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Sasuke approaches the girl at a steady pace, not a leisurely one, but not panicked either. I am Sasuke Uchiha. I hear tale that you want power. I may be able to help with that, but I will warn you now that you will learn the hard way. After saying these last words, Sasuke activates his 1T Sharingan, and channels his chakra into his opponents brain to place her under an illusion. While in this illusion, the girl would see the terrain change from a grassy knoll, to a field of stone spires that all come to points. Both yourself and I would be balancing on one with boards. (Basically, standing on what Naruto is sitting on in this manga scan)

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Without so much as wobbling his board, Sasuke would then throw four seemingly normal shuriken at you. What you wouldn't know is they are all connected to strings that Sasuke is using to control them, so as they approach they will all take to a sort of circular pattern around you. After they all make a complete rotation around you, Sasuke would then pull the strings tight, to bind the girl in place.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.




Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.




Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: Using careful manipulation and well-timed reflexes, the user hurls a number of Shuriken with wire attached at the opponent. While in the air, the shinobi can manipulate the wire to make the blades circle the target and bind them.
Note:Must Have Sharingan to use this jutsu

 

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As I stand bare footed thinking deep thoughts, I am suddenly approached by a young male with black blue hair.

I am Sasuke Uchiha. I hear tale that you want power. I may be able to help with that, but I will warn you now that you will learn the hard way.
Before I could say anything back I notice his eyes change, I've heard of these type of people before, he must've been one of those sharigan users. I quickly shifted my sight towards his chin, but almost instantly notice something weird, the grassy plain we were on was no longer a grassy plain but instead a field of rock spires. My mind was calm and clear as always,this allowed me to figure out this was an illusion quite easily, the reasoning behind this conclusion being that he didn't do any earth type handseals for the rock spires and also the fact that even though I could see myself balancing on a block of wood atop a rock spire the feel beneath my feet was that of grass,so I simply bite my left thumb,thus freeing me from the illusion.

Still looking down at his chin to prevent eye contact, I notice his hand quickly reach into his ninja pouch and remove a number of shuriken which he then hurls at me, quickly I concentration earth chakra into my right arm, I then release the chakra causing a ring of rocks to be flung towards the shuriken, this would cause the shuriken to fall to the ground.


( Doton: IwaRendan) - Earth Release:Rock Barrage
Rank:D
Type ffensive
Range: Short– Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points:20
Description:The user will concentrate their chakra into their arm and then release their chakra creating a ring of rocks that are then flung at the opponent.

"Enjoy playing with rock spires do we? Fine have it your way...."

Without a moments hesitation I simply raised my arm to the direction where the boy stood, this creating stone spikes to rise from the ground and impale him from below.


(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

I then take about several shuriken out of my pouch, infuse them with Katon based chakra throw them to Sasuke when they are in close range of him I mentally ignite them causing them to be engulfed in flames and thus inflict extra damage to him.


(Katon: Kaen Shuriken Ranbu ) - Fire Release: Blazing Shuriken Dance
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken infused with fire at the enemy and then, through a mental command, ignites them to cause extra damage.
 
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Great move. Next time, I would go into a little more detail on how you figured out you were in a genjutsu before claiming it so, but that varies from person to person anyway, so it's really not a big deal. You counter for my shuriken works great, but I'm curious about the stone spike move. As I'm sure you know, Sasuke has a lightning specialty, so that would be better used when his attention is distracted, or at an unexpected moment. That's just my opinion though. Great move overall.




Sasuke watches as the girl does away with the shuriken with ease. Good, she may be worth my time after all.

As he thinks this, Sasuke then notices a pool of chakra under his current position and thinks Damn, she works fast he thinks as he kneels and puts his palm on the ground. He channels his unfocused raiton chakra into the amassed chakra below him to neutralize its effects, and protect him by stopping it from being carried forward.

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty




After stopping this threat, Sasuke looks up and notices shuriken coming his way, and from the looks of it, they are covered in some sort of chakra. Thinking fast, Sasuke claps his hands to form a vortex of spinning water around himself. After a moment, it would then form into a wave which would then overtake the shuriken, dousing their flames and knocking them off their path. Having the elemental advantage, the wave would continue on toward the girl, though weakened.

Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.



Sasuke then bites his thumb and forms one handseal to perform the summoning technique. He summons a two-headed snake which rests beside Sasuke as the wave crashes into your position.


Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user summons a double-headed, snake to attack his enemies. The snake is not big but is very fast and dangerous. Its bite carries a B-Rank physical damage and its body is small and slippery. Its mass is somewhat larger than the user but not by much.
Note: Requires signing of the Snake Contract
Note: Can only be summoned once



What are your commands, master?

Rush the girl. Attack at the first opening. Sasuke says coldly as he folds his arms. With his sharingan still active, he watches to see how the girl would handle the wave followed by a blitz attack.

What will she do when she cannot rely on brute strength alone? Sasuke thinks as he watches.
 

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The vortex which had stopped my shuriken continues as a wave towards me, although now it should be enervated. I couldn't see Sasuke due to the wave so I couldn't risk countering the wave, it would just leave me vulnerable to whatever attack he probably followed up with on the other side.Quickly I channeled earth chakra into the ground below me thus turning it into fine sand which I easily dug through.


(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.


I dug deep into the soil and was now about four meters directly under Sasuke (seeing as we were at mid range and I dug diagonally downwards) . Although I was underground I could still sense what was going on above it. As the wave crashed where I was previously standing a large object seemed to be heading towards my previous position also, my best guess was that it was probably a summoning although I couldn't tell what type it was. I then moved About two meters behind him before subtly emerging from the ground. I then expeditiously performed the Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger handseals, inhaled a large amount of air and using my Katon chakra released it as a huge fireball (which would be close to the ground not leaving Sasuke any space to duck) heading towards him this would burn him severely causing great damage.


( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.


At this point he. should have noticed me so as the ball of flames approached him I released Earth chakra into the ground causing a minor tremor which would cause him to loose his footing either falling forward,backwards or he'd try to keep balance thus not creating chance for a counter,eitherway the fireball would make contact with him.


(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
 

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Very good! That is exactly what I meant, just because a technique (or this case summon) is stronger than what you can do away with doesn't mean you are screwed. You can get away, much like you did here. The only issue that I see is the earth technique you used to go underground is very slow, so depending on the situation, you may or may not catch the end of my water technique. I'm going to go as though you escaped flawlessly, but keep that in mind for future fights. Also, remember that Sasuke has his Sharingan active, and it can see chakra. So even though the water blocked me from seeing you go underground, I can still see your doton chakra in the spot you went underground. Given how that technique works, by forming the earth into fine grains making movement easy, you would constantly put out chakra as you moved, so I could literally stare at the ground and follow you if I wanted. Or I could use the Swamp of the Underworld technique to trap you there until you drown/suffocate. Doujutsu is a very tricky thing, and fairly common in our RP, so keep that in mind as well. Also, you say you are two meters behind me when you emerge, fire the fireball stream, and then make the ground shake. I believe your firestream would reach me before you would have a chance to use the second technique because two meters is like two-three steps.

One more thing, you don't have to recognize that all my moves went through. You can start your next move as soon as you see that I am starting my first, if you really wanted too. This is discouraged, because your character wouldn't know what was happening and would have a counter ready anyway (or metagaming as it is usually called). You are your character, so you are limited to what they are experiencing. I'm going to be doing this here by using a different move to counter your first, thus nullifying my earlier summon. So he isn't there anymore, essentially.

Very good job though, you are doing great. Don't let my comments get you discouraged, I am trying to make this as much as a learning experience as possible, so I am nitpicking.




As Sasuke's wave crashes over the girl's position, he notices that it only continues outward, never coming into contact with a foreign body. Where did she go.. he mumbles as he darts his eyes to the left, right, up, and all around. She is no where to be seen, but Sasuke also realizes that the chakra in his wave could also be blocking his sight of her, so he stays focused. That's when he sees it, a flash of doton chakra coming right beneath him. Preparing himself, Sasuke channels his doton chakra, and awaits the emergence of whatever this moving chakra was, technique or foe. Being on guard, Sasuke easily hears his opponent emerge behind him. Turning on a dime, Sasuke faces his opponent as he watches as the girl spews a fire stream at Sasuke, in very close range. Instinctively, Sasuke then begins to lean forward while bending at the knees when he feels the earth start to shake. This throws him off balance to the point that he topples forward. Having concentrated his doton chakra into his hands before, Sasuke both catches himself and infuses the ground with his chakra by slamming both palms down at once. This creates 1/4 of a dome made of earth, which raises in front of Sasuke protecting him from the blast.

Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user slams his hands on the ground and creates a 1/4 dome of earth, which protects them from frontal external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls



Knowing that the fire technique would create a lot of debris and smoke, Sasuke adds to this by throwing down several smoke bombs all around the pairs position, completely covering the area in a heavy smoke cloud. After this, he carefully manipulates his chakra in a way that he suppresses the sound of every move he makes, to the point that he is virtually silent. With this, he draws his sword from his belt, and steps onto the dome he created before. As he steps, he pushes off hard, but still silent, and travels through the smoke swinging his sword simultaneously. This entire process would occur very quickly, with the step and jump occurring almost as soon as the smoke takes over the area. Being able to see the girls chakra with his Sharingan, Sasuke aims for the girl's throat with his swing.

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: Muon Satsujin Jutsu, the ability to commit a silent homicide, is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense. Best tactic is when used with Hidden Mist jutsu. The technique works by having the user focus his chakra and his complete attention on moving fluidly, rapidly but muffling any sound he may make while moving as well as his presence, etc. It doesn't suppress his chakra or hides it but it can make the opponent virtually undetected if he manages to get on the opponents blind spot.

 

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"Damn!! It's times like this when i wish I had learned wind release first!!"

Not being able to see I decide to defend myself first and attack later, surely Sasuke would try to attack me from the smoke. I quickly throw a lighter with an open flame ahead of me and using my Katon chakra, enhance the flame to form a wall in front of me this would prevent him from using the Muon Satsujin Jutsu. Since this would also probably obstruct his view from anything beyond the fire wall I continue by performing Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger hanseals, inhale air and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra,I spew a large fireball towards the flame wall this would surely catch him off guard and burn him severely. I then channel earth chakra into the ground below him and create a few rock pillars that protrude from the ground aiming to impale him from underneath (seeing as he would stop in front of the wall to avoid burning)

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.


"Alright Smart Eyes, Lets see you get out of this."
 

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Great use of the techniques, although your reasoning for the counter feels metagamy. Basically, you are saying that your character assumes that I will be right in front of you. Why would they assume that? Why wouldn't they assume that it was coming from the sides or above? Next time you are faced with this scenario, just remember that throwing smoke bombs are considered free form, so there is nothing wrong with running out of the smoke as soon as you see that it is starting to form. Again, from what I can tell you used all of the techniques correctly.


As Sasuke is about to lunge toward his opponent, he notices through his Sharingan that the person was starting to concentrate a large amount of chakra into their lungs. Stopping his forward motion, and bracing himself on the earth wall, Sasuke jumps diagonal and backward at a 45 degree angle while taking a huge breath in. He infuses this air with his fuuton chakra and produces a stream strong enough to take him mid range away from his last location, far enough away that he wouldn't have to worry about either fire technique.

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
Note: The user must already be airborne to use



While he is traveling in the air, after he is done with the air stream, Sasuke begins to concentrate his doton chakra while forming the ram hand seal. Once he lands, he infuses the ground with his chakra, and causes a riptide whirlpool of earth to appear under Kate's position, with the center being just behind her. Because of the nature of the antlion, Kate's feet would surely be drug out from under her, as the vortex sucks her toward the middle.

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.



Hmm.. This girl is a lot more resourceful than I originally thought. She will probably make quick work of that technique, so I need to think of something else fast. Sasuke thinks to himself upon completing the earth technique.

Fine! No more games! Prepare for my Curse Seal! Sasuke proclaims, as red dotted lines begin to run all over his body in an arbitrary pattern. Once they cover most of his left side, the red lines turn black, and Sasuke stands straight folding his arms. Now, the real fight begins. Give me your best shot.

Rank : A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (-10 to user per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wills the opening of the cursed seal partially, giving him more chakra and more strength, as the Senjutsu Chakra contained within the seal is unleashed upon the users body in a reduced amount. Patterned red lines that extend from the Cursed Seal on the body of the user course through the user's body, covering it in a repetitive pattern as their body surges with chakra. When the state it done, the lines will become a solid black. While active, the seal actively consumes the users chakra in order to produce and fuel Senjutsu Chakra into his body. While in this stage the user gains +10 damage to his elemental Ninjutsu and +5 to his Taijutsu. His physical strength is slightly improved as is his speed.
Note: Lasts for 5 turns.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: Usable once.

 
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