[WL] Onii Chan VS Shonnen |Free-Form Taijutsu Lession|

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Restrictions: Tools/Open hand only ♦
Weather: Clear ♦
Location: Forest ♦
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Ill be using Shun(puppeteer in sig) with a katana strapped to his back and other tools in the ninja pouch on his waist. Lets begin shall we
 

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Kazu walks forward out from the shadows of the nearest bundle of tall trees. His sword by his side rustling and clicking against the belt with every step, his trench coat slightly flowing with the breeze and his white long hair brushing to the right. Continuing his walk towards Shun to he stops within mid range then bows for the sign of respect and without a word spoken. After letting his student bow in return he then straightens his posture,

'' I will be your Teacher, Today i will be teaching you how to fight with not only your hands but tools as well. Before we begin i must ask you what you know so far. ''
Kazu asks his student.

The wind was barely blowing against the two but enough to rustle there clothes and hair, the silence was brief but then suddenly interrupted by the voice of Shun, answering his teachers question.

 

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Shun walked out from the forests to meet with Kazu at the agreed location and after a while he saw Kazu come out then he stood still, getting ready for the training session and as Kazu bowed, to show respect, Shun also bows and takes his normal stance as he listens to Kazu after which he mums "to be candid, I don't know anything about it so far that I can talk about"
 

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''Well you know how to punch right?'' Kazu response in question to Shun.

''I'm going to come at you with a direct attack and you try and counter it with either a punch or a kick of some sort, try not to dodge the attack because if you do you will be punished.''


Kazu directly announces his next move to his student and without further hesitation Kazu began to dash swiftly forward towards Shun. Once Kazu arrives within short range he draws back and quickly jabs forward, delivering a right punch towards Shun's face.

 

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"Ofcourse I do" Shun replies after then he hears Kazu's intention and braces himself. As Kazu dashed forwards, Shun took a ninja stance and as Kazu reached short range, Shun bends down and delivers a fatal uppercult to Kazu.
 

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In hand to hand combat you have to allow the opposite party a chance to counter or dodge the attack, So instead of saying ''delivers'' Say ''Attempts to deliver''. When using your hands and feet it is important to reference which one your using, Left hand, Right hand, Left foot, Right foot. It is also extremely important to say rather your doing something slow or quick, Add ''A Swift'' after ''deliver'' it doesn't only show experience but also looks good and important in battle.
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Kazu notices that his enemy is crouching and its obvious that he is about to deliver some sort of upwards strike, however to avoid this he swiftly side steps to the right of the upward punch dodging it completely. Whilst this side step he reaches back inside his pouch to grab a kunai with his left hand to then quickly sling his arm forwards grasping the kunai firm in his hand, The kunai reaches the edge of Shun's neck but suddenly stopped in momentum. Kazu stopped his hand from going further and prevented any cut but the kunai is halted deep pressed against the side of his neck.

''Don't forget that you can move around your enemy and definitely don't forget any enemy you face has a weakness and all of them can be used against them. This here, I have already submitted you and thus i have already won the battle. This is a prime example on how fast it is to lose and how quick you can lose your life.'' Kazu gives a speech of the examples of taijutsu whilst still in this hostage position. He eventually sheaths his kunai in his pouch and offered a hand to Shun in a polite way to help him up.
 
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Shun nods in response to Kazu's words but as Kazu dodged the uppercult, Shun was shocked but didn't take his eyes off Kazu and as he sees Kazu grab a kunai and swing at him, he bent down further to make the kunai pass above his head while he extends his right leg forward and swiftly swings it in an attempt to clear Kazu off the ground.
 
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