[CJ] When Two Buggers Meet - Aburame Darui

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The man arrives and throws a scroll towards Pantha. He wasn't ready for it, so he fumbles around with the scroll, trying his best not to drop it.

(Hijutsu no Aburame: Gaijo no Zaigo) - Aburame Secret Technique: Removal of Sin
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 if used on a friend)
Damage: N/A
Description On the users command or simply because the aburame's kikaichu are self active, the aburame bugs will, being connected to the users chakra flow, know when their hosts chakra flow is interrupted. They will simply proceed to suck any foreign chakra from the hosts body or from a friend's body (After having correctly figured their friend is in a Genjutsu) with extreme precision; (Ninpo: Mushi Genjutsu) - Ninja Art: Insect Illusion Technique is a technique that can be compared to this one in the sense of sucking chakra from a ninjas body. Having trained with Aburame bugs and several Aburame members, having sparred with Uchiha's, developed this concept in order to defend against their never-ending stock of Genjutsu. The Kikaichu, after having sucked the foreign chakra from the selected system, will proceed to unlatch from the target and die.
Note: Can't be used to suck an opponent's chakra at all
Note: The Kikaichu have been proven to be self reliable when protecting its host, so there's no need to command them to perform this action unless it's relieving their friend from a Genjutsu.
Note: Requires extreme control, therefore this technique can't be used with any other Aburame jutsu in the same turn.
Note: Must wait 2 turns in between uses
Note: Removes chakra up to S- Rank
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.
Note: Can not be used offensively

Ah I like this first technique. It's a nearly automatic counter against Genjutsu. If you're still capable of exerting control over the insects, if the genjutsu isn't too strong, you can stop the bugs from activating this technique, which means you don't have to waste your chakra in lower ranked genjutsu. This is automatic, but not necessarily immediate.

As for the chakra cost, there is a note that mentions it removes chakra up to S rank. Does it mean we don't always have to spend 40 chakra, and only have to spend as much chakra as the genjutsu we're under, or is it always 40 chakra, regardless if it removes 40 chakra or less from our brain?

Also, since this is an automatic technique, you can sense your bugs trying to initiate the technique, and that is telling enough to make you aware you're in a genjutsu, so you can quickly act to stop the Sin technique and use your own methods to release the genjutsu, thus saving chakra and not having to suffer the consequences. I think this is all around a good technique. You can support this by saying the bugs fumble and screech before initiating this technique, as they sense the disruption of their host's chakra system(, when you describe, in your Bio, that you have this technique ( as the Mod told us to do )), which further validates your genjutsu awareness! So, without actually using this technique, you already have a whole lot of uses for the technique. Spending 40 chakra everytime you DO have to use the technique isn't so bad, all things considered.


(Aburame no Jitsu: Ubuge Shindou) - Aburame Secret Technique: Soft Impact
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description Aburame, not being well-versed in either Genjutsu or Taijutsu, sought of other ways in order to defend against something they weren't good at. Taijutsu is definitely not a field an Aburame would have practiced a lot, so they made up for the inability to defend with their bugs. If a user is unable to defend against an incoming physical contact from an opponent or object, their Kikaichu will act on their own accord and proceed to branch out in the incoming direction of attack and meet the attack head on. Using their ability to track and notice chakra, as well as swarm, the Kikaichu will intercept the blow or object by bending around the object while stringing themselves together with chakra to act as a kind of net. This net forcefully slows or completely blocks an incoming attack while greatly softening it, rendering it useless or slowed. If the attack is slowed, it will be enough so the user can maneuver out of the way of attack, moving to safety.
Note: If the user is unable to defend properly from an attack, the Kikaichu bugs will act on their own
Note: The bugs can defend from attacks that would be outside the users tractability, but will follow the S&W of Aburame jutsu
Note: The Kikaichu can't attack the opponent
Note: Can only be activated 3x per battle
Note: These bugs are not rapid to trace EIG or strong enough to counter EIG techniques.
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.

While I resent the implication that we are bad at Taijutsu, I can't help but agree with it. I really don't like the subject lol. As for the technique itself, if this could be used against EIG it would have been much better. As it is now, the only thing that separates this technique from other A rank techniques is that it can be deployed without our awareness, so we will never be caught off guard, and will be, essentially, without a blind spot.

So I don't see myself using this technique when I'm engaged in a taijutsu battle, or when I have a clear view of the opponent, but more like when something I don't see is approaching me. Makes me much more confident fighting in a mist or some place with low visibility, since, 3 times per battle, nothing can approach and hurt me without the bugs deploying.

