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Punk Hazard

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This is something I've wanted to do for a while. So, this is basically the first verse of an unfinished song. The verse itself is also incomplete(I hit a block.) So, I decided to post here for some reason. Feed back would be cool.

Goes to this

He convinced her that he loved her
Got her under the covers
But he didn't wear a rubber
Now she's knocked up
And he doesn't even hug her
Scorn from her mother
To the world she's just another
Kid who made a bad decision
Didn't learn her lesson
She's a kid of the nation
Under exhortation
But to her
abortion isn't an option
Not when there's adoption
Didn't pay attention to the doctrine
that told her to abstain
Looking out the window as it rains
So much on her brain
Everything has changed
It'll never the same
Kids picking out phones
While she's picking out names
Its crazy but she can't part with this baby
Well, just maybe
She can make this work
 
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