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Rebekah slaps one hand seal and grips the paper bomb lightly. Tossing it up, she catches it again before launching it at the clone with her best throw. It travels fast and appears to be a clone of her. Dean's clone get's ready to defend against the clone in a taijutsu battle, but is instead blown away by the surprise explosion. Small specks of dirt cling to Rebekah's face as a repercussion of what has just been done.

"Okay, so the flaws of this technique I can see pretty clearly. Unless engaging in a Taijutsu battle, It's quite obvious that the opponent would not let the clone get near them. And we once discussed a long time ago about how clones can be annoying in battle so the opponent will always try to get rid of them first by any means. Also, I'm not sure if it only takes one handseal to create a clone, if so, in the heat of the battle, that would be over looked. But if it takes like three handseals for a clone then it will be obvious to the opponent that one handseal was not enough to create such a clone. Also, maybe the fact that the opponent would be expecting a technique to be played off of the clone rather than having it just run at them. Also, maybe they'd be suspicious that the user is just standing back away from the clone. The strengths however would be the one handseal concept to save time, and that you can send multiples. Other than that I don't see much advantages in this technique besides that it can be used as a distraction. Also if you tried stopping the "clone" in mid way by sending an offensive jutsu would that cause the bomb to explode? Even so that probably doesn't mean much as the jutsu will over power the D ranked bomb."


Rebekah says with curiosity and a little bit of uncertainty in her voice.
 

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"You are correct, and something else to mention. It can only be used in Short range, making it difficult for the opponent to really discern it fast, and its also best to use from underneath a cover, or already have a clone on the field combined with this fake one, just for the illusion of realism. Combine small aspects, to make it difficult for the opponent to figure it out. Nonetheless, that was good. Let us move on."


Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This illusion creates numerous illusionary clones of the user that appear to emerge from the ground, trees, rocks, etc. If these clones are attacked, they appear to multiply. The user can co-ordinate his attacks with the clones to make it appear as if they are real.



"Without the need for a hand seal, you will create various illusionary clones. The opponent will see these clones emerge from the ground, trees, rocks, etc, depending on the terrain. When these clones are attacked, they multiply and as such, they are best used to confuse the opponent as you strike from their blindside. A pretty easy technique to use when you know that the opponent will feel overwhelmed, though it is easy to realize it is a Genjutsu, as well. Show my clone how its done."

Dean says, as a clone is created before him, now walking steadily towards Rebekah.
 

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Rebekah nods, and looks towards Dean's clone. She keeps her stiff hands are her sides and allows her chakra do to the work. An exact clone appears from a tree to the left of the clone, and another right behind him from the ground. Two more appear from a bush and another one jumps out of a rock. Her blonde head is now seen nearly everywhere on the battle field. Dean's clone is most concerned about the clone behind him and turns to defend himself as that is his first reaction. While stuck in the confusion of all the clones, Rebekah sends a strong whirl of wind towards him and knocks him out of existence and into a poof of white.

Rebekah licks her lips to say,

"I love the fact that the clones can emerge from nearly anywhere. It allows the user to be creative with their attacks. Also, it is indeed a flaw that there are no handseals and that they cannot attack? Cause they can't attack right? I say no handseals are a flaw in this circumstance because then the enemy knows nearly right away that the clones are not real clones. Me, personally, I do not like techniques that are only meant to confuse the enemy like this. In my opinion it only wastes a turn slot. However, I really like the part where when the clone is attacked, they multiply? Does that mean the clone will never cease to exist? Or does it just need to be attacked by a D+ rank? I do not like the restriction of Mid range because the technique doesn't even do damage to the enemy. But, also, if the clones don't do any damage and are just a distraction, can't the opponent just choose not to attack them and ignore them? All in all, I would use this to confuse the enemy in battle and distract them and keep them occupied while I attack."