When it says EIG speed and power, does it mean even 1st Gate? That means this technique is not that good against any sort of speed boosting ability. Can you say something about this?
 

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The man arrives and throws a scroll towards Pantha. He wasn't ready for it, so he fumbles around with the scroll, trying his best not to drop it.

(Hijutsu no Aburame: Gaijo no Zaigo) - Aburame Secret Technique: Removal of Sin
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 if used on a friend)
Damage: N/A
Description On the users command or simply because the aburame's kikaichu are self active, the aburame bugs will, being connected to the users chakra flow, know when their hosts chakra flow is interrupted. They will simply proceed to suck any foreign chakra from the hosts body or from a friend's body (After having correctly figured their friend is in a Genjutsu) with extreme precision; (Ninpo: Mushi Genjutsu) - Ninja Art: Insect Illusion Technique is a technique that can be compared to this one in the sense of sucking chakra from a ninjas body. Having trained with Aburame bugs and several Aburame members, having sparred with Uchiha's, developed this concept in order to defend against their never-ending stock of Genjutsu. The Kikaichu, after having sucked the foreign chakra from the selected system, will proceed to unlatch from the target and die.
Note: Can't be used to suck an opponent's chakra at all
Note: The Kikaichu have been proven to be self reliable when protecting its host, so there's no need to command them to perform this action unless it's relieving their friend from a Genjutsu.
Note: Requires extreme control, therefore this technique can't be used with any other Aburame jutsu in the same turn.
Note: Must wait 2 turns in between uses
Note: Removes chakra up to S- Rank
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.
Note: Can not be used offensively

Ah I like this first technique. It's a nearly automatic counter against Genjutsu. If you're still capable of exerting control over the insects, if the genjutsu isn't too strong, you can stop the bugs from activating this technique, which means you don't have to waste your chakra in lower ranked genjutsu. This is automatic, but not necessarily immediate.

As for the chakra cost, there is a note that mentions it removes chakra up to S rank. Does it mean we don't always have to spend 40 chakra, and only have to spend as much chakra as the genjutsu we're under, or is it always 40 chakra, regardless if it removes 40 chakra or less from our brain?

Also, since this is an automatic technique, you can sense your bugs trying to initiate the technique, and that is telling enough to make you aware you're in a genjutsu, so you can quickly act to stop the Sin technique and use your own methods to release the genjutsu, thus saving chakra and not having to suffer the consequences. I think this is all around a good technique. You can support this by saying the bugs fumble and screech before initiating this technique, as they sense the disruption of their host's chakra system(, when you describe, in your Bio, that you have this technique ( as the Mod told us to do )), which further validates your genjutsu awareness! So, without actually using this technique, you already have a whole lot of uses for the technique. Spending 40 chakra everytime you DO have to use the technique isn't so bad, all things considered.


(Aburame no Jitsu: Ubuge Shindou) - Aburame Secret Technique: Soft Impact
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description Aburame, not being well-versed in either Genjutsu or Taijutsu, sought of other ways in order to defend against something they weren't good at. Taijutsu is definitely not a field an Aburame would have practiced a lot, so they made up for the inability to defend with their bugs. If a user is unable to defend against an incoming physical contact from an opponent or object, their Kikaichu will act on their own accord and proceed to branch out in the incoming direction of attack and meet the attack head on. Using their ability to track and notice chakra, as well as swarm, the Kikaichu will intercept the blow or object by bending around the object while stringing themselves together with chakra to act as a kind of net. This net forcefully slows or completely blocks an incoming attack while greatly softening it, rendering it useless or slowed. If the attack is slowed, it will be enough so the user can maneuver out of the way of attack, moving to safety.
Note: If the user is unable to defend properly from an attack, the Kikaichu bugs will act on their own
Note: The bugs can defend from attacks that would be outside the users tractability, but will follow the S&W of Aburame jutsu
Note: The Kikaichu can't attack the opponent
Note: Can only be activated 3x per battle
Note: These bugs are not rapid to trace EIG or strong enough to counter EIG techniques.
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.

While I resent the implication that we are bad at Taijutsu, I can't help but agree with it. I really don't like the subject lol. As for the technique itself, if this could be used against EIG it would have been much better. As it is now, the only thing that separates this technique from other A rank techniques is that it can be deployed without our awareness, so we will never be caught off guard, and will be, essentially, without a blind spot.

