Wounded

[ZeroCross2]

His bare feet touched the bark of the tree, he winched in pain as he sat hard next to the base of the tree, he origanally had a partner on this mission but the red haired ninja was lost behind enemy lines. A twig snaped off to his left, he quickly drew his last kunai from it's holster. The sound got closer he began to sweat, in a blur of red and brown his partner, appeared breathing hard and completly exaughsted. "What are you doing?" he asked sitting down hard next to him. "Nothing", the raven haired boy replide, off to thier they heard footsteps.

Two men appeared out of the forest to thire right, "Well, well, well a good find, an uchiah and the next Kazakage, this is a surprise" the biggest of the two said. (just first part tell me if it was good)

 

[Gyakusetsu]

First part was good, but you need to run spell check on all of it. The first sentence is a run-on that can be broken into two sentences. After doing that, I would remove the word "tree" from the second sentence . If you say "sat down hard at the base" everyone will know your talking about the same tree you mentioned from the previous sentence and mentioning it twice sounds weird. The second paragraph was anticlimatic (I know you only asked for critique of the first, but hey what's the point in asking for partial critique?). You had a nice build-up going with the first paragraph but then with the actual appearance of the enemy it evaporated. Also, at the end of the first paragraph you left out a word probably "their right" is what you meant.