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(Doton: Maddokingu no tobira) Earth Release: Doors of the Mad King
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will inject their chakra into the ground and then create 4 large doors of earth that surround their opponent. The doors can range from 10 to 15 feet tall and 5 to 15 feet wide, trapping the opponent in a box. Once created, the user can then form the snake handseal, causing all 4 doors to swing inwards towards the opponent, each door smashing into each other in the middle.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by -Naruto-



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Alright so, this is pretty much what I want you to do:

  • I want you to give a detailed explanation of you using the move.
  • I want you to create a combo in which the move is used.
  • I want you to counter the move as it is being used against you.

Creates 3 clones. The first is for you to use the move against, the second for the combo, and the third for the move to be used against you when you are done with the former clones. The three clones then spread out as I move back to watch. Good Luck. ^^

Also, when done, tell me a few advantages and disadvantages to this jutsu.

The technique is pretty much preformed like this. You channel your Chakra into the earth around your opponent, and then cause the earth to rise in the form of four doors surrounding your opponent. From there, the jutsu is semi complete. However, you can also cast the snake hand-seal, which will cause all four doors to close in on your opponent, creating an X as each door slams into the other in the middle.
 
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Alright so, this is pretty much what I want you to do:

  • I want you to give a detailed explanation of you using the move.
  • I want you to create a combo in which the move is used.
  • I want you to counter the move as it is being used against you.

Creates 3 clones. The first is for you to use the move against, the second for the combo, and the third for the move to be used against you when you are done with the former clones. The three clones then spread out as I move back to watch. Good Luck. ^^

Also, when done, tell me a few advantages and disadvantages to this jutsu.

The technique is pretty much preformed like this. You channel your Chakra into the earth around your opponent, and then cause the earth to rise in the form of four doors surrounding your opponent. From there, the jutsu is semi complete. However, you can also cast the snake hand-seal, which will cause all four doors to close in on your opponent, creating an X as each door slams into the other in the middle.

I firstly begin by molding my raw chakra and focusing it at the earth surface beneath the opponent, after molding enough i use nature manipulation to change the raw chakra into earth chakra by hardening it and then by using shape manipulation to release the molded chakra into the shape of 4 doors of earth that rise and emerge from the ground around the opponent, the doors are 10 meters tall and 10 meters wide, one at the left, one at the right, one at the front and one at the back of the opponent to completly sorround the opponent, after completing the 1st phase, i let out a small smirk before making 1 hand seal and making the doors to swing inwards creating a X from the doors and completly smashing & crushing the opponent.

Adv&Disadv: The jutsu only needs 1 hand seal to crush the targer, other than that a fast jutsu, also the opponent will be surprised by the sudden earth doors rising beneath him, also the crushing power and speed is good, the opponent will be unconscious if not dead since being smashed from 4 earth hard and strong doors from 4 different angles is quite a hard thing to counter ;-;. the disadvantage is that the opponent will notice the vibration on the earth when they try to rise so i think he'll counter then easily, also i could have used a evading jutsu to let the earth doors smash with each other and destroy one another.

Combo and Counter: For combo i would have used a lot of jutsus for a combo, i would have used the world shaking to make a tremor and make him fall while the door behind him will crush his head, the left one the right knee and the right shoulder, the one if front of him will crush the lower part of body while the right one the left shoulder and left lower part of body. For counter i would have used plasma ball to produce a B-rank lightning barrier that negates and destroys the earth doors leaving it unable to hit me.
 

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I firstly begin by molding my raw chakra and focusing it at the earth surface beneath the opponent, after molding enough i use nature manipulation to change the raw chakra into earth chakra by hardening it and then by using shape manipulation to release the molded chakra into the shape of 4 doors of earth that rise and emerge from the ground around the opponent, the doors are 10 meters tall and 10 meters wide, one at the left, one at the right, one at the front and one at the back of the opponent to completly sorround the opponent, after completing the 1st phase, i let out a small smirk before making 1 hand seal and making the doors to swing inwards creating a X from the doors and completly smashing & crushing the opponent.

Adv&Disadv: The jutsu only needs 1 hand seal to crush the targer, other than that a fast jutsu, also the opponent will be surprised by the sudden earth doors rising beneath him, also the crushing power and speed is good, the opponent will be unconscious if not dead since being smashed from 4 earth hard and strong doors from 4 different angles is quite a hard thing to counter ;-;. the disadvantage is that the opponent will notice the vibration on the earth when they try to rise so i think he'll counter then easily, also i could have used a evading jutsu to let the earth doors smash with each other and destroy one another.

Combo and Counter: For combo i would have used a lot of jutsus for a combo, i would have used the world shaking to make a tremor and make him fall while the door behind him will crush his head, the left one the right knee and the right shoulder, the one if front of him will crush the lower part of body while the right one the left shoulder and left lower part of body. For counter i would have used plasma ball to produce a B-rank lightning barrier that negates and destroys the earth doors leaving it unable to hit me.
Just one thing, this doors are tall and thick, meaning that they will crush every part of the enemy, not individual parts. :p

Alright, now, before you leave here, I want you to counter this as if you are my third clone.

We are mid range from one another

Seeing his opponent in-front of him, Shikamaru quickly channels his chakra into the earth, making four doors rise 15 meters from his opponent, each door being 15 meters thick. As the doors begin to rise with Shikamaru on them Shikamaru quickly weaves a few more handsigns and begins to imprison his opponent in a gushing flow of water, which Shikamaru manipulates so that it takes the form of a sphere as it rises. As the water begins to gush around his opponent, the Earth wall has still only reached about half of it's height. To seal the deal, Shikamaru places 3 explosive tags on the wall he is standing on and then jumps back, forming 1 hand-sign and releasing a huge ball of wind, with explosive capabilities, straight at his opponent. Once the wind-ball is released Shikamaru forms the snake hand-sign, causing all four walls to swing inwards at his opponent. About mid swing, Shikamaru activates the explosive tags, causing the door he was standing on to explode into several large chunks of earth that will smash into his enemy.

Jutsu Used
(Doton: Maddokingu no tobira) Earth Release: Doors of the Mad King
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will inject their chakra into the ground and then create 4 large doors of earth that surround their opponent. The doors can range from 10 to 15 feet tall and 5 to 15 feet wide, trapping the opponent in a box. Once created, the user can then form the snake handseal, causing all 4 doors to swing inwards towards the opponent, each door smashing into each other in the middle.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by -Naruto-

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

I'm rusty so don't hate >.>
 
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