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(Meiton: Kuro Renda) Dark Release: Dark Barrage.
Type: Defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20(+10 for every extra shot fire)
Damage: 40
Description: The user will begin by holding both his hands up with the palms facing towards the sky. The he will condence dark chakra inside his body and cause it to seep out of his palms and form small balls of dark chakra around the size of a cannonball. Then by using brute strength the user will throw the balls at the opponent. Upon impact the balls will explode into a maelstorm of dark chakra severely burning the opponent. This jutsu isn't limit to just two shots as the user can continually form and throw these balls. The balls form rather swiftly about the same speed as a chidori. Each 2 balls are equivalent to a B ranked Dark release technique.

Can only be taught by Delta

Alright. So, im not going to make this long winded. I need 3 answers. Why do you want it? Why is it strong? And why is it easily abused?
 

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(Meiton: Kuro Renda) Dark Release: Dark Barrage.
Type: Defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20(+10 for every extra shot fire)
Damage: 40
Description: The user will begin by holding both his hands up with the palms facing towards the sky. The he will condence dark chakra inside his body and cause it to seep out of his palms and form small balls of dark chakra around the size of a cannonball. Then by using brute strength the user will throw the balls at the opponent. Upon impact the balls will explode into a maelstorm of dark chakra severely burning the opponent. This jutsu isn't limit to just two shots as the user can continually form and throw these balls. The balls form rather swiftly about the same speed as a chidori. Each 2 balls are equivalent to a B ranked Dark release technique.

Can only be taught by Delta

Alright. So, im not going to make this long winded. I need 3 answers. Why do you want it? Why is it strong? And why is it easily abused?
First question; it's extra useful due to barely any restrictions on its usage and would make for a great technique to use in close range against the opponent. Its basically just firing continuous blasts, to be honest.

Second question; It's strong because of said restrictions. They are formed at quite fast speed, and each 2 balls are equal to B ranked Dark Release, and since I can continuously release the balls, I can basically unleash them continually and make it stronger and stronger, without it costing me more moves, just more chakra.

Third question; similar to above, there is no restriction on how many balls I can blast and be used continuously meaning this technique makes for a powerful attack, and even defense, as I can just release an equivalent amount of balls to counter whatever is coming my way, at only the cost of a single move. This makes it highly abusable, in general, to be honest.
 

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First is correct. It has close and long range versatility.

Correct again. It essentially is unrestricted making it usable at any point anytime

Also correct. This techniques damage is essentislly infinite as long as you have chakra. It can put match ANY damage thrown at it regardless of damage buffs or weakness. Its likely the highest damage technique around, or at least up there as ive never seen something that can essentially cap out at 1800 damage. Also, a point you missed. It cant be evaded. As each ball is individual, dodging is an impossible concept.

I ask only onw thing, dont get it nerfed. Enjoyed
 

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First is correct. It has close and long range versatility.

Correct again. It essentially is unrestricted making it usable at any point anytime

Also correct. This techniques damage is essentislly infinite as long as you have chakra. It can put match ANY damage thrown at it regardless of damage buffs or weakness. Its likely the highest damage technique around, or at least up there as ive never seen something that can essentially cap out at 1800 damage. Also, a point you missed. It cant be evaded. As each ball is individual, dodging is an impossible concept.

I ask only onw thing, dont get it nerfed. Enjoyed
Lmao, thanks. Won't get it nerfed. We'll see soon u-u.
 

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Lmao, thanks. Won't get it nerfed. We'll see soon u-u.
Oki. Now im Jounin, i can give you this one as well,
(Meiton: Kyūketsukō usabarashi) Dark Release: Inhaling Diversion
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: (Technique dependant)
Description: This is an advanced method of using the technique Inhaling maw. Instead of storing the foreign chakra the user instead redirects it back at the opponent. The way this technique works is by increasing the flow of chakra to Inhaling maw causing it to absorb chakra twice as fast as the regular inhaling maw. While this happens the user links his top and bottom square chakra network creating an arc between the two from which chakra can travel. As the user absorbs chakra it is sent into this new link and has Dark chakra added to it, once the chakra is added the technique is fired back at the opponent. From using this method the original attack is strengthen and more potent. This method is fairly fast, as it release chakra at the same time it absorbs leaving little window for opponents to react.
*Note* Any technique redirected gains plus 1 rank to its original power(I.e A rank becomes S rank)
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3 times per battle
Jutsu Follows Dark release's absorption rules
Can only be Taught by Delta

This is the OG reversal. The one NK and his band of merry men decided to work from and use without ever asking me or giving me compensation for essentially stealing. ALL GOOD THOUGH, explain it and its yours.
 

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Lmao

A technique which is kind of an enhanced Inhaling Maw where the chakra will be absorbed twice as fast into the mark, and connect the two marks, creating an arc. As the chakra is drawn in, its sprouted out again, albeit stronger this time. The technique released gains a single rank to itself, making this pretty bad ass when using it to absorb say an S rank, to turn it into an F rank (I'll cap it there). Nonetheless, it follows the same strengths and weaknesses of the Absorption part of Dark. Pretty lit technique overall.
 

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Lmao

A technique which is kind of an enhanced Inhaling Maw where the chakra will be absorbed twice as fast into the mark, and connect the two marks, creating an arc. As the chakra is drawn in, its sprouted out again, albeit stronger this time. The technique released gains a single rank to itself, making this pretty bad ass when using it to absorb say an S rank, to turn it into an F rank (I'll cap it there). Nonetheless, it follows the same strengths and weaknesses of the Absorption part of Dark. Pretty lit technique overall.
Now im S class i got 1 more for you

(Meiton: Kuro Nagareboshi Kumo) Dark Release: Dark Meteor Cloud
Type: Offensive
Rank: S rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will being by absorbing a jutsu(A rank or above) using Inhaling Maw. Once completed the user will begin to channel the dark chakra out of his bottom square and into the sky above the opponent, the user will begin to form a large cloud above the opponent made up of dark chakra. Once formed the user will cause the cloud to rain down 5mx5m balls of dark chakra down onto the opponent. these are shaped like meteorites as they pummel down to the ground. The sheer power of the chakra is enough to break bones and upon contact and severly burn the opponent. Using this jutsu the user can rain down over 20 balls of dark chakra onto the opponent until the cloud disappears. The cloud covers and area 10 metres in every direction from the center of the opponent. If the user is closer to the opponent then 10 metres he will have to defend against the jutsu as well. This jutsu will also destroy everything within its radius

Restrictions:
Must use Inhaling Maw prior
Can only be used once per battle.
Can only be taught by Delta

So tell me about it
 
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