Who would like to hear/see some naruto raps

wridacule

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i kind of would. i showed up way too late for the first big base rap battle :shy:
 

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tretury to the village, my decision/ Rather chase anti-Nationalism I see black coats, clouds they bright RED/ into akatuki i was invited are you uchiha?, you wanna play calm/ May we have this dance to the song clay bombs? if you wanna pass words never let ya tongue fail/ when you speak to the blonde who fetched the one tail The c4 Bastard a mad mans match, / cuz i lost both arms, then i got em re-attached I say im a winner, hinatas man/ cuz no sore loosers exit with a bang Put you're hands up, cuz here's the bomb threat/ im the best one, hands down, no contest The first president of the earth element/ better hide evidence cuz the blasts imminent say unn say unnn say unn say unnn D-E-I-D-A-R-A i I I I GOT BOMBS, i I I I GOT BOMBS i I I I GOT BOMBS call me the red moons, most formidable/ C4 JUTSUUUU blow you to minerals if you think art lasts, ill mold a toilet/cuz you shittin me on as tobi is pissin me off in the year of the dragon you see me enter/ **** a tantrum, ill throw the dam temper Blue eyed genius what you gone find/ Just flatter me though i blow my own mind In the brainof an artist, there is wisdom never free cuz his own craft is his prison The reciepts in japan, retreat wit ya clan a beast with the plans Teeth in the hands The boom boom tree, yeah i plant it so welcome to claymore enchanted The first president of the earth eliment/ better hide evidence cuz the blasts eminent
 

wridacule

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its obvious you put a lot of work and thought into that man. one thing id suggest though is breaking it up and putting space after each bar so it can be read a line at a time (i know theres a lot there and thats probably why you didnt) that way people can follow your flow and try and sing along in their heads you know? but + rep all the same xd

or at least i would + rep you if hadnt done so earlier already :shy:
 

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HAHAHAHAha I love this +rep I hope you have more!
 

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Really good but after a bit I lost the flow.
 

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someone call Ninjakid114 to finish this guy off xd
 
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great man but i'll go with wridacule on that putting spces b/w each line but overall real nice...
 

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I represent uchihaaaaaa
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