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(Ranton: Earozoru no Arashi) - Storm Release: Aerosol Storm

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers Storm chakra within his lungs, he then expels the storm chakra through his mouth in the form of a cloud of mist, this cloud is made up of fine water particles mixed with lightning to complete the power of storm, the cloud of mist then travels forward towards its target and wets the targets skin, while also continuously stuns the target and paralyzes them, the cloud of storm could also be used as a defensive wall to block earth and fire techniques up to S Rank from reaching the user.
Note - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Must have a Storm Bio and mastered Storm Release
- Can be used 3 times per battle
- No Storm techniques in the same turn
- This technique could defend against all Earth and Fire techniques up to S-Rank, it could defend against earth because of the earth being weak against the lightning composed within the storm and fire because of the water composed within the storm

Perform the technique and provide a couple of advantages and disadvantages, also if you have any questions feel free to ask them.
 

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I gather my chakra in my lungs, one part is raiton the other is suiton, I mix the two together to make storm chakra, I set myself up and spew out a dark, thick, cloud of mist. I send the dark mist towards the opponent which wets him. While also paralyzing him on contact.

Pros:
- The technique can paralyze the opponent on contact
- Can defend against S-Rank water and fire

Cons:
- Only reach short-mid
- No storm technique next turn
 

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Good enough, but note the technique can be used as an attack as well as a diversion to conceal the users presence and then launch a surprise attack from a different location with perhaps the use of the hiding like a mole technique, while the opponent is left to counter the cloud of storm, also the technique is rather fast to perform.

That being said, consider the technique learned ^^
 
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Okay lez get this going.

(Ranton: Kumono Ware)-Storm Release: Cloud Cracking
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description The user will send storm chakra towards any construct that is made of metal like substances (Kunais, shurikens,etc) this also includes normal swords, special swords like a CW for example will not be effected. This also effects Paper (Explosive Tags for example) like substances, though this does not effect paper ninjutsu. The user will channel storm chakra around the constructs, using the water vapor in the air they will wet the constructs then a electrical charge due to the storm chakra will appear on the constructs. What happens to the construct is since the water part will force the constructs to weaken, the paper is naturally weak to water. Also metal will weaken and rust the metal due to the chakra infused storm weakening it. The lighting portion will then tear through the constructs rendering them useless.
- Can only be used 3 times in a battle
- Can not use Storm release jutsus the same turn as this one
- Must have mastery over Storm Release


(Ranton: sh no chuushutsu)- Storm Release: Limb extraction
Type: offensive-Supplementary-Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A very dangerous short range technique. The user by channeling storm chakra towards area of bone on the users body and releases the storm chakra in the direction the bone is aiming. So if the elbow of the left arm for example is facing upward towards the oppopents chest, the storm will be released in that direction towards the opponent chest. The storm chakra is concentrated but not sharp it can shock the area hit. So if an opponent is touched by the chakra an electrical shock is sent to the opponent which can severely harm them, this shock is also precise enough to tear through normal armor and normal metal. The storm chakra stays connected to the user and can reach up to 5 meters in length. Its color is bright blue. Note chakra is not molded in the bone but simply uses the bones as a medium to direct the storm chakra.
- Using this jutsu counts towards the turn slot so releasing the storm chakra more then once will count towards move slot
- Can only be used a total of 5 times in battle
- Must have mastery of storm release

Okay this two are quite straight forward on purpose. If you have any questions tell me now.
 

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I do have one, what did you have in mind when you created these techniques? Or what are the purpose of these 2 techniques?

Do I have to perform them? I am feeling lazy right now :coffee:.
 

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For the cloud cracking, I lost a battle once due to a simple kunai when I was a noob <_<. But I also believe that this wuld be great to use to counter Minato FTG kunais, weapons, and papers. A lot of ninjutsu techs have put kunai and shiz into play and well I wanted to try and limit the opponents arsenal as much I as I could.

For the limb extraction, I'm not the best close range fighter. I wanted to mainly find away to improve on it. I studied the Kaguya clan and thought that it can be done with storm how the extract their bones. Of course its not as deadly with more abilities. So I created this to help me in close range battle.

No you don't need to perform them they are straight forward.
 

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That's great stuff :p, my turn then

(Ranton - Kettō sutōmuringu) - Storm Release: Dual Storm Rings
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user firsts performs a single hand seal and then proceeds to stream their storm chakra out of the palm of their hands, then with the use of shape manipulation, the user shapes the storm chakra into rings of light, looking much like the beams of light from the laser circus technique, except in the shape of 2 rings of storm, the max size of the rings would be about half a meter in diameter, and the user could then toss the rings to any desired location.
Note - Can only be used 3 times per battle
- Must have mastered storm release to use
- Only storm techniques of A Rank during the same turn, and the following
- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-

(Ranton: Arashi washi no hikō) - Storm Release: Flight of the Storm Eagle
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers and focuses a large amount of his storm chakra to his dominant hand and arm after performing 3 hand seals and creates an eagle of storm with large expanded wings, the Storm wings would sprout outwards from the users arm, making it seem as if the users arm has transformed into the storm wings, but instead its just the storm itself that takes shape around the users arm, the user could utilize the storm eagle at close range for a single close combat fatal attack or manipulate the storm eagle to shoot outwards to great distances to attack at long range, the speed of the flying eagle is on par with the speed of the lazer circus technique, though when the storm eagle is shot into long range it only goes straight toward the position it was aimed at, when the target/opponent comes into contact with the storm eagle, it would numb their entire body and/or electrocute him/her.
Note - Can only be used once per battle
- Cannot use any storm techniques in the same turn as well as the following
- The user won't be able to mold chakra above A Rank for the turn after this technique is used
- The size of the storm wings are approximately 2 meters in length, maximum.
- The storm wings cannot be used for flight.
- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-

(Ranton: Tarrloc no dangan) - Storm Release: Bullets of Tarrloc
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will first perform one handseal. As the handseal is completed a dome of lightning will form around the user. The lightning dome is transparent and thus doesn't block the vision of the user. After the dome forms the user will then gather water chakra in his lungs and repeatedly spew water bullets in front of them. As they spew the user will release the water chakra into the lightning. The water chakra mixes with the lightning and turns it into storm bullets, the maximum size of the water bullets are about six inches in length
-Usable thrice per battle.
-No Storm above A rank in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by -Yashiro-

Any questions?
 
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