[Romance] When my dream comes true

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Kishi Uzumaki

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Today , i went to the place , we used to meet
the place , you left me , where i saw you for last time
the place , where memories got buried in past
it seems things have changed a lot since that day ,
like you did , but i remember like yesterday
waiting there for you to appear from far corner
searching your beautiful face , among the faces
that appears and disappears , seconds used to feel hours

i remember the happiness , i used to feel , just seeing you
sometimes i used to hide in other side so you couldn't see me
watching you search for me , and that sadness in you
in your eyes , i waits there laughing at you girl
till tears begin to appear in your eye
although i knew i gonna get scolded later
i used to do that , once in a awhile
i always thought i would be able to do that forever

but reality wasn't naive as i used to be those days
one day you said , there's nothing between us
i asked you , what happened to our dreams
a cold voice said , it's a my dream not yours
since that day , i climbed the mountains for my dream
now i have come to the top , now i see things
that i never used saw before , never understood
now it's an easy walk down the hill

but there's a fear i must face on my own
maybe it's a wish not to remember you
when my dream comes true
because there gonna be a regret in me
how life could have been if you are with me
 
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