Skywardsword
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I am currently writing a fanfiction, actually its the first i ever write one. So far I've only written a few chapters, but i want to know if the idea is worthy of developing further or if I should just throw it away and try something else. Since the number of people who gave an opinion on it are low i decided to try in a forum... So i will write down a brief summary so the reader can answer the question based on that.
The story tells about a "what if" situation where Naruto was exiled from Konoha not much after the battle against Sasuke back in the Valley of the End. Two and a half years pass and the story continues following the normal Shippuden timeline, but with the consequences of Naruto's exile. The story mostly follows Naruto's POV and is centered around his travels while running away from the Akatsuki, but with him taking part of events he hadn't in the original part 2, an example is how he watches as Gaara is captured by Deidara and later even tries to follow him and Sasori. The story's pairing is NaruHina, maybe something else...but i havent decided yet. Also Naruto's personality becomes different after he's exiled but not conpletely dark. He is also more powerfull, but not too much. I would say he's toe to toe with Sasuke at the begging of Shippuden. So its a Semi-Dark Naruto and his travels while running from the Akatsuki, The name of the fanfiction is "Tales of the Demon Fox Jinchuuriki".
So based on the summary: Would you read it?
The story tells about a "what if" situation where Naruto was exiled from Konoha not much after the battle against Sasuke back in the Valley of the End. Two and a half years pass and the story continues following the normal Shippuden timeline, but with the consequences of Naruto's exile. The story mostly follows Naruto's POV and is centered around his travels while running away from the Akatsuki, but with him taking part of events he hadn't in the original part 2, an example is how he watches as Gaara is captured by Deidara and later even tries to follow him and Sasori. The story's pairing is NaruHina, maybe something else...but i havent decided yet. Also Naruto's personality becomes different after he's exiled but not conpletely dark. He is also more powerfull, but not too much. I would say he's toe to toe with Sasuke at the begging of Shippuden. So its a Semi-Dark Naruto and his travels while running from the Akatsuki, The name of the fanfiction is "Tales of the Demon Fox Jinchuuriki".
So based on the summary: Would you read it?
