[CJ] with Erzo

[Detective L]

I'll go first.

( Ototon: Sectumsempra ) - Sound Release: Sectumsempra

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A powerful Sound jutsu, the user points his arm or a weapon forward while speaking the word "Sectumsempra". Upon speaking the words, the user triggers the gathered Ototon chakra to be released, following the user's arm movements. Upon contact, the waves create deep and profuse gashes across the foe's body, seeming like an invisible sword strike has afflicted the foe's body. Due to the depths of the cut, the victims run the risk of dying from blood loss if treatment is not applied in time, if the wounds are not instantly fatal. The user is also able to use this as a means to sever obstacles in his way as well as sever certain parts of the opponent's body.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used 3 times at max.
-After using, the user cannot use S rank and above Sound jutsu the next turn.

Just analyse it for me.

 

[Erzo]

I'll go first.

( Ototon: Sectumsempra ) - Sound Release: Sectumsempra

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A powerful Sound jutsu, the user points his arm or a weapon forward while speaking the word "Sectumsempra". Upon speaking the words, the user triggers the gathered Ototon chakra to be released, following the user's arm movements. Upon contact, the waves create deep and profuse gashes across the foe's body, seeming like an invisible sword strike has afflicted the foe's body. Due to the depths of the cut, the victims run the risk of dying from blood loss if treatment is not applied in time, if the wounds are not instantly fatal. The user is also able to use this as a means to sever obstacles in his way as well as sever certain parts of the opponent's body.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used 3 times at max.
-After using, the user cannot use S rank and above Sound jutsu the next turn.

Just analyse it for me.

After saying sectumsempra and releasing sound chakra, you release a wave of sound which cuts into the opponents body. The cut can deal fatal wounds, which is cool. At close range and on slower opponents this jutsu would be deadly.

No questions

 

[Detective L]

(Ototon: Jentoruekō) - Sound Release: Gentle Echo

Spoiler

Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: A sound jutsu versed in it's defensive abilities, Gentle Echo allows the user protection from specific techniques. The user must first focus on the vibrational frequency of the opposing jutsu, having done that then releases Sound either through a clap, or via the mouth, creating a sound of equal frequency, mimicking the incoming form(s) of energy/chakra. By altering it's vibrational frequency and mimicking that of the opponents jutsu, the sound is able to displace the incoming form of energy, allowing the two to clash and nullify each other, leaving nothing behind but dispersed energy. This jutsu is able to defend against Wind/Fire/Lightning, and other elements of that nature, and anything which is Energy-based, as long as it is created using chakra (so can't use this against SM) of equal rank. But it would not be able to handle the physical attributes that come with Water/Earth based techniques.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo and is usable three times per battle, with a turn between each usage. Within the same turn, the user is not able to use other Sound techniques of S-rank and higher. It can only nullify up to A-rank wind due to the elemental disadvantage.

Its Gentle and its an Echo. GG.

jk

The technique is quite versatile and useful, which starts off by focusing on the vibrational frequency of an oncoming technique, and then releasing sound through the usual mediums, in order to mimic said frequency and displace it. This nullifies them, and disperses the energy. Only usable against Energy based elements, or CE, or anything energy based really as long as it uses chakra, of equal rank to the technique. o-o

 

[Erzo]

(Ototon: Jentoruekō) - Sound Release: Gentle Echo

Spoiler

Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: A sound jutsu versed in it's defensive abilities, Gentle Echo allows the user protection from specific techniques. The user must first focus on the vibrational frequency of the opposing jutsu, having done that then releases Sound either through a clap, or via the mouth, creating a sound of equal frequency, mimicking the incoming form(s) of energy/chakra. By altering it's vibrational frequency and mimicking that of the opponents jutsu, the sound is able to displace the incoming form of energy, allowing the two to clash and nullify each other, leaving nothing behind but dispersed energy. This jutsu is able to defend against Wind/Fire/Lightning, and other elements of that nature, and anything which is Energy-based, as long as it is created using chakra (so can't use this against SM) of equal rank. But it would not be able to handle the physical attributes that come with Water/Earth based techniques.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo and is usable three times per battle, with a turn between each usage. Within the same turn, the user is not able to use other Sound techniques of S-rank and higher. It can only nullify up to A-rank wind due to the elemental disadvantage.

Its Gentle and its an Echo. GG.

jk

The technique is quite versatile and useful, which starts off by focusing on the vibrational frequency of an oncoming technique, and then releasing sound through the usual mediums, in order to mimic said frequency and displace it. This nullifies them, and disperses the energy. Only usable against Energy based elements, or CE, or anything energy based really as long as it uses chakra, of equal rank to the technique. o-o

Good analysis, you got it