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Dark release is a kg or adv element originating from the land of water. All users have the symbol of two overlapping diamonds on both their hands. These marks allow users to absorb chakra similar to fuunin and release it in a new dark form. Supposedly the process involves katon and raiton chakra but idfk z.z
 

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Dark release is a kg or adv element originating from the land of water. All users have the symbol of two overlapping diamonds on both their hands. These marks allow users to absorb chakra similar to fuunin and release it in a new dark form. Supposedly the process involves katon and raiton chakra but idfk z.z


"One of the Diamonds absorbs and the other Releases, that's the basic understanding. Also the Absorption has different elemental strengths than the Release, when you absorb it is strong against most types of energy this means all Wind, Lightning and Fire including KG that have no substance - whereas with Earth and Water because they have some form it's much harder to absorb. With the release ability, usually in the form of blue flames it is only strong against Fire and Wind."

Tasuke creates a Rasengan in his hand and looks at his student, "We'll be going over the absorbing technique first, it's B in Rank and still quite powerful. I want you to focus your chakras both fire and lightning into the marking on your palm. Then when you're ready come over and absorb this rasengan straight out of my hand by extracting the physical and spiritual energy that it produces."
 

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Ok z.z well lets just say ite me not black learning dis becuase i find with blacks personality to be akward with trainings...


I look at the rasengan and begin tracing the design on my hand with my fingers getting used to flowing chakra through them. After a few minutes i get them glow feintly afterwards i walk towards tasuke sensei and hold my palm out forwards and to my suprize the rasengan gets sucked into my hand like a vortex.
... Like that?
 

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Ok z.z well lets just say ite me not black learning dis becuase i find with blacks personality to be akward with trainings...


I look at the rasengan and begin tracing the design on my hand with my fingers getting used to flowing chakra through them. After a few minutes i get them glow feintly afterwards i walk towards tasuke sensei and hold my palm out forwards and to my suprize the rasengan gets sucked into my hand like a vortex.
... Like that?


"Yes, exactly like that. You know how to unlock your mark - however it only works well on Energy Based Techniques from the elements of Wind, Lightning and Flame because they dont have any solid form or properties. Water and Earth are a lot harder to absorb since they have form and can physically take a hold of them without chakra."

Learned : (Meiton: Kyūketsukō) - Dark Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user uses their dark release to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy (chakra) of another ninja and absorb it through the upper square of the mark on his left hand, which can then be used to perform Dark Release: Judgment.
Note: Can absorb up to A-Rank Wind, Fire and Lightning techniques, S-Rank raw chakra or C-Rank Water, all within reason. Has no effect on Earth techniques.

"Now I want you to do a similar thing with your palm again except this time I want you to grab my wrist and extract the chakra straight from me."

 

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opon instruction i once again activate my mark apon my left hand and i take hold of la senseis wrist after a brief momment of concentration i feel more chakra flow through my body invigorating me.
 

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opon instruction i once again activate my mark apon my left hand and i take hold of la senseis wrist after a brief momment of concentration i feel more chakra flow through my body invigorating me.
You should probably try that again and mention that you extract and absorb chakra, you have to be clear. It's not just about learning techniques it's about how you describe them and use them because people WILL pull you up on it.
 

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heh i flow the katon and raiton chakra through my hand making the Dark Seal glow brightly. i place my hand apon your wrist and feel the mark eating away at your chakra whilst adding to mine. then after wards i channel that chakra into blah blah blah dark release technique powered up by blah blah jutstu and blah blah blah cw that makes it f rank and happen in a millie second.... fighting dark release people is fun.... :)
 

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I mean you were doing good, up until the first blah. You don't even need to add the release you want to do i just wanted you to describe the absorption process of the Draining Touch, so...

do it again :3 Without the sass and if you want me to start adding my expectations before post, I expect at least 4 lines. And no Funny making big blank space. Thanks x.
 

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I mean you were doing good, up until the first blah. You don't even need to add the release you want to do i just wanted you to describe the absorption process of the Draining Touch, so...

do it again :3 Without the sass and if you want me to start adding my expectations before post, I expect at least 4 lines. And no Funny making big blank space. Thanks x.



The last part is seperate ... it was meant as a bash towards klad... your telling me to post the exact same ting....



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heh i flow the katon and raiton chakra through my hand making the Dark Seal glow brightly. i place my hand apon your wrist and feel the mark eating away at your chakra whilst adding to mine

There z.z
And dor attacks i can do 4 lines but just for absorbing when i know no other dark techs i dont see much that whould be relevant to the training i could type z.z
 

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The last part is seperate ... it was meant as a bash towards klad... your telling me to post the exact same ting....



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heh i flow the katon and raiton chakra through my hand making the Dark Seal glow brightly. i place my hand apon your wrist and feel the mark eating away at your chakra whilst adding to mine

There z.z
And dor attacks i can do 4 lines but just for absorbing when i know no other dark techs i dont see much that whould be relevant to the training i could type z.z
Why you bashing Klad?

Well you can do four lines I believe in you, expand your vocabulary, try again
 

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becuase he op af with dark release z.z
heh as you wish

The excitment of this new power coursed through me.
after calming down i once again listen to sensei sama kun instruction.
afterwards i activate my mark and place it apon his wrist.
he winced slightly as i felt his chakra flowing into me invigorating me with warmth.


that good enough? Lmao
 

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I honestly don't know what to do with you <.< I did say no unnecessary spaces. Alright I'll show you how it's done.

Tasuke looks at the palms of his hands as they looked up at him and his eyes shot up glaring at his target with a grin, fists now clenched as he moulded his dark chakra through his tattoo's that represented such a feat. He took a couple of slow steps forward before running towards the Target, namely you - Zero. Tasuke extended his left hand out and grabbed him by the neck, the right one was ready for any kind of intercept from his arms, but that was not the main aspect of his move - he tightened his grip around his students neck as the built up dark chakra surfaced between his palm and the skin of his opponent's neck absorbing chakra straight from his system to fuel his ever hungry ability.

(Meiton: Dassui Fureru) Dark Release: Draining Touch
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (-40 chakra points to the enemy)
Damage: N/A
Description: By activating the absorption mark in one of his hands and touching an enemy, the user is able to absorb up to 40 chakra points on contact. This chakra can then be used to fuel release-type Dark Release techniques.


Not Hard now Counter with just Tai.
 

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Being in a very obvious stance it is clear you intend to charge me as your hand extends and feet start a chuggin im already prepared as your hand extends towards my neck my whole body moves into motion my whole body lowers as i draw a powerful kick with my left leg into your lower ribs. since you were so focused on my neck and upperbody and the mental concentration of the meiton seal i used it agaisnt you to break past your guard. .-.
anyway thanks for contining this i probaly whould have forgotten about it
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