same Time to Create a Force Powerful Enough To Decapitate On Contact.

Raiton| Yurezuchi (Lightning Release| Quaking Thunder)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user clasp their hands and formulates Raiton chakra on thier palms then the user will then proceed to slam their hand into the ground, cracking the upper surface and unleashing a torrent of lightning pillars through the ground that extend up into the air and towards the target. If target is standing on ground, they may loose their balance besides being possibly electrocuted.
(Usable 2 Times)

Hebereke Tentei Kobushi: Drunken God Fist
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (+10 to Drunken techs) (-20 to falling)
Description: After entering the Drunken Fist state, the user continues to drink and then enhances the effects by applying chakra. By doing so the user begins to move faster, and become even more unpredictable and fluid. The user becomes so fluid and unpredictable in his motion that even the MS can't determine the users movements and allows the user to dodge techniques on a whim in a unorthadox but effective way without the use of a ninjutsu. But despite this the user becomes so drunk that it becomes harder for him to control his chakra therefore the user only becomes unable to use Nin or Genjutsu in this mode.
(Last 3 turns)
(usable once)

Kongou Koku Retsu Zan| Country Destroying Adamantine Slash
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user first applies chakra to most of his body until it radiates off of his skin, then by rearing back the user then preforms a powerful chop to the earth itself with a subsequent wave blast surrounding him on both sides. Although the wave increases the range of it somewhat, the true damage property is a point-blank range. If the opponent is near when this move takes place it means near instant death as the chakra pressure seems to crush there bodies once released.
(Usable once)
(User can't manipulate his chakras for three turns afterwards

Satsui no Hado| Surge of Murderous Intent
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (+50 to taijutsu based attacks)
Description: To tap into Satsui no Hado, a fighter must be so consumed with the desire to win that they are willing to kill. As a result, only people who push themselves to be the best at all costs can take advantage of it. However, the untrained mind can be driven to a temporary insanity if they have not prepared for it. For those who do succeed in controlling it, they develop an almost cold, cynical detachment from themselves. Using this the user also develops a new fighting style called; Ansatsuken or the "assassination fist" this allows any of the user taijutsu based attacks to have more destructive power as the user now has amplified his intent to kill ten-fold. During the time this is in use the a kanji with the symbol of destruction which appears on the user's back. Also during this mode, the user focuses on three major principles:
Hadō (Surge)
It is the founding principle behind Ansatsuken. Through Hadō, a martial artist utilizes his/her will (or intent) to draw in chakra and project it out at an opponent as a concussive force upto Short Range.
Shōryū (Rising Dragon)
This is a set of techniques where a martial artist uses chakra to propel himself/herself upward at the airborne opponent. During the ascent, he/she is invincible to most attacks. However, his/her descent renders him/her vulnerable.
Tatsumakisenpū (Tornado Kick)
The martial artist's body is supported and spun above the ground on a column of spiralling chakra for a limited time of one turn. With this the user is able to "float in the air" for a certain amount of time.
With these priniciples the user is able to deliver powerful blows to the opponent at the cost losing himself in the process.
(Usable Once Per Battle)
(Users Chakra Manipulation is ceased for 2 turns afterwards)
( Once in the grip of this bloodlust, no Nin or Gen jutsu can be used. }
(Last 3 Turns)
Background Info.
History: While little is known about his track record as a shinobi, it was shown that he was part of the Third Raikage's special team tasked to hunt and subdue the Eight-Tailed Giant Ox when its past jinchūriki was unable to control it, unleashing a rampage. He was responsible for cutting off one of the Eight-Tails' four horns.
The level of trust the village had for him is apparent, such as how he is shown backing the Third Raikage up to deal with the Ox during one of the rampages, standing right beside him for most of it. The fact his brother Killer Bee was chosen to be the Ox's new jinchūriki suggests he was already intended to be the next Raikage (as per the tradition of having jinchūriki with close bonds to the Kage)

