Winter Feast

[ikikouchiha9668]

Okay um -Neko helped me with this one (Thank you). It is about something out in the woods trying to get this girl in the winter. (hence the name) By the way this is a a haiku.

Chills running through me
Shivers found to my core
My fingertips numb

The howling death beast
Comes out to seek me by name
Whispers in my ear

The beast wants my blood
On this full moon, he's hunting
Sensing my thick fear

The trees surround me
The snow casing my barefeet
I feel too frozen

Shadows dart often
Siliently but seeable
They watch me closely

I came here alone
Unfortunately, I did
A huge huge mistake

Now I watch my blood
Form a large puddle around
Snow against blood red

Smirking devils? Yes
Insane killers had me
Now I am with God

 

[izinagi54]

dark and lovely just like you lol
MUGEN REP

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

thanks Chris!! Lol <3

 

[Melodious]

Awesome!~ I would change "I did" to "this was"
But it is really amazing! +rep and thanked~ =DD

 

[~Dream~]

Very scary o_o Awesome poem as always <3

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

i like this. Specially the bl0od dark against the whiteness of the sn0w. Nice visual.

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

thanks <3 I like this poem too~ One of my favorites :3