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(Katon: Doragonburesu) | Fire Release: Dragon Breath
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique deviates from the primarily offensive usages of Fire release in that it is, uncharacteristically of the element, used for defence. This technique involves the release of chakra into the users surroundings so as to saturate the environment surrounding the user with fire chakra (Its creation is initially visible as a subtle soft gold glowing pulse) The released fire chakra then settles into a defence that is thereafter undetectable to anyone but Doujutsu users or those with some kind of sensing until triggered. When an enemy attack enters into the area of effect of the fire chakra, the conditions for the activation of this technique will be met. The first condition is oxygen - essentially the surrounding air, which is easily met - the second is an opposing force which, when it enters into the atmosphere that the fire chakra occupies will act as a firestarter - triggering a violent combustion that'll rapidly expand outwards, consuming the intruder and neutralizing the threat. (This is visually represented by the initial soft glow returning to the trigger area that then immediately gives way to a fiery explosion.) Naturally, as a defensive technique, this technique is highly specialised in that the explosions can never harm the user, instead they are always angled away from the user, thus preventing their harm. This essentially mimics the tetrahedron of fire, oxygen from the air, with the fire chakra acting as fuel and, when an opposing object enters its field of influence it greatly amplifies the thermal energy created by the friction, vibration, air resistance and also heat of the intruder, thus creating a combustion with sufficient power to neutralize the invading object. Naturally the strength and size of combustion will increase proportionally to the speed, size and power of the incoming object, thus in response to a Kunai invading, an explosion the strength of say, an explosive tag will be created - just strong enough to destroy the kunai, likewise an S ranked burst of fire will form for the invasion of an S ranked earth boulder. Naturally this technique will not interfere with the actions of the user or their technique as it is their own chakra, similarly the actions of allies can be permitted so that they can perform as usual without triggering the defence so long as the user is aware of, and permits their actions. (Unknown or unwanted actions by an ally may result in their termination).
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- This jutsu can be be used twice, last for four turns, during which time this defense will be capable of producing 80 damage points worth of force each turn - essentially allowing it to neutralize the equivalent of one S ranked attack per turn (Respects elemental weaknesses/strengths/boosts and infusions), during turns that the combustion activates to neutralize an enemy jutsu the user can only utilise two other techniques, and this technique can only be used twice. During this time the user is incapable of using wind, lightning, earth or water techniques above S rank, this technique saps 30 chakra per turn for maintenance, and once it ends the user will be incapable of using it again for three turns, similarly they won't be able to use fire techniques above A rank for that same and the next turn. The created 'barrier' of fire chakra extends short range from the user, and moves along with them - with the soft glow that signifies the borders of this defence returning each time the barrier moves, so if they move to a new area so will the fire chakra, centering on their position - unless the user wishes for it to stay in a certain position in which case they can make it go there.

Any questions? U_U
 

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(Katon: Doragonburesu) | Fire Release: Dragon Breath
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique deviates from the primarily offensive usages of Fire release in that it is, uncharacteristically of the element, used for defence. This technique involves the release of chakra into the users surroundings so as to saturate the environment surrounding the user with fire chakra (Its creation is initially visible as a subtle soft gold glowing pulse) The released fire chakra then settles into a defence that is thereafter undetectable to anyone but Doujutsu users or those with some kind of sensing until triggered. When an enemy attack enters into the area of effect of the fire chakra, the conditions for the activation of this technique will be met. The first condition is oxygen - essentially the surrounding air, which is easily met - the second is an opposing force which, when it enters into the atmosphere that the fire chakra occupies will act as a firestarter - triggering a violent combustion that'll rapidly expand outwards, consuming the intruder and neutralizing the threat. (This is visually represented by the initial soft glow returning to the trigger area that then immediately gives way to a fiery explosion.) Naturally, as a defensive technique, this technique is highly specialised in that the explosions can never harm the user, instead they are always angled away from the user, thus preventing their harm. This essentially mimics the tetrahedron of fire, oxygen from the air, with the fire chakra acting as fuel and, when an opposing object enters its field of influence it greatly amplifies the thermal energy created by the friction, vibration, air resistance and also heat of the intruder, thus creating a combustion with sufficient power to neutralize the invading object. Naturally the strength and size of combustion will increase proportionally to the speed, size and power of the incoming object, thus in response to a Kunai invading, an explosion the strength of say, an explosive tag will be created - just strong enough to destroy the kunai, likewise an S ranked burst of fire will form for the invasion of an S ranked earth boulder. Naturally this technique will not interfere with the actions of the user or their technique as it is their own chakra, similarly the actions of allies can be permitted so that they can perform as usual without triggering the defence so long as the user is aware of, and permits their actions. (Unknown or unwanted actions by an ally may result in their termination).
Notes:
- This jutsu can be be used twice, last for four turns, during which time this defense will be capable of producing 80 damage points worth of force each turn - essentially allowing it to neutralize the equivalent of one S ranked attack per turn (Respects elemental weaknesses/strengths/boosts and infusions), during turns that the combustion activates to neutralize an enemy jutsu the user can only utilise two other techniques, and this technique can only be used twice. During this time the user is incapable of using wind, lightning, earth or water techniques above S rank, this technique saps 30 chakra per turn for maintenance, and once it ends the user will be incapable of using it again for three turns, similarly they won't be able to use fire techniques above A rank for that same and the next turn. The created 'barrier' of fire chakra extends short range from the user, and moves along with them - with the soft glow that signifies the borders of this defence returning each time the barrier moves, so if they move to a new area so will the fire chakra, centering on their position - unless the user wishes for it to stay in a certain position in which case they can make it go there.

Any questions? U_U
Can you choose for the barrier not to activate and explode?
 

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Can you choose for the barrier not to activate and explode?
As long as you're aware of it. If say, a kunai is thrown from behind you and you are not aware of it the kunai will still be met by an explosion angled away from you. This is whether it is thrown by an enemy or ally. Now if an ally throws a rock in it and you're aware you can choose for the barrier to not blow up around the rock. Make sense?
 

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As long as you're aware of it. If say, a kunai is thrown from behind you and you are not aware of it the kunai will still be met by an explosion angled away from you. This is whether it is thrown by an enemy or ally. Now if an ally throws a rock in it and you're aware you can choose for the barrier to not blow up around the rock. Make sense?
Yeah that's fine, the only downside i see is the innability to control the power of the explosion. I mean a kunai from behind, if you could have the power of an E rank blast as well as the size, rather than it having to be S rank all the time?
 

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Yeah that's fine, the only downside i see is the innability to control the power of the explosion. I mean a kunai from behind, if you could have the power of an E rank blast as well as the size, rather than it having to be S rank all the time?
The strength of the explosion just depends on the size, speed, and strength of what is coming at it. So yeah it won't respond with a massive fire blast for a kunai. It aims to neutralize the threat entirely. Nothing more and nothing less.
 

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(Kaen Tatsumaki) - Blazing Tornado
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Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user combines there wind and fire chakra together to create this ultimate attack. First the user will build up there chakra in the air quickly creating a high powered tornado, then by adding there fire chakra to it the tornado will be set ablaze creating a fire/wind combo thats very dangerrous. This attack can be created infront of or around the opponent, but if the user is withing short range of this attack they will take the same amount of damage.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: No s ranks or above the next turn
Note: User will take 30 damage too if its used at mid range


No questions with this one. A simple but powerful elemental combination between wind and fire. Useful and neat with how damage to the user is determined by one's proximity to the attack. Thanks Pervy :)
 
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