Invasion of Pain arc
A was first seen enraged by news of Killer Bee's capture by Akatsuki. When he learned that the culprit was Sasuke Uchiha, a missing-nin from Konoha, he complained about why the Hokage had not dealt with him, compared to how fast they had dealt with the Hyūga Incident.[7] With Killer Bee's capture coming so soon after that of Yugito, A called for a meeting of the five Kage to discuss Akatsuki. He also instructed Team Samui to inform Konoha that he will personally deal with Sasuke.
Five Kage Summit arc
A departed for the Kage summit with two bodyguards: Darui and C. On their way to the Land of Iron they reunited with Team Samui, who provided them with information on Sasuke acquired in Konoha. C quickly discovered that Team Samui had been followed by Naruto Uzumaki. A kept his men from attacking Naruto and agreed to listen to what he had to say. Naruto pleaded for the Raikage to spare Sasuke, but his request was flatly refused and the Raikage berated him for sticking up for a criminal.
When the Kage Summit began, A quickly showed his disapproval of the other villages by smashing the table in front of him, prompting all of the bodyguards to come to their Kage's aid. After they returned to their position, A pointed out that only Kumogakure has never had an Akatsuki representative, nor has it ever employed Akatsuki for a battle. He insinuated that the current Hokage, Danzō, used Akatsuki to dispose of the Third Hokage and the Fourth Kazekage. When Danzō was nominated to lead a joint task force to deal with Akatsuki, A was outraged. Before he could raise much of an objection, however, White Zetsu appeared and told those in attendance that Sasuke was nearby.
After getting rid of White Zetsu, A and his bodyguards immediately mobilized to go after Sasuke, and were drawn to Taka's battle with the Land of Iron's samurai. When C told him that Sasuke's chakra was straight below them, the Raikage burst through the floor where they encountered Sasuke and his team. A easily destroyed Suigetsu's sword and caused Jūgo to transform into the second stage of his Cursed Seal in order to fight him. Although Jūgo initially appeared to have the advantage, A was able to punch a hole through his arms and into his chest and evade his attacks, before finally defeating him.
Sasuke and A then began to fight. With his Lightning Release Armor, A avoided most of Sasuke's attacks, deflecting his lightning charged sword, and was barely wounded by his Chidori. He then proceeded to counter Sasuke but the assault was negated through Sasuke's use of an incomplete Susanoo to protect himself. Sasuke attacked A with Amaterasu, which he dodged. Sasuke then coated his Susanoo with Amaterasu's flames to deter additional physical attacks. In his growing rage, A ignored this and attacked through the flames, causing his left arm to catch flame, but still managed to smash through the defense and hit Sasuke.
When A prepares another "final blow", Sasuke began to stage a counterattack. Before A could be further wounded, the Kazekage, Gaara, intervened, using his sand to block the attacks. A was angered by the interruption, but Gaara stated that continuing his attack would only cause additional injury. Gaara then began to speak to Sasuke. While waiting for Gaara to finish, A severed his arm and instructed C to stop the bleeding with his medical ninjutsu so that he could rejoin the battle. Sasuke then collapsed the roof with Susanoo. While the Kage and their bodyguards dodged the rubble, Sasuke escaped from the hall to find and kill Danzō. After catching up with Sasuke, A learned from Madara Uchiha that his brother was still alive, which both shocked and angered him. He realized what Bee's plan actually was and said he will punish him with his "Iron Claw".
After Madara revealed his "Moon's Eye Plan" , the Kage refused to surrender Killer Bee and Naruto to the Akatsuki. Madara then declared the start of the Fourth Great Shinobi World War and disappeared. The need of an alliance between the Five Great Nations was then brought up again. Mifune nominated A to be the leader due to how well he had already dealt with the enemy, and because he could better control Killer Bee than anyone. After asking the other Kage, it was agreed to make him leader of the Shinobi Alliance.
A's first decision was to locate his younger brother before he would fall into the hands of Akatsuki. He and his men managed to find Killer Bee in time fighting Kisame Hoshigaki, thanks to Kisame's reckless tactics. Together, the Raikage and his younger brother decapitated Kisame with a Double Lariat, later revealed that this was not Kisame rather one of Zetsu's clones. After their victory, A angrily scolded Bee for his antics. After arriving back in Kumogakure he and the others are greeted at the gate by the villagers. His assistant said that they needed to be briefed on what happened at the Five Kage Summit.
Fourth Great Shinobi World War arc
After a war planning session with Kumogakure's military forces, A ordered that the other villages be notified about a new Kage meeting in three days. At the meeting, he begins questioning their early arrival, but discussion soon begins. After a heated debate regarding whether or not the Alliance should be relocating the jinchūriki ends in the approval of such a matter, A decides that Naruto Uzumaki and Killer Bee will be sent to a refuge that he has kept in reserve. He mentions that it is appropriate that it be in Kumogakure, seeing as the village has not given rise to any Akatsuki members. The place turns out to be an isolated island where he and his younger brother used to train together intensely.
Battle For the God of Lightning
E searched long and hard for the weilder of such a powerful weapon only rumored to have been once in the hands of the Shodaime Raikage. After a few months of searching his work payed off and encountered the famed Akasuki member, Kazuku. Kazuku having killed the previous owner of the weapon took his heart which in turn also allowed him to weikd the famed Spear. after a long and tedious battle, the Raikage prevailed and now wields the weapon becoming the strongest Raiton user of this day and age.
Soon after, a man named ~Hasashi~ stole the spear from the Raikage, stripping him of its power, but he got it back soon enough, but lost it soon after too.
Obtaining the Curse Mark of Heaven
After his battle with Kazuku, E was approched by and elder ninja with a simple task: Finding three famed scientist. After doing so the Raikage returned quickly to give the info the the shinobi and was granted the famed Curse Mark of Heaven.
Other

