[Discussion] What is your thoughts on this paragraph?

[Chihaya]

It was the weirdest recurring dreams that caused the young girl to awake, her heart beating in a frenzy as she latched onto her small dog. The dreams were always different, never had she dreamed the same one, but always has she remembered them. They were always of her as a child being accompanied by a charming boy of about the same age. Whether talking, or playing, or even just sitting in the dead silence, she knew that whoever the little boy was, he seemed to always be right besides her. She never failed to remember the curiosity she felt in one of her dreams. Her mother had called her in to eat dinner, which was followed up by a pout, the girl pleading to have just a little more time with her friend. That's when her mother gave a strained, distinct look. “Honey, you've been playing out here by yourself all this time.” Was the worried response in which her mother always seemed to reply with.

What are your thoughts on who the little boy could be? What are your thoughts just on what's happening?

 

[Corgi]

This ***** is crazy.

 

[Joker]

The boy resembles the thirst that she's going through, no matter what age, you cannot run, you cannot hide, the thirst is real.

 

[Headmaster]

Very nice!! But I see a few mistakes on punctuation and grammar. Also don't have run on sentences

 

[Prog]

she should stop watching r.l. stine before bed.
ot: it was interestingly puzzling and dark

 

[Corgi]

Very nice!! But I see a few mistakes on punctuation and grammar. Also don't have run on sentences

You're one to correct someone's punctuation and grammar. Didn't even put a period at the end of your sentence.

 

[Jack Spicer]

I think of the boy, as most probably do, a ghost of either a kid who died in the family before they moved there or in the neighborhood. Could possibly even be her unborn brother. I like to think it's Casper.

 

[Headmaster]

You're one to correct someone's punctuation and grammar. Didn't even put a period at the end of your sentence.

Smh she asked for a opinion I gave her one. Unlike her I don't give 2 cents how I type on forums or anything non school related.

 

[Corgi]

Smh she asked for a opinion I gave her one. Unlike her I don't give 2 cents how I write.

She didn't ask for an opinion on grammar/punctuation. How do you know if she cares for it? Maybe she doesn't bother having perfect grammar/punctuation like how you don't either. She never stated here that she did.

 

[New knight48]

The boy is an.... EMBODIMENT OF SATAN WHICH HAS POSSESSED THE MIND OF THIS FOOLISH GIRL

 

[Punk Hazard]

Her repressed sexuality. The boy represents her attraction to girls, and "playing with herself" is used to demonstrate the fact that she's attracted to her own ***. Her mother ripping her away represents social and parental pressures to be straight. Her "curiosity" in one dream is her bicuriosity, or curiosity in homosexual relations. The boy always being right beside her represents the fact that she did not choose her sexuality, she was born with it. The boy is familiar, but anonymous, because she has these feelings, but does not fully realize it.

 

[Headmaster]

She didn't ask for an opinion on grammar/punctuation. How do you know if she cares for it? Maybe she doesn't bother having perfect grammar/punctuation like how you don't either. She never stated here that she did.

Can you comprehend sentences correctly?

She asked for our opinion I gave her my opinion. I am not going to comment on the story because it's not my taste. So I gave her my opinion on her sentence structure.

 

[Erin]

That's cool lol.

IMO: From my perspective maybe it's like her friend is nature itself, the wind, the leaves, the wet dew etc. And maybe she's young and still enjoys natures beautiful delights, but her parents are older and less fascinated with simple things, so they don't "see" it. Then again it would be weird to have that part happening in a dream, seems more real life oriented.

idk lol

 

[Joker]

Her repressed sexuality. The boy represents her attraction to girls, and "playing with herself" is used to demonstrate the fact that she's attracted to her own ***. Her mother ripping her away represents social and parental pressures to be straight. Her "curiosity" in one dream is her bicuriosity, or curiosity in homosexual relations. The boy always being right beside her represents the fact that she did not choose her sexuality, she was born with it. The boy is familiar, but anonymous, because she has these feelings, but does not fully realize it.

Your avatar makes this post perfect.

 

[Corgi]

Can you comprehend sentences correctly?

She asked for our opinion I gave her my opinion. I am not going to comment on the story because it's not my taste. So I gave her my opinion on her sentence structure.

Why? That's off-topic and considered spam. Her question was this "What are your thoughts on who the little boy could be? What are your thoughts just on what's happening?"

She didn't ask for your opinion on her grammar. Which, I don't know why you would even bring it up, considering how yours is beow par.

 

[Headmaster]

Why? That's off-topic and considered spam. Her question was this "What are your thoughts on who the little boy could be? What are your thoughts just on what's happening?"

She didn't ask for your opinion on her grammar. Which, I don't know why you would even bring it up, considering how yours is beow par.

Below par I see U_U fine by me

OT: Nice story just read it. He sounds thirsty and nasty.

 

[Punk Hazard]

This dumb arguing though.

 

[Corgi]

This dumb arguing though.

You're just jealous that I have breasts on my chest, *****.

 

[Chihaya]

This dumb arguing though.

Debating. It's debating. I TELL YOU. ITS DEBATING.

 

[Chihaya]

Btw, the boy is:

Spoiler

Her guardian angel~