 

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"Indeed, you are on the right path. The clones can't attack, and although they can only distract, they can also speak and communicate. For an opponent without sensory or a Doujutsu, figuring out which one is you will be quite difficult, and this techniques makes it easy to overwhelm the opponent without actually harming him. Yes, say I figure it out, I could choose to ignore it, if I know which one is the real you. Its also just a D rank technique, meaning that biting a chunk of your cheek is enough to break the Genjutsu anyway. Any type of technique causes them to multiply, if its aimed at striking them. Nonetheless, good job, let us move on."


Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs two handseals causing it to appear as if a swirl of leaves surrounds the opponent. The swirl eventually falls away, and after a few seconds, the opponent sees the image of whatever they fear the most, shocking them and potentially causing them to faint.



"A technique best used in combination with some Ninjutsu, you will form two hand seals, and induce a Genjutsu on the opponent. This will cause the opponent to see a swirl of leaves around them, obscuring them from you. As the leaves fall away, an image of what they fear most appears before them, causing them to be rattled and can potentially cause a weak person to faint. Useful if used right. You know what to do."

Dean says, pointing at his clone sitting with a bottle of Gin.
 

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Rebekah stares at the clone with fierce eyes. She shows no remorse as she slaps two handseals. She concentrates and watches as the clone's expression slowly grows tense. Leaves tussle and fight in a circle around him. He can't see Rebekah, but as the leaves fall... he see's something in the distance. He believes it's Rebekah, but as he looks closer it's a large pickle. It is his biggest fear and causes him to nearly faint.

Rebekah clears her throat at the awkwardness of Dean's clone and it's fear,

"I think this is a really awesome technique as it can obscure the vision of the opponent as well as throw them into shock. Seeing something you fear can paralyze you. Depending on if the person's fear is logical or not (such as a pickle vs a tiger) can change the tune of the fight. So, question: while doing this technique, would you describe the opponent's fear as what you think it is? Or would you just type 'they see their biggest fear' cause it's not like the user knows the opponent's biggest fear? So how would that work? But, aside from the question, the two handseals are nice. Short range sorta sucks, but nonetheless, the jutsu is dope in my opinion. I would use it to obscure the enemies vision and distract them with their fear while I send in an attack. "
 

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"Exactly, that's the issue with the technique, that you don't really know you're opponent's biggest fear, or if they even have one. But its up to interpretation, you could either say that they see their biggest fear, or describe it in detail. Nonetheless, good job though."


Type: Defensive
Rank: D-B Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple technique, this genjutsu works solely as a defensive measure. The user will produce an illusionary copy of himself while he escapes the path/area of the attack with a rapid movement, unnoticed and masked by the technique. The enemy will see and hear the user in the original place until the attack connects with the illusionary copy, at which point it will disperse, revealing the true location of the user. The technique can be controlled so as to have the illusionary copy interact and talk in specific ways with the enemy for other purposes, while the user remains hidden from the targets perception. The illusion is often personalized from user to user, namely in its dispersion, sometimes in relation to the users elemental affinity or summoning companions, following a theme unique to him. The limitation is that the user cannot escape large techniques with this ability nor incredibly fast ones, since the escape is his movement and, as such, is limited to small scaled attacks or normal paced ones. Only techniques which can be escaped by moving out of their way running or through movement can be defended from with this. The main limit however, is that, since its a sustainable illusion, triggering any offensive action towards the target will immediately release the illusion, be it a simple taijutsu move or a ninjutsu attack; any aggressive action the user wants to take will immediately break his focus and control over the technique, releasing the target from it. The stronger the user is with the usage of Genjutsu, the more effective and strong the illusion will be and more times can it be used.
Note: This version can only be used by ninjas without a Sharingan.
Note: Genjutsu users can use the technique thrice per match, D-Rank; Secondary Genjutsu Specialists can use the technique four times per match, C-Rank; Primary Genjutsu Specialists can use the technique five times per match; B-Rank.
Note: Movement speed is bound by the users rank.



"Now this, this is a very smart technique. I want you to see if you can explain it, without me elaborating on it, I'll help you if you get stuck on something though. Go for it."

Dean says, encouraging Rebekah to try.
 

