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Eat slugs technique. U_U

(Suiton: Hydragyrum boryūmu) - Water Release: Volumen Hydragyrum

Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short (Created in short, Mid range reach)
Chakra: 30 (-10 Chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A (60 if used Offensively)
Description: The user will perform a series of three hand seals ( Ram - Horse - Tiger ) and send water-based chakra in an area around them within short-range. He will materialize sticky water, similar to the water found in (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field, and shape into the shape of a sphere. The water created in this technique differs from most water, where it has a shiny luster and acts as a mirror rather than being completely blue or translucent. The blob of water is quite useful and has two main abilities. Firstly, the blob, if within three meters of the user, acts as a near-instantaneous defense against a wide array of attacks. It is a sentient being that can grow in size, up to twice the size of the user and immediately cover the user (transparent from the inside) in a sphere of its own body (Shape is changeable to an extent; it could be a wall, block, cube, vortex-like shape, etc). The water body would be able to defend against a multitude of attacks by using its body, and more specifically, the sticky aspects of its composition. If a physical and tangible based attack, such as earth or earth based elements, is sent out by the target, that attack would stick into the blob's body and cling to it. If an energy based is released, like Fire, or Lightning, it would simply act as a normal Water Defense. A secondary ability sacrifices the blob itself. Through a single hand seal, a multitude of tentacles can burst forth from the main body of the blob up to mid-range. It is capable of grabbing a hold of enemies around the battlefield, and either pierce them, or grasp them and pull them into the main body. If the enemy is successfully trapped within the main body, the sticky-like composition of water would make it difficult to even move. The user can choose to keep the enemy within the body as a form of torture, or use chakra to increase the density of the water, which would easily crush a normal human.
Notes&Restricitons:
Note #1 The blob can only be created three times and lasts in the battlefield for up to three turns.
Note #2 The blob itself is a sentient being that can act on its own accord. It simply feeds from the users' chakra per turn to allow it to maintain the blob. Because of the constant donation of chakra, if it is not completely destroyed within one turn, then the blob would regenerate off of the users' chakra.
Note #3 The blob itself is relatively slow and moves at the user's walking speed.
Note #4 Can only be taught by EdwardSama
Note #5 The second ability is the only offensive component of this technique. The initial activation despite being near-instant is purely defensive in usage.


Analyze it please ;p
 

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Fairly simple, a blob of water (sticky in nature) that can defend, attack and be of supplementary use :| I can be more specific, but everything has been explained beautifully in the description :)

(Genjutsu: Namekuji o taberu! ) | Illusionary Technique: Eat slugs!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.

Notes:

-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.
 

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Hehehehee. Thanks.

This one's really cool, especially because it was probably inspired from Harry Potter lol. Genjutsu itself is quite simple but very useful. Two hand seals will induce an illusion in which the enemy believes that slugs are coming out of their mouth along with the slime and all those icky things that come with slugs. The slugs exit one at a time and because of the human gag reflex, the opponent will feel the need to throw up or just gag which provides the user with an opening to attack
lol i love it xD
 

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Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (mental stress)
Description: The user will perform the Ram hand seal, sending chakra onto the opponent's chakra parthways in order to disrupt it and induce an illusion upon the enemy. The illusion is quite complex. It begins when the enemy feels that their bones/skeletal system are hastily moving out of place inside their body as it eventually breaches through the layer of skin, and are now outside their body. However, the illusion continues with the bones extending and wrapping itself with great force around the opponent while tightening and tightening, with every passing second. For instance, the rib cage would wrap around the enemy's torso, and then tighten, restricting the opponent from movement completely. Of course, with the total loss of the skeletal system, compounded with the skelton's grasp upon their body, the target would have no ability to move. Now, without the skeletal system as a support for the body, the effects of gravity on the targeted body would be heightened, thus making it harder to breath. If the target does not break out of the illusion within two turns, they will pass out from the lack of oxygen available (suffocation) in the illusion as well as the compression resulting from the skeleton's grasp.
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle; No A-rank Genjutsu in the same, or next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Edward




Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user infuses any object capable of exploding, detonating, etc, or able to create an exploding sound with a coating of sound chakra. Objects coated by this technique gain a distinct sound that is easily heard. Once contact is made with another object (such as an opponent's technique, a landmark, etc) the infused object would explode like normal (unless it's an object that requires no physical contact to create an explosive sound, such as an explosive tag or smoke bomb). However, the infusion of sound amplifies the sound waves released in order to produce a screeching sound that can affect those who hear it. The effects created by the amplified sound waves vary by distance. If the target is within short range of an explosion they will experience deafness and moderate disorientation for two turns. If the target is within mid-range of the explosion they will experience deafness and have a mild headache for a single turn. If the target is long range from the explosion, there are no adverse effects. The user is capable of negating these adverse effects by coating his own ears within sound chakra. This will effect all targets within range of the explosion, with the exception of the user.
Notes & Restrcitions:
Note: Can only be used four times, however, it cannot be used consecutively.
Note: Can only be taught by EdwardSama



These are the two. Shall I analyze them?
 

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The first is a simple Genjutsu where you will form the Ram hand seal, and initiate the Genjutsu. The opponent would feel their skeletal system move out of place, and breach their skin, as it emerges and wraps around them. This causes suffocation in the illusion, as well as constricts the opponent's movements. If not broken, the opponent will pass out.

Second, is a sound technique where one will infuse an object that can explode, with Sound chakra. Once said object explodes, it releases a screeching sound that has various effects depending on the distance from the explosion. Pretty useful tbh.
 
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