I start by creating 3 clone's C1, C2 , and C3 (Directly infront of me. As soon as the the clone's are formed C1 and C3 take of at an angle readying kunai's in both hand's. (each have 4 kunai in each hand.
As soon as C2 is formed (he was made directly in front of me C1 to his left C3 to his right.) he immediately get's out the same amount of kunai that the others did and throws them directly at you.
As he throw's them I pull out 4 shuriken in each hand. and face you ready.
<So now you got my 2 clone's moving to your right and left and 8 kunai coming at you from the front.>
"Aye don't go easy on me okay I came to train. U_U"
Pretty basic, you could do a lot more like this like letting C1, C3 already run and throw the kunai. I would also have considered using explosion tags/flash bomb to put ILGOI in a much more disadvantaging position, but I guess you can work with it. o-o
"You got it!"
*As soon as I see your 3 clones formed, I make 3 as well, One diagonally in front of me to my right, one diagonally in front of me to my left and on directly behind me. As your clone throws 8 kunai, I deflect them with 8 kunai of my own. As I'm deflecting the kunai, my 2 clones in front of me charge at your clones, throwing two shuriken at all three of your clones *
Summary:
-Made 3 clones
-Deflected your Kunai
-2 shuriken come at each of your clones
Good, the summary is nice to get a recap.
As we see the shuriken flying at us the clone's and I throw one hand worth of kunai at the 2 coming at each of us deflecting them.
Imidiatly after doing so I jump onto the shoulder's of my clone infront of me and throw the other hand worth of shuriken at you, as my clone's throw their other hand worth of kunai at you and we clone them a cloning jutsu to multiply each one by 20 (I was going to say 40 but not sure if I could do that much.) Forming 3 walls of kunai 1 coming from straight in front and 2 from both your side coming in at angle's (retreating backward would still get you a little hit because of the angle of which my clone's are. (if you were the middle of a clock me and C2 would be 12 you C1 would be 3 and C3 would be 9. Do you get what I am saying?)
As your clone's are still comming at me and my clone's we prepare for close combat. I put a kunai in my mouth and my clone's stop in their spot's (as said earlier.)
Notes-
You need to defend from the Wall of kunai coming at you from three sides.
Clone's still on feild.
I am standing on C2's shoulder's.
You still have clone's.
me and my clone's are mid range from you (real you) and your clone's should be within short range of their previous target's.
I'd have prefered that you guys left out the Shuriken Clone Technique, because it's kind of overwhelming, but I see the point. I like that you used your C2 versatile, but if you're standing on his shoulders (which it says in the summary) you would be pretty unstable considering it all goes pretty fast. If you're in the air as your description says, I'd say you did well, though I prefer to be on the ground as being in the air limits your movement, though it's nice to because of the extra angle you give your attack, making it harder to avoid. well done. Do try to put an amount on your kunai, because "a hands worth" could be 4 or 3 or less depending on how you hold them and all (It's silly, but people whine about shitloads these days).
*As I see your shuriken and kunai coming, my clone behind me also jumps on my shoulders. We throw kunai and multiply them to match you incoming kunai and deflect all three walls of kunai. As my clones come from the left and right at your two clones, they both do quick, hard jabs to your to clones chests, makin them disperse*
I have some trouble with this. How can you defeat the amount of kunai, + considering the angles they are coming in at you, like that? It would be pretty hard and you'd have to focus that not even a single kunai gets through, though it's discussable. Also, your taijutsu should be a little better here, because it's so easily avoidable to have a simple jab at your chest.
Okay, I just thought you were using regular clones as well.
*As my C1 sees your C3 side-step, instead of trying to punch you, my clone trips your C3 with a sweeping kick. As C3 falls toward the ground, C1 punches him with a chakra infused open palm to the chest (I would think that this would make him disappear but I'm not sure and will leave it up to you). While your C1 is stuck in a fight with my C2, C2 attaches a paper bomb to C1 unknowingly and drop kicks him into the clone rushing at me, taking them both out. As my C3 (On my shoulders) sees your clones disappear, he charges at you*
Ok man, this one lacks some description to be honest. You need to be more clear with the sweeping kick, what leg you're using, saying that you duck or don't duck to perform it, stuff like that. His clone would disperse if you hit him with chakra infused palm attacks.
How can you put a paper tag on him without him knowing? He would feel something, and you need to precisely describe how he would be unable to know, you can't just say that he doesn't know. Also, pushing him back sounds pretty short range, meaning C2 would be hit as well and disperse as well. How can C3 charge when he's standing on your shoulders? Be sure to make him land on the ground first, or he is charging mid air and he would fall easily if that were the case.
(After everything you said happens)
As you and you clone come at me we run at you also, and just before we reach within arms reach from each other. I jump back of his shoulders landing behind him. (while behind him I pull out an explosive tag and place it on his back.
As you attempt to hit him the clone duck's. While he is doing that I round house your clone in the face.
(I am guessing your clone's are about to come rushing in.)
Ehm, not bad actually, though how would you be stable when you're standing on someones shoulder who is running? Doesn't really make sense, and your explosion tag would go off sooner or later, so it kind of depends how long your clone would be able to continue fighting before blowing into little pieces of dog-food.
Wait, I took out your 3 clones. So you wouldn't have any to do this move. And, I never charged at you, just my clone.
This is where you let your clones run at him or do stuff, and you only took out two clones.
I should still have 1 left. The one whom shoulders I have been standing on never moved. The clone's that rushed at you earlier. Were the same 2 that have been running around the whole time. But it doesn't matter to me I can redo my move it you really want.
Sorry for the late reply I haven't been on much due to family visiting.
O_O confusing...
Yeah, I see now. Got a little confused because of the wording, but only my clone charged at you so you should just change that part
poo.
Okay dude, and sorry I took so long to reply I have been busy with family matters, and such but here is the fixed move.
(After everything you said happens)
As your clone comes at me we run at you also, and just before we reach within arms reach from each other. I jump back of his shoulders landing behind him. (while behind him I pull out an explosive tag and place it on his back.)
As your clone nears him I jump back and my clone grab's onto him and hold him in place, while I run in the opposite direction (getting distance between you and me)
Shouldn't you be worried about the his two clones at your back?
Sorry for the late reply as well. A lot going on...
*As you turn your back to run away from your clone, my Clones, C1 and C2 both throw kunai at you as you are unaware they're coming*
Yea, that's the good stuff. xd
Alright, basically I'd say more descriptive stuff and be more aware. Try to use everything you have to the fullest potential, because I have a feeling you guys were holding back or just trying to come up with such complex moves that you overlooked the fact that easy moves are good as well. Try to work on that from now on.
Also, no more weapons/tools and clones. From now on only 1 on 1 taijutsu moves.