As the Raikage of Kumogakure and supreme Leader of the Shinobi Alliance, A is undoubtedly a powerful shinobi. His younger brother Killer Bee also mentioned in his fight with Sasuke that, before him, only A was able to deflect the Eight-Tails. Karin notes that his chakra level is comparable to that of a tailed beast.
Taijutsu
A uses a 'power' type fighting style. He possesses a great deal of physical strength, as he first appeared lifting a large amount of weight with just one hand, and broke his desk with a single punch. His strength is further displayed at the Five Kage summit when he punches through a wall, the floor, and even snapped Suigetsu's sword in two (albeit the sword already had a partial crack in it from Suigetsu's duel with Killer Bee). A was also able to punch a hole in Jūgo's arm and chest with ease, despite the latter being armored with his Level 2 Cursed Seal form. He was also able to cut through one of the four horns of Eight-Tailed Giant Ox when it was being subdued thirty years prior with his physical strength and Lightning Release Armor.
Despite his large physique, the Raikage is noted for being very fast, grabbing Zetsu's throat before he had a chance to react. Befitting his appearance, the Raikage seems to prefer taijutsu combat to which he has shown tremendous prowess at. In addition to powerful punches, he is shown able to use equally impressive throws and take-downs. He prefers using wrestling techniques to more traditional forms of taijutsu.
He is shown to have an immense tolerance for pain, as he was able to withstand having his arm set on fire by Amaterasu and cutting it off without flinching.
Lightning Techniques
On top of his physical capabilities, A is also skilled in lightning-based jutsu, releasing a continuous surge of electricity from his body when confronting Sasuke. This electricity acts as a compliment to A's natural physical strength and speed to the point where he claims not even the Sharingan should be able to keep up with his movements, as such he is a master of Nintaijutsu. This is due to electricity stimulating his nervous system and speeding up his neural synapses, amplifying his reflexes. While using this ability, he is able to dodge Jūgo's multiple chakra blast and Amaterasu, both at point blank range. His speed in this state is greatly increased, to the point that it was mentioned by C that the Raikage's nervous system and reaction speed becomes comparable to that of the Fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze.
The electricity can also work as a powerful defense. By momentarily increasing the electrical surge, A was able to deflect a strike from Sasuke's Kusanagi Sword: Chidori Katana from behind and receive only a minor wound on his chest from a direct Chidori strike. While combining his lightning power with the full force of his chakra, just its sheer energy is strong enough to demolish all matter around him.
He has also shown the ability to focus lightning chakra into a sharp enough point to neatly cut through human limbs.

[Curse Mark of Heaven
The cursed seals were one of the most frequently-used jutsu of Orochimaru in the series (before he was permanently sealed and incapacitated), which he usually gave to his most powerful and unique followers. To apply a cursed seal, Orochimaru needed to bite his intended target. As he had sharp fangs and an extendable neck, this was a relatively simple task. The seal then appeared on the body of the victim at the point of application, and they subsequently lost consciousness. The design of the seals varied from person-to-person. Sometime later, had the victims survived, they would awaken with the first level of the seal active and be enraged due to the seal's influence. The seals worked by forcibly drawing chakra from the user's body, giving the user a chakra capacity beyond what they would normally be capable of, as well as increased physical performance, especially in battle.
Restrictions:
-It can only be activated once per battle and once activated it lasts for 5 turns.
-While in this mode Your attacks are all +20 damage but leaves the user drained of chakra when the curse mark mode is deactivated.
(Fuuinjutsu: Juin Jutsu) - Sealing Technique: Cursed Seal

Rank :A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A(-5 per turn to target if they us it and target can be self)
Description:This jutsu creates a seal that gives its target more chakra and more strenght.(+60 chakra to target and + 5 damage for taijutsu if regular seal.If Curse Seal Of Heaven +80 chakra and +10 for taijutsu)
Note:Level 2 is double the gain and the damage to the one with the seal)
While in the first level of the Curse Mark, The Raikage has multiple flame like patterns flowing across his body. During his second level, The Raikage's body turns completely pitch black the tattoos on his arms becoming a vibrant ye as it reacts with his primary element of Raiton. His Muscles then grow to a even greater size giving him significant boost in Taijutsu and Speed. Lastly, his hair grows to about mid-way down his back in a large spiky quality with a brilliant yellow glow and all the features from his face seem to have disappeared except for his eyes which have a glowing yellow tone without pupils.

Weapons:
Diskarmor

Diskarmor| (Diskuyori)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 50
Description: The Diskarmor is a small rounded shield, that looks exactly like the Raikage's belt, a Lion's Face engraved in a special chakra enhanced metal, but has spike protusions to represent the lion's mane. Worn on his fore-arm, he is able to be fling it at his opponent like a yo-yo, as a chain attached to a small compartment, allows the him to toss the weapon at the opponent while still having his hand's free, afterwards it retracts and returns to its original position. Using the Diskarmor, the user is able to combo, swing, and grapple opponents and objects within the field. The Diskarmor also serves it's main purpose as a sheild, the user may charge chakra into the sheild and use it to block/reflect certain attacks ( obviously only till the surface area of the shield ), but by doing so the user must sacrifice a jutsu the next turn.
(-User may only block 2 S-Rank Attacks)


Picture:
See Above.
Theme Song and Background Music:
LL Cool J- Mama said Knock you Out.
Battles

Won: Many
Lost: Few.


~Approved~ Nice idea of combining Kakuzu and the spear as it actually would be possible. Also it's forbidden to have rain in a canon bio, however considering you had it before that rule was made I will allow it.
 
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