Wise words fall upon deaf ears

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I once met an old man, fragile and weak.
Who told me, "boy, stay in the light."
Young and dumb, I shrugged and kept walking,
Hands in my pockets, into the night.

What did the man mean, I always pondered.
Why would he choose those words for me?
Whatever, useless words through my ears.
My understanding of the statement is not meant to be.

Then I experienced addiction, parties, and problems.
Things I never wanted, but things that still came.
Without knowing, I had jumped into darkness,
Acting a fool, no regard to my name.

Years later, I hear those words again in my thoughts.
Still in the darkness, "boy, stay in the light."
This time, I know exactly what you meant.
Old Man, you were never crazy, only right.

Thank you Old Man
 

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Awwww it seemers my soul a heart felt fire to see to a young poet try.
i love the poem very... mature and wise.

a poem is a expression of feeling and the soul i believe that

art
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is all part of the soul because i love this i am gonna 2x plus rep you
 
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