Which Story Should I Go With?

Which Story?

  • On the Mark

    Votes: 4 57.1%
  • I See You

    Votes: 3 42.9%

  • Total voters
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Chakra Wizard

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Yeah, so I'm already chin-deep in two ongoing series as it is (plus college), but my creative mind won't stop coming up with new stories instead of working on the ones I already have going. I can't afford to throw them both out, though (neither is really good enough to use in my quest for publication), so I wanna know which one you think I should keep to post here and which I should trash.

First synopsis:

"On the Mark" -
The large country of Shimaguni has been under attack as of late by a lone assailant called "Masuku", whose slowly bringing the nation to its knees using nothing but his knowledge of its military workings and his pinpoint accuracy (with firearms, basic calculations, and simply predicting his enemy's next move - or the next words to leave their mouth). But just who is this masked fugitive? Why is he so familiar with the way this nation thinks? And what is his relation to the emperor, who already seems well aware of the man's true identity?

(several similarities to Code Geass, minus powers or mecha)


Second synopsis:

"I See You" -
There are over 7 billion people living on the planet at any given time, but in actuality, this isn't the case. Only 80% of these are genuine human beings, and the rest are "oni", demons who live amongst and occasionally feed off them. Each is recognizable by the demonic energy they emit; those who give off red energy are called "gosai" and those with blue energy are called "aoi", the former known for their aggressive nature and the latter known for their intelligence. They are normally impossible to detect, but certain humans are gifted, or cursed, with special eyes that enable them to see the energy one of these two demons, and one among their respective groups is granted the power to wield magic and fight against them. These humans are called "tetsujin" and "seijin", and it is their duty to take up the mantle and keep the world safe from hostile demons whenever the previous "Sage" falls.


So, here they are. Be sure to vote or post an answer, alright? :)
 
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Momochifanboy

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i see you sound so good.
It is nice nad you can see this type ofplot in many mangas and comic's.
my suggestion is to make somthing unsuspected to get your readers intrested.
Good luck with your writting.
 

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i see you sound so good.
It is nice nad you can see this type ofplot in many mangas and comic's.
my suggestion is to make somthing unsuspected to get your readers intrested.
Good luck with your writting.
Yeah, that was my big concern, cause they're both pretty unoriginal. It's pretty even right now, so I'll just try developing both for now and see which one comes out on top:)
 
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