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Rebekah stays silent for a moment, taking in Dean's request. This time, she'll have to explain the Genjutsu. It takes her a moment but she quickly grasps the way in which she will elaborate the technique.

"This technique is solely a defense technique. Any advances to harm or attack the opponent will cause this Genjutsu to disappear and fail. The user will cast a Genjutsu that creates an exact copy of them as they become hidden under the mask of the illusion and escape harms way. This means that the opponent will believe that the illusion copy of yourself is you as you run or dodge the technique. This technique is limited in quite a few ways as you cannot perform any jutsu while in this Genjutsu as it will break your hold on the Genjutsu. There is another limitation, in which you cannot dodge extremely fast nor large techniques, as it's simply not logical to be able to do that by running/side stepping/evading."

Rebekah finishes with a blank stare at her sensei. It takes her a moment to realize it, but she asks a question.

"What would be the point of using this technique when you can just simply evade the technique naturally by side stepping or dodging? Is it because you can surprise the opponent by appearing in a different location? The element of surprise and shock?

"Also, I'm pretty sure it's impossible for the opponent to know he's in a Genjutsu until he attacks the illusionary clone. Because there is nothing that changes to his eye.
 
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"Very smart, you seem to understand the concept behind the technique. Its really a smart technique, it says large scale and fast techniques can't be dodged, but you can use it to dodge weapons, Taijutsu strikes, etc. Anything that is too close for comfort, and also capable of being dodged with running to the side in an arc, and once it connects, the opponent would definitely be caught off guard. Really depends on the context. Nonetheless, let's go to a technique that will be very useful in the long run.

( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
Rank: C-S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15-40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. A Sage rank user can dispel Genjutsu up to S-Rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu. The technique can only be used once per turn and the user still needs to fully follow the logic as to why he figured out it was an illusion.

"As with the previous technique, I want you to fully analyze it, so I can see where you are lacking. There is something that I want you to note about this technique, which I hope you pick up.
 

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"This technique is solely defensive as it breaks a Genjutsu, should you realize you are in one. Depending on what ranked Genjutsu you can break, depends on the users ninja rank. Obviously, the higher rank, the higher Genjutsu one can break. I am S-Class so I'd be able to break Genjutsu up to B-ranked. I come to realize that this is a special technique that, even though we're learning C-Ranked jutsu right now, I can use it as a B-ranked because I am S-class. Correct? Also, this jutsu may be used upon others through touch or physical contact, dispelling them too from the Genjutsu. Of course, at the end of all this, the user must know that she or he is in a Genjutsu. The range happens to be short which is unfortunate as it limits the usage, but nonetheless, the technique is pretty useful."

Rebekah finishes her explanation. She finds herself hoping that she noted what Dean was hoping she would.


"Maybe disturbing ones chakra flow will render them useless until their chakra flow goes back to normal."
 
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"Good job, however the range is not an issue since its for yourself, and breaks the Genjutsu by disrupting your chakra flow, so it doesn't really matter. I want you to look at it closely, how would this technique NOT be useful, in breaking a Genjutsu that has been cast on you, for example? What hinders this technique from being the go-to technique for all Genjutsu breaking issues?"

Dean asks, wanting to know if Rebekah had caught the hint.
 

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"Indeed, Kai can not be used on Paralysis type Genjutsu because you can't move to form the needed hand seal to spike your chakra. Thus, you will have to resort to either pain or chakra surge. Anyway, let us move on."

Dean says, as he gets ready to teach the next technique.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion on the opponent that makes them believe they are travelling in a straight line, when instead they are moving in circles. This is only effective on moving opponents. If the opponent travels in the circle for hours, they will be exhausted.



"Alright, this technique is quite simple. You will place a Genjutsu on the opponent without the need for hand seals, and you will make them believe that they are moving in a straight line. However, in reality, they are actually moving in a circle. Great for the Ninja World, to tire out the opponent though it can be used in battle if you're smart. You know what to do."

Dean says, as he folds his arms and waits for Rebekah.
 
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