In hand to hand combat you have to allow the opposite party a chance to counter or dodge the attack, So instead of saying ''delivers'' Say ''Attempts to deliver''. When using your hands and feet it is important to reference which one your using, Left hand, Right hand, Left foot, Right foot. It is also extremely important to say rather your doing something slow or quick, Add ''A Swift'' after ''deliver'' it doesn't only show experience but also looks good and important in battle.
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Kazu notices that his enemy is crouching and its obvious that he is about to deliver some sort of upwards strike, however to avoid this he swiftly side steps to the right of the upward punch dodging it completely. Whilst this side step he reaches back inside his pouch to grab a kunai with his left hand to then quickly sling his arm forwards grasping the kunai firm in his hand, The kunai reaches the edge of Shun's neck but suddenly stopped in momentum. Kazu stopped his hand from going further and prevented any cut but the kunai is halted deep pressed against the side of his neck.
''Don't forget that you can move around your enemy and definitely don't forget any enemy you face has a weakness and all of them can be used against them. This here, I have already submitted you and thus i have already won the battle. This is a prime example on how fast it is to lose and how quick you can lose your life.'' Kazu gives a speech of the examples of taijutsu whilst still in this hostage position. He eventually sheaths his kunai in his pouch and offered a hand to Shun in a polite way to help him up.