[CJ] Wind Jutsu from Lucidus
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It was my first ever CJ I made, and it got approved first time. And I think it has aged pretty well considering everything Enjoy
Any Questions?
It was my first ever CJ I made, and it got approved first time. And I think it has aged pretty well considering everything
Enjoy Any Questions?
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (When thrown)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Desciption: The user after performing a single handseal concentrates his wind chakra just above the palm of his hand, making his wind rotate violently and condensing it the user creates a very long and solid spear above his palm about 7 feet long and 4 inches thick, the spear would take shape starting from the middle and would proceed to extend rotating outwards as it forms until finally completing the spear, the spiralling of the wind will get thinner and thinner as it reaches both ends of the spear eventually crafting both ends into a sharp rotating points. The creation of the spear is quite a fast process, and once complete, extends up to short range when utilizing it as a weapon.
While the spear is still in the user's hands being used as a weapon, the user contains the wind and condenses it, allowing for extended use making it so when the spear comes into contact with anything that the explosion that would normally be caused does not go off
The spear itself would be very much like a drill due to its rotational current, thus greatly increasing its speed and piercing abilities. Once thrown, the spear gives off a devastating cutting wind aura when it lands, which tears up anything around it within a meter. The aura is equal to a B-rank wind jutsu.
- Spear lasts 3 turns unless thrown
- Can be used a total of 3 times
- No S rank wind techs or above the next turn
- User has to wait 2 turns between each use
- Can only be taught by Kirikoe
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Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (When thrown)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Desciption: The user after performing a single handseal concentrates his wind chakra just above the palm of his hand, making his wind rotate violently and condensing it the user creates a very long and solid spear above his palm about 7 feet long and 4 inches thick, the spear would take shape starting from the middle and would proceed to extend rotating outwards as it forms until finally completing the spear, the spiralling of the wind will get thinner and thinner as it reaches both ends of the spear eventually crafting both ends into a sharp rotating points. The creation of the spear is quite a fast process, and once complete, extends up to short range when utilizing it as a weapon.
While the spear is still in the user's hands being used as a weapon, the user contains the wind and condenses it, allowing for extended use making it so when the spear comes into contact with anything that the explosion that would normally be caused does not go off
The spear itself would be very much like a drill due to its rotational current, thus greatly increasing its speed and piercing abilities. Once thrown, the spear gives off a devastating cutting wind aura when it lands, which tears up anything around it within a meter. The aura is equal to a B-rank wind jutsu.
- Spear lasts 3 turns unless thrown
- Can be used a total of 3 times
- No S rank wind techs or above the next turn
- User has to wait 2 turns between each use
- Can only be taught by Kirikoe
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It was my first ever CJ I made, and it got approved first time. And I think it has aged pretty well considering everything
Any Questions?
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (When thrown)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Desciption: The user after performing a single handseal concentrates his wind chakra just above the palm of his hand, making his wind rotate violently and condensing it the user creates a very long and solid spear above his palm about 7 feet long and 4 inches thick, the spear would take shape starting from the middle and would proceed to extend rotating outwards as it forms until finally completing the spear, the spiralling of the wind will get thinner and thinner as it reaches both ends of the spear eventually crafting both ends into a sharp rotating points. The creation of the spear is quite a fast process, and once complete, extends up to short range when utilizing it as a weapon.
While the spear is still in the user's hands being used as a weapon, the user contains the wind and condenses it, allowing for extended use making it so when the spear comes into contact with anything that the explosion that would normally be caused does not go off
The spear itself would be very much like a drill due to its rotational current, thus greatly increasing its speed and piercing abilities. Once thrown, the spear gives off a devastating cutting wind aura when it lands, which tears up anything around it within a meter. The aura is equal to a B-rank wind jutsu.
- Spear lasts 3 turns unless thrown
- Can be used a total of 3 times
- No S rank wind techs or above the next turn
- User has to wait 2 turns between each use
- Can only be taught by Kirikoe
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Only question is when its thrown does it follow the jutsu speed for wind?
hopefully my first custom can get approved whenever it is i post it. I do believe that the going price for Custom Jutsu is 1,500 kumi correct?
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I would say yes for the sake of ease. Since its hard to quantify the speed of thrown weapons in general from what I know.
However the speed whiles its being wielded will be the same as your own movement/fighting speed.
1500 Kumi indeed good sir ^^
Enjoy and goodluck with your customs - I do have a customs workshop thread in the premium section if you ever want help
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I would say yes for the sake of ease. Since its hard to quantify the speed of thrown weapons in general from what I know.
However the speed whiles its being wielded will be the same as your own movement/fighting speed.
1500 Kumi indeed good sir ^^
Enjoy and goodluck with your customs - I do have a customs workshop thread in the premium section if you ever want help
no worries, we shall see how long this premium lasts haha