So I don't see myself using this technique when I'm engaged in a taijutsu battle, or when I have a clear view of the opponent, but more like when something I don't see is approaching me. Makes me much more confident fighting in a mist or some place with low visibility, since, 3 times per battle, nothing can approach and hurt me without the bugs deploying.

When it says EIG speed and power, does it mean even 1st Gate? That means this technique is not that good against any sort of speed boosting ability. Can you say something about this?
Torune smirks.

You're pretty smart. You know the outer and inner working of these jutsu quite well. The S rank note means it removes up to S Rank Genjutsu that you aren't able to break yourself. Yes it's possible to allow this jutsu to tell you that you are in a Genjutsu. An Aburame is able to communicate directly with their bugs, so even without the screeching and constant movement, which is done regardless, you're indirectly told your chakra flow is being manipulated. Yes every time you use it, it'll cost 40 chakra.

Well it's not that we aren't bad at Taijutsu, but we don't have advanced movement speed, added power, or the raw strength and speed that the Eight Inner Gates gives one; so this technique is used to allow one to compete on a more even playing field. Although it says not rapid enough (Wesobi's change to the jutsu >_>) doesn't mean it can't still be deployed. Say if someone attacked you with Gates, they'd deploy but alow closer to your body, so the impact would be softened and slowed to a certain extent that you'd still have to used another jutsu to evade. It's not useless against EIG, jutsu slot more ineffective. It is good as long as the bugs are able to sense a sort of chakra and have enough time to deploy from the user's body.
 

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Up to 1st gate, it's barely traceable and defendable. Meaning that you'd still have to defend against a very little softened attack. Anything above 1st gate, no, anything below, yes.
 

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I'm on s phone >_> lol I honestly need to make a new one, but I'm too damn lazy.
Please do it quickly though... I'm not sure I can use the techniques if they're not there...

Okay so, since you taught me your techniques without asking me to trade something back, I can teach you your favourite technique of mine. Your pick (I have no idea which one you like best).

Btw, have you found a way to go around the nano-bug restriction?
 

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( Aburame no Hijutsu: Kyuusaisha ) - Secret Insect Technique: Savior
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will produce a swarm of insects that will attach themselves to any jutsu/object that contains chakra ( can't affect humans, animals, summonings, etc.) and proceed suck the chakra out of this said object or jutsu. As a variation of the (Ninpo: Mushi Genjutsu) - Ninja Art: Insect Illusion Technique, in which the user manipulates their bugs to latch onto a ninja and suck their chakra dry, Savior is able to latch on and drain jutsu and objects containing chakra instead of beings, to produce a much more mechanical and gentle neutralization, rather than punching through the techniques.
After having drained the chakra from a said jutsu/object, the bugs will proceed to latch onto the user or another ninja and give them the chakra equal to that of the ranked drained (E Rank = 5, D Rank = 10, C Rank = 15, B Rank = 20, A Rank = 30, S Rank = 40). Savior follows the insect's S&W, and, thus, it's effects are reliant on how it normally interacts with other techniques. It behaves as a normal insect technique when the clash would overpower it in a normal interaction, killing the insects and weakening the stronger technique ( be it rank or elemental disadvantage ). When the insect technique would be able to overpower the opposite technique, it completely drains the chakra and the user is then able to restore the chakra back to himself or an ally, upon physical contact with the surviving swarm. If the insect technique and the opposing technique would neutralize eachother, then the chakra is drained, but all the insects die, and the host is unable to transfer the chakra. For example, a B rank Savior is equal to a A rank Raw Chakra technique ( strength ) and a C Rank Elemental technique ( weakness ), so it would drain them and die in the process.

Note: Does not do any damage to a Ninja.
Note: Usable thrice per battle
Note: Must wait 2 turns in between uses

Next one up. and the jutsu are posted in my thread.
 

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Since our talk I have developed this concept and I also learned quite a bit more about the chakra transfer proprueties of our insects. What is great about savuor is that it draibs all chakra whether the bugs die or not. If the insect overpowers they n retain all chakra and transfer it to the user. The whole swarm is considered one entity. So you can transfer chakra from one portion of the swarm to the other. This is more chakra efficient than mine. Because mine alwats looses half of the chakra. Yours transfer all the chakra. In case it is neutralized. Since you say it still drains. Then it is safe to assume it can transfer half. Its a really good technique. Would you like to learn mine? Scanvenger is the one that has a similar concept
 
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