[Romance] Where The Hell Did You Go?

[Waindo]

*let's overwhelm the section a bit more before I go.*:|

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I should've known,
Straight from the start.
That this would happen;
And that it would break my heart.

I caught a sight of your face,
And it made me smile.
Took some time to chat,
For a little while.

A while later, following a time
And a few times more.
You presented me with something,
Worth writing for.

I didn't even know your name,
And I wondered, I wondered.
Where on earth is this divine flame?
This heart of mine has pondered

Than subsequently,
After some more time.
I ascertained more;
Line after line.

I took a glimpse,
Inside your world;
Into your hopes, fears
And all dreams you hold.

A future laid out,
Within our grasp;
This incredible pipe dream
Was all my heart asked.

Then all of a sudden
It all appeared to end.
A connection silenced,
Not even friends?

And here I stand,
Just where it started.
A lonely soul with another hole,
Once again broken-hearted.

Why did you leave?
Where the hell did you go?
What are you doing now?
I'm dying to know.​

 

[Dreckerplayer]

*let's overwhelm the section a bit more before I go.*:|

​

---

I should've known,
Straight from the start.
That this would happen;
And that it would break my heart.

I caught a sight of your face,
And it made me smile.
Took some time to chat,
For a little while.

A while later, following a time
And a few times more.
You presented me with something,
Worth writing for.

I didn't even know your name,
And I wondered, I wondered.
Where on earth is this divine flame?
This heart of mine has pondered

Than subsequently,
After some more time.
I ascertained more;
Line after line.

I took a glimpse,
Inside your world;
Into your hopes, fears
And all dreams you hold.

A future laid out,
Within our grasp;
This incredible pipe dream
Was all my heart asked.

Then all of a sudden
It all appeared to end.
A connection silenced,
Not even friends?

And here I stand,
Just where it started.
A lonely soul with another hole,
Once again broken-hearted.

Why did you leave?
Where the hell did you go?
What are you doing now?
I'm dying to know.​

Be less clingy, and you'll be fine.

nice poem.

 

[Waindo]

Be less clingy, and you'll be fine.

nice poem.

Sure, thanks.

 

[Starkk]

Another fantastic one, I can't keep up with you man, stop writing this much...

 

[FunkyFatal]

Nice!!

Don't make it too long, it can make you lose your audience, however its still a great poem

 

[Waindo]

Nice!!

Don't make it too long, it can make you lose your audience, however its still a great poem

Thx! However, don't worry about me.
This one was a very personal piece, so I didn't care much about the form nor longetivity of it; actually every and each of my poems is a personal soulful piece.
It's obvious from your post that you aren't familiar with my poetry.

 

[FunkyFatal]

Thx! However, don't worry about me.
This one was a very personal piece, so I didn't care much about the form nor longetivity of it; actually every and each of my poems is a personal soulful piece.
It's obvious from your post that you aren't familiar with my poetry.

Yea I've only read a few of them so far, but they are great. A lot of mine come are personal as well or just deep feelings.

 

[Waindo]

Yea I've only read a few of them so far, but they are great. A lot of mine come are personal as well or just deep feelings.

Hehehe, it has to be like that, please do continue to write here, your poetry seems to be mindblowing, I'm going to be scarcely active for some time due to my new job. I'm leaving the section in your and other peeps hands now. :mew: xd